Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0K99ZHE6QCM220KXP0PGJ

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Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.001325

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and Aurora Carter froze, her heart thundering in her chest. Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame just right, his slicked-back platinum blond hair gleaming under the dim light of the cramped flat. The air thickened with unspoken words, a tension that crackled like static electricity. “Lucien,” she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret. “Rory.” His voice was smooth, a rich blend of French and something darker, something that sent a shiver down her spine. He stepped inside, the scent of sandalwood and something distinctly him enveloping her. “I hope I’m not interrupting.” “Not at all,” she replied, her tone laced with sarcasm. “Just enjoying a quiet evening with my books and a tabby cat.” Ptolemy, the aforementioned feline, darted past Lucien’s legs, eyeing him with suspicion. Lucien’s lips curled into a smirk, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I see you’ve kept the company of the most discerning critic.” “Ptolemy has high standards,” she shot back, crossing her arms defensively. “What are you doing here?” He leaned against the doorframe, his cane resting casually beside him, the ivory handle glinting in the low light. “I need your help.” “Help?” The word tasted bitter on her tongue. “You have a funny way of asking for it.” “Rory, please.” The shift in his tone was palpable, a crack in the polished veneer he always wore. “This is serious.” She stepped back, allowing him to enter fully, the door clicking shut behind him. The flat felt smaller with him inside, the walls lined with books and scrolls, remnants of her chaotic life. “What’s so serious that you had to show up unannounced?” He ran a hand through his hair, a gesture she remembered all too well. “I’ve been hearing whispers. Something’s brewing in the underworld, and it involves you.” “Me?” She scoffed, the sound sharp. “I’m just a delivery girl trying to make ends meet. I’m not part of your supernatural drama.” “Not yet,” he countered, his gaze piercing. “But you will be if you don’t take this seriously. There are forces at play that—” “Stop.” She held up a hand, the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist catching the light. “You don’t get to come here and act like you know what’s best for me. Not after everything.” His expression shifted, a flicker of regret crossing his face. “I didn’t mean to hurt you, Rory. You know that.” “Do I?” The words slipped out before she could stop them, raw and unfiltered. “You left without a word. Just vanished.” “I had my reasons.” He stepped closer, the air between them thickening with memories. “You were in danger. I thought it was for the best.” “Your best or mine?” She challenged, her voice rising. “You made that choice for me, Lucien. You don’t get to play the hero now.” He sighed, frustration etched into his features. “I’m not trying to be a hero. I’m trying to protect you.” “From what? From whom?” She took a step back, her heart racing. “You can’t just waltz back into my life and expect me to trust you.” “Trust is earned, I know.” He paused, his eyes searching hers. “But I’m asking you to listen. There’s a darkness coming, and it’s targeting those close to me. You’re on that list.” “Why should I believe you?” She felt the walls closing in, the weight of their past pressing down on her. “You’ve always had your secrets.” “Because I’m here now.” His voice softened, the edge of urgency replaced by something more vulnerable. “I wouldn’t have come if it wasn’t important.” The silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken words and unresolved feelings. Aurora’s breath hitched as she caught a glimpse of the man she once knew, the one who had made her laugh, who had held her when the world felt too heavy. But that man was buried beneath layers of hurt and betrayal. “Fine,” she relented, her voice barely above a whisper. “Tell me what’s going on.” Lucien straightened, the shift in his posture signalling a return to business. “There’s a new player in the supernatural underworld. Someone powerful, and they’re looking to expand their influence. I’ve heard your name mentioned in connection with them.” “Why?” The question hung in the air, laced with fear. “What do they want with me?” “Your connection to me.” He stepped closer, the intensity of his gaze making her pulse quicken. “They think you can lead them to me.” “Lead them to you?” She shook her head, disbelief mingling with anger. “I’m not a pawn in your game, Lucien.” “Not a pawn. A target.” His voice dropped, urgency creeping back in. “If they find you, they’ll use you to get to me. I can’t let that happen.” Aurora’s heart raced, the reality of his words sinking in. “What do you want me to do?” “Stay close. Let me protect you.” He reached out, his fingers brushing against her arm, sending a jolt of electricity through her. “I can’t lose you again.” The warmth of his touch ignited a fire within her, a reminder of the passion they once shared. But the memories were tainted, marred by the pain of their separation. “You think I can just forget everything? The way you left? The way you made me feel?” “I never wanted to hurt you.” His voice was low, almost pleading. “I thought I was doing the right thing.” “Right for whom?” She pulled away, the distance between them a necessary barrier. “You don’t get to decide what’s right for me.” “Then let me help you decide.” He stepped back, his expression shifting to one of determination. “I’ll do whatever it takes to keep you safe.” “Even if it means dragging me back into your world?” She challenged, her heart pounding. “I’m not sure I want that.” “Then let me show you.” He took a step forward, his eyes locked onto hers, a promise lingering in the air. “Let me prove that I can protect you. That I can be the man you need.” The weight of his words hung between them, a fragile thread of hope woven through the tension. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat, the pull of their history threatening to overwhelm her. “Rory,” he said softly, his voice a low rumble. “I need you to trust me.” “Trust is a dangerous thing,” she replied, her heart racing. “Especially with you.” “Then let’s make it a gamble.” He stepped closer, the space between them charged with unspoken desire. “What do you say?” Before she could respond, the sound of shattering glass echoed from the street below, a cacophony that shattered the moment. Aurora’s heart raced as she turned towards the window, the world outside suddenly feeling more dangerous than ever. “Stay here,” Lucien commanded, his voice firm. “No.” She shook her head, adrenaline surging through her veins. “I’m not hiding.” “Rory—” “Whatever’s out there, I’m facing it with you.” He hesitated, the weight of her resolve evident in his eyes. “Then let’s go.” With a shared glance, they moved towards the door, the past lingering in the air like a ghost. Whatever awaited them outside, they would face it together. The stakes had never been higher, and the darkness was closing in.
total_cost0.00132544

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She pulled away [away]"
1"He stepped back [back]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.081
87.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count3
2
word"tension"
count2
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"racing"
count2
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"pawn"
count2
16
word"raced"
count2
17
word"warmth"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
19
word"pounding"
count1
20
word"charged"
count1
21
word"desire"
count1
22
word"echoed"
count1
23
word"cacophony"
count1
24
word"shattered"
count1
25
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"unspoken"
2"tension"
3"down her spine"
4"glinting"
5"palpable"
6"chaotic"
7"flicker"
8"etched"
9"racing"
10"weight"
11"silence"
12"whisper"
13"intensity"
14"pulse"
15"pawn"
16"raced"
17"warmth"
18"reminder"
19"pounding"
20"charged"
21"desire"
22"echoed"
23"cacophony"
24"shattered"
25"resolve"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of his words"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a shiver down"
82.63% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences59
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
1"d with fear"
2"g with anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount709
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
Carter1
Moreau1
French1
Ptolemy1
Lucien5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1219
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
87.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean24.88
std11.39
cv0.458
sampleLengths
058
112
239
334
423
516
623
717
821
943
1027
1123
1223
1333
1420
1521
1625
1724
1819
1926
2032
2125
2224
2354
2414
2538
2616
2724
2820
2928
3017
3127
3247
3320
3422
3525
3621
3737
3832
3915
4013
4121
4238
437
4413
451
468
4714
4839
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was buried"
1"were tainted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was closing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences100
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount711
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03375527426160337
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011251758087201125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.19
std5.79
cv0.475
sampleLengths
014
131
213
312
421
513
65
710
824
912
1011
1111
125
1319
144
158
169
1718
183
1914
2019
2110
2214
2313
246
2517
267
2716
2815
2918
3010
3110
3214
337
3414
3511
369
3715
387
3912
4012
4114
4211
4321
4420
455
4616
478
4812
4931
65.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences59
matches
0"she breathed, the name slipping"
1"His voice was smooth, a"
2"He stepped inside, the scent"
3"she replied, her tone laced"
4"she shot back, crossing her"
5"He leaned against the doorframe,"
6"She stepped back, allowing him"
7"He ran a hand through"
8"She scoffed, the sound sharp"
9"he countered, his gaze piercing"
10"She held up a hand,"
11"His expression shifted, a flicker"
12"He stepped closer, the air"
13"She challenged, her voice rising"
14"He sighed, frustration etched into"
15"She took a step back,"
16"He paused, his eyes searching"
17"She felt the walls closing"
18"His voice softened, the edge"
19"she relented, her voice barely"
ratio0.576
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences59
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably"
2"The air thickened with unspoken"
3"she breathed, the name slipping"
4"His voice was smooth, a"
5"He stepped inside, the scent"
6"she replied, her tone laced"
7"Ptolemy, the aforementioned feline, darted"
8"Lucien’s lips curled into a"
9"she shot back, crossing her"
10"He leaned against the doorframe,"
11"The word tasted bitter on"
12"The shift in his tone"
13"She stepped back, allowing him"
14"The flat felt smaller with"
15"He ran a hand through"
16"She scoffed, the sound sharp"
17"he countered, his gaze piercing"
18"She held up a hand,"
19"His expression shifted, a flicker"
ratio0.932
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Before she could respond, the"
ratio0.017
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame just right, his slicked-back platinum blond hair gleaming under …"
1"He leaned against the doorframe, his cane resting casually beside him, the ivory handle glinting in the low light."
2"Before she could respond, the sound of shattering glass echoed from the street below, a cacophony that shattered the moment."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret"
1"he countered, his gaze piercing"
2"She challenged, her voice rising"
3"She took, her heart racing"
4"He paused, his eyes searching hers"
5"She felt, the weight of their past pressing down on her"
6"His voice softened, the edge of urgency replaced by something more vulnerable"
7"she relented, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"He stepped, the intensity of his gaze making her pulse quicken"
9"She shook, disbelief mingling with anger"
10"His voice dropped, urgency creeping back in"
11"He stepped back, his expression shifting to one of determination"
12"She challenged, her heart pounding"
13"he said softly, his voice a low rumble"
14"she replied, her heart racing"
15"Lucien commanded, his voice firm"
16"She shook, adrenaline surging through her veins"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"She challenged (challenge)"
2"She challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.081
77.4093%