Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0N8VSNP6MRKH5N21AD5RZ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 11s
Cost:
$0.001959
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk that echoed through the small flat. Rory pulled the door open, a cardboard container of leftover chow mein in one hand, her keys in the other. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, the dim hall light casting his sharp features into stark relief. Rain glistened on the shoulders of his tailored charcoal coat. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—taking her in with a slow, unnerving sweep. “Delivery’s downstairs,” she said, her voice flat. “You’re blocking the exit.” “Aurora.” Her name was a soft exhale on his lips, a sound she hadn’t heard in months. It felt like a key turning in a long-locked door. She didn’t move. “It’s Rory.” “Not to me.” His gaze dropped to the takeaway container. “Your tastes have… simplified.” “It’s efficient. Unlike this.” She gestured at him with the container. “What do you want, Lucien?” “A moment of your time. And possibly a towel. London is determined to drown us all tonight.” He didn’t wait for an invitation, simply stepped past her into the cramped space. His presence seemed to shrink the room, pushing against the towers of books and scrolls that littered every surface. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, emerged from behind a stack of grimoires, gave Lucien a disdainful look, and slunk away. Rory shut the door, the three deadbolts clicking back into place like a series of final judgements. She watched him survey the chaos of Eva’s research, his cane tapping softly against the floorboards. He stopped before a large map of the city, covered in Eva’s frantic red notations. “She’s still chasing whispers,” he observed. “She’s thorough. Unlike some people who just show up unannounced.” She stayed by the door, arms crossed. The chow mein was getting cold. “You didn’t answer me. What do you want?” He turned, his movements fluid, economical. “I require your particular brand of lateral thinking. A problem has arisen.” “Find another thinker. We’re done.” “Are we?” He took a step closer. The scent of rain and expensive cologne cut through the smell of old paper and spices from the curry house below. “The terms of our… parting… were never formally agreed upon.” “You stopped calling. I stopped answering. Seemed pretty formal to me.” Her heart hammered against her ribs, a traitorous drumbeat. She focused on the small crescent scar on her wrist, a childhood reminder to be careful. “A tactical error on my part. I assumed you needed space after the Evan situation.” “Don’t.” The word came out sharper than she intended. “Don’t use him as your excuse. You vanished.” “I recalibrated.” His amber eye seemed to catch the light, glowing faintly. “The work became… complicated. Involving parties you were better off not knowing.” “You decided what was better for me. How very demon of you.” A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. “Only half, I assure you. The half that knows when to walk away from a fight it can’t win.” He gestured around the flat. “This is a hiding place, Aurora. A very clever, very cluttered one. But a hiding place nonetheless. You are not a woman who delivers noodles and hides from the world.” “You have no idea what I am.” “Don’t I?” He was closer now, close enough for her to see the dampness in his platinum hair. “I know you solve puzzles that break other people. I know you left a promising future in Cardiff because it felt like a cage. I know the sight of your own blood makes you angrier than it makes you afraid.” His gaze dropped to her left wrist again, to the small, pale scar. “And I know you are currently calculating four different ways to get me out of this flat, only two of which involve the door.” Her breath hitched. He saw too much. He always had. That was the problem. “The first option involves that rather heavy-looking candlestick,” he continued, his voice a low murmur. “The second, a well-placed kick to my bad leg. The third, screaming for the owner of the curry house, who, if memory serves, owes Eva a favour. The fourth…” He paused, his black eye seeming to deepen into an endless void. “The fourth is to hear me out.” She hated that he was right. Hated that he could still map the pathways of her mind so easily. “You get five minutes.” “Generous.” He didn’t move back. “A book has gone missing from a private collection. Not just any book. A ledger. It details certain… transactions… between my world and yours. If it falls into the wrong hands, it will cause a war. Or worse, a very messy peace.” “And you need a delivery driver to find it?” “I need you to think like the man who stole it. A rather tedious academic from King’s College with a gambling problem and a death wish. He sees patterns where there are none. He’s hiding in plain sight.” “So find him.” “He’s been found.” Lucien’s expression darkened. “What’s left of him is currently being fished out of the Thames. The book, however, was not on his person. He passed it to someone. A final, desperate transaction before his creditors caught up.” The flat felt suddenly colder. “And you think I can find it.” “I think you are the only person in this city who might understand why a doomed man would trade a demonic ledger for…” He reached into his inside pocket and pulled out a small evidence bag. Inside was a single, crumpled ticket stub. “…a night at the bingo hall in Finsbury Park.” He held it out. Rory stared at the little piece of paper, her mind already whirring, the puzzle pieces clicking into place despite her best intentions. The academic. The debt. A last, bizarre trade. It was insane. It was brilliant. She didn’t take the bag. “Why come to me? You have other resources.” “Because they would not see the logic. They would see a mistake, a red herring. You…” He finally closed the last bit of distance between them. He didn’t touch her, but the air crackled with the nearness of it. “You see the one illogical move that wins the game. I need that. I have always needed that.” His voice had dropped to a whisper, the French accent more pronounced, a ghost of Marseille in a Brick Lane flat. It was the voice that had once talked her through panic attacks, that had whispered promises in the dark. It was the voice that had then gone silent for six months. The hurt was a fresh, bright thing inside her chest. “You don’t get to need things from me. Not anymore.” “This isn’t for me. It’s for the city you’ve chosen to hide in. The peace you’re enjoying.” His eyes held hers, one of fire, one of oblivion. “Or do you enjoy it? The endless scrolls, the smell of turmeric, the lonely dinners?” His gaze flicked to the forgotten container in her hand. Anger, hot and clean, flushed through her. “Get out.” “Aurora—” She shoved the container of chow mein into his chest. Grease stained the impeccable wool of his coat. “I said get out.” For a long moment, he just looked at the stain, then back at her face. A muscle ticked in his jaw. Then, with a slow, deliberate movement, he set his cane against the wall. He took the container from her hand and placed it on a precarious stack of books. He pulled a crisp, white handkerchief from his pocket and meticulously wiped the grease from his fingers. “No,” he said, his voice quiet and final. He crumpled the handkerchief and let it fall to the floor. Then his hands were on her face, cold from the rain outside, his touch shockingly gentle. He tilted her head up, forcing her to meet that impossible, dual-coloured gaze. “I am done walking away,” he whispered, his breath warm against her lips. “The five minutes are over.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.036
77.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1342
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1342
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"determined"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"stark"
2"efficient"
3"determined"
4"reminder"
5"calculating"
6"whisper"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1335
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount740
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.41
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva3
Lucien3
French1
Marseille1
Brick1
Lane1
Anger1
Rory3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a key turning in a long-locke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1335
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"hated that he"
1"Hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.67
std21.55
cv0.726
sampleLengths
035
145
211
327
45
514
616
768
848
96
1031
1118
125
1338
1436
1515
1617
1724
1812
1962
207
2195
2214
2363
2423
2547
269
2738
283
2940
3012
3152
3240
3313
3457
3552
3620
3752
389
391
4022
4167
428
4340
4418
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was getting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences104
ratio0.01
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—taking her in with a slow, unnerving sweep."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"impossible, dual-coloured gaze."
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.038926174496644296
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010738255033557046
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.84
std9.75
cv0.759
sampleLengths
015
120
216
310
419
57
64
717
810
93
102
1110
124
1311
145
1531
1619
1718
1817
1916
2015
216
2217
236
248
256
2612
275
287
2921
3010
3120
3216
3315
349
358
3612
3712
3812
398
4024
4130
427
4318
4453
4524
463
474
483
494
51.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.36538461538461536
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners38
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then, with a slow, deliberate"
1"Then his hands were on"
ratio0.029
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences70
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"she said, her voice flat"
2"Her name was a soft"
3"It felt like a key"
4"She didn’t move."
5"His gaze dropped to the"
6"She gestured at him with"
7"He didn’t wait for an"
8"His presence seemed to shrink"
9"She watched him survey the"
10"He stopped before a large"
11"She stayed by the door,"
12"He turned, his movements fluid,"
13"He took a step closer"
14"Her heart hammered against her"
15"She focused on the small"
16"His amber eye seemed to"
17"He gestured around the flat"
18"He was closer now, close"
19"His gaze dropped to her"
ratio0.657
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
3"Rain glistened on the shoulders"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"she said, her voice flat"
6"Her name was a soft"
7"It felt like a key"
8"She didn’t move."
9"His gaze dropped to the"
10"She gestured at him with"
11"He didn’t wait for an"
12"His presence seemed to shrink"
13"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, emerged from"
14"Rory shut the door, the"
15"She watched him survey the"
16"He stopped before a large"
17"She stayed by the door,"
18"The chow mein was getting"
19"He turned, his movements fluid,"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
11.36% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice flat"
1"he continued, his voice a low murmur"
2"He paused, his black eye seeming to deepen into an endless void"
3"he said, his voice quiet and final"
4"he whispered, his breath warm against her lips"
95.45% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he continued (continue)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.109
83.2678%