| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Nyx materialized more [more]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.327 | | leniency | 0.653 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.082 | |
| 85.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1415 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "coldly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1415 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "mosaic" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "sent a chill down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1423 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1082 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Aurora | 14 | | Shade | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.853 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 1 | "moss that seemed to glow faintly from within, each step leaving no impression, no mark of her passage" | | 2 | "seemed wider than before" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1423 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 24.53 | | std | 22 | | cv | 0.897 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 52 | | 36 | 57 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 67 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 56 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was composing" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "In the three weeks since Nyx had attached themselves to her shadow — quite literally — she'd learned that their pauses carried weight." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in swaths of impossible color — blues that shifted to purples as she watched, yellows that brightened to golds and then dimmed to amber." | | 2 | "The standing stones she'd glimpsed from outside now ringed the space at irregular intervals — not stone at all, she realized as she approached the nearest one." | | 3 | "No source visible, no destination — it simply existed, burbling softly, the sound almost like laughter." | | 4 | "In the Grove's strange luminescence, she could almost see features — the suggestion of a nose, the hollow where eyes should be filled with that violet glow." | | 5 | "Each step produced a different note, and she realized with a start that she was composing something as she walked — an accidental melody that hung in the air behind her." | | 6 | "No — she'd always been there." | | 7 | "Silver hair cascaded past her waist, but it wasn't simply silver — it held every shade the word could encompass, from bright chrome to tarnished pewter, shifting as she breathed." | | 8 | "\"Answers.\" Isolde smiled, and it was like watching the moon rise — gradual, inevitable, coldly beautiful." |
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| 80.64% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1074 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sharper underneath, metallic, like" | | 1 | "silver-clear over stones" |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.048417132216014895 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017690875232774673 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 11.86 | | std | 7.83 | | cv | 0.66 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 74.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4583333333333333 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost like words, if she" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She stepped forward." | | 2 | "They moved without wind, swaying" | | 3 | "She couldn't find the word" | | 4 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 5 | "She reached out to touch" | | 6 | "She pulled back." | | 7 | "Their form rippled, becoming less" | | 8 | "She moved on, circling the" | | 9 | "She didn't listen closely." | | 10 | "she said quietly" | | 11 | "She followed the stream's edge," | | 12 | "They gestured toward the tree," | | 13 | "She wouldn't have." | | 14 | "She gasped, stumbled, made it" | | 15 | "She turned toward the silver" | | 16 | "Her eyes, when she raised" | | 17 | "Her voice chimed like bells," | | 18 | "She rose, unfolding from the" | | 19 | "Her feet touched the mosaic" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the tree" | | 2 | "She'd walked through Richmond Park" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice drifted from somewhere" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 5 | "Aurora pressed her palm flat" | | 6 | "Nyx shifted, their form solidifying" | | 7 | "Aurora didn't like that pause." | | 8 | "Meanings within meanings." | | 9 | "The Shade had been human" | | 10 | "She stepped forward." | | 11 | "The grass beneath her feet" | | 12 | "Moss, she realized." | | 13 | "The archway of oaks opened" | | 14 | "Aurora stopped again, her mind" | | 15 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 16 | "They moved without wind, swaying" | | 17 | "The air smelled of honeysuckle" | | 18 | "She couldn't find the word" | | 19 | "She walked deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the ancient trunks seemed" | | 1 | "If they'd never penetrated the" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the ancient trunks seemed to lean inward, branches intertwining overhead to form a living archway that hadn't existed moments before." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in swaths of impossible color — blues that shifted to purples as she watched, yellows that brightened to golds and then dimmed t…" | | 2 | "A stream appeared from nowhere, its water running silver-clear over stones that glinted with colors she couldn't name." | | 3 | "She followed the stream's edge, noting how the moss gave way to small white pebbles that clicked musically under her boots." | | 4 | "Each step produced a different note, and she realized with a start that she was composing something as she walked — an accidental melody that hung in the air be…" | | 5 | "The silver leaves reflected light in all directions, illuminating even the spaces that should have been dark." | | 6 | "Nyx was barely visible through the silver light that suffused everything now, a dark smudge against the impossible colors of the Grove's outer ring." | | 7 | "White stones gave way to a mosaic of colored tiles, geometric patterns that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx materialized more, their humanoid silhouette taking clearer shape" | | 1 | "the Shade called, their voice somehow still a whisper despite the distance" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.122 | | leniency | 0.245 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.041 | |