Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0NKHG7P1K84CHZMSNDD32

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Duration:
11.9s
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$0.017140
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Eva's flat on Brick Lane held a perpetual scent of turmeric mingled with incense. Rory leaned against the faded wall, cradling an empty mug and watching Ptolemy weave through a jungle of stacked books. She hadn’t come here looking for peace, not tonight. Instead, she sought the warmth of old friendship, a place to mend the fabric of her heart. Eva’s kitchen had been a retreat since Rory's early days in London—a refuge of familiarity in a city tamed by the unknown. But outside, chaos now mirrored the inner turmoil. Eva was out, embroiled in some obscure pursuit, leaving Rory alone in the cluttered enclave with unanswered calls and unchecked emotions. Her eyes traced the curling spines of unearthed novels and whispered notes, a mosaic telling stories as tangled as her own. A soft rap jarred her from quiet contemplation. Before hesitation could creep in, Rory set down the mug and crossed the room, hand instinctively reaching to unlatch the three deadbolts with practiced ease. The door swung open, admitting a gust of chilled London air and a haunting visage wrapped in tailored elegance. Lucien stood framed by the dim corridor light, casting shadows that clung to him like lost dreams. His hair glinted under the sparse illumination, creating an ethereal halo juxtaposed by reality and lore. One amber eye caught Rory's gaze first, the other dark as the secrets held between them. He leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane, the kind that whispered of secrets. "There you are, Rory." His voice rolled like a long-forgotten melody stirred by fleeting memories, low and smooth. The unexpectedness of his appearance heightened the electric tension. Aurora swallowed, her mind dancing between concern and curiosity. She wasn't sure whether this was fate or misfortune rearing its head once again. “Oh, and here you are, Lucien. What brings you here? Because I'm sure it's not the curry.” A smirk tugged at his lips, momentarily lighting his face with a touch of amusement, though it quickly faded amidst a façade of formality. “I’ve never had the palate for it. But I needed to see you.” Lucien's words hovered between them, palpable yet laced with something unsaid. They remained far enough to maintain their careful boundary, these two who once flirted with closer proximities. It wasn't just history; it was a tempest confined to the contours of their eyes and sounds of their unspoken confessions. Rory gestured to the cat watching Lucien intently. “Ptolemy doesn’t usually take kindly to unannounced guests. But maybe it’s different with you.” The comment slipped through, wrapped in humor. Perhaps it was both an invitation and a question. An opening for whatever had brought him back into this microcosm of a first-floor universe. Lucien studied her for a moment, his stare alighting on the crescent scar visible at her wrist. Rory shifted slightly, uncomfortable with the attention, memories pressing at the edges of her mind like ghosts tapping against glass. “Some things never change between us, do they, Rory?” Rory met his gaze head-on, warmth masked by resolve. His remark prompted a slight tilt of her chin. It was a question she often asked herself, yet she never stumbled upon the answers her heart anticipated. “The past follows you relentlessly, like a stray dog hoping for attention. Sometimes you need to face it head-on." She stepped aside, letting him in. Lucien released a quiet breath as he stepped over the threshold into the chaos of mismatched furniture and paper landslides. He seemed to fit this world, despite its lack of sophistication. Perhaps, Rory mused, he embodied a paradox—a bridge laced with silver threads stretched taut between worlds. Silence drew them together, the crackle of anticipation cutting through the muted whir of central heating. Lucien’s presence in the enclosed space stirred the air with hints of sage and rain-wet earth, an essence Rory found secretly navigating yet comforting. Standing meters apart but somehow intimately bound, their history surfaced—weeks spent in hidden cafes parsing cryptic parchments, and longer nights blinking back flickering warmth in dim corners. Their paths briefly entwined, only to be wedged open by their own dealings, heroes in opposing quests soliciting truths that eclipsed desire. “Still surrounded by books, I see,” Lucien noted, running his fingers along spines like exploring familiar terrain. “I assume this is Eva's doing.” "Occasionally they're my escape route,” Rory admitted, watching casually. “Transfixing. But they can't talk back, can they?" Lucien's chuckle was a soft rumble, tethered in warmth rather than mockery. “Rory Carter, the only woman I know who finds solace in written shadows. Maybe this is why we work... whenever we work, that is.” His voice, velvet with pointed familiarity, coaxed a subtle quake in Rory's composure. “Does it always have to regress to that?” His smile was a quirk, a dance of light crossing features carved by stories he rarely divulged. Lucien was like a riddle wrapped in an enigma—a puzzle Rory had long ceased trying to solve, albeit reluctantly. “I came because... I think I need that reminder," he confessed, eyes softening at the corners. "You tend to be... grounding, among other things." It pulled at something tender, his honesty amid their shared dichotomy. But Rory remained still, reflective. Lucien moved across the tangled room to her side, a moth drawn to instinct's flame—their proximity a testament to silent negotiations between past and future. Rory took a breath, like drawing courage from air—the kind of courage that expected meanings hiding in plain sight, nestled within mundane exchanges. "What would you want from me? Clarity or chaos?" His laugh came as low as a resonate echo, one caught on the edge of breath. "I suppose I want both, knowing you." Rory's lips curved into a gentle smile, slow as falling rain, eyes meeting amber hues that spoke of things unseen, unexplored. “This feels... different,” she acknowledged, not quite a proposition but more than an observation. Lucien's gaze fell into hers, unwavering. “Perhaps it needs to be, Rory.” The gentleness in his voice, the intention woven into the space between them, carried weight. It was an invitation the universe knew all too well—a continuum of longing and circuits chasing the beginning’s end. Rory closed her eyes briefly, contemplating what it meant to trust again—to hold onto threads once abandoned. Time might alter outcomes, but she was here in this moment, an echo refracted through his arrival. Ptolemy wriggled closer, a silent spectator approving their truce. Lucien took it as a sign, resting his hand on her back, a gesture of reconciliation and something deeper. “Can we stitch truth between us, Rory?” Lucien's question, emboldened by sincerity, hung in the air. Rory nodded slightly. “One truth at a time.” Her soft promise carried seeds of untamed hope ready to bloom in the night's quiet embrace.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.1
82.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"warmth"
count4
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"mosaic"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"chilled"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"anticipation"
count1
15
word"navigating"
count1
16
word"comforting"
count1
17
word"desire"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"solace"
count1
20
word"velvet"
count1
21
word"dance"
count1
22
word"enigma"
count1
23
word"reminder"
count1
24
word"testament"
count1
25
word"echo"
count2
26
word"unwavering"
count1
27
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"traced"
2"mosaic"
3"practiced ease"
4"chilled"
5"fleeting"
6"electric"
7"tension"
8"dancing"
9"amidst"
10"palpable"
11"unspoken"
12"resolve"
13"silence"
14"anticipation"
15"navigating"
16"comforting"
17"desire"
18"familiar"
19"solace"
20"velvet"
21"dance"
22"enigma"
23"reminder"
24"testament"
25"echo"
26"unwavering"
27"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"d in warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount944
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy2
Rory18
London2
Lucien13
Eva3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.547
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a proposition but more than an observation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.884
wordCount1131
matches
0"not quite a proposition but more than an observation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean30.57
std16.4
cv0.537
sampleLengths
060
172
28
344
462
54
646
717
837
949
1022
1131
1237
139
1436
1525
1647
1740
1849
1923
2017
2149
228
2336
2424
2541
2623
279
2823
2921
3014
3112
3234
3334
3428
3516
3624
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences76
ratio0.118
matches
0"Eva’s kitchen had been a retreat since Rory's early days in London—a refuge of familiarity in a city tamed by the unknown."
1"It wasn't just history; it was a tempest confined to the contours of their eyes and sounds of their unspoken confessions."
2"Perhaps, Rory mused, he embodied a paradox—a bridge laced with silver threads stretched taut between worlds."
3"Standing meters apart but somehow intimately bound, their history surfaced—weeks spent in hidden cafes parsing cryptic parchments, and longer nights blinking back flickering warmth in dim corners."
4"Lucien was like a riddle wrapped in an enigma—a puzzle Rory had long ceased trying to solve, albeit reluctantly."
5"Lucien moved across the tangled room to her side, a moth drawn to instinct's flame—their proximity a testament to silent negotiations between past and future."
6"Rory took a breath, like drawing courage from air—the kind of courage that expected meanings hiding in plain sight, nestled within mundane exchanges."
7"It was an invitation the universe knew all too well—a continuum of longing and circuits chasing the beginning’s end."
8"Rory closed her eyes briefly, contemplating what it meant to trust again—to hold onto threads once abandoned."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03970741901776385
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01671891327063741
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean14.88
std6.37
cv0.428
sampleLengths
014
120
29
317
422
58
621
721
88
925
1019
1117
1216
1316
1413
154
1614
179
189
1914
2017
2124
2213
2311
2417
2521
268
2714
287
299
3015
3117
3220
339
349
359
3618
3725
3820
3911
4016
4116
4224
4327
4422
4517
466
479
488
4912
76.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4605263157894737
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"Instead, she sought the warmth"
1"Perhaps it was both an"
2"Perhaps, Rory mused, he embodied"
ratio0.047
88.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences64
matches
0"She hadn’t come here looking"
1"Her eyes traced the curling"
2"His hair glinted under the"
3"He leaned casually on his"
4"His voice rolled like a"
5"She wasn't sure whether this"
6"They remained far enough to"
7"It wasn't just history; it"
8"His remark prompted a slight"
9"It was a question she"
10"She stepped aside, letting him"
11"He seemed to fit this"
12"Their paths briefly entwined, only"
13"His voice, velvet with pointed"
14"His smile was a quirk,"
15"he confessed, eyes softening at"
16"It pulled at something tender,"
17"His laugh came as low"
18"she acknowledged, not quite a"
19"It was an invitation the"
ratio0.328
30.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences64
matches
0"Eva's flat on Brick Lane"
1"Rory leaned against the faded"
2"She hadn’t come here looking"
3"Eva’s kitchen had been a"
4"Eva was out, embroiled in"
5"Her eyes traced the curling"
6"A soft rap jarred her"
7"The door swung open, admitting"
8"Lucien stood framed by the"
9"His hair glinted under the"
10"He leaned casually on his"
11"His voice rolled like a"
12"The unexpectedness of his appearance"
13"Aurora swallowed, her mind dancing"
14"She wasn't sure whether this"
15"A smirk tugged at his"
16"Lucien's words hovered between them,"
17"They remained far enough to"
18"It wasn't just history; it"
19"Rory gestured to the cat"
ratio0.859
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Before hesitation could creep in,"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane, the kind that whispered of secrets."
1"Rory's lips curved into a gentle smile, slow as falling rain, eyes meeting amber hues that spoke of things unseen, unexplored."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he confessed, eyes softening at the corners"
1"she acknowledged, not quite a proposition but more than an observation"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien noted (note)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
2"pointed familiarity coaxed (coax)"
3"he confessed (confess)"
4"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
80.3712%