| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said unnecessarily [unnecessarily]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.39 | | leniency | 0.78 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |
| 82.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1108 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 796 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.64 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 21 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.181 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if straining to hear" |
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| 19.49% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.805 | | wordCount | 1108 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sky above, but stars" | | 1 | "not her own face but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 25.18 | | std | 15.05 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The sensation hit her immediately—a tingling that started in her fingertips and spread up her arms, as if the air itself hummed with electricity." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors—blues that shifted to silver in the dappled light, purples so deep they seemed to hold starlight." | | 2 | "Not the warning heat it gave near Hel portals—something different." | | 3 | "Then, as her eyes adjusted to the grove's strange light, she caught it—a thread of actual silver, no thicker than spider's silk, weaving between the tree trunks." | | 4 | "The path wound between trees whose bark shifted colors as they passed—from deep brown to silver to something that looked almost like scales." | | 5 | "Isolde stopped before the starlit pool, her reflection showing not her own face but something else—something with antlers and eyes like winter moons." | | 6 | "The pendant was warm enough now that she could feel its shape through her shirt—the thumbnail-sized stone pressing against her ribs like a second heartbeat." |
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| 98.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 809 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.042027194066749075 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016069221260815822 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 12.45 | | std | 6.84 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 78.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.48314606741573035 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, as her eyes adjusted" | | 1 | "Even the trees appeared to" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, stopping short" | | 1 | "Their form solidified slightly, violet" | | 2 | "Her skin prickled, and the" | | 3 | "It glowed with its own" | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" |
| | ratio | 0.082 | |
| 41.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones parted" | | 1 | "The sensation hit her immediately—a" | | 2 | "she whispered, stopping short" | | 3 | "The grove stretched before them," | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 5 | "Nyx's whisper carried on wind" | | 6 | "Their form solidified slightly, violet" | | 7 | "Aurora nodded, though she couldn't" | | 8 | "Her skin prickled, and the" | | 9 | "Aurora scanned the grove, searching" | | 10 | "A laugh tinkled through the" | | 11 | "The voice came from everywhere" | | 12 | "Aurora turned in a slow" | | 13 | "Nyx pointed with one shadowy" | | 14 | "It glowed with its own" | | 15 | "Aurora stepped forward, following the" | | 16 | "The path wound between trees" | | 17 | "Flowers turned their faces toward" | | 18 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 19 | "Nyx murmured, their form flickering" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The sensation hit her immediately—a tingling that started in her fingertips and spread up her arms, as if the air itself hummed with electricity." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors—blues that shifted to silver in the dappled light, purples so deep they seemed to hold starlight." | | 2 | "Ancient trees towered overhead, their trunks twisted into spirals that hurt to follow with her eyes." | | 3 | "The path wound between trees whose bark shifted colors as they passed—from deep brown to silver to something that looked almost like scales." | | 4 | "Aurora noticed the flowers were now facing them directly, their petals opening wider as if straining to hear." | | 5 | "When she looked down, more threads appeared, weaving through the grass, connecting tree to flower to stone in an intricate web that made her eyes water to follo…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their form flickering between solid and shadow as they moved" | | 1 | "Aurora said, frustration bleeding into her voice" | | 2 | "Isolde moved, her feet leaving no impression on the flower-carpeted ground" | | 3 | "Nyx asked, their voice barely above the wind's whisper" | | 4 | "Aurora lunged, but her hands passed through empty air" |
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| 76.83% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.195 | | leniency | 0.39 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.146 | |