Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KHQD8C7FEWCN51ZTTP4V

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Duration:
44.4s
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$0.060950
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Amazon Bedrock

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones emerged from the morning mist like teeth rising from pale gums. Aurora stopped at the tree line, her breath catching. She'd walked through Richmond Park dozens of times since moving to London, jogged past these very oaks without a second glance. Now the ancient trunks seemed to lean inward, branches intertwining overhead to form a living archway that hadn't existed moments before. "You see it." Nyx's voice drifted from somewhere behind her left shoulder, a whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. "The Grove reveals itself only to those who carry the right invitation." The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her collarbone, warm through the fabric of her jacket. Aurora pressed her palm flat against it, feeling the steady throb like a second heartbeat. "I thought Fae magic and Hel artifacts didn't mix," she said. "They don't." Nyx shifted, their form solidifying enough that she could see the faint violet glow of their eyes in her peripheral vision. "Which makes your pendant's reaction... interesting." Aurora didn't like that pause. In the three weeks since Nyx had attached themselves to her shadow — quite literally — she'd learned that their pauses carried weight. Meanings within meanings. The Shade had been human once, centuries ago, and sometimes that humanity surfaced in the smallest hesitations. She stepped forward. The grass beneath her feet changed texture immediately, shifting from the damp spring turf of the park to something softer, denser. Moss, she realized. Thick emerald moss that seemed to glow faintly from within, each step leaving no impression, no mark of her passage. "The Seer's territory," Nyx murmured. "Tread carefully. Time moves strangely here." "You mentioned that. An hour inside could be—" "Minutes. Days. The Grove operates on Fae logic, which is to say, no logic at all by mortal standards." The archway of oaks opened into a clearing that shouldn't have fit within the boundaries of the park. Couldn't have fit. Aurora stopped again, her mind struggling to process what her eyes insisted was real. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in swaths of impossible color — blues that shifted to purples as she watched, yellows that brightened to golds and then dimmed to amber. They moved without wind, swaying in patterns that suggested communication, a language written in petal and stem. The air smelled of honeysuckle and something sharper underneath, metallic, like the moment before lightning strikes. "It's..." She couldn't find the word. "Dangerous," Nyx supplied. "Beautiful things in Fae spaces often are." "I was going to say overwhelming." "That too." She walked deeper into the clearing. The standing stones she'd glimpsed from outside now ringed the space at irregular intervals — not stone at all, she realized as she approached the nearest one. Petrified wood. Ancient oaks turned to mineral, their bark patterns still visible, frozen in gray-brown crystal. She reached out to touch one and felt warmth emanating from its surface, a steady pulse that matched the rhythm of her pendant. "Don't." Nyx's shadow fell across her hand, impossibly cold where the stone radiated heat. She pulled back. "Why?" "These mark the boundary between here and elsewhere. Touch them, and you might find yourself stepping through without meaning to." "Through to where?" The Shade didn't answer. Their form rippled, becoming less solid, and Aurora understood that meant discomfort. Questions they couldn't or wouldn't answer. She moved on, circling the clearing's perimeter. A stream appeared from nowhere, its water running silver-clear over stones that glinted with colors she couldn't name. No source visible, no destination — it simply existed, burbling softly, the sound almost like laughter. Almost like words, if she listened closely enough. She didn't listen closely. That seemed like another trap. "The flowers are watching," she said quietly. "Everything in Fae spaces watches. The trees. The stones. The air itself. They report to their masters." "And Isolde? Is she their master?" "Isolde is... complicated." Nyx materialized more fully beside her, their humanoid silhouette taking clearer shape. In the Grove's strange luminescence, she could almost see features — the suggestion of a nose, the hollow where eyes should be filled with that violet glow. "She was born of both worlds. Belongs to neither. The Grove tolerates her presence because she poses no threat to its deeper purposes." "What purposes?" "I don't know. I've never been permitted this deep before." That admission sent a chill down Aurora's spine. Nyx had existed for nearly four centuries, slipping between shadows, gathering secrets. If they'd never penetrated the Grove's inner reaches... "Why now? Why me?" "Your pendant, perhaps. Your bloodline. Your stubbornness in refusing to die despite several excellent opportunities." The whisper carried something that might have been humor. "The Fae value interesting things. You've become interesting." "Lucky me." She followed the stream's edge, noting how the moss gave way to small white pebbles that clicked musically under her boots. Each step produced a different note, and she realized with a start that she was composing something as she walked — an accidental melody that hung in the air behind her. The clearing's center held a single tree, different from all the others. Silver bark, leaves that glinted like mirrors, branches reaching upward in a spiral pattern that drew the eye and held it. Aurora stopped several meters away, unwilling to approach closer. The tree felt aware in a way the watching flowers didn't. Active rather than passive. "The heart of the Grove," Nyx said. "I can go no further." She turned. The Shade had stopped at the stream's edge, their form wavering like a candle flame in wind. "What do you mean?" "Shadows cannot exist where that light falls." They gestured toward the tree, and Aurora noticed for the first time that it cast no shadow of its own. The silver leaves reflected light in all directions, illuminating even the spaces that should have been dark. "You'll have to meet the Seer alone." "You didn't mention that part." "Would you have come if I had?" Fair point. She wouldn't have. Aurora crossed the stream, the cold water soaking through her boots instantly, so frigid it burned. She gasped, stumbled, made it to the far bank with her teeth clenched against the shock. When she looked back, the stream seemed wider than before. Deeper. Nyx was barely visible through the silver light that suffused everything now, a dark smudge against the impossible colors of the Grove's outer ring. "The Seer will find you strange," the Shade called, their voice somehow still a whisper despite the distance. "Answer her questions truthfully if you can. Never promise anything. Never accept gifts without understanding their cost." "Comforting advice." "I've never aimed to comfort." She turned toward the silver tree and walked forward. The flowers parted before her now, bowing away to create a path she hadn't seen before. White stones gave way to a mosaic of colored tiles, geometric patterns that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them. The air grew warmer as she approached the tree, heavy with a scent like summer storms and old books. A woman sat among the roots. No — she'd always been there. Aurora simply hadn't been able to perceive her until now. The realization came with a wave of dizziness, her mind rebelling against the retroactive rewrite of her own memory. Isolde Varga looked exactly as the stories described, and nothing like Aurora had imagined. Silver hair cascaded past her waist, but it wasn't simply silver — it held every shade the word could encompass, from bright chrome to tarnished pewter, shifting as she breathed. Her eyes, when she raised them, were the pale purple of twilight, of lavender fields, of bruises just beginning to heal. "You carry something that doesn't belong to you," the Seer said. Her voice chimed like bells, each word arriving a heartbeat before or after her lips moved. "And you seek something you cannot name." Aurora's hand moved to the pendant again. "I was told you might have answers." "Answers." Isolde smiled, and it was like watching the moon rise — gradual, inevitable, coldly beautiful. "Such small words humans use for such vast things. You want answers. You need revelations. You fear truths." She rose, unfolding from the roots with inhuman grace, and Aurora noticed she wore no shoes. Her feet touched the mosaic tiles without sound, without impression. "Which shall I offer? The choice shapes the cost." "I need to know what this is." Aurora lifted the pendant, let it catch the silver light. "Who gave it to me. Why." "Three questions. Three prices."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"Nyx materialized more [more]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.653
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.082
85.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"coldly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"coldly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"mosaic"
count2
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulsed"
2"throb"
3"weight"
4"crystal"
5"warmth"
6"pulse"
7"chill"
8"wavering"
9"comforting"
10"mosaic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1423
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1082
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Nyx10
Aurora14
Shade4
Grove3
Varga1
Seer1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Shade"
3"Grove"
4"Varga"
5"Seer"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.853
windowScore0.833
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere"
1"moss that seemed to glow faintly from within, each step leaving no impression, no mark of her passage"
2"seemed wider than before"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1423
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"learned that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.53
std22
cv0.897
sampleLengths
065
134
229
311
429
548
647
711
88
919
1035
1161
126
1310
146
152
1672
171
1816
191
2020
213
2222
2349
249
257
2617
276
2865
292
3010
3128
324
3332
342
3552
3657
3712
3819
394
4051
415
427
435
4467
4535
462
475
489
4956
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was composing"
1"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences120
ratio0.075
matches
0"In the three weeks since Nyx had attached themselves to her shadow — quite literally — she'd learned that their pauses carried weight."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in swaths of impossible color — blues that shifted to purples as she watched, yellows that brightened to golds and then dimmed to amber."
2"The standing stones she'd glimpsed from outside now ringed the space at irregular intervals — not stone at all, she realized as she approached the nearest one."
3"No source visible, no destination — it simply existed, burbling softly, the sound almost like laughter."
4"In the Grove's strange luminescence, she could almost see features — the suggestion of a nose, the hollow where eyes should be filled with that violet glow."
5"Each step produced a different note, and she realized with a start that she was composing something as she walked — an accidental melody that hung in the air behind her."
6"No — she'd always been there."
7"Silver hair cascaded past her waist, but it wasn't simply silver — it held every shade the word could encompass, from bright chrome to tarnished pewter, shifting as she breathed."
8"\"Answers.\" Isolde smiled, and it was like watching the moon rise — gradual, inevitable, coldly beautiful."
80.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1074
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"sharper underneath, metallic, like"
1"silver-clear over stones"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.048417132216014895
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.017690875232774673
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean11.86
std7.83
cv0.66
sampleLengths
014
19
221
321
422
512
614
715
811
923
106
115
1223
133
1417
153
1621
173
1820
195
206
218
2219
2318
243
2514
2628
2717
2816
296
303
317
326
332
346
3527
362
3714
3823
391
4013
413
421
4320
443
454
4612
476
487
4918
74.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners55
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Almost like words, if she"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences79
matches
0"She'd walked through Richmond Park"
1"She stepped forward."
2"They moved without wind, swaying"
3"She couldn't find the word"
4"She walked deeper into the"
5"She reached out to touch"
6"She pulled back."
7"Their form rippled, becoming less"
8"She moved on, circling the"
9"She didn't listen closely."
10"she said quietly"
11"She followed the stream's edge,"
12"They gestured toward the tree,"
13"She wouldn't have."
14"She gasped, stumbled, made it"
15"She turned toward the silver"
16"Her eyes, when she raised"
17"Her voice chimed like bells,"
18"She rose, unfolding from the"
19"Her feet touched the mosaic"
ratio0.253
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"The standing stones emerged from"
1"Aurora stopped at the tree"
2"She'd walked through Richmond Park"
3"Nyx's voice drifted from somewhere"
4"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
5"Aurora pressed her palm flat"
6"Nyx shifted, their form solidifying"
7"Aurora didn't like that pause."
8"Meanings within meanings."
9"The Shade had been human"
10"She stepped forward."
11"The grass beneath her feet"
12"Moss, she realized."
13"The archway of oaks opened"
14"Aurora stopped again, her mind"
15"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
16"They moved without wind, swaying"
17"The air smelled of honeysuckle"
18"She couldn't find the word"
19"She walked deeper into the"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now the ancient trunks seemed"
1"If they'd never penetrated the"
ratio0.025
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Now the ancient trunks seemed to lean inward, branches intertwining overhead to form a living archway that hadn't existed moments before."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in swaths of impossible color — blues that shifted to purples as she watched, yellows that brightened to golds and then dimmed t…"
2"A stream appeared from nowhere, its water running silver-clear over stones that glinted with colors she couldn't name."
3"She followed the stream's edge, noting how the moss gave way to small white pebbles that clicked musically under her boots."
4"Each step produced a different note, and she realized with a start that she was composing something as she walked — an accidental melody that hung in the air be…"
5"The silver leaves reflected light in all directions, illuminating even the spaces that should have been dark."
6"Nyx was barely visible through the silver light that suffused everything now, a dark smudge against the impossible colors of the Grove's outer ring."
7"White stones gave way to a mosaic of colored tiles, geometric patterns that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx materialized more, their humanoid silhouette taking clearer shape"
1"the Shade called, their voice somehow still a whisper despite the distance"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.245
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.041
81.4194%