Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0N5SCY929MBK3KPZAKP5V

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.008689
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Thethree deadbolts grated against the metal frame, one after another, a harsh rhythm in the quiet hallway. The curry house downstairs had shut down for the night, leaving only the faint, lingering scent of cumin and fried onions seeping up through the floorboards. Aurora turned the final lock and pulled the heavy door inward, expecting a takeaway delivery or perhaps Eva having forgotten her keys again. The hallway light flickered, casting a sickly yellow hue over the man standing on the threshold. He didn’t belong in the peeling paint and cramped landing of Brick Lane. He belonged in a high-rise in the City or a shadowy basement in Soho, somewhere the lighting was deliberate and the scents were expensive cologne rather than spicy takeout. Aurora’s hand froze on the doorknob. Her breath hitched, a sharp intake that she couldn’t suppress. Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than the entire contents of the flat behind her. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, highlighting the stark contrast of his eyes—one amber, one void black. He leaned slightly on an ivory-handled cane, the silver tip resting on the threadbare carpet. "Miss Carter." His voice was a low rumble, the French accent curling around the vowels like smoke. Aurora slammed the door. She moved fast, but he moved faster. The ivory tip of his cane jammed into the gap before the wood could meet the frame. A splinter of wood cracked off, flying past her ear. She threw her weight against the wood, gritting her teeth, but the leverage was all his. He pushed back, inexorable and calm. "Aurora. Open the door." "Go away, Lucien. I’m not playing this game." "This is not a game. Move your hand." "I’m calling Silas." "Silas cannot hear you from down the stairs, and your phone is on the sofa." She hesitated. He was right. She’d left her phone charging in the kitchen. The pressure against the wood increased, not violent, but relentless. Like a tide. He stepped inside, forcing her back. He closed the door with a soft click that was louder than a shout. He engaged the deadbolts, one by one, locking them in together. The flat felt suddenly smaller. The stacks of books, the towers of scrolls, the research papers covering every inch of the dining table usually felt like a comforting blanket of chaos. Now, with Lucien standing in the center of the room, they felt like clutter. He smoothed the lapel of his jacket, his gaze sweeping over the room with critical detachment before landing on her. "You look well." "I look busy. Get out." "And here I was, preparing a gratitude speech." "Gratitude?" Aurora crossed her arms, her fingers digging into her biceps. The small crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom ache from an old injury, but her focus was entirely on the man in front of her. "For what? Ruining my life? Or just the part where you decided you knew what was best for me?" Lucien walked further into the room. He avoided a pile of occult journals with practised grace, the cane tapping a soft rhythm on the floorboards. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, wound his way around Lucien’s trouser legs, purring loudly. "Traitor," Aurora muttered. Lucien bent down. He scooped the cat up with one hand, scratching him behind the ears. The amber eye focused on her, intense and unyielding. "Evan is in Glasgow. He will not return. You are safe." "I was safe before you decided to play judge and jury. I had a handle on it." "You had a restraining order and a fear that kept you awake at night. Now you have peace." "I have a criminal record for a bar fight I didn't start because of your 'fixers'!" Lucien placed Ptolemy gently on top of a stack of books. The cat settled in, kneading the paper. "Expunged. You know this." "I know you made a call. I know you pulled strings. And I know I didn't ask you to." She turned away, marching into the kitchenette to put distance between them. She needed water. She needed air. The small space was suffocating. She grabbed a glass from the drying rack, her hand trembling slightly. "You never ask, Rory. That is the problem." He was behind her. She hadn’t heard him move, but suddenly he was there, leaning against the narrow doorframe, blocking the exit. The scent of him hit her—sandalwood and ozone and something metallic, like the air before a storm. It overwhelmed the curry smell. "Don't call me that." "It is your name." "It’s what you called me when you were lying to me." "I never lied." "You omitted. You twisted. You manipulated. Same difference." Aurora turned on the tap. The water rushed out, loud in the silence. She filled the glass, staring into the swirling liquid. She couldn't look at him. Looking at him brought back the nights in the archives, the way his amber eye would soften when he looked at her, the feeling of his hand on the small of her back guiding her through a crowded room. The memory was a physical pain, sharp and jagged. "Eva isn't here." "I know. I did not come for Eva." Aurora shut off the tap. The silence rushed back in, heavy and charged. "Then why?" "Because I heard a rumor." She turned, leaning back against the counter. The cold edge dug into her spine. "You always hear rumors. That’s your business." "This one concerns you. Something is moving in the underground. Something that smells of the old magic. The kind you left behind." "I left the law, Lucien. Not the world." "You left everything. You ran here, hid yourself in this—" he gestured vaguely at the flat, "this paper fortress. But the shadows are lengthening. And you are connected, whether you like it or not." "I’m a delivery girl now. I carry noodles. I don't carry prophecies." He stepped closer. The kitchen was tiny. With one step, he was inside her personal space. She could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the way his pupils dilated. "You carry more than noodles. You carry that mark on your wrist." She instinctively pulled her left arm behind her back, hiding the scar. "That was an accident." "Was it?" "It was a glass table when I was six. You know this." "I know what you tell people. I know what you tell yourself." "Get out." She tried to push past him, but he caught her arm. His grip was firm, warm through the sleeve of her shirt. He didn't hurt her, but he didn't let go. The touch sent a jolt through her system, a dangerous mix of adrenaline and attraction she hated herself for feeling. "Let go." "Look at me." She looked up. The mismatched eyes bored into hers. The amber one swirled with something that looked dangerously like regret. "I did what I did because I could not watch him hurt you. Not again." "I never wanted a savior. I wanted a partner." "Partnership requires equality. You were drowning, Aurora. I threw you a rope." "You threw me an anchor." He released her arm, but he didn't step back. He raised a hand, his fingers hovering near her face, as if to touch her cheek, but stopped inches from her skin. His jaw tightened. "I would burn this city down before I let him touch you again." Aurora swallowed hard. Her heart hammered against her ribs, betraying her composure. She remembered the way he looked in the rain that night, the water dripping from his hair, the blood on his knuckles that wasn't his own. He was terrifying and beautiful, and she had fallen for him exactly because he was broken in the same places she was. "You don't get to make that choice for me." "Someone has to." "No. That’s where it ends. I make the choices now." She stared him down, refusing to break eye contact. The air between them crackled, the unsaid words hanging heavy in the cramped kitchen. The attraction was still there, a pull like gravity, but it was tangled up with the hurt. She wanted to kiss him and slap him in the same breath. Lucien lowered his hand. He stepped back, the moment breaking. He adjusted his cufflinks, the mask of the indifferent fixer sliding back into place. "Very well. You make the choices." "Then choose to leave." "I will leave. When I know you are safe for the night." "I have three deadbolts. I have a cricket bat under the bed. I’m fine." "And a cat that would likely aid a burglar." "Ptolemy has good instincts." "Does he?" Lucien glanced back toward the living room where the cat was sleeping. "He likes you. That worries me." "He likes everyone who feeds him." "Then he has poor taste." Aurora let out a short, sharp exhale that wasn't quite a laugh. The tension in her shoulders dropped an inch. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" He looked at her for a long moment. The mask slipped, just a fraction. The amber eye seemed to glow faintly in the dim light. "Because I missed you." The words hung in the air, raw and unpolished. Aurora felt the breath leave her lungs. She gripped the edge of the counter until her knuckles turned white. "Don't." "It is the truth." "It doesn't change anything." "It changes everything." He turned and walked out of the kitchen. Aurora listened to his footsteps crossing the living room, the tap of the cane growing fainter. The front door clicked open. The cool air from the hallway drifted in, chasing away the scent of ozone. "Rory." She didn't move. She stared at the water glass on the counter, watching a droplet slide down the side. "The locks," he said, his voice coming from the doorway. "Use them." The door clicked shut. The deadbolts didn't slide home. Aurora stood alone in the kitchen, the silence of the flat pressing in on her. She reached out and touched the spot in the air where his hand had been, her fingers trembling. The curry smell from downstairs seemed stronger now, cloying and heavy, but underneath it, she could still smell the sandalwood. She waited. She counted to ten. Then she walked to the door, threw the locks, and leaned her forehead against the cool wood.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.029
79.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"gently"
3"very"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stark"
2"weight"
3"comforting"
4"throbbed"
5"silence"
6"charged"
7"tension"
8"footsteps"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1741
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1226
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
City1
Soho1
Moreau1
French1
Lucien8
Ptolemy2
Aurora12
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"City"
3"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a comforting blanket of chaos"
1"felt like clutter"
2"quite a laugh"
3"seemed stronger now, cloying and heavy, but underneath it, she could still smell the sandalwood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.574
wordCount1741
matches
0"not violent, but relentless"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean17.24
std17.59
cv1.021
sampleLengths
066
158
216
355
42
515
64
756
84
98
108
113
1215
1326
1431
1565
163
175
188
1958
2038
213
2225
2311
2417
2518
2616
2718
284
2919
3035
318
3244
334
344
3511
363
378
3875
393
408
4113
422
435
4421
4522
468
4734
4812
4933
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was broken"
2"was tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was suffocating"
1"was sleeping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences175
ratio0.011
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, highlighting the stark contrast of his eyes—one amber, one void black."
1"The scent of him hit her—sandalwood and ozone and something metallic, like the air before a storm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1230
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.032520325203252036
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013008130081300813
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean9.95
std6.78
cv0.682
sampleLengths
017
126
223
316
413
529
66
710
822
918
1015
112
1215
134
147
1517
1610
1716
186
194
208
218
223
2315
242
253
268
2710
283
296
3014
3111
325
3326
3414
3520
363
375
388
3911
4028
4119
426
4319
4413
453
463
4713
489
4911
37.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.25142857142857145
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners44
30.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then she walked to the"
ratio0.009
23.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences108
matches
0"He didn’t belong in the"
1"He belonged in a high-rise"
2"Her breath hitched, a sharp"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"He leaned slightly on an"
5"His voice was a low"
6"She moved fast, but he"
7"She threw her weight against"
8"He pushed back, inexorable and"
9"He was right."
10"She’d left her phone charging"
11"He stepped inside, forcing her"
12"He closed the door with"
13"He engaged the deadbolts, one"
14"He smoothed the lapel of"
15"He avoided a pile of"
16"He scooped the cat up"
17"She turned away, marching into"
18"She needed water."
19"She needed air."
ratio0.491
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences108
matches
0"Thethree deadbolts grated against the"
1"The curry house downstairs had"
2"Aurora turned the final lock"
3"The hallway light flickered, casting"
4"He didn’t belong in the"
5"He belonged in a high-rise"
6"Aurora’s hand froze on the"
7"Her breath hitched, a sharp"
8"Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate"
9"His platinum blond hair was"
10"He leaned slightly on an"
11"His voice was a low"
12"Aurora slammed the door."
13"She moved fast, but he"
14"The ivory tip of his"
15"A splinter of wood cracked"
16"She threw her weight against"
17"He pushed back, inexorable and"
18"He was right."
19"She’d left her phone charging"
ratio0.954
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Now, with Lucien standing in"
ratio0.009
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Looking at him brought back the nights in the archives, the way his amber eye would soften when he looked at her, the feeling of his hand on the small of her ba…"
1"He raised a hand, his fingers hovering near her face, as if to touch her cheek, but stopped inches from her skin."
2"She remembered the way he looked in the rain that night, the water dripping from his hair, the blood on his knuckles that wasn't his own."
3"Aurora listened to his footsteps crossing the living room, the tap of the cane growing fainter."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora crossed, her fingers digging into her biceps"
1"he said, his voice coming from the doorway"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.029
77.3354%