| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "their whispery voice carried back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 77.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 661 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 661 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "dance" | | 3 | "kaleidoscope" | | 4 | "tapestry" | | 5 | "unravel" | | 6 | "sent shivers down" | | 7 | "affection" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "furrowed" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "echoes" | | 16 | "cascading" | | 17 | "treacherous" | | 18 | "delved" | | 19 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | matches | | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 658 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 512 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Eva | 4 | | Rory | 7 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.816 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if seeking affection" | | 1 | "as if responding to Eva's words" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 658 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 41.13 | | std | 13.46 | | cv | 0.327 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 64 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 41 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moved differently here, Isolde had warned them – an hour inside could be mere minutes or days outside." | | 1 | "As Nyx spoke, the whispers from the wildflowers grew louder, the words becoming discernible – fragments of conversations, laughter, and longing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 515 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.02912621359223301 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011650485436893204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 44 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 44 | | mean | 14.95 | | std | 6.32 | | cv | 0.422 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 22 |
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| 96.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5909090909090909 | | totalSentences | 44 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the weight of" | | 1 | "their whispery voice carried back" | | 2 | "It leaned into her touch," | | 3 | "They stood before a glittering" | | 4 | "She looked up, a furrowed" | | 5 | "Its faint pulse quickened, as" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes, knowing" | | 7 | "Her gaze lingered on the" |
| | ratio | 0.211 | |
| 12.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 1 | "The soft chime of wind" | | 2 | "She felt the weight of" | | 3 | "a hushed voice breathed beside" | | 4 | "Eva's eyes darted about, drinking" | | 5 | "Rory's gaze wandered, trying to" | | 6 | "Wildflowers of every color bloomed" | | 7 | "Trees with bark shimmering like" | | 8 | "A soft, ethereal glow permeated" | | 9 | "Nyx, in their solid form," | | 10 | "their whispery voice carried back" | | 11 | "Whispers seemed to emanate from" | | 12 | "Eva, however, smiled, reaching out" | | 13 | "It leaned into her touch," | | 14 | "Rory's attention was drawn to" | | 15 | "The warm, sunny day they'd" | | 16 | "Time moved differently here, Isolde" | | 17 | "The uncertainty sent a thrill" | | 18 | "Nyx called, their voice barely" | | 19 | "They stood before a glittering" |
| | ratio | 0.895 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "A soft, ethereal glow permeated the air, as if the very atmosphere was luminous." | | 1 | "Whispers seemed to emanate from the flowers themselves, a gentle, unintelligible chatter that sent shivers down Rory's spine." | | 2 | "They stood before a glittering pool of water, its surface adorned with delicate, swirling patterns that shimmered like the moon." | | 3 | "Its faint pulse quickened, as if responding to Eva's words." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory called out, her voice barely above the whispers," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "voice breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Rory called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |