Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0NZK3B7P5SP05XF66HT2F

Run Details

Duration:
57.0s
Cost:
$0.132150

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Aldwych station reeked of rust and stale air. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the frozen escalator, her torch beam cutting through darkness thick as tar. Each footstep echoed off the tiled walls, multiplying until it sounded like an army marching into the bowels of London. "Body's down on the platform." Detective Sergeant Chen waited at the bottom, his breath misting in the underground chill. "Fair warning, Quinn—this one's odd." Quinn's jaw tightened. In eighteen years on the force, she'd learned that 'odd' rarely meant anything good. The platform stretched before them, lit by portable work lamps that threw harsh shadows across cracked tiles and peeling advertisements from the 1990s. The victim lay sprawled near the platform edge. Male, mid-thirties, expensive suit. His limbs bent at unnatural angles, as if someone had rearranged him like a mannequin. "Marcus Webb, antiques dealer from Kensington." Chen consulted his tablet. "Closed-circuit cameras show him entering through the emergency exit at 11:47 last night. Alone." Quinn crouched beside the body, pulling on latex gloves. Webb's eyes stared at nothing, pupils blown wide. No visible wounds. No blood. She checked his pockets—empty except for a receipt from a Camden coffee shop, timestamped yesterday afternoon. "Cause of death?" "That's where it gets interesting." Chen shifted his weight. "Pathologist's preliminary assessment suggests cardiac arrest, but..." "But?" "His body temperature. When first responders arrived at 6 AM, he was still warm. Too warm for someone who'd been dead seven hours in this freezer." Quinn stood, studying the scene. The platform lay thick with dust, undisturbed except for Webb's footprints leading from the service corridor. A single set of tracks. "He came here alone, walked to this spot, and dropped dead?" She shook her head. "People don't just wander into abandoned Tube stations for a midnight stroll." "Maybe meeting someone? Drug deal gone wrong?" "In a three-piece suit?" Quinn examined Webb's manicured nails, his Italian leather shoes. "And look at the dust pattern around the body. See those sweeping marks? Like someone dragged something away." Chen frowned at his tablet. "Nothing on the cameras. Just Webb entering, then... nothing. Next footage shows the body." "Time gap?" "Forty-three minutes of static. Technical says it's interference, probably from the old electrical systems down here." Quinn's torch beam swept across the platform, pausing on fresh scratches in the tile near the tunnel mouth. She moved closer. The marks formed a rough circle, with symbols carved around the perimeter. Her breath caught. "Chen, get forensics to photograph these markings. Full documentation." "What are they?" She almost said she didn't know. Almost lied. But the symbols tugged at something buried deep, a memory she'd spent three years trying to forget. Morris had drawn similar marks in his notebook the night before— "Ma'am?" Chen's voice pulled her back. "You recognize them?" "Maybe." Quinn's fingers found the worn leather of her watch strap, a nervous habit she'd developed after Morris died. "Any unusual items found near the body?" "Just this." Chen produced an evidence bag containing what looked like a small compass. Brass casing green with age, its face etched with intricate patterns. Quinn's pulse quickened. She'd seen those etchings before, in Morris's final case files. The ones that made no sense. The ones she'd been ordered to forget. "Run the serial number on that compass. Check antique dealers, auction houses, private collectors. Someone will have records." "Already did." Chen scrolled through his tablet. "Here's the interesting part—it was reported stolen six months ago from a private collection in Belgravia. Owner never expected to see it again, said it was 'unique' and 'irreplaceable.'" "Who reported Webb's body?" "Anonymous tip to 999. Traced to a payphone in Camden Market." Camden. Where Webb had coffee yesterday. Where those symbols pointed, if she remembered Morris's notes correctly. Quinn's mind raced, connecting dots that shouldn't connect. "Pull everything on Webb's business. Client lists, recent transactions, financial records. And Chen?" She met his eyes. "Keep this between us for now. Something's not right here." "You think he was murdered?" Quinn looked back at the body, at the impossible angles of his limbs, the marks on the platform, the compass that shouldn't exist. Three years ago, she would have said yes. Three years ago, she believed murder was the worst thing that could happen in London's dark corners. "I think Marcus Webb found something he shouldn't have." She pocketed her torch. "And I think whoever killed him wanted us to find that compass." "Why?" The question hung between them. Quinn had learned the hard way that some questions were better left unasked. Morris had asked questions. Morris had connected dots. Morris had died screaming about things that couldn't be real. "Because someone's sending a message." She turned toward the exit. "Get a full team down here. I want every inch of this platform documented. And Chen? No one else comes down here without my authorization." "Where are you going?" "Camden Market. If our anonymous tipster used a payphone there, maybe someone saw them." Chen hesitated. "Quinn, those symbols... I've seen them before. There's a professor at University College, studies ancient languages. She might—" "No academics." The words came out sharper than intended. "We handle this in-house." As she climbed back toward street level, Quinn's mind churned. The compass, the symbols, the impossible body temperature—it all pointed to things she'd spent three years denying. Things that had cost her Morris. Things that lived in London's shadows and fed on the curious. But Webb was dead, and someone had wanted him found. Someone who knew she'd recognize the signs. Someone who was either very stupid or very confident. Quinn emerged into grey morning light, Camden's streets already filling with early commuters. She'd start with the coffee shop, then work her way through Webb's life piece by piece. Somewhere in that carefully constructed existence lay the thread that led him to die alone on an abandoned platform, clutching a compass that pointed to places that shouldn't exist. Her phone buzzed. Chen, already: "Quinn, you need to see this. Webb's appointment calendar shows a meeting yesterday. Client name: E. Kowalski." Quinn's blood ran cold. She knew that name. From Morris's files. From the case that had killed him. The game, it seemed, had begun again.
total_cost0.13215

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.651
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1048
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
1"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1048
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"blown wide"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"churned"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"blown wide"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
6"pulse"
7"quickened"
8"traced"
9"raced"
10"churned"
11"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1039
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount649
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Aldwych1
Harlow1
Quinn14
London3
Sergeant1
Chen9
Camden3
Webb6
Italian1
Morris9
Brass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Chen"
4"Webb"
5"Morris"
6"Brass"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
globalScore0.421
windowScore0.5
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like an army marching into the bow"
1"looked like a small compass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1039
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"knew that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean22.11
std13.79
cv0.624
sampleLengths
046
124
240
327
424
538
63
716
81
926
1026
1127
127
1331
1419
152
1616
1736
189
193
2036
219
2226
2325
2426
2518
2636
274
2811
2924
3027
315
3248
3325
341
3536
3635
374
3814
3920
4013
4144
4226
4358
4422
4518
467
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"been ordered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences103
ratio0.029
matches
0"She checked his pockets—empty except for a receipt from a Camden coffee shop, timestamped yesterday afternoon."
1"Morris had drawn similar marks in his notebook the night before—"
2"The compass, the symbols, the impossible body temperature—it all pointed to things she'd spent three years denying."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount537
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.0335195530726257
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0074487895716946
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.09
std6.47
cv0.641
sampleLengths
010
116
220
319
45
53
614
723
88
94
1015
1110
1214
139
148
153
162
1716
183
199
207
211
2226
235
2416
255
2615
2712
287
2913
3018
315
3214
332
3416
3518
363
3712
383
399
403
416
422
4317
4411
456
463
4719
487
4914
80.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.5436893203883495
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners56
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Somewhere in that carefully constructed"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences69
matches
0"His limbs bent at unnatural"
1"She checked his pockets—empty except"
2"She shook her head"
3"She moved closer."
4"Her breath caught."
5"She almost said she didn't"
6"She'd seen those etchings before,"
7"She met his eyes"
8"She pocketed her torch"
9"She turned toward the exit"
10"She'd start with the coffee"
11"Her phone buzzed."
12"She knew that name."
ratio0.188
54.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences69
matches
0"The abandoned Aldwych station reeked"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"Each footstep echoed off the"
3"Detective Sergeant Chen waited at"
4"Quinn's jaw tightened."
5"The platform stretched before them,"
6"The victim lay sprawled near"
7"His limbs bent at unnatural"
8"Chen consulted his tablet"
9"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
10"Webb's eyes stared at nothing,"
11"She checked his pockets—empty except"
12"Chen shifted his weight"
13"Quinn stood, studying the scene."
14"The platform lay thick with"
15"A single set of tracks."
16"She shook her head"
17"Quinn examined Webb's manicured nails,"
18"Chen frowned at his tablet."
19"Quinn's torch beam swept across"
ratio0.812
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The platform stretched before them, lit by portable work lamps that threw harsh shadows across cracked tiles and peeling advertisements from the 1990s."
1"His limbs bent at unnatural angles, as if someone had rearranged him like a mannequin."
2"Things that lived in London's shadows and fed on the curious."
3"Somewhere in that carefully constructed existence lay the thread that led him to die alone on an abandoned platform, clutching a compass that pointed to places …"
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Detective Sergeant Chen waited, his breath misting in the underground chill"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.9285%