| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped aside [aside]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 82.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1145 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "reluctantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1145 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "mosaic" | | 3 | "practiced ease" | | 4 | "chilled" | | 5 | "fleeting" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "amidst" | | 10 | "palpable" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "anticipation" | | 15 | "navigating" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "solace" | | 20 | "velvet" | | 21 | "dance" | | 22 | "enigma" | | 23 | "reminder" | | 24 | "testament" | | 25 | "echo" | | 26 | "unwavering" | | 27 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1131 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 944 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Rory | 18 | | London | 2 | | Lucien | 13 | | Eva | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.547 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a proposition but more than an observation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.884 | | wordCount | 1131 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a proposition but more than an observation" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 30.57 | | std | 16.4 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva’s kitchen had been a retreat since Rory's early days in London—a refuge of familiarity in a city tamed by the unknown." | | 1 | "It wasn't just history; it was a tempest confined to the contours of their eyes and sounds of their unspoken confessions." | | 2 | "Perhaps, Rory mused, he embodied a paradox—a bridge laced with silver threads stretched taut between worlds." | | 3 | "Standing meters apart but somehow intimately bound, their history surfaced—weeks spent in hidden cafes parsing cryptic parchments, and longer nights blinking back flickering warmth in dim corners." | | 4 | "Lucien was like a riddle wrapped in an enigma—a puzzle Rory had long ceased trying to solve, albeit reluctantly." | | 5 | "Lucien moved across the tangled room to her side, a moth drawn to instinct's flame—their proximity a testament to silent negotiations between past and future." | | 6 | "Rory took a breath, like drawing courage from air—the kind of courage that expected meanings hiding in plain sight, nestled within mundane exchanges." | | 7 | "It was an invitation the universe knew all too well—a continuum of longing and circuits chasing the beginning’s end." | | 8 | "Rory closed her eyes briefly, contemplating what it meant to trust again—to hold onto threads once abandoned." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 957 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03970741901776385 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01671891327063741 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.88 | | std | 6.37 | | cv | 0.428 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 76.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4605263157894737 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she sought the warmth" | | 1 | "Perhaps it was both an" | | 2 | "Perhaps, Rory mused, he embodied" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 88.75% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t come here looking" | | 1 | "Her eyes traced the curling" | | 2 | "His hair glinted under the" | | 3 | "He leaned casually on his" | | 4 | "His voice rolled like a" | | 5 | "She wasn't sure whether this" | | 6 | "They remained far enough to" | | 7 | "It wasn't just history; it" | | 8 | "His remark prompted a slight" | | 9 | "It was a question she" | | 10 | "She stepped aside, letting him" | | 11 | "He seemed to fit this" | | 12 | "Their paths briefly entwined, only" | | 13 | "His voice, velvet with pointed" | | 14 | "His smile was a quirk," | | 15 | "he confessed, eyes softening at" | | 16 | "It pulled at something tender," | | 17 | "His laugh came as low" | | 18 | "she acknowledged, not quite a" | | 19 | "It was an invitation the" |
| | ratio | 0.328 | |
| 30.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva's flat on Brick Lane" | | 1 | "Rory leaned against the faded" | | 2 | "She hadn’t come here looking" | | 3 | "Eva’s kitchen had been a" | | 4 | "Eva was out, embroiled in" | | 5 | "Her eyes traced the curling" | | 6 | "A soft rap jarred her" | | 7 | "The door swung open, admitting" | | 8 | "Lucien stood framed by the" | | 9 | "His hair glinted under the" | | 10 | "He leaned casually on his" | | 11 | "His voice rolled like a" | | 12 | "The unexpectedness of his appearance" | | 13 | "Aurora swallowed, her mind dancing" | | 14 | "She wasn't sure whether this" | | 15 | "A smirk tugged at his" | | 16 | "Lucien's words hovered between them," | | 17 | "They remained far enough to" | | 18 | "It wasn't just history; it" | | 19 | "Rory gestured to the cat" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Before hesitation could creep in," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane, the kind that whispered of secrets." | | 1 | "Rory's lips curved into a gentle smile, slow as falling rain, eyes meeting amber hues that spoke of things unseen, unexplored." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he confessed, eyes softening at the corners" | | 1 | "she acknowledged, not quite a proposition but more than an observation" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien noted (note)" | | 1 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "pointed familiarity coaxed (coax)" | | 3 | "he confessed (confess)" | | 4 | "she acknowledged (acknowledge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |