Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KFPA5NP1YMAX6SN0ETK0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.002619
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and Rory froze, her fingers still curled around the deadbolt. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, his amber and black eyes catching the light from the bare bulb above. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his tailored charcoal suit impeccable as always. "Still three locks. Paranoia suits you, Rory." His French accent curled around the words like smoke. "Still cane-twirling dramas. Performance art suits *you*, Luc." She didn’t move, blocking the doorway with her body. The faint scent of his cologne — sandalwood and something darker, sharper — hit her nostrils. It hadn’t changed. Neither had the way her pulse quickened at the sight of him. "May I come in? Or shall we conduct our reunion in the corridor?" "What reunion? Last I checked, you ghosted me." "Ghosting implies absence," he said, stepping forward. "I’ve been watching. From a distance." "Creepy. But not surprising." She folded her arms, her left wrist brushing against her hip. The crescent scar there tingled, a phantom reminder of the night they’d met. "Why break character now?" "Simple." He tilted his head, his platinum blond hair catching the light. "I need your help." Her laugh was sharp, brittle. "Of course you do. Always about you, isn’t it?" "Not this time." His voice dropped, and for a moment, the facade slipped. She saw it — the flicker of something raw in his eyes. "It’s about Eva." Her stomach dropped. "Eva? What about her?" "Let me in, Rory," he said softly. "Please." She hesitated, then stepped aside. He moved past her, his cane tapping against the hardwood floor. The flat felt smaller with him in it, the air thicker. She shut the door, relocking it out of habit, and turned to face him. He stood by the cluttered coffee table, his gaze scanning the chaos — books stacked precariously, scrolls unfurled, notes scribbled in Eva’s cramped handwriting. "You’ve redecorated." "Eva’s been busy." Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the door. "Now talk." He turned to her, his expression unreadable. "Eva’s in trouble." "Define trouble." "The kind that involves Avaros." Her breath hitched. "Your father’s realm?" He nodded, his grip tightening on the cane. "She’s been meddling in things best left alone. Digging into forbidden texts, poking around circles she doesn’t understand." "And you know this how?" "I’m the one who tipped her off." He paused, his jaw tightening. "I thought she’d come to me for help. She didn’t." "Typical Eva," Rory muttered. "Stubborn to a fault." "Which is why she’s now missing," he said bluntly. "Taken by someone — or something — from Avaros." The words hung between them, heavy and suffocating. Rory stared at him, her mind racing. "Missing? Since when?" "Three days. I’ve been tracking her, but... it’s not safe for me to intervene directly." "Why’s that?" "My father’s watching. If he catches me meddling..." "He’ll what? Ground you?" Her tone was harsh, but she couldn’t help it. The thought of Eva in danger, of Lucien’s involvement, twisted something inside her. He stepped closer, his eyes locking onto hers. "You know what he’s capable of." She did. She’d seen it firsthand. That night in Marseille, the screams, the fire... She shook her head, pushing the memory away. "So you come to me. Why?" "Because you’re resourceful. Because Eva trusts you. And because..." He hesitated, his gaze softening. "Because I trust you." Her chest tightened. "Funny way of showing it." She brushed past him, heading for the kitchen. She needed space, air, something to steady her nerves. "Tea?" "Whiskey," he said, following her. "Of course." She pulled a bottle from the cupboard and poured him a glass, her hands trembling slightly. "So what’s the plan? You want me to waltz into Avaros and rescue her?" "Not exactly." He took the glass, his fingers brushing hers. The contact sent a jolt through her, and she pulled her hand away. "There’s a portal. Hidden, but accessible. I can guide you there." "And then what?" "You find Eva. Bring her back." "Sounds simple," she said drily. "Why doesn’t it feel simple?" "Because it’s not." He downed the whiskey in one swift motion, his eyes darkening. "The portal’s guarded. By someone familiar." "Let me guess," she said, her voice bitter. "Evan." He nodded, his expression grim. "He’s been working for my father. For a while now." Her heart skipped a beat. Evan. The name alone was enough to make her skin crawl. "You’ve got some nerve, Luc," she said quietly. "Bringing him into this." "I didn’t bring him into anything," he said sharply. "He sought my father out. For power. For revenge." Against *her*, she didn’t say. She didn’t need to. The past hung between them, unspoken but palpable. "So what now?" she asked, her voice steadier than she felt. "I face Evan, get Eva, and hope we all make it out alive?" "Essentially." He set the glass down, his gaze intense. "But you won’t be alone." "Oh, you’re coming along?" "The portal’s unstable. It’ll take both of us to navigate it safely." "And after?" "That’s up to you," he said softly. "But Rory... we need to talk. Properly." Her chest tightened again, but she forced a smile. "Save Eva first. Talk later." He hesitated, then nodded. "Fair enough." She grabbed her jacket from the back of a chair, her mind racing. Eva was out there, in danger. Evan was involved. And Lucien... Lucien was here, his presence a reminder of everything she’d tried to forget. She slipped the jacket on, her fingers brushing against the crescent scar on her wrist. "Ready?" she asked, glancing at him. He picked up his cane, his expression unreadable. "Always." She unlocked the door, her heart pounding. The hallway stretched before them, dark and ominous. Outside, the night awaited, thick with shadows and secrets. She took a deep breath, stepped forward, and didn’t look back.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:55:21.695Z" 2/19/2026, 3:55:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
8.22% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"His French accent curled around [around]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"he said bluntly [bluntly]"
3"she said drily [drily]"
4"she said quietly [quietly]"
5"he said sharply [sharply]"
6"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0.269
effectiveRatio0.192
79.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count2
3
word"facade"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count2
8
word"racing"
count2
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"skipped a beat"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"palpable"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"reminder"
3"facade"
4"flicker"
5"stomach"
6"scanning"
7"unreadable"
8"racing"
9"familiar"
10"skipped a beat"
11"unspoken"
12"palpable"
13"navigate"
14"pounding"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords976
ratio0.002
matches
0"you"
1"her"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount597
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Moreau1
French1
Eva3
Lucien4
Marseille1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount976
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean17.12
std13.31
cv0.778
sampleLengths
047
116
248
313
48
513
632
716
814
928
107
118
1265
132
1413
1510
162
175
186
1926
205
2122
228
2318
2418
2515
262
278
2826
2914
3028
3118
3226
335
3432
3534
363
376
3810
3920
409
4115
4228
4318
4417
4524
4614
474
4812
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
72.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences122
ratio0.025
matches
0"The faint scent of his cologne — sandalwood and something darker, sharper — hit her nostrils."
1"She saw it — the flicker of something raw in his eyes."
2"He stood by the cluttered coffee table, his gaze scanning the chaos — books stacked precariously, scrolls unfurled, notes scribbled in Eva’s cramped handwriting."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount594
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.030303030303030304
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013468013468013467
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean8
std4.68
cv0.585
sampleLengths
014
120
213
316
417
516
63
712
813
98
107
116
1215
1313
144
1512
164
175
189
1913
2012
213
223
234
247
251
265
2711
2811
2914
3024
312
3211
332
347
353
362
375
383
393
408
4118
425
4312
4410
454
464
479
489
498
66.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4262295081967213
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences71
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"His French accent curled around"
2"She didn’t move, blocking the"
3"It hadn’t changed."
4"he said, stepping forward"
5"She folded her arms, her"
6"He tilted his head, his"
7"Her laugh was sharp, brittle."
8"His voice dropped, and for"
9"She saw it — the"
10"Her stomach dropped."
11"he said softly"
12"She hesitated, then stepped aside."
13"He moved past her, his"
14"She shut the door, relocking"
15"He stood by the cluttered"
16"He turned to her, his"
17"Her breath hitched."
18"He nodded, his grip tightening"
19"He paused, his jaw tightening"
ratio0.718
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences71
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"His French accent curled around"
4"She didn’t move, blocking the"
5"The faint scent of his"
6"It hadn’t changed."
7"Neither had the way her"
8"he said, stepping forward"
9"She folded her arms, her"
10"The crescent scar there tingled,"
11"He tilted his head, his"
12"Her laugh was sharp, brittle."
13"His voice dropped, and for"
14"She saw it — the"
15"Her stomach dropped."
16"he said softly"
17"She hesitated, then stepped aside."
18"He moved past her, his"
19"The flat felt smaller with"
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stood by the cluttered coffee table, his gaze scanning the chaos — books stacked precariously, scrolls unfurled, notes scribbled in Eva’s cramped handwriting…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"He tilted, his platinum blond hair catching the light"
1"He paused, his jaw tightening"
2"He hesitated, his gaze softening"
3"She pulled, her hands trembling slightly"
4"He took, his fingers brushing hers"
5"He downed, his eyes darkening"
6"she said, her voice bitter"
7"she asked, her voice steadier than she felt"
8"He set, his gaze intense"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.329
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.027
73.3752%