Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0NZX7N0DGKFX26C58B0Y3

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
47.5s
Cost:
$0.016934
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Tree roots curled from the earth like living sculptures, their bark dappled with silver whorls that shimmered whenever the air shifted. Rory squinted, scrubbing a gloved hand over her eyes. A path wound ahead—a suggestion more than a track—threaded by pearls of dew, though the sky above shimmered between dusk and dawn with no clear source of light. Her foot crunched a wild violet. The sound echoed, muffled, like she’d dropped into a dream. She glanced over her shoulder. Nyx’s form pooled at her left, an elongated silhouette drawn up tall, violet eyes aglow in the gentle twilight. Near Nyx, Isolde moved daintily, silver hair and purple gaze gliding untouched by brambles or leaf-matter. Her bare feet sank into nothing; grass parted and healed behind every step, as if erasing her existence. Rory’s pulse thumped in her ears. She reached unconsciously for the Fae-forged blade at her hip, fingers brushing the bone-cold hilt. Warmth pulsed against her sternum. The Heartstone Pendant was alive with a faint heartbeat, soothing and disquieting at once. Nobody spoke. Not at first. Birds called in tongues outside the range of ordinary hearing—high, spiral trills, like laughter slowed and reversed. The canopy swam with colours wrong for any park: leaves burnished gold, blue, and blush, blossoms crystalline and heavy-scented on branches bent double. Between the trees, ancient stones stood watch, bark-grown and monumental. They whispered to themselves, nothing Rory’s mind could parse, just sense. She risked a word. “Is it safe here?” Isolde tipped her head, lips twitching in the half-shadow. Cool moonlight glinted along her jaw. “All havens have teeth, Aurora Carter. The Grove hungers kindly, but it does hunger.” Rory picked her way forward, shadowing Isolde’s steps. Under her boots, grass quickened green as emeralds and then faded to blue under shade. Her throat caught. She glanced at Nyx, half expecting reassurance. Nyx rippled into full solidity. Shoulders squared, the shadow-being’s form brushed a low bough. Petals pooled at their feet without disturbance, as though they’d slipped around them by choice. “Hel felt colder than this,” Nyx’s voice wafted, soundless at first, then a whisper in her left ear. Rory’s knuckles whitened on her courier bag. She smirked, brittle. “Means this is a treat?” A shadow-flicker of a grin passed across Nyx’s face—if that tear in the gloom could be called a face—and they drifted forward, violet eyes catching the diffused glow. Strange things blossomed from the path: a fox, luminous silver-blue, darted between two ancient oaks and stilled when Isolde approached, pressing its snout to her palm. The seer paused only a moment, stroking the creature’s velvet ears. Its pelt rippled like water and then, with a yawn, it dissolved into a drift of wildflowers, petals scattering into the windless air. Rory’s mouth fell open. “That’s not normal fox behaviour.” Isolde’s laughter, golden and low, rippled the stillness. “Fox and Grove are kin, here. Everything is both guest and host—often in the same breath.” They pushed further, the trees compressing. Space bent: one heartbeat, the stones crowded at their periphery; another, the clearing yawed open. Rory lost her sense of direction. She fumbled for her phone, then thought better. No signal belonged here. She focused on the tumbling riot of flowers crowding her ankles, each bloom fierce and perfect, scent spiced like citrus and honey. “Do you feel that?” she asked, voice wired with nerves. “Like there’s humming—through your teeth?” Nyx slowed, drifting. “The Veil’s thinnest breath touches us here.” A breeze snapped, bringing the sound of running water. The group rounded another root-lattice to reveal a slender stream, its water silver and oily with unnatural sheen. Heavy fruits bobbed along its current—apples, plums, things for which Rory found no name, all glowing faintly. “It’s… beautiful,” she muttered, awed, bending closer. A ripple shivered just beneath the surface. Rory jerked back as something blinked up: the face of a deer, antlers tangled with flowers, eyes ancient and unreadable. It submerged without sound, fading into the mirrored blue-black of the stream. “Nothing drinks here unless invited, Aurora,” Isolde warned from behind, voice soft as moss. Rory’s hand crept away from the water, pulse skipping. “Duly noted.” She nudged a stone with her toe, watching currents warp around it. The ripples mimicked no pattern she recognised—an image flickered in every swell: hands reaching, lips speaking riddles, a wolf-woman laughing. Scenes nested within scenes, like postcards flung from a dream someone else had lived. The path veered uphill, stones sharp underfoot. Nyx’s form drew taller, their feet gliding inches from the ground. “Your world leans heavy here. Each moment could collapse.” A shudder rolled Rory’s shoulders. She checked Isolde, who strode ahead without lifting her skirt from burrs or bramble, untroubled by thorns grazing Rory’s legs. The air tasted of copper and honey now, sweet and sharp. Time folded: dusk became bright morning for a blink, then returned to the indigo half-light. Rory watched a patch of violets close and reopen like tiny lungs with every step. Roots drew themselves away from her tread, then crept back with a slow, greedy patience. Nyx paused, touching a low branch. The bark peeled away beneath their shadowed fingers, exposing humming veins of gold. Energy pulsed bright and brief along the wood, as if a heartbeat intent on escape. “The Grove remembers,” Nyx mused, “but not what we’d wish.” A peal of laughter echoed to their right—a child’s, or someone imitating one. Rory’s fists balled. A mask-like face peeped from within a hollow tree: narrow-eyed, green-skinned, features elongated impossibly. It blinked, offered a blossom, and then folded itself backwards into the heartwood, the bark healing over as if it had always been whole. Rory let out a breath she’d not known she’d held. A hush blanketed them. Insects buzzed beneath the silence, a thousand miniature voices weaving threads that tugged at her chest, heartstep by heartstep. Every inhale felt thick with memory, old as bones. The trees spread out, delivering them to a centre ringed in massive oaks. There, a crystalline obelisk rested—grown, not carved. Light rippled through its core, fracturing rainbows onto Isolde, Nyx, and Rory herself. Ultraviolet shadows danced at their feet. Symbols glimmered along the columns—script Rory couldn’t puzzle out, wriggling in and out of focus. Isolde’s smile grew sad and knowing. “This place does not forget,” her riddle wove through the hush. “It only ripens until you pluck what you truly seek.” Rory stepped closer to the obelisk. The pendant pressed warm against her skin. Symbols coalesced. She recognised a sliver of her own name, blooming and then gone. She reached out as if to touch, but the crystal’s surface was impossibly chill. The Fae-forged blade at her hip burned cold in reply, as if in silent warning. Beyond, shadows danced among the oaks. Some belonged to trees; some belonged to other things. Nyx’s silhouette flickered, violet gaze steady, unreadable. Beside Rory, Isolde moved—unearthly and kind, or perhaps neither—leaving dew but not a trace. The Grove’s heart beat on, heavy with promise, heavier still with hunger.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"crystalline"
count2
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count2
14
word"flickered"
count2
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"crystal"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"echoed"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"crystalline"
6"quickened"
7"whisper"
8"flicker"
9"gloom"
10"velvet"
11"sense of"
12"perfect"
13"unreadable"
14"flickered"
15"silence"
16"crystal"
17"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1171
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1064
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx12
Isolde10
Fae-forged2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory19
Grove1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Pendant"
3"Rory"
4"Grove"
places(empty)
globalScore0.607
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if erasing her existence"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1171
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.82
std19.97
cv0.648
sampleLengths
058
174
240
366
44
54
615
714
833
929
1018
1115
1228
1360
149
1524
1661
1715
1810
1944
207
2139
2214
2357
2427
2525
2656
2734
2810
2954
3010
3132
3254
336
3421
3556
3622
3726
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences105
ratio0.114
matches
0"A path wound ahead—a suggestion more than a track—threaded by pearls of dew, though the sky above shimmered between dusk and dawn with no clear source of light."
1"Her bare feet sank into nothing; grass parted and healed behind every step, as if erasing her existence."
2"Birds called in tongues outside the range of ordinary hearing—high, spiral trills, like laughter slowed and reversed."
3"A shadow-flicker of a grin passed across Nyx’s face—if that tear in the gloom could be called a face—and they drifted forward, violet eyes catching the diffused glow."
4"Space bent: one heartbeat, the stones crowded at their periphery; another, the clearing yawed open."
5"Heavy fruits bobbed along its current—apples, plums, things for which Rory found no name, all glowing faintly."
6"The ripples mimicked no pattern she recognised—an image flickered in every swell: hands reaching, lips speaking riddles, a wolf-woman laughing."
7"A peal of laughter echoed to their right—a child’s, or someone imitating one."
8"There, a crystalline obelisk rested—grown, not carved."
9"Symbols glimmered along the columns—script Rory couldn’t puzzle out, wriggling in and out of focus."
10"Some belonged to trees; some belonged to other things."
11"Beside Rory, Isolde moved—unearthly and kind, or perhaps neither—leaving dew but not a trace."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.031135531135531136
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008241758241758242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.15
std6.02
cv0.54
sampleLengths
021
19
228
36
410
55
619
716
818
96
1015
115
1214
132
143
1517
1623
1710
1811
194
204
219
226
2314
248
2515
263
277
285
299
3015
3118
327
333
345
3528
3626
3711
3823
394
405
418
4216
436
4415
456
468
474
4822
4910
78.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences93
matches
0"Her foot crunched a wild"
1"She glanced over her shoulder."
2"Her bare feet sank into"
3"She reached unconsciously for the"
4"They whispered to themselves, nothing"
5"She risked a word."
6"Her throat caught."
7"She glanced at Nyx, half"
8"She smirked, brittle."
9"Its pelt rippled like water"
10"They pushed further, the trees"
11"She fumbled for her phone,"
12"She focused on the tumbling"
13"she asked, voice wired with"
14"she muttered, awed, bending closer"
15"It submerged without sound, fading"
16"She nudged a stone with"
17"She checked Isolde, who strode"
18"It blinked, offered a blossom,"
19"her riddle wove through the"
ratio0.237
19.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences93
matches
0"Tree roots curled from the"
1"Rory squinted, scrubbing a gloved"
2"A path wound ahead—a suggestion"
3"Her foot crunched a wild"
4"The sound echoed, muffled, like"
5"She glanced over her shoulder."
6"Nyx’s form pooled at her"
7"Her bare feet sank into"
8"Rory’s pulse thumped in her"
9"She reached unconsciously for the"
10"Warmth pulsed against her sternum."
11"The Heartstone Pendant was alive"
12"Birds called in tongues outside"
13"The canopy swam with colours"
14"They whispered to themselves, nothing"
15"She risked a word."
16"Isolde tipped her head, lips"
17"Rory picked her way forward,"
18"Her throat caught."
19"She glanced at Nyx, half"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Tree roots curled from the earth like living sculptures, their bark dappled with silver whorls that shimmered whenever the air shifted."
1"Her bare feet sank into nothing; grass parted and healed behind every step, as if erasing her existence."
2"Petals pooled at their feet without disturbance, as though they’d slipped around them by choice."
3"She checked Isolde, who strode ahead without lifting her skirt from burrs or bramble, untroubled by thorns grazing Rory’s legs."
4"It blinked, offered a blossom, and then folded itself backwards into the heartwood, the bark healing over as if it had always been whole."
5"Insects buzzed beneath the silence, a thousand miniature voices weaving threads that tugged at her chest, heartstep by heartstep."
6"The Fae-forged blade at her hip burned cold in reply, as if in silent warning."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, voice wired with nerves"
1"Isolde warned, voice soft as moss"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.25
73.9973%