| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx corrected softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 60.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "warmly" | | 5 | "utterly" | | 6 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "lurch" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "tangible" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "depths" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "profound" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "potential" | | 16 | "cascading" | | 17 | "enigmatic" | | 18 | "tapestry" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "beacon" | | 21 | "treacherous" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1249 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 943 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.864 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on a cloud" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from the shadows clinging to the ancient oak trunks around them" | | 2 | "seemed more solid here, the faint violet glow of their eyes brighter against the perpetual twilight" | | 3 | "seemed woven from moonlight and mist" | | 4 | "felt like the antechamber to a slaughte" | | 5 | "seemed louder now, pressing in on them" | | 6 | "seemed different the trees rearranged" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.402 | | wordCount | 1249 | | matches | | 0 | "not the amber sky, but a field of stars" | | 1 | "not from an animal, but from the very leaves of the path ahead, made them both turn" | | 2 | "not vanishing, but simply becoming one with the light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.31% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 37.85 | | std | 18.44 | | cv | 0.487 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 61 |
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| 91.41% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "was filled" | | 1 | "was edged" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | | |
| 14.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent hit her first—honeysuckle, ripe peaches, and something metallic, like ozone after a lightning strike." | | 1 | "Wildflowers in impossible hues—sapphire blue, fiery orange, deep amethyst—bloomed in profusion across the forest floor, their perfume intoxicating." | | 2 | "Its surface reflected not the amber sky, but a field of stars—constellations she didn’t recognise." | | 3 | "Her eyes caught on something else—a set of footprints pressed into the soft moss near the water’s edge." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 531 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "blue, fiery orange, deep amethyst—" |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.030131826741996232 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005649717514124294 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.03 | | std | 7.7 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 50.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3707865168539326 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of floating, it sank" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 83.01% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Her feet settled on a" | | 1 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 2 | "It wasn’t the weak, greyish" | | 3 | "It was a deep, liquid" | | 4 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 5 | "It hadn’t done that back" | | 6 | "She hadn’t said" | | 7 | "They moved deeper, the mossy" | | 8 | "They weren’t granite or slate," | | 9 | "she breathed, stopping short" | | 10 | "Its surface reflected not the" | | 11 | "It was watchful." | | 12 | "Her eyes caught on something" | | 13 | "They were small, delicate." | | 14 | "She seemed woven from moonlight" | | 15 | "Her hair was a river" | | 16 | "She left no imprint on" | | 17 | "Her pale lavender eyes settled" | | 18 | "Her voice was like the" | | 19 | "She said the name like" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 14.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered like heat" | | 1 | "Her feet settled on a" | | 2 | "The scent hit her first—honeysuckle," | | 3 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 4 | "The light here was wrong." | | 5 | "It wasn’t the weak, greyish" | | 6 | "It was a deep, liquid" | | 7 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper" | | 8 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 9 | "Aurora’s hand went instinctively to" | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 11 | "It hadn’t done that back" | | 12 | "Nyx murmured, their form flowing" | | 13 | "The grove was a cathedral" | | 14 | "Trees with silver bark and" | | 15 | "Wildflowers in impossible hues—sapphire blue," | | 16 | "Nyx advised, their voice barely" | | 17 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 18 | "Isolde had given it to" | | 19 | "She hadn’t said" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her skin, a warm, steady rhythm that was both comforting and unnerving." | | 1 | "They weren’t granite or slate, but living, breathing oak, grown into perfect, smooth pillars that arched towards the amber sky." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx advised, their voice barely audible over the hum" | | 1 | "Aurora said, her own voice sounding harsh and blunt in comparison" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her gaze drifting to the star-pool" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx advised (advise)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx corrected softly (correct)" | | 4 | "Aurora pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |