| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde glanced back [back]" | | 1 | "Isolde stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.311 | | leniency | 0.622 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.089 | |
| 97.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1773 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1773 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echoes" | | 2 | "resolved" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "stomach" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "the feeling of nostalgia" |
| |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1766 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1460 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | November | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Flat | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.815 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something between violet and the feeling of nos" | | 1 | "looked like cutlery" |
| |
| 86.75% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.133 | | wordCount | 1766 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the tired grey-green of an English winter, but green so saturated it looked painted, every shade she'd ever" | | 1 | "neither warm nor" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 25.59 | | std | 25.38 | | cv | 0.992 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 77 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 106 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 50 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 65 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 66 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 19 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 232 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1466 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "usual wind-carried murmur." |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.034788540245566164 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0068212824010914054 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 11.54 | | std | 10.19 | | cv | 0.883 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 17 |
| |
| 70.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "More a vibration that crawled" | | 1 | "Then the silence filled." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "She blinked, and the world" | | 2 | "They drifted forward, Nyx's shadow-form" | | 3 | "She left no footprints." | | 4 | "They pressed deeper." | | 5 | "It lay cool against her" | | 6 | "Her reflection stared back, but" | | 7 | "Her reflection lingered a moment" | | 8 | "They crossed the stream on" | | 9 | "They caught the light and" | | 10 | "She stepped closer to the" | | 11 | "They pressed one incorporeal hand" | | 12 | "Their whisper carried across the" | | 13 | "She pulled it free." | | 14 | "Their form had gone rigid," | | 15 | "She'd never seen it, but" | | 16 | "It burned against her chest" | | 17 | "She held the blade toward" | | 18 | "Their form was already stretching," |
| | ratio | 0.19 | |
| 50.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones hummed." | | 1 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "Isolde said from somewhere ahead" | | 3 | "Rory pulled her hand back." | | 4 | "The grove opened before them" | | 5 | "The change hit all at" | | 6 | "London's distant traffic vanished." | | 7 | "Birdsong, but wrong." | | 8 | "The notes bent in directions" | | 9 | "She blinked, and the world" | | 10 | "Wildflowers blanketed the forest floor" | | 11 | "Nyx whispered beside her, their" | | 12 | "They drifted forward, Nyx's shadow-form" | | 13 | "The amber glow came from" | | 14 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 15 | "She left no footprints." | | 16 | "Rory looked down at her" | | 17 | "Isolde glanced back, her pale" | | 18 | "They pressed deeper." | | 19 | "The trees grew taller and" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "More a vibration that crawled up through the soles of her trainers and settled in her molars, a dentist's drill pitched below human hearing." | | 1 | "One moment they stood in Richmond Park, late November, the skeletal reach of bare oaks against a slate sky, and the next they stepped through air that tasted of…" | | 2 | "The notes bent in directions that made her inner ear protest, melodies that looped back on themselves and harmonised with echoes that hadn't happened yet." | | 3 | "Wildflowers blanketed the forest floor in defiance of the season, their petals shifting hue as she watched, pinks bleeding into golds bleeding into a colour she…" | | 4 | "Where Nyx moved, the light seemed to bend around them, uncertain, as though it couldn't decide whether they were solid enough to cast a shadow or were themselve…" | | 5 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair catching that sourceless light and fracturing it into tiny rainbows that danced across the moss." | | 6 | "Rory looked down at her own feet and saw she left deep impressions in the moss, each one filling immediately with tiny white flowers that hadn't been there a se…" | | 7 | "The trees grew taller and stranger the further they walked, their trunks twisted into shapes that suggested intention, doorways and windows and arches that led …" | | 8 | "A stream cut across their path, its water running in two directions at once, splitting around a stone and flowing both upstream and downstream simultaneously." | | 9 | "A cathedral of living wood rose around the clearing, the trees having grown or been grown into buttresses and vaults and soaring columns that disappeared into a…" | | 10 | "Bioluminescent fungi, fat and pale as moons, clung to the upper reaches and cast a blue-white glow that mixed with the amber to create something neither warm no…" | | 11 | "Through that ragged opening, she glimpsed rolling hills carpeted in vineyards that stretched to a horizon that curved the wrong way, as though the land itself b…" | | 12 | "Orchards heavy with fruit she'd never seen, colours that made her eyes water, and between them, long tables set for feasts that could seat hundreds." | | 13 | "The smell hit her next, roasted meat and caramelised sugar and spices that made her mouth water and her stomach clench with a hunger that felt implanted, alien,…" | | 14 | "A shape, distant, crossing between the vineyard rows with a gait that was wrong in ways she couldn't articulate, too many joints bending in too many directions." | | 15 | "A weight settled behind her eyes, a pressure like fingers pressing against the inside of her skull, and with it came a voice that wasn't sound, a sensation of w…" | | 16 | "The moonsilver dagger pulsed with its own cold light, and where its glow met the pendant's crimson, the air between them crackled and spat sparks that smelled o…" | | 17 | "Closer now, close enough that Rory could make out arms, too many arms, and a mouth that split the wrong way, vertical, lined with teeth that looked like cutlery…" |
| |
| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice its usual wind-carried murmur" |
| |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.156 | | leniency | 0.311 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.089 | |