Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KRP64YGNR50BHJFYQJ10

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Duration:
32.3s
Cost:
$0.006546
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clacked open one by one. Three of them. Eva's paranoid security system doing its job until Aurora's fingers worked their magic. The door swung inward, revealing not the empty hallway she expected. "Rory." His voice. Lower now than when they'd last spoken, but unmistakable. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor outside Eva's flat, leaning against the wall with his ivory-handled cane. The dim hallway light caught the unnatural colours of his eyes—one amber, one black. "Lucien." Rory's hand tightened on the doorknob. "What are you doing here?" "Is that any way to greet an old friend?" He pushed off the wall, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the grungy surroundings of Brick Lane. "We were never friends." She kept the door half-closed, her body blocking the entrance. A tabby cat wound around her ankles, meowing for attention. Lucien's gaze dropped to Ptolemy. "I see you've acquired company." "He's Eva's." Rory didn't invite him in, but neither did she shut the door. "You shouldn't be here. Not after everything." "After everything?" A humourless laugh escaped him. "Is that what we're calling it?" "I'm calling it you lying to me." The words came out sharper than intended. "Using me for information and then disappearing without a word." The amber of his eyes seemed to glow. "I protected you." "By ghosting me? By leaving me to deal with the fallout of your little supernatural underworld politics alone?" Lucien stepped closer, and she fought the instinct to retreat. His presence always had that effect on her—simultaneously drawing her in and setting her on edge. "I heard you had some trouble with Evan." His voice was softer now. "That he wouldn't let go." Rory's left hand instinctively covered the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "That was personal. Nothing to do with you or your world." "Everything's connected, Rory. You know that." He reached out as if to touch her arm, then thought better of it. "Which is why I'm here now." She finally stepped back, opening the door wider in reluctant invitation. "You have five minutes. Eva will be back soon." Lucien entered the cramped flat, his eyes scanning the piles of books, scrolls, and research notes covering every surface. "Still playing detective, I see." "Delivery person by day, researcher by night." She closed the door, the deadbolts automatically locking back into place with a series of heavy thuds. "Unlike some people, I don't get to wear fancy suits and pretend to be respectable." "Is that what you think I do?" He turned to face her, and for the first time, she noticed the tension in his jaw, the almost imperceptible tremor in his hand as he adjusted his grip on the cane. "I think you're a half-demon information broker who plays both sides against the middle." Rory crossed her arms. "And I think you're in trouble, or you wouldn't be here." Lucien's lips curved into a genuine smile. "Still observant." "It's why you came to me in the first place, remember?" The memory of their first meeting flickered between them—Rory stumbling into a supernatural dispute while making a delivery for the Golden Empress, Lucien impressed by her quick thinking despite being completely out of her depth. "How could I forget?" He moved closer, the scent of sandalwood and something otherworldly surrounding him. "You walked into a den of vampires with nothing but a bag of takeout and managed to negotiate your way out." "And you followed me home like a stray." Despite herself, Rory felt a smile tugging at her lips. "I was concerned for your safety." His eyes held hers. "And curious. Humans rarely react the way you did." "Most humans don't know vampires exist." "Exactly my point." Lucien reached into his suit jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. "Which brings me to why I'm here." Rory took the paper, unfolding it to reveal a symbol she recognized immediately. "This is the same mark from the Camden murders." "The one you've been researching for Eva." He nodded. "It's not from this realm." "It's demon script." Rory traced the intricate lines with her finger. "From Avaros, if I'm not mistaken." Lucien's expression darkened. "Your father's side. Not mine." The implication hung between them. Someone from Lucien's demonic father's homeland was involved in the murders, and he'd come to Rory for help. "Why me?" she asked. "After everything, why come to me?" "Because you're the only person I trust." His voice was barely above a whisper. "And because whatever this is, it's targeting half-breeds like me." Rory's heart pounded against her ribs. The history between them—the attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid—crashed together in that moment. She could still feel the ghost of his lips on hers, the weight of his betrayal when she'd discovered he'd been using her connections to gather intelligence on his enemies. "And what exactly do you need from me, Lucien?" He stepped closer, invading her personal space. "Your brain. Your connections. Your ability to see things others miss." His eyes searched hers. "Your protection." "Protection?" A bitter laugh escaped her. "The great Lucien Moreau needs protection from a human?" "Not from you." His gaze flickered to the window overlooking Brick Lane. "From them. From whatever's coming." Rory stared at him, at the vulnerability in his mismatched eyes that she'd never seen before. The last time they'd been this close, he'd been telling her he loved her mere hours before he'd disappeared. "How do I know this isn't another manipulation?" she asked quietly. "Another game?" Lucien reached out, his fingers gently brushing her wrist, right over the scar. "Because this time, Rory, I have everything to lose." The door rattled as keys jingled in the lock from the outside. "Eva's back early," Rory said, pulling away from him. "Then we'll continue this conversation elsewhere." Lucien moved toward the window. "Meet me at Silas's bar in an hour." "In public?" "Exactly." He gave her a rare, genuine smile. "No chance of me disappearing this time." Rory watched as he expertly opened the window and slipped out onto the fire escape, moving with a grace that belied the cane he carried. By the time Eva unlocked the door and stepped into the flat, Ptolemy was meowing at the empty windowsill and Rory's heart was pounding with a mixture of fear and anticipation she hadn't felt in months. "Everything alright?" Eva asked, dropping her bag onto a chair. "You look like you've seen a ghost." "Worse," Rory said, her mind racing. "I think I've just invited the devil back into my life."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.03
86.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"implication"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"anticipation"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"tension"
2"flickered"
3"otherworldly"
4"traced"
5"intricate"
6"implication"
7"whisper"
8"weight"
9"pounding"
10"anticipation"
11"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
37.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount667
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Moreau1
Eva4
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy2
Rory15
Lucien11
Golden1
Empress1
Despite1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Despite"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Ptolemy"
globalScore0.376
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"had that effect"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean21.47
std12.1
cv0.564
sampleLengths
034
11
242
312
426
524
610
721
813
924
1011
1118
1226
1318
1423
1526
1620
1724
1839
1939
2029
219
2246
2337
2418
2519
266
2724
2822
2914
3017
318
3223
3310
3424
3551
369
3724
3815
3917
4035
4113
4222
4312
449
4519
462
4715
4861
4917
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"was involved"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was meowing was pounding"
25.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences97
ratio0.041
matches
0"The dim hallway light caught the unnatural colours of his eyes—one amber, one black."
1"His presence always had that effect on her—simultaneously drawing her in and setting her on edge."
2"\"It's why you came to me in the first place, remember?\" The memory of their first meeting flickered between them—Rory stumbling into a supernatural dispute while making a delivery for the Golden Empress, Lucien impressed by her quick thinking despite being completely out of her depth."
3"The history between them—the attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid—crashed together in that moment."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount675
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.028148148148148148
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.016296296296296295
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.29
std7.75
cv0.686
sampleLengths
07
13
213
311
41
52
69
717
814
97
105
1126
1214
1310
145
155
1614
177
187
196
2014
2110
228
233
2418
2510
2616
2713
285
2912
3011
3120
326
3311
349
3519
365
3724
3815
3939
4018
4111
427
432
4446
4516
4621
4718
4810
499
71.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.44329896907216493
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences57
matches
0"He pushed off the wall,"
1"She kept the door half-closed,"
2"His presence always had that"
3"His voice was softer now"
4"He reached out as if"
5"She finally stepped back, opening"
6"She closed the door, the"
7"He turned to face her,"
8"He moved closer, the scent"
9"His eyes held hers"
10"His voice was barely above"
11"She could still feel the"
12"He stepped closer, invading her"
13"His eyes searched hers"
14"His gaze flickered to the"
15"she asked quietly"
16"He gave her a rare,"
ratio0.298
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"The deadbolts clacked open one"
1"Eva's paranoid security system doing"
2"The door swung inward, revealing"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"The dim hallway light caught"
5"Rory's hand tightened on the"
6"He pushed off the wall,"
7"She kept the door half-closed,"
8"A tabby cat wound around"
9"Lucien's gaze dropped to Ptolemy."
10"Rory didn't invite him in,"
11"A humourless laugh escaped him"
12"The words came out sharper"
13"The amber of his eyes"
14"Lucien stepped closer, and she"
15"His presence always had that"
16"His voice was softer now"
17"Rory's left hand instinctively covered"
18"He reached out as if"
19"She finally stepped back, opening"
ratio0.93
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"By the time Eva unlocked"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She kept, her body blocking the entrance"
1"He moved, the scent of sandalwood and something otherworldly surrounding him"
2"Rory said, her mind racing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.152
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.3200%