Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0KS6R5BQ4NB2R1AGW0VFP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.016998
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the crime scene tape, her worn leather watch catching against the metal staple. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden breathed damp air up from the tunnels, carrying the iron scent of old blood and something else—ozone, perhaps, or the burnt-sugar sweetness of spent lightning. "Down here, Detective." A uniformed constable gestured toward the platform edge, his torch beam trembling across graffiti-covered tiles that had not seen maintenance since the station closed fifteen years prior. Quinn moved with military precision, her boots crunching on debris that should not exist in a sealed facility. Fresh scuff marks scored the concrete, overlapping patterns that suggested heavy foot traffic within the last forty-eight hours. The marks formed irregular lanes, too organized for random urban exploration, too deliberate for vagrancy. The body lay crumpled against the far wall, limbs arranged at angles that made her stomach clench. Male, mid-thirties, wearing a suit of exceptional cut. But it was the positioning that arrested her attention—the corpse sat upright, legs crossed in the lotus position, hands folded neatly in his lap as if awaiting a train that would never arrive. No lividity in the lower extremities. No pooling of blood beneath the buttocks. "Natural causes." The declaration came from behind her, rough with sleep deprivation. Quinn turned. Detective Sergeant Patel crouched beside the victim, his gloved fingers hovering over the man's carotid artery. "No ligature marks, no signs of external trauma. Heart attack, most likely. The barometric pressure down here plays hell with weakened cardiac tissue." "The service entrance was welded shut from the outside." Quinn swept her torch across the rusted door frame. "Fresh cuts on the metalwork. Someone sealed this chamber within the last week." Patel shrugged, his attention fixed on his notepad. "Urban explorers acquire impressive equipment these days. Blowtorches for dares. This poor bastard probably descended for a photograph, chest seized up, couldn't locate the exit in the dark." Quinn stepped closer, her sharp jaw set. The victim's eyes stared past her shoulder, fixed on some middle distance with an expression of resigned horror rather than pain. She followed that gaze, letting her torch play across the darkness. Empty tracks. Disturbed dust. And near the tunnel mouth, a glint of brass that caught the light like a cat's eye. She crossed the platform in three strides, ignoring Patel's protest. The object nestled between the rails—a small compass, its casing green with verdigris, face etched with protective sigils she did not recognize. The needle spun with lazy indifference to magnetic north, pointing instead toward the tunnel's absolute blackness. "What the hell is that?" Patel had followed, his breath hitching in the stale air. Quinn did not answer. She crouched, studying the ground around the compass. Scorch marks circularized the metal, as if the object had generated heat intense enough to bleach the limestone. But her hand hovered two inches above and felt only profound cold, a chill that bit at her knuckles. "CSI needs to bag that." Patel's radio crackled. "Metallic objects at underground scenes require Protocol 4-B." "This is not evidence." Quinn pulled a pen from her pocket and prodded the compass face. The needle snapped toward her instrument, then spun back toward the tunnel with frantic insistence. "It is equipment. Professional grade." "Professional what? Orienteering?" Patel laughed, the sound brittle against the tiles. "Detective, I understand you see patterns everywhere since Morris, but this is straightforward. Wealthy idiot explores restricted space, dies of misadventure. We file the paperwork, notify the family, return to daylight." Quinn's fingers brushed her watch strap, a habit developed three years ago when the call had come regarding DS Morris. Unexplained circumstances. Cardiac arrest in an empty warehouse. But Morris had been thirty-two, ran marathons, and suffered claustrophobia. He would never have entered that warehouse of his own volition. She studied the victim again. The shoes were wrong—handmade Italian leather, immaculate except for the soles. No tread wear from concrete dust or iron stairs. No abrasions consistent with scrambling through welded doors. He had not walked here. "Check his pockets." Quinn kept her eyes on the compass needle, which now trembled with geological urgency. Patel sighed but complied. "Wallet. Phone—dead battery. House keys. And..." He held up a small ivory disk between thumb and forefinger. "Some kind of token? Gambling chip?" Quinn took it. The bone was warm, carved with spirals that matched the compass sigils in geometric precision. A memory surfaced—Morris's last case file, the one she had confiscated from Evidence after the review board closed the inquiry. Photographs of similar tokens found in the pockets of three separate overdose victims across Camden, all within four blocks of this GPS coordinate. "The tunnel." Quinn rose, her knees popping in the silence. "It is not abandoned." "Transport for London maps confirm—" "Above ground." Quinn pointed to the compass, its needle now vibrating against the glass. "Below operates on different cartography. This man did not die here, DS Patel. He was delivered here. Look at his cuffs." Patel leaned in. The shirt cuffs bore dark smudges, ink-black and iridescent under the torchlight. Not blood. Something older, alchemical. "Residue," Quinn continued, her voice dropping to a murmur that barely carried past her teeth. "From handling restricted materials. The suit is costuming. He wore gloves for his work, removed them to access this token. Observe the calluses. Index fingers, both hands. Someone who counts currency, or turns manuscript pages." "Or deals cards," Patel offered, his skepticism wavering. "Or authenticates artifacts." Quinn moved to the platform edge, peering into the tunnel. The darkness possessed texture, a velvet solidity that defied physics. Twenty meters in, the blackness should have dissolved into reflected grays. Instead, it hung absolute, deliberate, consuming the torch beam without returning scatter. The compass had pointed there. Not toward magnetic north. Not toward any coordinate on the Ordnance Survey. "The maps are wrong." Quinn retrieved her phone, scrolling to satellite imagery of Camden. She overlaid the Tube lines, then toggled to historical surveys from 1890. Modern diagrams showed this line terminating in a service dead end. The Victorians had continued boring east, then abandoned the project at the precise point where current maps displayed a shopping complex. Three murders in three years. Morris had connected them before he died. She remembered his voice on their final call—excited, frightened, speaking of markets that moved with the lunar cycle and bone currency that granted passage. "He purchased something," Quinn said. "Or sold something. The schedule moves every full moon. We are three days past the last cycle." Patel's face twisted. "You cannot seriously suggest—" "I suggest we have a witness who never boarded a scheduled train." Quinn swept her torch across the platform once more, illuminating details missed on first pass. A fragment of leather satchel strap snagged on a pipe fitting, worn soft by years of use. Red hair caught in a ventilation grate, curly and vibrant against the gray dust. She photographed both without touching, her hands steady despite the cold spreading through her chest. "Eva Kowalski." Quinn read the ID card that had fluttered from the satchel fragment. "British Museum. Restricted archives. She was here." "Hours ago, judging by the temperature differential." Patel pressed his palm against the wall near the hair, his professional curiosity overriding his dismissal. "Still warm. Someone else occupies this station, Detective. Someone living." Quinn holstered her torch and drew her service weapon. The compass lay between them, needle spinning with frantic velocity. She kicked it toward the tunnel mouth. The brass device slid across the rails and vanished into the darkness—not falling, not skittering, but disappearing as if passing through a curtain that had opened to receive it. "Did you see that?" Patel backed away, his hand reaching for his radio. "I saw." Quinn advanced toward the tunnel, her weapon raised in both hands. "Morris saw it too. Three years ago. The market opens for those with tokens, but it extracts payment in currencies the Crown does not recognize. This man attempted to leave with more than he carried entering." The darkness in the tunnel shifted. A breeze emerged, carrying the scent of myrrh and iron, of commerce conducted in whispers and transactions paid in memory. Quinn stepped onto the first rail, her balance precise, her worn leather watch ticking loud in the sudden silence. "The evidence failed to cohere because we examined the wrong category of crime," she said. "This is not a murder scene. It is a failed escape route." She moved forward, one step, then two. Behind her, Patel shouted, but his voice distorted, stretching into frequencies that hurt her teeth. The tunnel breathed. The compass had shown the way—not toward a body, but toward the rift where the victim had fallen attempting to flee something that hunted through walls of solid earth. Quinn saw it then. The scuff marks were not from shoes. They were claw marks, high on the walls, gouging through ceramic tile with supernatural strength. The victim had not died of cardiac arrest. He had been emptied from the inside, propped up post-mortem as territorial display. "Detective!" Patel's hand seized her shoulder, yanking her back toward the platform. "The body disappeared." She spun. The platform stood empty. No corpse, no blood, no neatly folded hands. Only the bone token remained, spinning on the concrete like a top, faster and faster until hairline cracks raced across its surface. Quinn stared at the fracture. Inside the ivory, something pulsed with faint luminescence—a fragment of compass needle, embedded deep within the marrow cavity. "He was not the buyer," she whispered. "He was the merchandise." The tunnel exhaled. The darkness moved.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.558
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count2
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"complex"
count1
11
word"fluttered"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"glint"
2"etched"
3"magnetic"
4"profound"
5"chill"
6"trembled"
7"silence"
8"wavering"
9"velvet"
10"complex"
11"fluttered"
12"raced"
13"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1605
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Patel shouted, but his voice distorted, stretching into frequencies that hurt her teeth."
56.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1229
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn23
Tube2
Camden3
Sergeant1
Patel14
Morris4
Italian1
Evidence1
Ordnance1
Survey1
Victorians1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tube"
3"Sergeant"
4"Patel"
5"Morris"
6"Victorians"
places
0"Evidence"
globalScore0.564
windowScore0.667
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if awaiting a train that would never arrive"
1"as if passing through a curtain that had opened to receive it"
13.08% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.869
wordCount1605
matches
0"not falling, not skittering, but disappearing as if passing through a curtain"
1"not skittering, but disappearing as if passing through a curtain"
2"not toward a body, but toward the rift"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"followed that gaze"
1"entered that warehouse"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean34.15
std17.98
cv0.527
sampleLengths
049
130
251
371
412
541
631
736
860
948
1015
1149
1216
1336
1442
1549
1638
1717
1827
1961
2014
215
2235
2320
2450
258
2646
2717
2858
2936
3022
317
3273
3321
3433
3555
3613
3749
3845
3927
4054
4147
4215
4336
4423
4511
466
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"been emptied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences129
ratio0.07
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden breathed damp air up from the tunnels, carrying the iron scent of old blood and something else—ozone, perhaps, or the burnt-sugar sweetness of spent lightning."
1"But it was the positioning that arrested her attention—the corpse sat upright, legs crossed in the lotus position, hands folded neatly in his lap as if awaiting a train that would never arrive."
2"The object nestled between the rails—a small compass, its casing green with verdigris, face etched with protective sigils she did not recognize."
3"The shoes were wrong—handmade Italian leather, immaculate except for the soles."
4"A memory surfaced—Morris's last case file, the one she had confiscated from Evidence after the review board closed the inquiry."
5"She remembered his voice on their final call—excited, frightened, speaking of markets that moved with the lunar cycle and bone currency that granted passage."
6"The brass device slid across the rails and vanished into the darkness—not falling, not skittering, but disappearing as if passing through a curtain that had opened to receive it."
7"The compass had shown the way—not toward a body, but toward the rift where the victim had fallen attempting to flee something that hunted through walls of solid earth."
8"Inside the ivory, something pulsed with faint luminescence—a fragment of compass needle, embedded deep within the marrow cavity."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.016867469879518072
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004819277108433735
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean12.44
std7.92
cv0.636
sampleLengths
018
131
230
318
418
515
617
78
833
96
107
1112
122
1316
1423
1518
1613
178
1828
197
2021
2111
222
232
2417
2510
2622
2716
2815
294
308
3118
3219
338
348
3516
3615
375
3811
3931
4020
412
426
4310
4411
455
4611
479
488
495
64.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4263565891472868
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners55
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Instead, it hung absolute, deliberate,"
1"Only the bone token remained,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences101
matches
0"She followed that gaze, letting"
1"She crossed the platform in"
2"She crouched, studying the ground"
3"He would never have entered"
4"She studied the victim again."
5"He had not walked here."
6"He held up a small"
7"She overlaid the Tube lines,"
8"She remembered his voice on"
9"She photographed both without touching,"
10"She kicked it toward the"
11"She moved forward, one step,"
12"They were claw marks, high"
13"He had been emptied from"
ratio0.139
73.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences101
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
2"A uniformed constable gestured toward"
3"Quinn moved with military precision,"
4"The marks formed irregular lanes,"
5"The body lay crumpled against"
6"The declaration came from behind"
7"Detective Sergeant Patel crouched beside"
8"Quinn swept her torch across"
9"Patel shrugged, his attention fixed"
10"Quinn stepped closer, her sharp"
11"The victim's eyes stared past"
12"She followed that gaze, letting"
13"She crossed the platform in"
14"The object nestled between the"
15"The needle spun with lazy"
16"Patel had followed, his breath"
17"Quinn did not answer."
18"She crouched, studying the ground"
19"Patel's radio crackled"
ratio0.772
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Quinn moved with military precision, her boots crunching on debris that should not exist in a sealed facility."
1"But it was the positioning that arrested her attention—the corpse sat upright, legs crossed in the lotus position, hands folded neatly in his lap as if awaiting…"
2"Scorch marks circularized the metal, as if the object had generated heat intense enough to bleach the limestone."
3"The bone was warm, carved with spirals that matched the compass sigils in geometric precision."
4"The darkness possessed texture, a velvet solidity that defied physics."
5"She remembered his voice on their final call—excited, frightened, speaking of markets that moved with the lunar cycle and bone currency that granted passage."
6"The brass device slid across the rails and vanished into the darkness—not falling, not skittering, but disappearing as if passing through a curtain that had ope…"
7"Behind her, Patel shouted, but his voice distorted, stretching into frequencies that hurt her teeth."
8"The compass had shown the way—not toward a body, but toward the rift where the victim had fallen attempting to flee something that hunted through walls of solid…"
20.83% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Patel had, his breath hitching in the stale air"
1"Patel laughed, the sound brittle against the tiles"
2"Patel offered, his skepticism wavering"
3"Patel pressed, his professional curiosity overriding his dismissal"
4"Patel backed away, his hand reaching for his radio"
56.98% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Patel laughed (laugh)"
1"Quinn continued (continue)"
2"Patel pressed (press)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.279
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.186
75.6992%