Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0K43YKR1ZVK60JGQFJN9G

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.003806
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Veil Market lay inside a shaft of damp light, a slit under the city’s skin where the air tasted of copper and rain and something else—something almost remembered. An abandoned Tube station, Camden’s old lungs, breathing in steam and secrets. The tunnel walls wore murals of forgotten trains and otherworldly mouths, and the stalls tilled the gloom with metal and glass and the soft clink of occult promise. The bone token tucked in Harlow Quinn’s pocket pressed against fabric as she walked, a quiet reminder of the entry ritual that made the Market possible and intolerable. The night outside moved; the Market moved with it. It always did. Eva Kowalski walked beside Quinn, the glow from the Market gutters painting freckles on her pale skin. The green of her eyes turned bright in a stray beam of lantern light. Her curly red hair bobbed with each careful step she took, as if alive with a shy, feral knowledge of what lurked between shelves. She carried the worn leather satchel that seemed almost a part of her—books sliding into view with every tilt of her shoulder, pages brown with age and ink. Quinn’s boots sounded heavy on the stone, a metronome set to a memory she kept close but refused to name aloud. She slowed, listening where a whisper of wind might have been only the Market talking to itself. The body lay where a stallkeeper would lean, except the stall was emptied of its usual trinkets and the corpse wore a cloak that looked stitched from the Market’s own shadow. No struggle marks in the dust, no blood spatter the way a domestic crime left a room smeared with fear. The corpse’s hands rested flat against the chest, fingers interlaced with a small brass object—old, ceremonial, and glimmering with a pale light that did not quite illuminate the air. Quinn knelt beside the body, careful as a surgeon who wanted the truth more than relief. The dead man’s eyes had a pale, almost placid brightness, as if he’d accepted the end with a stubborn sort of courtesy. The cloak bore a sigil stitched near the heart, a symbol that hummed faintly when Quinn’s fingers brushed the fabric. A wisp of something like smoke curled from the seam where the cloak met skin, then drifted away as if blown by someone else’s breath. "Bone token," Eva murmured, lifting the worn satchel’s flap with her gloved fingers, not touching the body but treating the space as if the air itself carried explanations. Quinn looked up, eyes narrowing. "What does that tell you?" Eva stepped closer, keeping a respectful distance from the corpse. Her tone had that flat, curious edge she used when she was about to push at a boundary most people preferred not to cross. "Tokens aren’t just entry keys. They’re memory vessels—containers of intent and resonance. The token here isn’t fresh enough to justify what I’m sensing around the sigil." She touched her fingertips to the sigil’s stitching, and a tremor went through the air, like heat snapping in a low wind. Quinn’s jaw tightened. "We’re not here for a cult ritual, Eva. We’re here for a murder. What’s the misdirection?" Eva tipped her head, studying the seam along the wall where the Market’s hush seemed to breathe. "Look at the grain of the wood behind the stall. Look at how the dust’s settled, not in a pattern of a fight but in a deliberate spiral away from the seam. Like someone pressed a hand to the air and it gave way." Quinn stood, turning slowly in a circle to take in the entire scene—the cloying scent of chalk and old ink, the way a shelf held its breath, the absence of any sign of forced entry. The Market’s stalls were a tangle of shadows and cunning; the crime as much a statement as a deed. "Show me," she said, the words low and precise. Eva’s eyes twitched to the back corner where the crates stood stacked as if a drawer opened into a private room. "The back room isn’t a room. It’s a corridor the Market uses to fold space. The owner keeps it closed most nights, but tonight it’s half open, like the Market forgot to finish closing a spell." Quinn walked to the crate, hand skimming the rough wood as if listening to a throat’s hollow echo. She found nothing obvious—no marks of a struggle, no spilled alchemical concoctions, no blood that would tell of a violent end. Yet the air carried a current, a whisper of heat that did not belong to summer nor inside a crowded Tube tunnel. "Someone wanted us to think this was ritual," Quinn said, voice flat with the habit of skepticism she wore like a ring—always there, always on. "Someone wanted us to see what we expect to see and miss what we should see." Eva straightened, a soft squint folding one brow as she studied the room’s energy. "Or someone wanted the Market to be the stage for something else altogether. A portal, not a murder weapon." Quinn’s eyes flicked to the brass Veil Compass that lay glimmering on the corpse’s chest, its patina a dull green, face etched with sigils that looked newly lit in the half-light. The needle had settled in a stubborn direction, not toward north or south, but toward the wall’s seam. The compass wasn’t merely a curiosity; it was a key or a compass rose for something that could not be named yet. "The compass seems to be doing the talking," Eva said, stepping back to keep a respectful distance from the body but leaning in to study the instrument more closely. "Crafted by a Shade artisan, they told me once. It doesn’t click with ordinary physics. It wants to know where the rifts live, where the doors stay open long enough for a message to slip through." Quinn crouched again, careful with the victim’s shawl of shadow. She pressed the edge of her gloved finger to the silhouette beneath the cloak’s hem and found the fabric gently warmer than its surroundings, as though the body had absorbed some stray heat from another place, another time. Not a flame, not a spark—more like a reflection of someone else’s warmth pressed against a cold night. "Quinn," Eva began, then stopped, a line crossing her freckled face as if she were listening to something the room wouldn’t admit. "What if the Market isn’t the crime scene but a doorway? The body’s there to anchor a ventricle, a point where the Market’s gravity holds." Quinn looked toward the back of the space, where the crates formed a crooked, almost ceremonial archway. She stepped closer, and her shadow fell across the wall’s seam. The seam wasn’t just a crack; it pulsed with a soft, pale light, like the first breath of a thing that hadn’t learned to be solid yet. The Veil Compass’s needle trembled slightly, then steadied toward that seam as if to say, Here. "Help me," she said, not to Eva but to the space between them, to something only she could sense—the memory of a partner’s last case, the one haunted by something beyond the natural. She had learned to listen for what didn’t belong in daylight, what strangled the air with a whisper of something older than human hands. "Tests first," Eva answered, bringing a small stack of notebooks from her satchel. The smell of old parchment followed her, a faint scent of Oxford libraries and hidden doors. She opened a page labeled with a hand that trembled slightly: a sketch of sigils, a rough map of a market quadrant, a notation about bone tokens and their energy signatures. The compass needle began to maneuver in small, impatient circles, as if it craved momentum. Quinn followed it with her eyes, then with her feet, stepping toward the seam and listening for anything that might rise from it: the rumor of wind, a breath of warmth, the far-off click of metal that could be a trapdoor sliding open. "The Market’s moving," Eva whispered. "Every full moon, it shifts its bones and bones’ bones, like a living organism that forgot how to stand still. Tonight, it’s to Camden’s old tunnel in a way that makes it seem closed, yet we’re standing inside the throat of it." Quinn’s breath hitched. Not fear—she had long ago trained fear to be a silent, obedient thing. It was something else, a recognition of a mismatch, of a puzzle with pieces that didn’t fit the box. "Who knew we’d be here together, looking for a door in a place that’s built to hide doors," she said, though she did not look toward Eva as if inviting a joke. Her gaze traveled the Market as if it might reveal a name, the identity of a thief, the true victim. "We’re not here to name the thief," Eva said, though her voice carried a thread of challenge. "We’re here to learn what keeps this place awake. The Market is a creature that feeds on belief. It lives in the space behind a belief and eats the rest of the world’s common sense to survive." Quinn stood straighter, the leather of her left wristwatch catching the glow. The watch had little to do with time and a lot to do with discipline. She checked the chronometer in her head, then brushed her fingers along the seam with a careful, almost ceremonial touch, as if she were indexing a memory inside her own skin. The seam yielded to pressure in a way a wall should not, not easily, revealing a faint, translucent corridor beyond, a corridor that hummed with the aura of the unknown. "If this is a portal, we’re not meant to walk through it," she said, the edge of a thought catching in her voice. "We’re meant to know it exists and to know that someone used it tonight." Eva’s eyes brightened with a mix of fear and curiosity. "You’re thinking this was a test, aren’t you? The clique’s taste for staging events no one can quite interpret, to keep us chasing a scent around a circle until we forget what’s in front of us." Quinn did not answer immediately. She stepped back, her gaze sweeping over the room and then to the Market’s tunnel that disappeared into a pale, welcoming gloom. The Veil Compass still tugged toward the seam as if it wanted to be the first to cross. "Show me the rest of this," she finally said, voice low and deliberate. "If there’s a door, I want to know who opened it, why, and how they closed it again." Eva nodded, a small, tense smile crossing her features. She retrieved a coil of string from her satchel, a habit from her archival days. "We’ll map the energy flows," she said, winding the string along the floor between the crate and the wall, careful to keep it away from the corpse's still form. "If the door flickered, the string should reflect it the way a heat shimmer reflects a distant city—only here, the shimmer would be a rule broken by magic rather than light." Quinn watched the string’s path, then glanced at the back wall, where the seam glowed a pale blue that wasn’t daylight and wasn’t firelight. The Market’s breath tickled her ear, a whisper as old as the first lock that needed a bone token to be opened. The bone token in her pocket felt heavier, as if it remembered something Quinn did not want to admit. "Quinn," Eva said, not quite a question and not quite a statement, but the word carved a small space in the air between them. "The hidden corridor leads to a chamber that’s older than the Market’s current words, older than Camden’s tunnels. If we step through, we may not step back the same way." The compass’s needle twitched, then settled again toward the seam, a stubborn arrow pointing into the unknown. Quinn crouched again, testing the seam with the tip of a boot, listening to the quiet space beyond—no wind hiss, no scuttling beetles, only a presence that seemed to hold its breath. "Stand by the body," she said, the order softening into a practical suggestion. "If something comes through, we want to be ready to act fast enough to stop it from slipping away." Eva did not argue. She drew back, her hands smooth and sure as she settled the satchel on the crate, then looked toward the corridor with the same cautious awe she’d shown when she’d first learned of the Veil Market’s existence. She crossed her arms over her chest, her fingers moving to the edge of her sleeve as though to hide the tremor in her forearms. Quinn stood and turned toward the Market’s main aisle, where the other stalls kept their breath bated. The bone token’s edge pressed again into her palm, a tether and a warning. The Market’s hum grew louder for a moment, a chorus of unseen voices that wouldn’t quite be named. It felt like the place itself had leaned in, listening to the living and the dead who refused to stay silent. "Whose clock are we following?" Eva asked, eyes moving from the compass to the seam, from the seam to Quinn’s face. "If we’re chasing time, we’re chasing something that thinks it’s clever." Quinn’s lip curled in a rare, almost sardonic smile. "Time’s a fool's game here. We chase purpose. And purpose always leaves a trail." She turned her attention to the corpse again, noting how the sigil stitched near the heart glowed just faintly when the compass needle tilted toward the chest. Not a warning light, not a beacon but a question mark. The body wasn’t an end; it seemed to be a signpost. "Look at the sigil," Eva said, stepping closer to the corpse with careful reverence. "It’s not a mark of worship or blood, not a ritual of protection. It’s a signature—a craftsman’s tag. The Market’s own designer left this imprint to signal a crowd: we know the difference between a show and a trap." Quinn watched the sigil, her fingers cold where the warmth of the corpse lay. The Market’s hush bristled at the corners of her vision as if it knew she saw something it didn’t want to admit. She remembered stories told in the force about the Market’s darker days when a dozen souls vanished, leaving behind only whispers and the sense that the air itself kept a ledger where names could never be erased. "Tell me what you’ve learned from your archives, Eva," Quinn said, voice still even, the way a gun’s hammer rests before a shot. "Not what you suspect, but what you know." Eva opened the satchel and pulled out a notebook with a brittle spine. She flipped forward, her eyes skimming the pages with a practiced speed. "This Market shifts locations with the full moon,” she said, barely looking up. “That’s the pattern. It’s a magnet for things that move between worlds. The cloak’s sigil could be a binding mark. The body’s warmth could be a tether, meant to anchor a traveler when the Market shifts." Quinn’s breath moved slowly. The Veil Compass’s needle nudged again toward the seam, not with urgency but with a patient insistence. She exhaled, letting the sound of the Market breathe through her. "If what you say is true, the killer didn’t come through the portal. The portal came through the killer." Eva’s eyes widened in that delicate way they did when revelation brushed the edge of fear. "That would mean we’re looking at something that used a traveler’s body as a doorway for its own passage. The body was a ship, not a victim." The nerve in Quinn’s jaw tightened. "Or an anchor. Someone needed a body to hold the door long enough for something to slip through, then disappear again." The perception warped into a sharper form in that moment: the Market itself had become a space not merely to observe but to influence. The stair-step hiss of a ventilation shaft somewhere above them sounded like a distant sigh. The compass needle trembled once and then steadied, pointing at the wall again, as if it would take only a slight nudge to coax a door into being. "Quinn, listen," Eva breathed, almost inaudible above the Market’s murmur. "If you push on the seam, you might not return to this room. If you pull away, we’ll miss something essential and possibly let a danger slip through without consequence." Quinn felt the old ache along her spine—the ache she wore as if it were a medal, the memory of Morris and the strange hours of a case that had gone wrong in ways no one could explain. It wasn’t the fear that something supernatural would go wrong again. It was the fear of what truth would do to a man named Morris if she let fear turn into denial. "Then we push," she said, voice quiet, almost intimate. Eva nodded, a simple, grave motion. She opened her satchel and pulled free a small vial of something clear and luminous. She did not offer it to Quinn, instead she held it up to the ambient light and watched as the liquid caught a ghost of color from the Market’s glow. "Light a path," Eva said, without flourish, the phrase almost clinical, as if she were prescribing a test rather than offering a lifeline. Quinn did not move to take the vial. She studied the seam, studied the compass, studied the room’s breathing and the corpse’s stillness with a surgeon’s patience. The body did not belong to the Market; it belonged to a plan to weaponize the Market’s ambiguity. She could see it now: someone had exploited the Market’s need for belief, someone had tricked the crowd into thinking a ritual was being performed, while the real operation slipped quietly through a portal other than the one shown to the crowd. "Move with me," she finally said to Eva, though she knew she would move alone if she needed to. "We’ll test the seam with a slow, careful approach. If there’s a doorway, we’ll see it hold." The two of them stepped closer to the seam, their bodies a pair of quiet test instruments. Quinn pressed a gloved finger to the seam and felt a pulse beneath the surface—the same pulse she had felt when a case with supernatural origins had first stirred in her gut and then settled into memory. The seam gave ever so slightly, as if it were listening, or as if it wished to be heard. The Veil Compass, still warm from the body’s glow, trembled in Quinn’s other hand. The needle drifted away from the seam for a moment, then snapped back, as if the compass itself could not decide whether to betray them to a door or to rescue them from one. "Brace yourself," Eva said, almost softly, like a warning whispered to a sleeping animal. "If this succeeds, we’ll be standing in a room that isn’t the same as this one. If we fail, we’ll wake something that should have stayed asleep." Quinn met Eva’s gaze, the pair of women sharing a quiet, stubborn resolve. They did not have to like the outcome to pursue it. They only had to know that the Market would not wait for them to adjust to its rules. She pressed deeper, their gloved hands brushing the seam in tandem, and the world gave way with a sigh that sounded like a distant train letting out a sigh of steam. The blue glow widened into a corridor, not wide but long enough to hold two figures moving shoulder to shoulder. The air smelled of rain and old paper and something that hummed with possibility. The corridor opened into a room that looked ancient and modern at once, a chamber carved from memory and lit by the Market’s pale, steady glow. The room was circular, with arches that seemed to pulse in time with the heart of the Veil Compass. On the far side stood a pedestal upon which rested a single object—a small, unassuming box bound with brass bands and a sigil etched into its lid, the opposite of the cipher on the corpse’s cloak. The box’s lid hung slightly ajar, and from it drifted a thread of silver light that braided into the air and dissolved before it could be touched. Quinn stepped forward, Eva’s breath catching behind her. The room’s hatch came alive with a whisper of old wards waking, as if the place itself remembered every misdeed that had ever passed through. The compass needle moved again, this time in a careful arc as if mapping a route through a city the Market pretended to be. "What is this?" Eva asked, voice steady but tight with awe. Quinn did not answer at first. She lifted the brass box with the practiced ease of one who had handled dangerous artifacts before, then paused, examining the sigil on the lid to see if it matched the one on the corpse’s cloak. It did not match exactly, yet it shared a cold familiarity that suggested kinship—two siblings in the same pack, two voices in the same choir. "Not a murder weapon," she said finally, tone controlled, eyes fierce. "A delivery system. This box carries a doorway and a signature that belongs to someone who wants a crowd to believe a ritual happened here, that power moved through this space and left behind a show for us to chase." Eva’s lips pressed into a thin line. "And someone used the corpse to anchor the doorway long enough for something to slip through." She glanced at the box again, then at the seam where the corridor still breathed. Quinn set the box down gently, far away from the corpse so that no accidental misstep could disturb any seal. Her fingers hovered above the box as if she might seal it shut with a touch, then withdrew. She looked at Eva, the two of them sharing a long, unspoken conversation with their eyes. "We need to trace energy," Quinn said, almost as if she were stating a fact the Market would not permit her to ignore. "We need the compass to point us to the source of the breach. If the Market moves location with the full moon, there’s a predictable path of energy it follows, a breadcrumb trail we can map." "And if the trail leads us back to Camden," Eva asked, her voice carrying a thread of metallic worry, "to the Market’s heart, to its owner, what then?" Quinn’s jaw tightened, a stubborn line that had seen too many late nights and too many closed doors. "Then we close what someone opened and we figure out how to keep the Market honest," she said, though honesty in the Market was a fragile, often impossible thing. "We don’t light the fuse with more secrets. We shed light where it hurts and follow where the light leads." The compass needle steadied again, pointing toward a corridor that wasn’t there before, a corridor that might have been born from a thought or a fear rather than stone and mortar. The glow inside the chamber intensified just enough to reveal faint markings etched around the floor, patterns that did not belong to any code Quinn had memorized from policing manuals, but to something older and more patient—something that would not yield to a single, square answer. "You said earlier the Market feeds on belief," Eva said, stepping closer to the doorway that might not be a doorway when the Market closed its eyes. "If people believe something happened here, it becomes true in the Market’s logic. If we tell it a different story—one of restraint, one of answers—the Market may listen.” Quinn considered that, letting the words fall into the space between their bodies like stones dropped into a quiet pond. The Market’s breath thrummed in their ears, a slow, even beat that pressed against the edges of vision, making shadows behave as if they had a choice. The bone token in her pocket warmed again, as if it remembered the first time it opened something—before it merely granted entry, it granted belief. "We’ll need to map this carefully," Quinn said, voice never rising above a calm, measured tone. "We’ll lay a grid of suture energy across the Market’s known routes, cross-reference them with the compass’s readings, and see where the threads converge. If the Market’s moving, the path will reveal itself in motion, not in memory." Eva raised a hand, palm toward the corridor, as if to catch the sound of something that hadn’t happened yet. "If you push too hard, you risk tearing a seam wider than you can sew up. If you pull back, you risk giving the wrong impression to whoever might be listening from the other side." Quinn met her gaze, a spark catching in the brown eyes that had learned to hold the line even when everything else wanted to collapse into a story that rang false. "Then we’ll pace carefully," she said. "We’ll pace until the Market shows us the truth without spilling it across the floor like spilled ink." The corridor shimmered once, and the Veil Compass’s needle went still, as if it had found a steady heartbeat within the seam. The chamber’s air grew cooler, and the distant sound of a train’s memory rolled through the walls, muffled, almost affectionate. A moment later, the back of the room’s circle of light dimmed into a soft blue, as if the Market itself had decided to lean in and listen for a moment longer. Quinn stepped closer to the seam again, not with the urgency of a hunter but with the quiet confidence of someone who’d learned to recognize a false path by its echoes. She placed a finger along the seam’s edge, not pressing hard, just enough to confirm that the room’s boundary could still hold, could still serve as a barrier to ordinary gravity. "Quinn," Eva whispered again, a mixture of warning and wonder in her voice. Quinn turned toward her with a small nod that meant more to both of them than any loud proclamation could. "We stay ready. We stay quiet. And we keep walking toward the truth, even if the truth isn’t pretty or simple." She paused, letting the words hang in the air like a proclamation she had no intention of retracting. The body lay a few strides away, a reminder of what was at stake. The Veil Compass lay on the floor between them, its brass casing catching the Market’s pale light and turning it into a small, stubborn star. The seam glowed faintly, like the mouth of a sleeping animal, and Quinn’s heart answered with a measured, patient beat. "Let’s set a plan," Eva said, purpose sharpening her voice. "We’ll document everything, map every energy line, and test every possibility without drawing the wrong attention. If this is a test, we’ll pass it without giving away more than we should." Quinn nodded, the portents of the night unfurling in her mind with the calm of a tried, stubborn thing. She did not smile. She did not reveal the fear that the Market’s secrets sometimes awakened in her. She did not tell Eva that she had once believed there could be a simple, rational solution to every crime. "First, we secure the scene," she said, turning the line of her shoulders toward the corpse and the chamber beyond it. "Second, we trace the energy to its genesis, not to the spectacle it creates. Third, we bring the truth into the light and see what happens to the Market when it’s forced to answer." Eva’s lips curved into a small, professional smile. "The compass will guide us to the source," she said, her voice steady again. "And you’ll tell me what you see, not what you expect to see." Quinn stepped toward the corridor’s mouth and hesitated only a breath, listening to the Market breathe as if it were listening to them. The needle of the Veil Compass jittered once, then fell still, and for a moment the corridor’s blue glow brightened, as if welcoming them to step through. They did not step yet. They stood side by side in that threshold, two observers of a crime that was not finished, two seekers for a doorway that might stay open or shut around them. The scene, alive with the Market’s peculiar weight, held them where they stood—on the cusp of a question that would not answer itself with certainty. The evidence did not fit the ordinary box of police work, but the Box was never ordinary here. The Veil Market did not merely hide truth; it invited the daring to rearrange it until it could be understood. And somewhere in the distance, the city kept its breath, waiting for the next moon to tilt the scales and reveal what the Market had kept in its pocket until tonight. Quinn felt the weight of the moment settle into her chest like a stone that would never be moved, and she decided that the only way forward was to walk through the seam with Eva by her side, careful with every step, patient with every breath, and unafraid to let a new kind of truth rise from the floor where it had slept too long. The two women exchanged a look that said more than words could, then faced the seam together. The Veil Compass’s needle quivered once as if to remind them of where the path began and where it might end. They moved, not as conspirators against the Market, but as colleagues seeking a reading of a book the Market kept rewriting with every moon’s turn, a text no one could quite finish reading aloud. The door—if it was a door—would wait. The night would wait. The Market would wait, because waiting was its strongest trick and its oldest habit. Quinn took a breath and stepped forward, Eva at her shoulder, into the corridor that was not yet a room, toward the answer that would decide whether the crime remained a mystery or became a doorway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags40
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Eva began then [then]"
1"she finally said [finally]"
2"she finally said to Eva [finally]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
4"Eva whispered again [again]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.526
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
89.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount5074
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
3"ever so slightly"
4"softly"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount5074
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count5
4
word"resonance"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"etched"
count3
8
word"warmth"
count4
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count4
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count3
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"practiced ease"
count1
17
word"unspoken"
count1
18
word"predictable"
count1
19
word"measured"
count2
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"echoes"
count1
22
word"weight"
count2
23
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"gloom"
2"reminder"
3"whisper"
4"resonance"
5"echo"
6"flicked"
7"etched"
8"warmth"
9"pulsed"
10"trembled"
11"flickered"
12"beacon"
13"grave"
14"pulse"
15"resolve"
16"practiced ease"
17"unspoken"
18"predictable"
19"measured"
20"shimmered"
21"echoes"
22"weight"
23"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"the weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences201
matches
0"d with fear"
1"t with urgency"
2"t with awe"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences201
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences237
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords5046
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions59
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions161
wordCount3815
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Market"
discoveredNames
Veil13
Market40
Tube2
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn49
Kowalski1
Eva40
Compass10
Oxford1
Morris2
Box1
persons
0"Market"
1"Camden"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Compass"
7"Morris"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.858
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences188
glossingSentenceCount13
matches
0"not quite illuminate the air"
1"something like smoke curled from the seam wh"
2"as if listening to a throat’s hollow echo"
3"as if inviting a joke"
4"not quite a question and not quite a statement, but the word carved a small space in the air between them"
5"not quite a statement, but the word carved a small space in the air between them"
6"presence that seemed to hold its breath"
7"quite be named"
8"felt like the place itself had leaned i"
9"sounded like a distant sigh"
10"sounded like a distant train letting out a"
11"arches that seemed to pulse in time with the heart of the Veil Compass"
12"as if mapping a route through a city the Market pretended to be"
13"as if welcoming them to step through"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches14
per1kWords2.774
wordCount5046
matches
0"not touching the body but treating the space as if the air itself carried explanations"
1"not in a pattern of a fight but in a deliberate spiral away from the seam"
2"not toward north or south, but toward the wall’s seam"
3"not to Eva but to the space between them, to something only she could sense"
4"not quite a question and not quite a statement, but the word carved a small space in the air between them"
5"not quite a statement, but the word carved a small space in the air between them"
6"Not a warning light, not a beacon but a question mark"
7"not a beacon but a question mark"
8"Not what you suspect, but what you know"
9"not with urgency but with a patient insistence"
10"not merely to observe but to influence"
11"not wide but long enough to hold two figures moving shoulder to shoulder"
12"not with the urgency of a hunter but with the quiet confidence of someone who’d learned to recogn"
13"not as conspirators against the Market, but as colleagues seeking a reading of a book the Market kept re"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences237
matches
0"know that the"
1"confirm that the"
2"decided that the"
65.79% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean54.85
std20.86
cv0.38
sampleLengths
0109
183
238
380
483
528
610
782
819
961
1054
119
1257
1361
1441
1533
1671
1765
1866
1947
2071
2157
2260
2358
2447
2535
2652
2754
2888
2937
3046
3145
3231
3384
3465
3554
3649
3732
3866
3970
4032
4172
4253
4373
4431
4574
4651
4743
4827
4967
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences201
matches
0"was emptied"
1"being performed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs603
matches
0"were listening"
1"were indexing"
2"were prescribing"
3"were listening"
4"were stating"
5"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount7
flaggedSentences25
totalSentences237
ratio0.105
matches
0"The Veil Market lay inside a shaft of damp light, a slit under the city’s skin where the air tasted of copper and rain and something else—something almost remembered."
1"The night outside moved; the Market moved with it."
2"She carried the worn leather satchel that seemed almost a part of her—books sliding into view with every tilt of her shoulder, pages brown with age and ink."
3"The corpse’s hands rested flat against the chest, fingers interlaced with a small brass object—old, ceremonial, and glimmering with a pale light that did not quite illuminate the air."
4"Quinn stood, turning slowly in a circle to take in the entire scene—the cloying scent of chalk and old ink, the way a shelf held its breath, the absence of any sign of forced entry."
5"The Market’s stalls were a tangle of shadows and cunning; the crime as much a statement as a deed."
6"She found nothing obvious—no marks of a struggle, no spilled alchemical concoctions, no blood that would tell of a violent end."
7"\"Someone wanted us to think this was ritual,\" Quinn said, voice flat with the habit of skepticism she wore like a ring—always there, always on."
8"The compass wasn’t merely a curiosity; it was a key or a compass rose for something that could not be named yet."
9"Not a flame, not a spark—more like a reflection of someone else’s warmth pressed against a cold night."
10"The seam wasn’t just a crack; it pulsed with a soft, pale light, like the first breath of a thing that hadn’t learned to be solid yet."
11"\"Help me,\" she said, not to Eva but to the space between them, to something only she could sense—the memory of a partner’s last case, the one haunted by something beyond the natural."
12"Not fear—she had long ago trained fear to be a silent, obedient thing."
13"Quinn crouched again, testing the seam with the tip of a boot, listening to the quiet space beyond—no wind hiss, no scuttling beetles, only a presence that seemed to hold its breath."
14"The body wasn’t an end; it seemed to be a signpost."
15"Quinn felt the old ache along her spine—the ache she wore as if it were a medal, the memory of Morris and the strange hours of a case that had gone wrong in ways no one could explain."
16"The body did not belong to the Market; it belonged to a plan to weaponize the Market’s ambiguity."
17"Quinn pressed a gloved finger to the seam and felt a pulse beneath the surface—the same pulse she had felt when a case with supernatural origins had first stirred in her gut and then settled into memory."
18"On the far side stood a pedestal upon which rested a single object—a small, unassuming box bound with brass bands and a sigil etched into its lid, the opposite of the cipher on the corpse’s cloak."
19"It did not match exactly, yet it shared a cold familiarity that suggested kinship—two siblings in the same pack, two voices in the same choir."
20"The glow inside the chamber intensified just enough to reveal faint markings etched around the floor, patterns that did not belong to any code Quinn had memorized from policing manuals, but to something older and more patient—something that would not yield to a single, square answer."
21"The bone token in her pocket warmed again, as if it remembered the first time it opened something—before it merely granted entry, it granted belief."
22"The scene, alive with the Market’s peculiar weight, held them where they stood—on the cusp of a question that would not answer itself with certainty."
23"The Veil Market did not merely hide truth; it invited the daring to rearrange it until it could be understood."
24"The door—if it was a door—would wait."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3837
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount147
adverbRatio0.03831118060985145
lyAdverbCount36
lyAdverbRatio0.009382329945269743
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences237
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences237
mean21.29
std10.13
cv0.476
sampleLengths
029
112
228
328
49
53
617
714
824
928
1021
1117
1231
1320
1429
1516
1622
1720
1825
1928
205
215
2210
2324
2448
253
2616
2717
2844
2935
3019
319
3221
3336
3418
3521
3622
3725
3816
3914
4019
4131
4218
4322
4429
4536
4610
4738
4818
4922
33.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats39
diversityRatio0.17721518987341772
totalSentences237
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences199
matches
0"It always did."
1"Her curly red hair bobbed"
2"She carried the worn leather"
3"She slowed, listening where a"
4"Her tone had that flat,"
5"She touched her fingertips to"
6"she said, the words low"
7"She found nothing obvious—no marks"
8"She pressed the edge of"
9"She stepped closer, and her"
10"she said, not to Eva"
11"She had learned to listen"
12"She opened a page labeled"
13"It was something else, a"
14"she said, though she did"
15"Her gaze traveled the Market"
16"She checked the chronometer in"
17"she said, the edge of"
18"She stepped back, her gaze"
19"she finally said, voice low"
ratio0.296
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount192
totalSentences199
matches
0"The Veil Market lay inside"
1"An abandoned Tube station, Camden’s"
2"The tunnel walls wore murals"
3"The bone token tucked in"
4"The night outside moved; the"
5"It always did."
6"Eva Kowalski walked beside Quinn,"
7"The green of her eyes"
8"Her curly red hair bobbed"
9"She carried the worn leather"
10"Quinn’s boots sounded heavy on"
11"She slowed, listening where a"
12"The body lay where a"
13"The corpse’s hands rested flat"
14"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
15"The dead man’s eyes had"
16"The cloak bore a sigil"
17"A wisp of something like"
18"Eva murmured, lifting the worn"
19"Quinn looked up, eyes narrowing."
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences140
technicalSentenceCount30
matches
0"The bone token tucked in Harlow Quinn’s pocket pressed against fabric as she walked, a quiet reminder of the entry ritual that made the Market possible and into…"
1"Her curly red hair bobbed with each careful step she took, as if alive with a shy, feral knowledge of what lurked between shelves."
2"She carried the worn leather satchel that seemed almost a part of her—books sliding into view with every tilt of her shoulder, pages brown with age and ink."
3"The body lay where a stallkeeper would lean, except the stall was emptied of its usual trinkets and the corpse wore a cloak that looked stitched from the Market…"
4"The corpse’s hands rested flat against the chest, fingers interlaced with a small brass object—old, ceremonial, and glimmering with a pale light that did not qu…"
5"The dead man’s eyes had a pale, almost placid brightness, as if he’d accepted the end with a stubborn sort of courtesy."
6"Quinn walked to the crate, hand skimming the rough wood as if listening to a throat’s hollow echo."
7"She found nothing obvious—no marks of a struggle, no spilled alchemical concoctions, no blood that would tell of a violent end."
8"Quinn’s eyes flicked to the brass Veil Compass that lay glimmering on the corpse’s chest, its patina a dull green, face etched with sigils that looked newly lit…"
9"She pressed the edge of her gloved finger to the silhouette beneath the cloak’s hem and found the fabric gently warmer than its surroundings, as though the body…"
10"She opened a page labeled with a hand that trembled slightly: a sketch of sigils, a rough map of a market quadrant, a notation about bone tokens and their energ…"
11"Quinn followed it with her eyes, then with her feet, stepping toward the seam and listening for anything that might rise from it: the rumor of wind, a breath of…"
12"She checked the chronometer in her head, then brushed her fingers along the seam with a careful, almost ceremonial touch, as if she were indexing a memory insid…"
13"The seam yielded to pressure in a way a wall should not, not easily, revealing a faint, translucent corridor beyond, a corridor that hummed with the aura of the…"
14"She stepped back, her gaze sweeping over the room and then to the Market’s tunnel that disappeared into a pale, welcoming gloom."
15"Quinn crouched again, testing the seam with the tip of a boot, listening to the quiet space beyond—no wind hiss, no scuttling beetles, only a presence that seem…"
16"She crossed her arms over her chest, her fingers moving to the edge of her sleeve as though to hide the tremor in her forearms."
17"The room’s hatch came alive with a whisper of old wards waking, as if the place itself remembered every misdeed that had ever passed through."
18"Quinn’s jaw tightened, a stubborn line that had seen too many late nights and too many closed doors."
19"The glow inside the chamber intensified just enough to reveal faint markings etched around the floor, patterns that did not belong to any code Quinn had memoriz…"
20"The Market’s breath thrummed in their ears, a slow, even beat that pressed against the edges of vision, making shadows behave as if they had a choice."
21"The bone token in her pocket warmed again, as if it remembered the first time it opened something—before it merely granted entry, it granted belief."
22"Quinn met her gaze, a spark catching in the brown eyes that had learned to hold the line even when everything else wanted to collapse into a story that rang fal…"
23"The corridor shimmered once, and the Veil Compass’s needle went still, as if it had found a steady heartbeat within the seam."
24"Quinn stepped closer to the seam again, not with the urgency of a hunter but with the quiet confidence of someone who’d learned to recognize a false path by its…"
25"The Veil Compass lay on the floor between them, its brass casing catching the Market’s pale light and turning it into a small, stubborn star."
26"Quinn stepped toward the corridor’s mouth and hesitated only a breath, listening to the Market breathe as if it were listening to them."
27"The needle of the Veil Compass jittered once, then fell still, and for a moment the corridor’s blue glow brightened, as if welcoming them to step through."
28"They stood side by side in that threshold, two observers of a crime that was not finished, two seekers for a doorway that might stay open or shut around them."
29"Quinn felt the weight of the moment settle into her chest like a stone that would never be moved, and she decided that the only way forward was to walk through …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags40
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"She touched, and a tremor went through the air, like heat snapping in a low wind"
1"Eva said, though her voice carried a thread of challenge"
2"she said, the edge of a thought catching in her voice"
3"she finally said, voice low and deliberate"
4"she said, the order softening into a practical suggestion"
5"she said, voice quiet, almost intimate"
6"Eva asked, voice steady but tight with awe"
7"she said finally, tone controlled, eyes fierce"
8"Eva asked, her voice carrying a thread of metallic worry,"
9"Eva whispered again, a mixture of warning and wonder in her voice"
10"Eva said, purpose sharpening her voice"
11"she said, her voice steady again"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags35
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
2"Eva breathed (breathe)"
3"Eva whispered again (whisper)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.461
leniency0.921
rawRatio0.114
effectiveRatio0.105
66.7602%