| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Kowalski said slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Kowalski gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 2 | "Kowalski said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Quinn said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.733 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 75.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "precisely" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "shattered" | | 3 | "mechanical" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "aligned" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "navigate" | | 8 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1423 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Metropolitan Police liaison had given her the address twenty minutes ago—a disused entrance to an abandoned Tube sta…" |
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| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 814 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.09 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Kowalski" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 17 | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | London | 1 | | Memory | 1 | | Kowalski | 13 | | Two | 2 | | Sorel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Memory" | | 3 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Town" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Two" |
| | globalScore | 0.456 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1423 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 25.87 | | std | 22.47 | | cv | 0.868 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 81 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.089 | | matches | | 0 | "The Metropolitan Police liaison had given her the address twenty minutes ago—a disused entrance to an abandoned Tube station, they said." | | 1 | "Brass fixtures lined the walls—sconces, brackets, gears meshed into the architecture like the skeleton of some vast mechanical creature." | | 2 | "The gesture was nervous, practiced, and her satchel—worn leather bulging with books—hung at her hip like an anchor." | | 3 | "Kowalski's green eyes widened slightly behind her glasses—a recalculation, Quinn noted, the same look she'd seen on suspects caught in their own web." | | 4 | "The wounds were precise—three clean incisions arranged in a triangle, each precisely two inches long." | | 5 | "\"Ritual.\" She wrote nothing down—she never did, not at first." | | 6 | "Her knees protested the cold dampness seeping through her trousers—she'd need to see a doctor about that later, the damp always worsened the old injury from her service years." | | 7 | "Both aligned with something—she tilted her head, following the angle, and found it pointed toward a particular stall near the far wall." | | 8 | "The nervous habit returned—hair tucked behind the left ear, fingers trembling slightly." | | 9 | "Recognition, perhaps—the weight of a similar loss." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 825 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02909090909090909 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01575757575757576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 12.71 | | std | 9.66 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 69.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4732142857142857 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She found the scene three" | | 1 | "She held up a badge" | | 2 | "She looked down." | | 3 | "She let the silence answer." | | 4 | "His hands were clean." | | 5 | "His shoes were polished." | | 6 | "She wrote nothing down—she never" | | 7 | "She paused, searching for words" | | 8 | "Her knees protested the cold" | | 9 | "She stopped walking." | | 10 | "She trailed off" | | 11 | "She stepped closer, close enough" | | 12 | "Its face was etched with" | | 13 | "Its needle spun lazily, listing" | | 14 | "She hadn't picked it up." | | 15 | "She looked back at the" | | 16 | "She had time." | | 17 | "She started walking." |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 26.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs descended into darkness," | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn kept one" | | 2 | "The Metropolitan Police liaison had" | | 3 | "Nothing about the bone token" | | 4 | "She found the scene three" | | 5 | "Crime scenes possessed their own" | | 6 | "This one spoke in riddles." | | 7 | "The body lay near what" | | 8 | "Brass fixtures lined the walls—sconces," | | 9 | "Stalls lined the perimeter, their" | | 10 | "The place smelled of jasmine" | | 11 | "A woman in round glasses" | | 12 | "The gesture was nervous, practiced," | | 13 | "She held up a badge" | | 14 | "Quinn stepped closer to the" | | 15 | "She looked down." | | 16 | "Someone had salted the area" | | 17 | "Quinn tasted the words" | | 18 | "She let the silence answer." | | 19 | "Kowalski's green eyes widened slightly" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn kept one hand on the damp brick wall and the other near her service weapon, her boots echoing against stone that had no business existing…" | | 1 | "The place smelled of jasmine and rust and something else, something that tickled the back of her throat like a forgotten name." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn stepped, her shoes crunching on something granular" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.033 | |