| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped aside [aside]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "He laughed bitterly [bitterly]" | | 3 | "Lucien said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 91.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "depths" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1176 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 659 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 6 | | Lucien | 3 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed louder than it should have in the narrow stairwell" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 22.19 | | std | 14.04 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 48 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 42 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 45 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 29.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell of cold tea and old paper—the familiar scent of Eva's place—suddenly felt suffocating." | | 1 | "In the moonlight, the demon-half of his heritage showed itself more clearly—the slight sharpness to his features, the way shadows seemed to cling to him a moment too long." | | 2 | "\"I know.\" He moved closer, close enough that she could see the amber in his left eye glowing faintly—a demon's tell." | | 3 | "She looked at him—at the slicked-back hair and the tailored suit and the cane that hid a blade sharp enough to carve through lies." |
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| 98.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 667 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.041979010494752625 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013493253373313344 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.64 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.719 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 48.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.38613861386138615 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Always demon underneath." | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 3.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair was damp" | | 1 | "He wore the same charcoal" | | 2 | "Her name left his lips" | | 3 | "She didn't move from the" | | 4 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 5 | "His heterochromatic eyes held hers:" | | 6 | "He glanced down the stairwell" | | 7 | "She looked past him." | | 8 | "She stepped aside, not touching" | | 9 | "He moved into the flat," | | 10 | "He navigated the labyrinth of" | | 11 | "he said, gesturing at the" | | 12 | "His jaw tightened" | | 13 | "She pushed off the doorway," | | 14 | "She needed something to do" | | 15 | "He was directly behind her" | | 16 | "She could feel the warmth" | | 17 | "he said quietly" | | 18 | "She set it down on" | | 19 | "Her voice cracked" |
| | ratio | 0.542 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolt turned with a" | | 1 | "Aurora's hand froze on the" | | 2 | "Lucien stood in the threshold," | | 3 | "His platinum hair was damp" | | 4 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 5 | "He wore the same charcoal" | | 6 | "Her name left his lips" | | 7 | "She didn't move from the" | | 8 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 9 | "The words came out sharper" | | 10 | "The smell of cold tea" | | 11 | "His heterochromatic eyes held hers:" | | 12 | "Aurora laughed, but there was" | | 13 | "He glanced down the stairwell" | | 14 | "She looked past him." | | 15 | "She stepped aside, not touching" | | 16 | "He moved into the flat," | | 17 | "He navigated the labyrinth of" | | 18 | "he said, gesturing at the" | | 19 | "Aurora leaned against the doorframe," |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 19 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence that followed was heavy, broken only by Ptolemy's soft meow as the tabby wound between their legs, oblivious to the wreckage of two people standing …" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped aside, not touching him as he passed" | | 1 | "It came out, small" |
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| 96.43% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He laughed bitterly (laugh)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.107 | | leniency | 0.214 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.107 | |