| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1379 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1379 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "etching" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "quivered" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "thundered" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "race" | | 18 | "intricate" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1362 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 76 | | wordCount | 1164 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.06 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Nyx | 15 | | Aurora | 24 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 16 | | Silver | 2 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Roots | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Dymas" | | 6 | "Roots" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.469 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though urging her forward" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.734 | | wordCount | 1362 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 96.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 27.8 | | std | 13.51 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 58 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 40 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of wildflowers and memory—time shifting, thick as honey one moment, then thinning until her pulse seemed to echo in her ears." | | 1 | "Nyx reached out; the motes parted around their inky fingers." | | 2 | "A gale of fragrance swept the hollow, sweet and cloying—ripe grapes, roasted chestnuts, sugar-drifted pastry." | | 3 | "The hollow opened onto a clearing that neither Aurora nor Nyx had seen before—nor, by the confused gleam in Isolde’s eyes, had she." | | 4 | "Pale blooms—flowering vines coiled around twisted branches—shivered in silence." | | 5 | "The water rippled, and she jerked back as a face swam to the surface—hers, but older, hollow-eyed, skin drawn tight across high cheekbones." | | 6 | "Time fractured; Aurora tread on fallen leaves that crackled into dust before her boots, then found herself stepping into a carpet of fresh spring grass." | | 7 | "In its center lay a monolith carved with intricate patterns—a tree sprouting from a chalice, its branches entwined with serpents." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1181 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "true dusk-blue shadow." |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02032176121930567 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002540220152413209 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 9.08 | | std | 5.4 | | cv | 0.594 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 59.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 29.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Only ripples remained." |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, voice drifting like" | | 1 | "They exhaled a whisper that" | | 2 | "She took a steadying breath." | | 3 | "she said, lips tilting into" | | 4 | "They slipped into the hollow." | | 5 | "Their glow pulsed in time" | | 6 | "She knelt with her head" | | 7 | "Its leaf-shaped edge drank the" | | 8 | "It bit with a chime" | | 9 | "They rounded the circle of" | | 10 | "They surveyed the hollow." | | 11 | "Her reflection trembled like smoke" | | 12 | "She knelt, lifting a shard." | | 13 | "She leaned forward." | | 14 | "She yanked her gaze away." | | 15 | "She clutched it, leaning back" | | 16 | "Her fingers hovered, then drifted" | | 17 | "She met Nyx’s violet gaze" | | 18 | "Its broken edge ran cool" | | 19 | "She rose, cradling the shard," |
| | ratio | 0.202 | |
| 21.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight pooled between ancient oaks," | | 1 | "Aurora stepped through the last" | | 2 | "The air tasted of wildflowers" | | 3 | "Isolde drifted ahead, skirts of" | | 4 | "she murmured, voice drifting like" | | 5 | "Nyx hovered at Aurora’s shoulder," | | 6 | "They exhaled a whisper that" | | 7 | "Aurora’s fingers closed around the" | | 8 | "The deep crimson Heartstone pulsed" | | 9 | "The Fae-Forged Blade at her" | | 10 | "She took a steadying breath." | | 11 | "Isolde paused beside a gnarled" | | 12 | "she said, lips tilting into" | | 13 | "They slipped into the hollow." | | 14 | "Phosphorescent fungi bloomed like lanterns." | | 15 | "Their glow pulsed in time" | | 16 | "Gossamer motes drifted through the" | | 17 | "Nyx reached out; the motes" | | 18 | "A low thrumming rose beneath" | | 19 | "Aurora crouched, pressed a hand" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde paused beside a gnarled root that arched over a mossy hollow." | | 1 | "The trees here leaned inward, their trunks twisted into gigantic arches that arched overhead, fingers clasped in silent council." | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed in time with Aurora’s steps, as though urging her forward." | | 3 | "Time fractured; Aurora tread on fallen leaves that crackled into dust before her boots, then found herself stepping into a carpet of fresh spring grass." | | 4 | "And as the monolith’s light pulsed once more, the arches above them bent closer, as if to listen." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, voice drifting like wind-chimes" | | 1 | "she said, lips tilting into a faint smile" | | 2 | "Nyx said, voice thin" |
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| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.314 | | leniency | 0.629 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |