Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KCGGFCZHPTKTD3DPRH55

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Duration:
25.4s
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$0.023331
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and Aurora's stomach dropped. Lucien stood in the threshold, one hand still raised as if to knock again, the other gripping that damned ivory-handled cane. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Water dripped from the platinum strands that had escaped their usual severe styling. "Bonsoir, chérie." His mismatched eyes—amber and black—swept over her ratty Cardiff University jumper and bare feet. "I hope I am not interrupting." "You are." Aurora planted herself in the doorway, blocking his view of Eva's cluttered flat. Behind her, Ptolemy meowed, probably perched on some precarious stack of occult manuscripts. "How did you even know I was here?" "I am exceptionally good at my job." "That's not an answer." "It is the only one you will receive." He tilted his head, rainwater sliding down his sharp cheekbone. "May I come in? Or shall we conduct our business where the entire street can observe?" Business. Right. Because that's all they'd ever been. A fixer and his temporarily useful asset. Never mind the night in his Kensington flat three months ago when business had blurred into something else entirely. Never mind how his mouth had traced the crescent scar on her wrist, or how he'd whispered her name like a prayer in a language she didn't know. Never mind how she'd woken to find him gone, nothing but a note in his precise handwriting: *This was a mistake.* "There's a pub two streets over." Aurora kept her voice level. "We can talk there." "I would prefer privacy." "And I'd prefer you hadn't shown up unannounced." Something flickered across his expression—too quick to name. "Fair enough." He stepped back, rain immediately soaking through his hair. "The pub, then." She should have said yes. Should have grabbed her jacket and trainers and met him on neutral ground. Instead she heard herself say, "Wait." He paused on the threshold. "You'll drip all over the curry house stairs." The excuse sounded weak even to her own ears. "Just—come in. Five minutes." Lucien's mouth curved, not quite a smile. "How generous." She moved aside. He crossed into Eva's cramped entrance, and the space contracted around him. He'd always had that effect—filling rooms, demanding attention without saying a word. Aurora engaged two of the three deadbolts, leaving one open. Escape route. Old habit. "Eva is not here?" He glanced at the towers of books threatening to avalanche off the kitchen counter. "She's in Oxford. Research trip." Aurora crossed her arms. "What do you want, Lucien?" "Your expertise." "My expertise." She barked a laugh. "I'm a delivery driver who occasionally translates dead languages. You've got a dozen people more qualified than—" "I need someone I can trust." The words hung between them. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind around Lucien's legs, purring like a motorboat. Traitor. "Trust." Aurora tasted the word, found it bitter. "That's rich." "I deserve that." "You deserve worse than that." She moved into the kitchenette, needing distance. "You used me to get information on Silas' supplier network. You got what you wanted. Then you—" She stopped, biting down on words she refused to give him. "We're done." "What happened between us—" He set the cane against the wall, something he never did. Always kept it close. Always prepared. "It was not supposed to happen." "Brilliant deduction. You made that abundantly clear in your goodbye note." "I had my reasons." "Everyone has reasons." She grabbed two mugs from the drainer, just for something to do with her hands. "Doesn't make them good ones." "My father sent an assassin after my mother." The words came flat, stripped of his usual eloquence. "When I was eight years old. He wanted to ensure I would have no ties to the human world. No weaknesses." Aurora's hands stilled on the mugs. "He failed, obviously. But the lesson remained." Lucien's reflection wavered in the dark window behind her. "People close to me become targets. It is the nature of what I am." "Half-demon." She turned, meeting his eyes. "I know what you are, Luc. I knew that night." "Knowing and understanding are different things." "So you just decided for me? Decided I couldn't handle it?" Heat crept up her throat. "I've been running from things my whole life. My family. Evan. Myself. I didn't need you to protect me from you." "I was not protecting you." His voice dropped, rougher than she'd ever heard it. "I was protecting myself from wanting you too much." The admission sucked the air from the room. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter. Outside, a siren wailed past. Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs, loud enough she wondered if he could hear it with whatever supernatural senses he possessed. "That's not fair." Her voice came out smaller than intended. "No. It is not." He moved then, crossing the space between them in two strides. Close enough she could see the rain still clinging to his eyelashes, smell the cedar and smoke that always clung to his clothes. "But I find I am no longer capable of being fair where you are concerned." "Three months." She held her ground. "You stayed away for three months." "I tried to stay away longer." "Why come back now?" "Because there is a contract on your head." He reached out, stopped just short of touching her face. "And I will burn down every corner of London's underworld before I let anyone collect on it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
1"He moved then [then]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.404
leniency0.807
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.07
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount910
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount910
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"ensure"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"traced"
2"flickered"
3"ensure"
4"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords903
ratio0.004
matches
0"This was a mistake."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount526
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora8
Cardiff1
University1
Eva2
Ptolemy3
Business1
Kensington1
Lucien4
Heat1
Close1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Business"
4"Lucien"
5"Heat"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Kensington"
globalScore0.74
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount903
matches(empty)
93.41% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"had that effect"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean19.63
std14.53
cv0.74
sampleLengths
08
143
222
336
47
54
634
762
821
915
104
118
1222
1324
145
1521
169
1741
1818
1914
202
2123
226
2319
2410
253
2642
2727
2811
294
3023
3138
326
3330
3416
356
3637
3723
388
3931
4010
4153
4212
436
444
4535
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs101
matches(empty)
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences91
ratio0.033
matches
0"\"Bonsoir, chérie.\" His mismatched eyes—amber and black—swept over her ratty Cardiff University jumper and bare feet."
1"Something flickered across his expression—too quick to name."
2"He'd always had that effect—filling rooms, demanding attention without saying a word."
84.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount531
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damned ivory-handled cane."
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.05084745762711865
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007532956685499058
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean9.92
std6.46
cv0.651
sampleLengths
08
121
29
313
416
56
615
713
88
97
104
1118
1216
131
141
156
167
1719
1828
1921
2011
214
224
238
248
2511
263
275
2813
296
305
3117
324
337
342
353
3612
3712
3810
392
402
4118
429
435
442
456
4617
476
485
4913
86.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5714285714285714
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Instead she heard herself say,"
1"Always kept it close."
ratio0.038
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences52
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—swept"
1"He tilted his head, rainwater"
2"He stepped back, rain immediately"
3"She should have said yes."
4"He paused on the threshold."
5"She moved aside."
6"He crossed into Eva's cramped"
7"He'd always had that effect—filling"
8"He glanced at the towers"
9"She barked a laugh"
10"She moved into the kitchenette,"
11"She stopped, biting down on"
12"He set the cane against"
13"She grabbed two mugs from"
14"She turned, meeting his eyes"
15"His voice dropped, rougher than"
16"Her voice came out smaller"
17"He moved then, crossing the"
18"She held her ground"
19"He reached out, stopped just"
ratio0.385
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences52
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien stood in the threshold,"
2"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
3"Water dripped from the platinum"
4"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—swept"
5"Aurora planted herself in the"
6"He tilted his head, rainwater"
7"A fixer and his temporarily"
8"Aurora kept her voice level"
9"Something flickered across his expression—too"
10"He stepped back, rain immediately"
11"She should have said yes."
12"He paused on the threshold."
13"The excuse sounded weak even"
14"Lucien's mouth curved, not quite"
15"She moved aside."
16"He crossed into Eva's cramped"
17"He'd always had that effect—filling"
18"Aurora engaged two of the"
19"He glanced at the towers"
ratio0.808
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Because that's all they'd ever"
ratio0.019
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien stood in the threshold, one hand still raised as if to knock again, the other gripping that damned ivory-handled cane."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He tilted, rainwater sliding down his sharp cheekbone"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she heard (hear)"
1"She barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.035
leniency0.07
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.07
91.6698%