Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KKRENM6G7QQ3F342XBTE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.001198
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was a physical thing. It tasted of cold stone, rust, and something else, something metallic and coppery that Detective Harlow Quinn recognized as old blood. Her footsteps echoed off the curved tiled walls, the worn leather of her boots scuffing against decades of grime. She adjusted the strap of the duty satchel over her shoulder, her movements sharp with military precision. Her left wrist, where her worn leather watch sat, felt cold. The scene was cordoned off just past the defaced ticket barriers. A single floodlight on a tripod cast a harsh, white circle on the cracked platform, turning everything outside its reach into impenetrable shadow. In the centre of the light lay a body, covered by a standard-issue plastic sheet. A young PC, looking pale and out of his depth, stood guard. But it wasn’t the PC who drew Quinn’s attention. It was the woman kneeling beside the sheet, her back to Quinn. A worn leather satchel sat open on the ground beside her, spilling books and folders. Curly red hair, barely contained, caught the edge of the light. She was carefully lifting a corner of the plastic with a gloved hand. “Kowalski.” The woman flinched, tucking a stray curl behind her left ear. Eva Kowalski looked up, her round glasses reflecting the floodlight, turning her eyes into white discs for a moment before they resolved into worried green. “Detective Quinn. They called you in.” “They called a detective. I drew the short straw. What are you doing here? This isn’t the British Museum’s reading room.” Quinn stepped into the circle of light. Her own shadow stretched long and sharp across the tiles. “And why is a research assistant from Antiquities the first one a scene officer calls for a suspicious death in a disused station?” Eva stood, brushing dust from her trousers. “Because the scene officer is PC Davies. He went to school with my cousin. He knows what I study. And he took one look at… this… and thought it was in my wheelhouse.” “Your wheelhouse.” Quinn’s voice was flat. She moved past Eva and knelt by the body. She pulled the sheet back. The victim was a man, maybe late twenties. Dressed in dark, practical clothing. No obvious signs of trauma. No blood pooling, no visible wounds. His face was relaxed, almost peaceful, which was wrong. Death in a place like this was never peaceful. His eyes were open, staring at the soot-stained ceiling arching overhead. “Cause of death?” Quinn asked, her eyes scanning the body, the immediate area. “Unknown. No visible injury. Davies said they found him like this two hours ago. Called it in as a possible overdose or exposure.” Eva’s voice was quiet, clinical. “But look at his hands.” Quinn did. The man’s palms were upturned, resting on his thighs. They were clean. Too clean. The lines of his palms were darkened, as if stained with ink or soot, but in intricate, swirling patterns that didn’t look accidental. “What is that?” “Sigils. Protective wards, mostly. The kind you’d see in late medieval grimoires.” Eva crouched down beside her, opening her satchel. She pulled out a small digital camera. “I took some pictures before you arrived. For my archives.” “You contaminated a crime scene.” “I wore gloves. And you’d have missed this.” Eva zoomed in on one of the camera’s images and handed it to Quinn. The screen showed a close-up of the man’s right palm. The dark lines formed a complex geometric shape, a series of interlocking circles and angular runes. “It’s not tattooed. It’s a residue. It feels chalky, like charcoal mixed with something organic.” Quinn handed the camera back. Her own sharp jaw was tight. “A junkie with a flair for the dramatic. Dabbled in something he shouldn’t have, it went wrong, he died. Happens every week.” “Maybe.” Eva didn’t sound convinced. She pointed to the ground around the body. “But where’s his kit? No backpack, no water bottle, no lighter, no spoons or foil. If he was down here to shoot up or huff something, he’d have brought supplies. And look at the floor.” Quinn shifted her gaze. The platform tiles around the body were free of debris. No discarded needles, no empty packets, no trash. But as she looked closer, leaning in, she saw it. A fine, almost imperceptible layer of silvery dust formed a near-perfect circle around the body, about six feet in diameter. It was so faint it was only visible where the light hit it at a certain angle. “Davies didn’t see that,” Eva said. “He was too busy trying not to be sick. It’s not plaster dust. It’s too fine. It’s metallic.” Quinn dipped a finger into her own pocket, pulled out a small evidence bag, and used a tweezers from her kit to collect a pinch of the dust. It shimmered under the light. “Ground quartz? Mica?” “Ground moonstone, maybe. Or something more exotic. Used in a lot of boundary rituals.” Eva stood and walked to the edge of the light circle, peering into the darkness of the tunnel mouth. “This station hasn’t been used in forty years. But it’s not empty. There are signs of recent traffic. Not homeless. Something else.” Quinn rose, joining her. She clicked on her heavy police-issue torch. The beam cut through the black, illuminating the tunnel. The walls were covered in graffiti, but not the usual tags. These were more of the intricate symbols, painted in what looked like blacklight-reactive paint. Further in, she could make out the shapes of makeshift stalls—collapsed tables, empty crates stacked with care. “A squat. An art collective. Kids.” “Kids who use alchemical symbols and ritual circles?” Eva’s voice held a thread of excitement she was trying to suppress. “This is a known point of convergence. Ley lines. There are maps in the Museum’s restricted collection that mark this exact location. It’s a weak spot.” “A weak spot.” “Between what is and what could be. Between the mundane and the… other.” Eva turned to face her, her freckled complexion pale in the unnatural light. “Three years ago, there was an incident report. Unexplained electrical phenomena down here. Animals found disoriented. A security guard’s report that was filed and forgotten. He claimed he saw a market. Stalls selling glowing stones and liquid shadows. They diagnosed him with carbon monoxide poisoning and pensioned him off.” Quinn went very still. The mention of three years ago was a needle pressed to a old, deep bruise. DS Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his confusion, his fear in those last days, the reports she’d buried because they made no sense. “Superstitious nonsense.” “Is it?” Eva gestured back to the body. “Then explain him. No cause of death. Ritual markings. A boundary circle. Found in a location documented as a supernatural convergence point. The evidence doesn’t add up to an overdose, Detective. It adds up to something else entirely.” Quinn walked back to the body. She looked at it not as a detective looking for a murderer, but as a puzzle. The peace on the man’s face wasn’t the blankness of an overdose. It was the slackness of sudden, total absence. As if something had been pulled out of him, cleanly and completely. She looked at his hands again, at the sigils. They weren’t just on his palms. Peeling back the cuff of his jacket, she saw the lines continued up his wrists, fading as they went. “These aren’t for protection,” Quinn said, her voice low. “They’re a map. Or an invitation.” Eva hurried over. “What do you mean?” “You said they were protective wards. But look at the direction of the lines on the right palm.” Quinn pointed with her tweezers. “They spiral inward, toward the centre. A protective ward radiates outward, to deflect. This draws in. And on the left…” She gently turned the cold wrist. The pattern there was different, a series of sharp, angular breaks in the spiral. “This one is broken. Interrupted. Something went wrong with the sequence.” “He was trying to channel something. Or open something.” Eva’s breath fogged in the cold air. “And he didn’t finish the circuit. The energy had nowhere to go but back into him.” Quinn stared at the man’s serene face. “It didn’t go back into him. It took him with it. Whatever he was trying to summon or open… it took the whole package. That’s why there’s no physical cause. He’s not here. Not really. He’s just the… the shell it left behind.” The two women looked at each other across the body. The hum of the floodlight was the only sound. PC Davies shifted his feet nervously at the edge of the darkness. “We need to find his kit,” Quinn said, breaking the silence. Her tone was all business again, but it was tighter, focused on a new and unsettling target. “If he was doing a ritual, he’d have tools. A focus. Something to control the flow. It’s not here, which means either someone took it, or…” “Or it was consumed in the process,” Eva finished. She bit her lip. “There are markets, Detective. Hidden ones. For people who traffic in this kind of thing. If he was a practitioner, even an amateur, he’d have gotten his supplies somewhere.” Quinn’s eyes scanned the tunnel again, the ghost stalls. A market. Liquid shadows and glowing stones. The security guard’s dismissed report. Morris’s frantic, nonsensical notes in the margins of his case file. “This ‘weak spot’. Would it be… active? Could you find it if you didn’t know where to look?” Eva reached into her satchel. Her fingers brushed against several books before closing around a small, cool metal object. She hesitated, then drew it out. It was a small brass compass, its casing mottled with a greenish-blue patina. The face was etched with tiny, intricate sigils. “Not without a guide. But with the right tool… maybe. This points towards rifts. Supernatural thin places.” Quinn took the compass. It was heavier than it looked. The needle, instead of pointing north, quivered and spun in a slow, restless circle. “Where did you get this?” “The same place he probably got his supplies.” Eva tucked her hair back again, a nervous flutter. “A place that moves. You need a token to find it. A bone token.” The compass needle suddenly steadied, pointing past Quinn, deep into the dark tunnel. It gave a single, sharp jerk. Quinn looked from the compass to the empty, serene face of the dead man on the platform, then back to the waiting darkness. The evidence she had was impossible. The evidence she was missing was somewhere in that black. And for the first time since she’d stood over her partner’s body three years ago, the pieces of a nightmare were beginning to align into a picture she could actually see.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured back [back]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.04
80.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1822
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"nervously"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"completely"
3"gently"
4"really"
5"nervously"
6"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1822
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count3
6
word"complex"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"standard"
3"resolved"
4"scanning"
5"intricate"
6"complex"
7"perfect"
8"shimmered"
9"silence"
10"scanned"
11"etched"
12"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1813
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1116
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Kowalski1
Eva17
Morris2
Davies1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
6"Davies"
places(empty)
globalScore0.514
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like blacklight-reactive paint"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.552
wordCount1813
matches
0"not as a detective looking for a murderer, but as a puzzle"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean40.29
std22.64
cv0.562
sampleLengths
080
170
251
31
442
561
640
720
853
913
1033
1139
123
1337
145
1563
1633
1748
1869
1924
2036
2155
2262
236
2446
253
2675
2744
2846
2988
3015
317
3274
3332
3450
3531
3654
3742
3832
3918
4063
4129
4231
4319
4470
82.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences109
matches
0"was cordoned"
1"was relaxed"
2"were upturned"
3"were darkened"
4"were covered"
5"been pulled"
6"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was trying"
1"were beginning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences140
ratio0.014
matches
0"Further in, she could make out the shapes of makeshift stalls—collapsed tables, empty crates stacked with care."
1"DS Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his confusion, his fear in those last days, the reports she’d buried because they made no sense."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1125
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.032
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009777777777777778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean12.95
std8.91
cv0.688
sampleLengths
012
121
219
317
411
511
623
715
812
99
1012
1115
1211
1313
141
1511
1625
176
1828
1910
2023
217
2233
236
249
255
268
275
285
296
309
319
3211
3313
3428
355
362
379
383
392
4023
413
4220
437
4410
455
4622
4710
4816
4915
56.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners52
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Further in, she could make"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences104
matches
0"It tasted of cold stone,"
1"Her footsteps echoed off the"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"Her left wrist, where her"
4"It was the woman kneeling"
5"She was carefully lifting a"
6"Her own shadow stretched long"
7"She moved past Eva and"
8"She pulled the sheet back."
9"His face was relaxed, almost"
10"His eyes were open, staring"
11"They were clean."
12"She pulled out a small"
13"Her own sharp jaw was"
14"She pointed to the ground"
15"It was so faint it"
16"It shimmered under the light."
17"She clicked on her heavy"
18"She looked at it not"
19"It was the slackness of"
ratio0.288
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences104
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"It tasted of cold stone,"
2"Her footsteps echoed off the"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"Her left wrist, where her"
5"The scene was cordoned off"
6"A single floodlight on a"
7"A young PC, looking pale"
8"It was the woman kneeling"
9"A worn leather satchel sat"
10"She was carefully lifting a"
11"The woman flinched, tucking a"
12"Eva Kowalski looked up, her"
13"Quinn stepped into the circle"
14"Her own shadow stretched long"
15"Eva stood, brushing dust from"
16"Quinn’s voice was flat"
17"She moved past Eva and"
18"She pulled the sheet back."
19"The victim was a man,"
ratio0.875
48.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"As if something had been"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The lines of his palms were darkened, as if stained with ink or soot, but in intricate, swirling patterns that didn’t look accidental."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn asked, her eyes scanning the body, the immediate area"
1"Quinn said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.5274%