Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0MK3XPFG4Q3F5WEWHS0KG

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.000616
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter was halfway through brushing her fingertips over the scattered notes on her cluttered coffee table when the sharp rap at her door jolted her. She froze, lips parted in surprise. Her brows drew together. No one had visited her unannounced in weeks—least of all, not Lucien Moreau. She hesitated for a beat, then swung the door open. There he stood in the dim hallway, taller than she remembered, dressed in that tailored charcoal suit that always seemed sketched from shadow. The ivory-handled cane rested against his palm, the blade concealed from view. His slicked-back platinum blond hair gleamed under the faint glow of the corridor light. Black and amber eyes caught her in a flicker, sharp and assessing. “I didn’t expect you,” she managed, crossing her arms. Lucien’s face was unreadable, but a faint crease in his brow betrayed some measure of tension. “I needed to see you,” he said, voice smooth but edged with something unspoken. “It’s been a long time.” She kept her stance steady, feeling her heart hammer beneath her ribs. “You could’ve called. Or sent a message.” Her voice sounded sharper than she intended. He stepped closer, just enough that she could see the faint dirt smudges on the cuffs of his sleeve. “I thought it better to do this in person. Less... ambiguity.” Her eyes flicked past him, down the narrow hall—at the cluttered chaos of her living space, the faint glow from the city bleeding in through the cracked blinds. She knew she looked tired; her dark hair was a little frayed, the shadows beneath her eyes more pronounced. Still, she didn’t step back. He studied her for a Moment, then seemed to acknowledge her unspoken defenses. “Your flat hasn’t changed much.” She allowed herself a small, guarded smile. “Getting by. Like always.” Lucien shifted his cane, the subtle clicking echoing in the silence. “I came because I need your help—your expertise. Something you’re probably more suited to than anyone.” “I’m not your fixer,” she replied, voice cool now. He held up a hand, as if in peace. “No, but I’d be grateful if you listened. I’m dealing with something... complicated. And I don’t trust anyone else.” Her mind raced. She'd exchanged fire with him before—hardly friendly exchanges. But the anger had dulled with time, replaced by a strange tug—something unresolved that still simmered beneath the surface. He seemed to read her hesitation. “There’s no one else I trust with this. Not even in the supernatural circles.” She sighed, leaning her shoulder against the doorframe. Her fingers finally loosened from her crossed arms. “What’s so urgent?” Lucien’s eyes darkened, and he looked away briefly before fixing her with a gaze that was almost pleading. “There’s a threat. Someone—something—trying to breach the boundary between worlds. If it gets through…” Her stomach clenched. That kind of darkness wasn’t new, but it never got easier to hear. She remembered their last encounter, when everything had spiraled into chaos—his rushing in, her trying to hold everything together. Foolish, maybe. But never regretted. “You think I can help,” she said softly, her voice low. He nodded. “I know you can. And I need you. Whatever’s coming, it’s too dangerous for me alone.” She looked him over, weighing the trust she could give, the memories that still hurt beneath her skin. “And you expect me to drop everything and come running?” “I wouldn’t ask if I had a choice. I know what happened between us. I’m not here to reopen old wounds, Rory. I just need your help.” She studied his face—unfaltering, earnest in a way she’d never seen before. Pain flickered behind those eyes, the kind that got under her skin despite her better judgment. “Fine,” she said finally, her voice brittle. “But you do what I say. And no funny business.” Lucien’s lips twitched in a faint smile, the first genuine one since he arrived. “Understood.” She stepped aside, giving him room. “Come in.” He shuffled past, the cane tapping softly against the faded wooden floor. Ptolemy slipped from a stack of books, curling at his feet with a soft purr. Aurora closed the door behind them, feeling the weight of their shared history pressing heavily on her shoulders. She glanced at him, noting how the lines of his face softened just slightly when he looked around her cluttered sanctuary. “You kept your place,” he said, voice quieter now. “Made it through the worst of it,” she replied, turning toward her little makeshift research station. “Got tired of moving, especially when I thought I’d be safer here.” Lucien’s gaze lingered, then shifted to the window, watching the rain streak the glass. “I wish I’d come sooner.” “You’re not exactly known for doing the straightforward thing.” She reached for her flask, pouring herself a shot of something dark and strong. He raised an eyebrow but didn’t comment. Instead, he leaned on his cane, pensively. “This threat—we’re talking about something that could tear through worlds. I’ve never seen anything like it.” She nodded, feeling a rare ripple of unease. “I suppose I’ll need my usual tools then,” she muttered, grabbing a small vial from a cluttered shelf. He studied her in silence before speaking again. “You’ve always been the smartest person I know. If anyone can figure this out, it’s you.” She rolled her eyes and took a long sip from the flask. “Flattery won’t get you out of this, Lucien.” He chuckled softly, eyes softening. “No. But it might earn me a little more of your trust.” She looked at him, seeing the strange combination of charm and danger—the streaks of vulnerability beneath that composed exterior. It stirred something in her. Something she refused to admit outright. The rain outside intensified, tapping against the window like a heartbeat. Inside, the air thickened with unspoken words, lingering regret, and the faint, undeniable spark of something still alive between them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.97% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.129
79.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count3
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"encounter"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"sanctuary"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
14
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"unreadable"
2"tension"
3"unspoken"
4"flicked"
5"echoing"
6"silence"
7"raced"
8"stomach"
9"encounter"
10"flickered"
11"weight"
12"sanctuary"
13"eyebrow"
14"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"d in surprise"
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords981
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount701
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Lucien6
Moreau1
Moment1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Moment"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed sketched from shadow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount981
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
91.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.15
std11.86
cv0.471
sampleLengths
049
110
261
39
435
526
630
752
818
911
1027
119
1228
1330
1420
1519
1632
1740
1811
1918
2028
2127
2228
2317
2415
258
2627
2739
289
2928
3019
3123
3230
3326
3424
3520
3617
3730
3831
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences84
ratio0.095
matches
0"No one had visited her unannounced in weeks—least of all, not Lucien Moreau."
1"Her eyes flicked past him, down the narrow hall—at the cluttered chaos of her living space, the faint glow from the city bleeding in through the cracked blinds."
2"She knew she looked tired; her dark hair was a little frayed, the shadows beneath her eyes more pronounced."
3"She'd exchanged fire with him before—hardly friendly exchanges."
4"But the anger had dulled with time, replaced by a strange tug—something unresolved that still simmered beneath the surface."
5"She remembered their last encounter, when everything had spiraled into chaos—his rushing in, her trying to hold everything together."
6"She studied his face—unfaltering, earnest in a way she’d never seen before."
7"She looked at him, seeing the strange combination of charm and danger—the streaks of vulnerability beneath that composed exterior."
96.80% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount710
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04366197183098591
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015492957746478873
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.68
std6.18
cv0.529
sampleLengths
026
16
24
313
410
523
612
714
812
99
1016
1114
125
1312
1414
1519
1611
1728
1819
195
2013
215
227
234
2411
2516
269
279
2819
293
308
3119
326
3314
348
358
363
3718
3814
393
4013
4119
422
433
4411
452
4616
4718
4810
4927
64.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners33
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Instead, he leaned on his"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences61
matches
0"She froze, lips parted in"
1"Her brows drew together."
2"She hesitated for a beat,"
3"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
4"she managed, crossing her arms"
5"he said, voice smooth but"
6"She kept her stance steady,"
7"Her voice sounded sharper than"
8"He stepped closer, just enough"
9"Her eyes flicked past him,"
10"She knew she looked tired;"
11"He studied her for a"
12"She allowed herself a small,"
13"she replied, voice cool now"
14"He held up a hand,"
15"Her mind raced."
16"She'd exchanged fire with him"
17"He seemed to read her"
18"She sighed, leaning her shoulder"
19"Her fingers finally loosened from"
ratio0.656
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"Aurora Carter was halfway through"
1"She froze, lips parted in"
2"Her brows drew together."
3"She hesitated for a beat,"
4"There he stood in the"
5"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
7"she managed, crossing her arms"
8"Lucien’s face was unreadable, but"
9"he said, voice smooth but"
10"She kept her stance steady,"
11"Her voice sounded sharper than"
12"He stepped closer, just enough"
13"Her eyes flicked past him,"
14"She knew she looked tired;"
15"He studied her for a"
16"She allowed herself a small,"
17"Lucien shifted his cane, the"
18"she replied, voice cool now"
19"He held up a hand,"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Pain flickered behind those eyes, the kind that got under her skin despite her better judgment."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice smooth but edged with something unspoken"
1"she replied, voice cool now"
2"she said softly, her voice low"
3"he said, voice quieter now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.452
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.065
76.0912%