Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0NF1X58AT7X6M4JDJYZ64

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Duration:
57.2s
Cost:
$0.002956
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs descended into darkness, each step swallowing another degree of warmth. Detective Harlow Quinn kept one hand on the damp brick wall and the other near her service weapon, her boots echoing against stone that had no business existing beneath Camden Town. The Metropolitan Police liaison had given her the address twenty minutes ago—a disused entrance to an abandoned Tube station, they said. Nothing about the bone token pressed into her palm by the constable at the barrier, nothing about the way the air tasted of copper and old magic. She found the scene three levels down. Crime scenes possessed their own language, a vocabulary written in blood and displacement. Eighteen years had taught Quinn to read the stories carved into walls, the testimonies whispered by furniture pushed aside or glass shattered in particular patterns. This one spoke in riddles. The body lay near what had once been a ticket hall, sprawled across cobblestones that belonged to no London she knew. Brass fixtures lined the walls—sconces, brackets, gears meshed into the architecture like the skeleton of some vast mechanical creature. Stalls lined the perimeter, their wooden backs carved with symbols that made her eyes ache when she tried to focus on them. The place smelled of jasmine and rust and something else, something that tickled the back of her throat like a forgotten name. "Single victim," said a voice from her left. "Male, approximately forty. No identification, no wallet. Strange wounds on the torso." Quinn turned. A woman in round glasses stood from where she'd been crouching near the body, tucking a strand of red hair behind her left ear. The gesture was nervous, practiced, and her satchel—worn leather bulging with books—hung at her hip like an anchor. "You are?" "Eva Kowalski. British Museum, restricted archives." She held up a badge that looked official enough, though Quinn had learned not to trust anything that smelled this strongly of incense. "Consulting on the supernatural elements. I was already in the area when the call came through." "The call came through to us." Quinn stepped closer to the body, her shoes crunching on something granular. She looked down. Salt. Someone had salted the area around the victim in a rough circle, breaking the pattern in two places. "Who called it in?" "Anonymous tip. We don't know the caller. That's not unusual for this location." "This location." Quinn tasted the words. "Which is?" "The Veil Market. You didn't know?" She let the silence answer. Kowalski's green eyes widened slightly behind her glasses—a recalculation, Quinn noted, the same look she'd seen on suspects caught in their own web. "You're not a regular," Kowalski said slowly. "You're not one of us." "Metropolitan Police. I was sent to investigate a death." Quinn crouched beside the body, ignoring the way the salt scraped against her knees through her trousers. The victim's face was peaceful, almost serene, which never matched the chaos of actual violence. His hands were clean. His shoes were polished. "What are the wounds you mentioned?" Kowalski produced a small torch and angled it toward the torso. The wounds were precise—three clean incisions arranged in a triangle, each precisely two inches long. No ragged tearing, no bruising around the edges. The blood had pooled beneath him in a way that suggested he'd lain here for hours, undisturbed. "Clean cuts," Quinn murmured. "Like surgery." "Like ritual." "Ritual." She wrote nothing down—she never did, not at first. Memory served her better than notes, at least until the details had time to settle. "You said you were already in the area. Why?" "I work here. Research purposes." Kowalski gestured vaguely at the stalls, the brass fixtures, the whole impossible space. "This market trades in items that don't exist in the normal world. Antiquities. Artifacts. Things that have passed through..." She paused, searching for words. "Rifts. Portals. The boundaries between here and elsewhere." "And you investigate murders for them?" "I investigate anything that threatens the Veil Market's existence. This place exists because of fragile agreements. When someone dies here—especially someone from outside—it threatens those agreements." Kowalski's voice hardened. "My entire life is built around accessing knowledge that the world doesn't know exists. The Market is a part of that." Quinn stood. Her knees protested the cold dampness seeping through her trousers—she'd need to see a doctor about that later, the damp always worsened the old injury from her service years. The watch on her left wrist had slipped, and she adjusted it automatically, feeling the worn leather catch on her skin. "What do you know about the victim?" "His name was Gabriel Ashworth. He was a collector—high-end, well-funded, specialized in pre-Socratic artifacts. He had a reputation for acquiring things that should never have been sold." "Should never have been sold." Quinn turned the phrase over. "And someone killed him for that?" "Perhaps. Or perhaps he stole something and couldn't pay his debts. Or perhaps he violated the Market's laws in some other way." Kowalski shrugged. "The Market doesn't operate under your jurisdiction, Detective. We have our own justice." "Your own justice." Quinn walked the perimeter of the scene, noting where the salt circle broke. Two gaps, both on the eastern edge. Both aligned with something—she tilted her head, following the angle, and found it pointed toward a particular stall near the far wall. "This salt. Who placed it?" "I don't know. It was here when I arrived." "Likely the killer, then." "Perhaps. Or perhaps someone who wanted to contain whatever was released when he died." She stopped walking. "Released?" Kowalski hesitated. The nervous habit returned—hair tucked behind the left ear, fingers trembling slightly. "The wounds aren't just ritual. They're a gateway. A triangle carved into flesh creates an opening, and the salt..." She trailed off. "You're not supposed to know about this." "I'm standing in a Tube station that shouldn't exist, looking at a body with holes in its chest, and you're telling me I'm not supposed to know about it." Quinn's voice remained flat, level, the way it had been since she'd learned that emotion served no purpose in interrogation. "Talk to me about the gateways." "There's no time—" "There's no time for you to withhold evidence in a murder investigation, Ms. Kowalski. Not when I've got a body and a market full of people who clearly don't want the regular police here." She stepped closer, close enough to see the freckles standing out against Kowalski's suddenly pale complexion. "I lost a partner three years ago. Circumstances nobody would explain to me, because I wasn't supposed to know about whatever world he walked into. I'm not making that mistake again." Something shifted in Kowalski's expression. Recognition, perhaps—the weight of a similar loss. "The gateways connect spaces that shouldn't touch," Kowalski said quietly. "The Veil Market exists in the gap between our world and another. This body—these wounds—they opened a door. The salt was meant to keep whatever comes through the door contained." "And someone broke the salt circle." "Two people broke it. The gaps align with that stall." Kowalski turned, following Quinn's earlier gaze. "The stall of a dealer named Sorel. He trades in Shade-crafted items." "Shade?" "Beings made of shadow. Artisan-crafted, your codex would say. They make things that help navigate the spaces between worlds." Kowalski's voice dropped. "Your compass, Detective. The one you've been holding since you arrived." Quinn looked down. In her right hand, turned unconsciously toward the light, sat a small brass compass. Its face was etched with protective sigils she somehow knew she'd never seen before. Its needle spun lazily, listing toward the eastern stall. She hadn't picked it up. She looked back at the body, at the precise triangular wounds, at the broken salt circle. At the peaceful expression that had never made sense. "It wasn't a murder," Quinn said slowly. "It was an offering. Someone opened a door, and he was the price." "And someone took what came through." Kowalski's face had gone pale. "Someone broke the circle on purpose, after the gateway opened. They took what was on the other side and left him here to die." "Where?" "The compass will point us to them. It's attuned to rifts, to portals, to gaps between worlds. If something came through—" "It already is." The needle spun, steadied, pointed directly at the eastern stall. At the dealer named Sorel. At whatever waited behind the counter, wearing a human face and holding something it shouldn't possess. Quinn checked her watch. Two minutes had passed since she'd descended the stairs. She had time. She started walking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Kowalski said slowly [slowly]"
1"Kowalski gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"Kowalski said quietly [quietly]"
3"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.133
75.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1443
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
3"suddenly"
4"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1443
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"aligned"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"echoing"
2"shattered"
3"mechanical"
4"silence"
5"aligned"
6"weight"
7"navigate"
8"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1423
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The Metropolitan Police liaison had given her the address twenty minutes ago—a disused entrance to an abandoned Tube sta…"
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount814
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Kowalski"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Camden1
Town1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tube1
London1
Memory1
Kowalski13
Two2
Sorel1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Memory"
3"Kowalski"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"London"
3"Two"
globalScore0.456
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1423
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"learned that emotion"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean25.87
std22.47
cv0.868
sampleLengths
091
17
243
384
420
544
62
745
844
913
108
116
1228
1312
1455
1551
166
172
1834
1950
206
2150
2252
237
2427
2516
2637
2750
289
294
3014
314
3243
3355
343
3581
3612
3740
386
3928
401
4133
4240
435
4425
4520
4635
471
4821
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences112
ratio0.089
matches
0"The Metropolitan Police liaison had given her the address twenty minutes ago—a disused entrance to an abandoned Tube station, they said."
1"Brass fixtures lined the walls—sconces, brackets, gears meshed into the architecture like the skeleton of some vast mechanical creature."
2"The gesture was nervous, practiced, and her satchel—worn leather bulging with books—hung at her hip like an anchor."
3"Kowalski's green eyes widened slightly behind her glasses—a recalculation, Quinn noted, the same look she'd seen on suspects caught in their own web."
4"The wounds were precise—three clean incisions arranged in a triangle, each precisely two inches long."
5"\"Ritual.\" She wrote nothing down—she never did, not at first."
6"Her knees protested the cold dampness seeping through her trousers—she'd need to see a doctor about that later, the damp always worsened the old injury from her service years."
7"Both aligned with something—she tilted her head, following the angle, and found it pointed toward a particular stall near the far wall."
8"The nervous habit returned—hair tucked behind the left ear, fingers trembling slightly."
9"Recognition, perhaps—the weight of a similar loss."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount825
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02909090909090909
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01575757575757576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean12.71
std9.66
cv0.76
sampleLengths
012
131
221
327
47
513
625
75
821
919
1022
1122
128
1312
142
1524
1618
172
1829
1916
2018
213
221
2318
244
2513
266
272
286
295
3023
317
325
3326
3415
354
364
376
3811
3915
408
4117
424
432
442
4510
4615
479
4818
4924
69.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4732142857142857
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences68
matches
0"She found the scene three"
1"She held up a badge"
2"She looked down."
3"She let the silence answer."
4"His hands were clean."
5"His shoes were polished."
6"She wrote nothing down—she never"
7"She paused, searching for words"
8"Her knees protested the cold"
9"She stopped walking."
10"She trailed off"
11"She stepped closer, close enough"
12"Its face was etched with"
13"Its needle spun lazily, listing"
14"She hadn't picked it up."
15"She looked back at the"
16"She had time."
17"She started walking."
ratio0.265
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"The stairs descended into darkness,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn kept one"
2"The Metropolitan Police liaison had"
3"Nothing about the bone token"
4"She found the scene three"
5"Crime scenes possessed their own"
6"This one spoke in riddles."
7"The body lay near what"
8"Brass fixtures lined the walls—sconces,"
9"Stalls lined the perimeter, their"
10"The place smelled of jasmine"
11"A woman in round glasses"
12"The gesture was nervous, practiced,"
13"She held up a badge"
14"Quinn stepped closer to the"
15"She looked down."
16"Someone had salted the area"
17"Quinn tasted the words"
18"She let the silence answer."
19"Kowalski's green eyes widened slightly"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn kept one hand on the damp brick wall and the other near her service weapon, her boots echoing against stone that had no business existing…"
1"The place smelled of jasmine and rust and something else, something that tickled the back of her throat like a forgotten name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn stepped, her shoes crunching on something granular"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.033
80.4985%