Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0MV0M3947XDK0BPZQN4QM

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Duration:
5.4s
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$0.002611
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SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt turned with a click that seemed louder than it should have in the narrow stairwell. Aurora's hand froze on the door handle, her breath catching in her throat. Lucien stood in the threshold, haloed by the dim glow of the hallway light. His platinum hair was damp from the rain, slicked back as always, revealing the sharp angles of his face. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light. He wore the same charcoal suit he'd worn the night he'd walked out of her life eight months ago. "Rory." Her name left his lips like a wound reopening. She didn't move from the doorway. "How did you find me?" "Eva." He shifted his weight, and she noticed the tiredness around his eyes, the slight tremor in his hands. "I had to see you." "You had your chance to see me." The words came out sharper than she intended. "You made your choice, Lucien." Behind her, Ptolemy meowed from somewhere in the flat's depths, indifferent to the earthquake at the door. The smell of cold tea and old paper—the familiar scent of Eva's place—suddenly felt suffocating. "I made a lot of choices." His heterochromatic eyes held hers: one amber, one black, like two different souls warring behind his face. "Regretted every single one since." Aurora laughed, but there was no humor in it. "That's convenient. Eight months, and suddenly you regret it." "Can I come in?" He glanced down the stairwell. "The curry house owner is staring. I think he's contemplating whether I'm a threat or a lost tourist." She looked past him. Sure enough, the door to the curry house below had cracked open, a suspicious eye watching the tableau in the stairwell. "Fine." She stepped aside, not touching him as he passed. "But I'm not making tea." He moved into the flat, cane clicking against the worn floorboards. He navigated the labyrinth of books and scrolls with the careful grace of a man used to confined spaces, stopping near the window where moonlight spilled across a stack of research notes. "This is new," he said, gesturing at the papers. "Eva's been researching something. Runes, I think. She hasn't slept properly in weeks." Aurora leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. "You have three minutes. Tell me why you're here." Lucien turned to face her. In the moonlight, the demon-half of his heritage showed itself more clearly—the slight sharpness to his features, the way shadows seemed to cling to him a moment too long. "I heard about what happened. With your ex." Aurora's stomach dropped. "What do you know about Evan?" "Enough." His jaw tightened. "Enough to know you didn't tell me. You didn't tell anyone. You just vanished to London and expected the world to keep spinning without you." "I didn't expect anything." She pushed off the doorway, stalking past him toward the kitchen area. She needed something to do with her hands. The kettle. Yes. "I needed to disappear. That's not your concern." "It became my concern the moment—" He stopped. "The moment what?" He was directly behind her now. She could feel the warmth of him, the faint scent of cedar and something darker underneath. Demon. Always demon underneath. "The moment I realized I'd lost the only person who made me feel human," he said quietly. The kettle trembled in her grip. She set it down on the counter, steadying herself. "Don't do that." Her voice cracked. "Don't stand there and say things like that. You don't get to say things like that after what you did." "What I did." He laughed bitterly. "You want to talk about what I did? You threw me out, Rory. You looked me in the eye and told me you couldn't trust me because of what I am." "Because you lied!" "I told you I was half-demon! I told you everything—" "Not about Avaros. Not about your father's court. Not about the people who were looking for you, looking for me by extension—" She spun to face him. "I found the summoner's circle in your flat, Lucien. The one under your rug. You were going to summon something, and you never told me." Something flickered across his face. Pain, maybe. Or recognition. "You went through my things." "I was looking for explanations. For why you disappeared for three days without a word, only to come back smelling like sulfur and refusing to tell me where you'd been." "I was protecting you." "You were lying to me!" The silence that followed was heavy, broken only by Ptolemy's soft meow as the tabby wound between their legs, oblivious to the wreckage of two people standing in Eva's kitchen. "It was a binding," Lucien said finally. "A demon lord from my father's realm. He wanted me to serve him. I went to negotiate, to buy time so he wouldn't come to Earth looking for me—and by extension, looking for anyone I'd touched." He paused. "Anyone I loved." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. "You could have told me." "Would you have believed me? Would you have believed that I went there to protect you, rather than to serve him?" She wanted to say yes. She wanted to believe she would have trusted him. But the memory of Evan's hands around her wrists, the bruises that took weeks to fade, made the answer more complicated. "I don't know," she admitted. "I don't know what I would have believed. But I needed you to try." "I know." He moved closer, close enough that she could see the amber in his left eye glowing faintly—a demon's tell. "I know I failed. I've spent eight months trying to fix what I broke. But I couldn't stay away any longer." "I have a life here." It came out defensive, small. "I have a job, and Eva, and—" "I know." His hand lifted, hovering near her cheek but not touching. "I'm not asking you to forgive me. I'm asking you to let me prove I'm not the man you think I am." She looked at him—at the slicked-back hair and the tailored suit and the cane that hid a blade sharp enough to carve through lies. At the man who made her feel like something other than a survivor, for a little while. "Why now?" she whispered. "Why tonight?" "Because I heard Evan was looking for you again. And I'd rather die than let him touch you." The words hung between them, heavy with meaning. She thought of the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the one she'd gotten as a child, the one that had nothing to do with Evan. But there were other scars, the kind you couldn't see. "You can't protect me from everything." "I know." His hand finally touched her cheek, feather-light. "But I want to try. If you'll let me." Ptolemy meowed again, demanding attention. Somewhere in the distance, a car horn blared. The world kept spinning, just as Aurora had once hoped it would. She didn't say yes. She didn't say no. But she didn't pull away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She stepped aside [aside]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"He laughed bitterly [bitterly]"
3"Lucien said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.143
91.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"depths"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"depths"
2"familiar"
3"navigated"
4"stomach"
5"could feel"
6"warmth"
7"trembled"
8"flickered"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1176
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount659
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Eva2
Aurora6
Lucien3
Evan2
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed louder than it should have in the narrow stairwell"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1176
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.19
std14.04
cv0.633
sampleLengths
030
161
210
311
424
520
632
728
818
927
1025
1115
1243
139
1429
1534
168
179
1829
1935
208
213
2226
2317
2415
2526
2637
273
2810
2952
309
315
3230
334
345
3530
3648
3711
3821
3935
4019
4142
4217
4334
4441
456
4618
4745
486
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
29.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences101
ratio0.04
matches
0"The smell of cold tea and old paper—the familiar scent of Eva's place—suddenly felt suffocating."
1"In the moonlight, the demon-half of his heritage showed itself more clearly—the slight sharpness to his features, the way shadows seemed to cling to him a moment too long."
2"\"I know.\" He moved closer, close enough that she could see the amber in his left eye glowing faintly—a demon's tell."
3"She looked at him—at the slicked-back hair and the tailored suit and the cane that hid a blade sharp enough to carve through lies."
98.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount667
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.041979010494752625
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013493253373313344
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean11.64
std8.38
cv0.719
sampleLengths
017
113
214
319
49
519
610
76
85
919
105
1115
125
1317
1415
1523
165
179
189
199
2018
214
2221
2310
245
2511
2632
279
2820
299
305
3129
328
333
346
354
3625
3716
388
392
401
418
428
433
446
4516
461
473
4817
496
48.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.38613861386138615
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Always demon underneath."
1"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.034
3.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences59
matches
0"His platinum hair was damp"
1"He wore the same charcoal"
2"Her name left his lips"
3"She didn't move from the"
4"He shifted his weight, and"
5"His heterochromatic eyes held hers:"
6"He glanced down the stairwell"
7"She looked past him."
8"She stepped aside, not touching"
9"He moved into the flat,"
10"He navigated the labyrinth of"
11"he said, gesturing at the"
12"His jaw tightened"
13"She pushed off the doorway,"
14"She needed something to do"
15"He was directly behind her"
16"She could feel the warmth"
17"he said quietly"
18"She set it down on"
19"Her voice cracked"
ratio0.542
36.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences59
matches
0"The deadbolt turned with a"
1"Aurora's hand froze on the"
2"Lucien stood in the threshold,"
3"His platinum hair was damp"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"He wore the same charcoal"
6"Her name left his lips"
7"She didn't move from the"
8"He shifted his weight, and"
9"The words came out sharper"
10"The smell of cold tea"
11"His heterochromatic eyes held hers:"
12"Aurora laughed, but there was"
13"He glanced down the stairwell"
14"She looked past him."
15"She stepped aside, not touching"
16"He moved into the flat,"
17"He navigated the labyrinth of"
18"he said, gesturing at the"
19"Aurora leaned against the doorframe,"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The silence that followed was heavy, broken only by Ptolemy's soft meow as the tabby wound between their legs, oblivious to the wreckage of two people standing …"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She stepped aside, not touching him as he passed"
1"It came out, small"
96.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He laughed bitterly (laugh)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.107
82.9120%