Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0MABT3A2Y7Z4WNEHHXJBX

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Duration:
42.8s
Cost:
$0.030570

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones parted like curtains as Aurora stepped through, Nyx's shadow-form rippling beside her. The sensation hit her immediately—a tingling that started in her fingertips and spread up her arms, as if the air itself hummed with electricity. "Bloody hell," she whispered, stopping short. The grove stretched before them, defying every law of nature she knew. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors—blues that shifted to silver in the dappled light, purples so deep they seemed to hold starlight. Ancient trees towered overhead, their trunks twisted into spirals that hurt to follow with her eyes. Above, the canopy filtered sunlight that felt too golden, too warm, casting everything in amber honey. "Time moves strangely here." Nyx's whisper carried on wind that shouldn't exist in this enclosed space. Their form solidified slightly, violet eyes gleaming with curiosity. "Can you feel it? The pull?" Aurora nodded, though she couldn't name what she felt. Her skin prickled, and the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulsed with unusual warmth. Not the warning heat it gave near Hel portals—something different. Softer. "Where is she?" Aurora scanned the grove, searching for any sign of Isolde. A laugh tinkled through the trees like wind chimes. "She who seeks the Seer must walk the path unwinding." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere. Aurora turned in a slow circle, but saw only flowers and shadow-dappled grass. "Isolde?" "Follow the silver thread that binds what was to what shall be." Aurora frowned. "What silver thread?" Nyx pointed with one shadowy finger. "There." At first Aurora saw nothing. Then, as her eyes adjusted to the grove's strange light, she caught it—a thread of actual silver, no thicker than spider's silk, weaving between the tree trunks. It glowed with its own faint radiance, pulsing gently like a heartbeat. "Right, then." Aurora stepped forward, following the thread deeper into the grove. The path wound between trees whose bark shifted colors as they passed—from deep brown to silver to something that looked almost like scales. Flowers turned their faces toward the travelers, petals unfurling in their wake. Aurora reached out to touch one, then jerked her hand back as the bloom literally sang, a pure note that resonated in her bones. "The flora here is alive in ways I've never encountered," Nyx murmured, their form flickering between solid and shadow as they moved. "Even in the spaces between realms, I've seen nothing quite like this." The silver thread led them around a bend, and Aurora's breath caught. A pool stretched before them, its surface like black glass reflecting not the sky above, but stars. Constellations wheeled in the depths, and Aurora felt dizzy watching them move. "Don't look too long." Isolde's voice came from behind them. Aurora spun around. The Half-Fae stood beside a tree that definitely hadn't been there moments before, her silver hair flowing like liquid mercury in the amber light. Her pale lavender eyes held amusement. "You came seeking answers, but brought shadows and questions instead." "We came because something's wrong with the Veil," Aurora said, stepping away from the hypnotic pool. "The rifts are spreading." "Wrong?" Isolde tilted her head, birdlike. "Or changing as all things must change when winter's grip loosens its hold?" Nyx's form solidified completely, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde. "The barriers between realms are failing. Mortals will—" "Will what, Shadow-Walker? Will they learn what their ancestors knew? Will they remember the old ways, the old bargains?" Aurora felt the Heartstone pendant grow warmer against her chest. "What old bargains?" Isolde smiled, but it held no warmth. "The bargain that built the Veil, child of two lands. The price paid in blood and binding, in exile and forgetting." The grove seemed to pulse around them. Aurora noticed the flowers were now facing them directly, their petals opening wider as if straining to hear. Even the trees appeared to lean inward, their twisted branches forming an amphitheater around the small clearing. "I don't understand riddles," Aurora said, frustration bleeding into her voice. "People are in danger. The rifts—" "Are healing." Isolde moved without seeming to walk, her feet leaving no impression on the flower-carpeted ground. "What you call tears, I call doors opening after centuries of slumber." The silver thread Aurora had followed now wrapped around her ankle, though she hadn't felt it move. When she looked down, more threads appeared, weaving through the grass, connecting tree to flower to stone in an intricate web that made her eyes water to follow. "The Veil was never meant to last forever," Isolde continued, circling them slowly. "It was a bandage on a wound, not a permanent cure." "What wound?" Nyx asked, their voice barely above the wind's whisper. Isolde stopped before the starlit pool, her reflection showing not her own face but something else—something with antlers and eyes like winter moons. "The wound of separation. When mortal and Fae, Earth and Hel, light and shadow were torn apart and told they could never meet again." Aurora's chest tightened. The pendant was warm enough now that she could feel its shape through her shirt—the thumbnail-sized stone pressing against her ribs like a second heartbeat. "And now?" "Now the wheel turns, as wheels must turn. The winter solstice comes, and with it, the choice." "What choice?" But Isolde had already begun to fade, her form becoming translucent like morning mist. "The choice that was always yours to make, Daughter of Laws and Dreams. To bind or to loose. To separate or unite." "Wait!" Aurora lunged forward, but her hands passed through empty air. "I don't know what that means!" The grove shuddered around them. Flowers began to close their petals, and the golden light dimmed to something closer to normal sunshine. The silver threads snapped one by one, leaving only the faintest traces of their former radiance. "She's gone," Nyx said unnecessarily. Aurora stood in the dimming grove, surrounded by the settling quiet of an ordinary clearing. But the warmth of the pendant against her chest remained, and she could still feel the echo of that otherworldly energy in her bones. "Did any of that make sense to you?" she asked. Nyx's form rippled, becoming more shadow than substance. "Some. The Veil wasn't natural—it was created. And now something is trying to undo it." "Or someone." Aurora touched her chest where the pendant rested. "And apparently, I'm supposed to decide what happens next." The standing stones came back into view as they retraced their steps, the boundary between the Fae-touched grove and Richmond Park visible once again. But Aurora couldn't shake the feeling that something fundamental had shifted, both in the grove and in herself.
total_cost0.03057

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx said unnecessarily [unnecessarily]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.049
82.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"completely"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"gleaming"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"scanned"
5"silk"
6"resonated"
7"depths"
8"pulse"
9"intricate"
10"could feel"
11"echo"
12"otherworldly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
18.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount796
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora21
Nyx8
Heartstone2
Hel1
Isolde9
Half-Fae1
Fae-touched1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Half-Fae"
places
0"Hel"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.181
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if straining to hear"
19.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.805
wordCount1108
matches
0"not the sky above, but stars"
1"not her own face but something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean25.18
std15.05
cv0.598
sampleLengths
040
16
267
331
434
513
619
721
812
95
107
1144
1212
1359
1434
1541
1610
1733
1810
1920
2019
2118
2219
2313
2428
2542
2617
2729
2845
2924
3011
3147
3230
3317
342
3536
3617
3738
385
3939
4010
4123
4219
4342
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences89
ratio0.079
matches
0"The sensation hit her immediately—a tingling that started in her fingertips and spread up her arms, as if the air itself hummed with electricity."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors—blues that shifted to silver in the dappled light, purples so deep they seemed to hold starlight."
2"Not the warning heat it gave near Hel portals—something different."
3"Then, as her eyes adjusted to the grove's strange light, she caught it—a thread of actual silver, no thicker than spider's silk, weaving between the tree trunks."
4"The path wound between trees whose bark shifted colors as they passed—from deep brown to silver to something that looked almost like scales."
5"Isolde stopped before the starlit pool, her reflection showing not her own face but something else—something with antlers and eyes like winter moons."
6"The pendant was warm enough now that she could feel its shape through her shirt—the thumbnail-sized stone pressing against her ribs like a second heartbeat."
98.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount809
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.042027194066749075
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.016069221260815822
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.45
std6.84
cv0.55
sampleLengths
016
124
26
312
423
516
616
716
89
96
109
1114
1210
131
1413
159
1610
177
1813
191
2012
212
223
236
241
255
2627
2712
2812
2923
3012
3124
3222
3312
3412
3517
3612
3710
383
3924
406
4110
4216
434
446
4513
4610
478
4819
4910
78.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48314606741573035
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then, as her eyes adjusted"
1"Even the trees appeared to"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences61
matches
0"she whispered, stopping short"
1"Their form solidified slightly, violet"
2"Her skin prickled, and the"
3"It glowed with its own"
4"Her pale lavender eyes held"
ratio0.082
41.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences61
matches
0"The oak standing stones parted"
1"The sensation hit her immediately—a"
2"she whispered, stopping short"
3"The grove stretched before them,"
4"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
5"Nyx's whisper carried on wind"
6"Their form solidified slightly, violet"
7"Aurora nodded, though she couldn't"
8"Her skin prickled, and the"
9"Aurora scanned the grove, searching"
10"A laugh tinkled through the"
11"The voice came from everywhere"
12"Aurora turned in a slow"
13"Nyx pointed with one shadowy"
14"It glowed with its own"
15"Aurora stepped forward, following the"
16"The path wound between trees"
17"Flowers turned their faces toward"
18"Aurora reached out to touch"
19"Nyx murmured, their form flickering"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The sensation hit her immediately—a tingling that started in her fingertips and spread up her arms, as if the air itself hummed with electricity."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors—blues that shifted to silver in the dappled light, purples so deep they seemed to hold starlight."
2"Ancient trees towered overhead, their trunks twisted into spirals that hurt to follow with her eyes."
3"The path wound between trees whose bark shifted colors as they passed—from deep brown to silver to something that looked almost like scales."
4"Aurora noticed the flowers were now facing them directly, their petals opening wider as if straining to hear."
5"When she looked down, more threads appeared, weaving through the grass, connecting tree to flower to stone in an intricate web that made her eyes water to follo…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their form flickering between solid and shadow as they moved"
1"Aurora said, frustration bleeding into her voice"
2"Isolde moved, her feet leaving no impression on the flower-carpeted ground"
3"Nyx asked, their voice barely above the wind's whisper"
4"Aurora lunged, but her hands passed through empty air"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.195
leniency0.39
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.146
73.6799%