Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0M32R3AXTFD4MN7AWH18E

Run Details

Duration:
36.5s
Cost:
$0.025551

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened a crack, revealing one bright blue eye peering through the security chain. Rory's stomach dropped to her trainers. "Bloody hell." She fumbled with the chain, her fingers trembling against the cold metal. Three months. Three months since she'd walked out of that hotel room in Prague without a backward glance, leaving Lucien Moreau sprawled across rumpled sheets with her lipstick still smeared on his collar. The chain clattered free. She pulled the door wide, and there he stood in the narrow hallway of Eva's building, immaculate as ever in his charcoal suit despite the late hour. His platinum hair caught the flickering light from the corridor's single bulb, and those mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse quicken. "Bonsoir, Aurora." His voice still carried that smoky French accent that had once made her knees weak in a Prague safehouse. Now it just made her angry. "Don't." She gripped the doorframe. "Don't you dare 'bonsoir' me like nothing happened." Lucien's ivory cane tapped against the worn carpet as he shifted his weight. A habit she remembered from their long nights strategising over maps and stolen intelligence. "May I come in?" "Depends. Are you here to finish what we started, or are you planning to disappear again when morning comes?" Something flickered across his face—regret, perhaps, or pain. It vanished so quickly she might have imagined it. "That is not how it was." "No?" Rory stepped back, letting him enter. "Then enlighten me, Luc. Because from where I stood, you got what you needed from me and vanished the moment your contact showed up." He moved past her into Eva's cramped sitting room, his presence instantly making the space feel smaller. Books and scrolls covered every surface, Eva's research spilling from desk to floor to coffee table. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched from his perch atop a stack of grimoires with feline disdain. "Your friend has been busy." Lucien gestured at the controlled chaos with his cane. "Eva's always busy. Unlike some people, she doesn't abandon her work halfway through." The barb hit home. His jaw tightened, and he turned to face her properly. "You think I abandoned you." "I know you did." Rory crossed her arms. "Question is why you're here now. Last I heard, you were setting up shop in Berlin. New contacts, new territory. New bed partners, probably." "There has been no one else." The words hung between them, simple and stark. Rory felt her breath catch, but she forced herself to stay steady. "Liar." "I have many faults, cherie, but dishonesty is not among them. Not with you." He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—cedar and smoke, expensive and distinctly him. Close enough to see the exhaustion carved into the lines around his eyes. "Then why?" Her voice cracked despite her best efforts. "Why did you leave without a word? I woke up and you were gone. No note, no explanation. Just... gone." Lucien's hand tightened on his cane. For a moment, she thought he might not answer. Then he looked at her with those strange, beautiful eyes, and she saw something raw and unguarded there. "Because I am not good for you." "That's not your choice to make." "Is it not?" His accent thickened, the way it always did when he was emotional. "You know what I am, Aurora. What I come from. The blood that runs in my veins is not entirely human." "You think I care about that?" "You should." He moved away from her, putting the safety of distance between them. "My father's realm does not let go easily. There are... expectations. Debts that must be paid." Ptolemy leaped down from his book tower, padding over to wind around Lucien's ankles. Traitor cat. Even Eva's familiar had always liked him better than was sensible. "So you ran." Rory's voice was flat now, emotionless. "Without giving me a choice in the matter." "I protected you." "You broke my heart." The words slipped out before she could stop them. Lucien went very still, his knuckles white where they gripped his cane. "Aurora..." "No." She held up a hand. "You don't get to 'Aurora' me. Not after what you did." She moved to the kitchenette, needing something to do with her hands. The kettle sat cold on the hob—Eva was probably at the British Library again, pulling another all-nighter with her research. Rory filled it with water, her movements sharp and precise. "Why are you here, Lucien? And don't feed me some rubbish about missing my sparkling personality." Behind her, she heard him shift. The soft tap of his cane against the floor. "There is a problem. In Cardiff." Ice flooded her veins. She spun around, kettle forgotten. "What kind of problem?" "The kind that involves your parents." The bottom fell out of her world. She gripped the counter for support, her mind racing through possibilities, each worse than the last. "They're in danger?" "Not directly. Not yet." Lucien's voice was gentle now, professional. "But there have been... incidents. Strange occurrences around your father's law firm. Your mother's school. Things that suggest supernatural interest." "What kind of things?" "Shadows that move independently. Electronics failing in specific patterns. Witnesses reporting voices in languages that predate human civilization." Rory's laugh came out bitter and sharp. "So you need me. That's why you're here. Not because you actually—" "No." The word cut through her accusation like a blade. "I am here because I could not bear the thought of anything happening to you. The job is secondary." She stared at him, searching his face for the lie. Found none. "The people I work for now, they know about our history. They know you have skills they need. But Aurora..." He stepped closer, his voice dropping low. "I volunteered for this assignment. I fought for it." "Why?" "Because I am selfish enough to want to see you again, even if you hate me for it."
total_cost0.025551

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.408
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.041
90.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1003
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1003
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"intensity"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"stark"
6"familiar"
7"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords997
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount583
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Prague2
Lucien7
Moreau1
Eva5
French1
Ptolemy2
British1
Library1
Rory7
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
places
0"Prague"
1"British"
2"Library"
globalScore0.9
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount997
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean17.8
std13.44
cv0.755
sampleLengths
021
12
245
359
42
525
613
727
84
919
1017
116
1231
1349
1414
1513
1614
175
1832
196
2020
211
2214
2330
2429
2533
267
276
2836
296
3030
3127
3217
333
344
3521
361
3717
3842
3916
4015
416
429
434
446
4523
463
4730
484
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs99
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences92
ratio0.043
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the flickering light from the corridor's single bulb, and those mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse quicken."
1"Something flickered across his face—regret, perhaps, or pain."
2"He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—cedar and smoke, expensive and distinctly him."
3"The kettle sat cold on the hob—Eva was probably at the British Library again, pulling another all-nighter with her research."
99.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount589
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.04074702886247878
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008488964346349746
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean10.84
std6.77
cv0.624
sampleLengths
015
16
22
312
42
531
64
727
828
92
1019
116
125
138
1413
1514
164
1719
188
199
206
217
2224
2317
2416
2516
2614
2713
284
2910
305
318
3224
336
348
3512
361
3714
3817
3913
409
4120
426
439
4418
457
466
4715
4821
496
79.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5108695652173914
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners47
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Then he looked at her"
ratio0.019
81.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences52
matches
0"She fumbled with the chain,"
1"She pulled the door wide,"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"His voice still carried that"
4"She gripped the doorframe"
5"It vanished so quickly she"
6"He moved past her into"
7"His jaw tightened, and he"
8"He stepped closer, close enough"
9"Her voice cracked despite her"
10"His accent thickened, the way"
11"He moved away from her,"
12"She held up a hand"
13"She moved to the kitchenette,"
14"She spun around, kettle forgotten."
15"She gripped the counter for"
16"She stared at him, searching"
17"He stepped closer, his voice"
ratio0.346
27.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences52
matches
0"The door opened a crack,"
1"Rory's stomach dropped to her"
2"She fumbled with the chain,"
3"The chain clattered free."
4"She pulled the door wide,"
5"His platinum hair caught the"
6"His voice still carried that"
7"She gripped the doorframe"
8"Lucien's ivory cane tapped against"
9"A habit she remembered from"
10"Something flickered across his face—regret,"
11"It vanished so quickly she"
12"Rory stepped back, letting him"
13"He moved past her into"
14"Books and scrolls covered every"
15"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched"
16"Lucien gestured at the controlled"
17"The barb hit home."
18"His jaw tightened, and he"
19"Rory crossed her arms"
ratio0.865
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Now it just made her"
1"Even Eva's familiar had always"
ratio0.038
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the flickering light from the corridor's single bulb, and those mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with an intensity that mad…"
1"His voice still carried that smoky French accent that had once made her knees weak in a Prague safehouse."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stepped, his voice dropping low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.9696%