| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She hesitated then [then]" | | 1 | "Rory said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "His grip tightened fractionally [fractionally]" | | 4 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.37 | | leniency | 0.739 | | rawRatio | 0.294 | | effectiveRatio | 0.217 | |
| 93.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 828 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 828 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 820 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 575 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Lucien | 17 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Silence | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Chinese | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.022 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beside hers in the darkened window—tall, immaculate, infuriatingly composed" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 820 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 17.45 | | std | 13.82 | | cv | 0.792 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.64% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "The flat looked the same as always—books stacked haphazardly on every surface, Eva’s research notes pinned to the walls with colored tabs." | | 1 | "His reflection appeared beside hers in the darkened window—tall, immaculate, infuriatingly composed." | | 2 | "The scent of his cologne—spice and something darker—wrapped around her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 228 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.017543859649122806 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008771929824561403 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 7.96 | | std | 5.09 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 69.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4368932038834951 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair was slightly" | | 1 | "Her voice came out sharper" | | 2 | "He checked his watch" | | 3 | "She nodded at the scattered" | | 4 | "She hesitated, then added" | | 5 | "Her delivery uniform was splattered" | | 6 | "His lips quirked." | | 7 | "He studied her for a" | | 8 | "She turned abruptly, pretending to" | | 9 | "His reflection appeared beside hers" | | 10 | "His breath stirred the hair" | | 11 | "His skin was warmer than" | | 12 | "he said quietly" | | 13 | "His grip tightened fractionally" | | 14 | "She gestured vaguely toward the" | | 15 | "She grabbed her bag and" | | 16 | "He looked up from arranging" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked open" | | 1 | "The door swung inward, revealing" | | 2 | "His platinum hair was slightly" | | 3 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 4 | "Rory’s breath caught." | | 5 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 6 | "Her voice came out sharper" | | 7 | "Lucien’s mouth twitched." | | 8 | "He checked his watch" | | 9 | "Ptolemy the tabby wound between" | | 10 | "The smell of old paper" | | 11 | "Rory shifted her weight, the" | | 12 | "Lucien’s fingers tightened on the" | | 13 | "Silence stretched between them, thick" | | 14 | "The hallway light flickered." | | 15 | "Downstairs, the curry house’s closing-time" | | 16 | "Rory cleared her throat." | | 17 | "Lucien stepped aside with exaggerated" | | 18 | "The flat looked the same" | | 19 | "A half-drunk cup of tea" |
| | ratio | 0.955 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair was slightly disheveled, as if he’d been running fingers through it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.109 | | leniency | 0.217 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |