| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "It leaned close [close]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 96.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1597 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1597 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "marble" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "magnetic" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "structure" | | 13 | "porcelain" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1575 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.75% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1355 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.85 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 4 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 25 | | Nyx | 7 | | Dymas | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Sunday | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Dymas" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.577 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 9.52% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.905 | | wordCount | 1575 | | matches | | 0 | "not with heat, but with a visible absence, a place" | | 1 | "not with water but with broth" | | 2 | "not walked, but glided, growing larger with each step, filling space like po" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 33.51 | | std | 16.78 | | cv | 0.501 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 81 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 28 |
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| 99.46% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "was seared" | | 1 | "being replaced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The gem's rhythm matched no heartbeat she recognized—too slow, too ancient." | | 1 | "Her left wrist itched—a childhood scar in the shape of a crescent moon, reminder of a window she'd broken fleeing a shouting match." | | 2 | "Then returned, amplified—the whisper of wind became a roar, the scrape of her boot on stone became thunder." | | 3 | "The material pulsed under her palm—warm, alive." | | 4 | "Figures moved between the rows ahead—humans in chef's whites stained with sauces that glowed faintly." | | 5 | "Kitchens the size of stadiums belched steam that formed shapes—hands reaching, mouths opening—before dissipating into the amber sky." | | 6 | "The smell wasn't putrid—it was magnetic, making her mouth water despite the revulsion." | | 7 | "It flowed not with water but with broth—dark, aromatic, carrying chunks of vegetation and spice." | | 8 | "The pendant grew hot—almost painful—against her sternum." | | 9 | "She gripped the bridge rail—a baguette crust hard as iron." | | 10 | "Inside, the amber sky darkened to a deeper gold, and the air hummed with the sound of chewing—thousands of jaws working in wet rhythm." | | 11 | "The figure descended the stairs—not walked, but glided, growing larger with each step, filling space like poured cream, wearing a coat of living moths that ate and regenerated their wings without pause." | | 12 | "\"—are you dining? Or are you the dish?\"" | | 13 | "It gestured toward archways leading deeper into the palace, where the sounds of cooking—sizzling, chopping, the weeping of ingredients—echoed with increasing fervor." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1268 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faster, frantic against her" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.017350157728706624 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00473186119873817 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 11.33 | | std | 6.65 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 58.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.38848920863309355 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 28.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Then returned, amplified—the whisper of" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the chain free." | | 1 | "Her left wrist itched—a childhood" | | 2 | "She traced it when anxious." | | 3 | "They stepped through." | | 4 | "Her stomach grumbled, then clenched." | | 5 | "Her gaze fixed on distant" | | 6 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 7 | "She hadn't eaten since morning." | | 8 | "Their eyes were hollow, dark" | | 9 | "They harvested with jerking, precise" | | 10 | "They descended into a valley" | | 11 | "Her hand went to her" | | 12 | "It flowed not with water" | | 13 | "She pulled it free." | | 14 | "They crossed the bread bridge." | | 15 | "It squelched underfoot, warm and" | | 16 | "She gripped the bridge rail—a" | | 17 | "Her boots sunk into soil" | | 18 | "They entered the courtyard." | | 19 | "She drew the weapon." |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 28.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "The gem's rhythm matched no" | | 2 | "She pulled the chain free." | | 3 | "The crimson stone pointed toward" | | 4 | "The air shimmered, not with" | | 5 | "Nyx coalesced beside her, their" | | 6 | "The Shade's violet eyes reflected" | | 7 | "Isolde stood apart, her silver" | | 8 | "The Half-Fae left no indentation" | | 9 | "Rory touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 10 | "The moonsilver was cold, even" | | 11 | "Her left wrist itched—a childhood" | | 12 | "She traced it when anxious." | | 13 | "They stepped through." | | 14 | "The shift jarred every bone." | | 15 | "The ground held firm, but" | | 16 | "The sky pressed down in" | | 17 | "Nyx's voice carried on currents" | | 18 | "The Shade solidified partially, gainings" | | 19 | "Rory wiped sweat from her" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Where London's grey afternoon had waited moments before, now vineyards sprawled toward horizons that curved upward, impossible and immense." | | 1 | "Grapes wept wine that pooled in crystal basins carved from single pieces of quartz." | | 2 | "They harvested with jerking, precise movements, plucking fruits that opened mouths to scream, though Rory heard no sound, only felt the vibration in her molars." | | 3 | "Long tables groaned with meats that still moved, with vegetables that sang harmonies, with breads that rose and fell like breathing lungs." | | 4 | "Trees of marbled fat and muscle stretched upward, branching into ribs that held spheres of perfect, raw filet mignon." | | 5 | "On the far bank, a palace loomed, its walls built from stacked dining tables, its towers made of reaching silverware that caught the amber light and refracted i…" | | 6 | "Her boots sunk into soil that crunched like fried batter, releasing scents of childhood and comfort." | | 7 | "The cold shocked her system, clearing the honey-thick thoughts that had begun to cloud her mind." | | 8 | "The figure descended the stairs—not walked, but glided, growing larger with each step, filling space like poured cream, wearing a coat of living moths that ate …" | | 9 | "Nyx solidified fully beside Rory, drawing shadows from the corners of the courtyard, forming armor of darkness that drank the amber light." | | 10 | "The pendant pulsed in Rory's fist, pointing toward those archways, toward the heart of the feast, demanding they advance deeper into the realm of endless appeti…" | | 11 | "The Blade's cold was the only anchor keeping her from drifting into the promised satisfaction, the eternal meal, the comfort that would consume her completely." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde caught, her fingers ice against overheated skin" | | 1 | "Isolde stepped, her hair whipping though no wind blew" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |