Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KRTZ9RM5QWR000CB4R1J

Run Details

Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.002024
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open just as Rory raised her fist to knock again. The door swung inward, revealing Lucien Moreau in his usual tailored charcoal suit, the amber and black of his mismatched eyes catching the dim hallway light. His platinum hair was slightly disheveled, as if he’d been running fingers through it. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed where it rested against the doorframe. Rory’s breath caught. Three months since she’d last seen him. Three months since the argument in the rain outside Silas’ bar, when he’d called her reckless and she’d called him a control freak. The small crescent scar on her wrist itched. “You’re supposed to be in Marseille.” Her voice came out sharper than intended. Lucien’s mouth twitched. “And you’re supposed to ring before appearing at people’s doors at—” He checked his watch. “—half eleven on a Tuesday night.” Ptolemy the tabby wound between Lucien’s legs, purring loudly. The smell of old paper and bergamot tea drifted from the flat. Rory shifted her weight, the strap of her delivery bag digging into her shoulder. “Eva gave me a key. Said I could use the flat while she’s in Edinburgh.” “Ah.” Lucien’s fingers tightened on the cane. “She failed to mention that particular arrangement.” Silence stretched between them, thick with everything unsaid. The hallway light flickered. Downstairs, the curry house’s closing-time clatter drifted up through the floorboards. Rory cleared her throat. “So are you going to let me in, or do I have to sleep in the hallway?” Lucien stepped aside with exaggerated courtesy. “By all means.” The flat looked the same as always—books stacked haphazardly on every surface, Eva’s research notes pinned to the walls with colored tabs. A half-drunk cup of tea sat cooling on the coffee table beside Lucien’s gloves. Rory dropped her bag by the door, the Chinese takeaway containers inside rattling. “Working late?” She nodded at the scattered papers. “Trying to decipher Eva’s organizational system.” Lucien nudged a stack of scrolls with his cane. “It appears to be based on some arcane logic known only to her.” Rory snorted. “Try alphabetical by first footnote. That’s her go-to.” She hesitated, then added, “You look tired.” The shadows under his eyes were more pronounced than she remembered. Lucien raised an eyebrow. “And you look like you’ve been wrestling with your bicycle again.” Her delivery uniform was splattered with mud. Rory shrugged. “London streets.” Another silence. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and began kneading Lucien’s discarded jacket. “You never answered my question,” Rory said finally. “Why aren’t you in Marseille?” Lucien leaned against the bookshelf. “Business concluded early.” “Bullshit.” His lips quirked. “Such language.” “You hate cutting trips short. Something spooked you.” Rory crossed her arms. “Was it the Avaros thing? Because if demons are—” “It wasn’t demons.” Lucien’s voice dropped. He studied her for a long moment, then sighed. “I heard about Evan being released.” The air left Rory’s lungs. She turned abruptly, pretending to examine one of Eva’s maps. “That’s not your problem.” “Isn’t it?” The floorboards creaked as Lucien moved closer. Rory kept her eyes fixed on the map’s faded ink. His reflection appeared beside hers in the darkened window—tall, immaculate, infuriatingly composed. “I can handle Evan,” she said. “I don’t doubt that.” His breath stirred the hair at her temple. “But you shouldn’t have to.” Rory spun to face him. “What’s that supposed to—” Lucien caught her wrist, his thumb brushing the crescent scar. The contact sent a jolt through her. His skin was warmer than a human’s, the demon blood in him burning just beneath the surface. “You left,” he said quietly. “Three months ago. No word. No forwarding address.” Rory swallowed. “You told me to go.” “I told you to be careful.” His grip tightened fractionally. “Not to disappear.” The scent of his cologne—spice and something darker—wrapped around her. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. Every argument they’d ever had, every charged glance, every almost-kiss rushed back. “I’m here now,” she whispered. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth. “So you are.” Ptolemy yowled, knocking over a stack of books. The spell broke. Lucien released her wrist, stepping back to adjust his cuffs with studied nonchalance. Rory exhaled shakily. “Right. Well. I should—” She gestured vaguely toward the bedroom. “Of course.” Lucien retrieved his cane from where it leaned against the sofa. “I’ll take the couch.” “You don’t have to—” “I insist.” Another standoff. Rory gritted her teeth. “Fine. Suit yourself.” She grabbed her bag and stalked toward the bedroom, Ptolemy trotting after her. At the threshold, she hesitated. “Lucien?” He looked up from arranging the couch cushions. “Thanks,” she said. “For worrying.” Something unreadable flickered in his heterochromatic eyes. “Goodnight, Rory.” The bedroom door clicked shut behind her. Lucien stood motionless for a long moment, then sighed and loosened his tie. The faint sound of Rory moving about in the next room followed him into the dark.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:55:31.048Z" 2/19/2026, 3:55:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She hesitated then [then]"
1"Rory said finally [finally]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"His grip tightened fractionally [fractionally]"
4"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.217
93.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount828
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount828
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"eyebrow"
4"pulse"
5"charged"
6"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords820
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
2.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount575
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Lucien17
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Silence1
Eva2
Chinese1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Silence"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.022
windowScore0.167
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside hers in the darkened window—tall, immaculate, infuriatingly composed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount820
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean17.45
std13.82
cv0.792
sampleLengths
067
141
213
324
450
514
623
721
89
949
108
1128
1217
1326
1411
1513
1613
178
181
195
2021
2121
2219
232
2429
256
2617
279
2834
2913
307
3113
3228
335
349
3524
3613
3717
384
392
409
4118
421
438
445
459
4636
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was splattered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences103
ratio0.029
matches
0"The flat looked the same as always—books stacked haphazardly on every surface, Eva’s research notes pinned to the walls with colored tabs."
1"His reflection appeared beside hers in the darkened window—tall, immaculate, infuriatingly composed."
2"The scent of his cologne—spice and something darker—wrapped around her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount228
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.017543859649122806
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.008771929824561403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean7.96
std5.09
cv0.639
sampleLengths
014
126
214
313
43
57
623
78
813
93
1015
116
129
1312
1414
1515
167
177
188
194
2011
214
2217
236
243
2522
2614
2713
288
2915
3013
312
3215
3311
344
3511
367
372
382
392
4011
418
425
435
443
451
463
472
4812
499
69.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4368932038834951
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences66
matches
0"His platinum hair was slightly"
1"Her voice came out sharper"
2"He checked his watch"
3"She nodded at the scattered"
4"She hesitated, then added"
5"Her delivery uniform was splattered"
6"His lips quirked."
7"He studied her for a"
8"She turned abruptly, pretending to"
9"His reflection appeared beside hers"
10"His breath stirred the hair"
11"His skin was warmer than"
12"he said quietly"
13"His grip tightened fractionally"
14"She gestured vaguely toward the"
15"She grabbed her bag and"
16"He looked up from arranging"
ratio0.258
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences66
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open"
1"The door swung inward, revealing"
2"His platinum hair was slightly"
3"The ivory handle of his"
4"Rory’s breath caught."
5"The small crescent scar on"
6"Her voice came out sharper"
7"Lucien’s mouth twitched."
8"He checked his watch"
9"Ptolemy the tabby wound between"
10"The smell of old paper"
11"Rory shifted her weight, the"
12"Lucien’s fingers tightened on the"
13"Silence stretched between them, thick"
14"The hallway light flickered."
15"Downstairs, the curry house’s closing-time"
16"Rory cleared her throat."
17"Lucien stepped aside with exaggerated"
18"The flat looked the same"
19"A half-drunk cup of tea"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His platinum hair was slightly disheveled, as if he’d been running fingers through it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.217
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.043
78.8994%