| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1201 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1201 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1171 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1064 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 10 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.607 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if erasing her existence" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.82 | | std | 19.97 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 56 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "A path wound ahead—a suggestion more than a track—threaded by pearls of dew, though the sky above shimmered between dusk and dawn with no clear source of light." | | 1 | "Her bare feet sank into nothing; grass parted and healed behind every step, as if erasing her existence." | | 2 | "Birds called in tongues outside the range of ordinary hearing—high, spiral trills, like laughter slowed and reversed." | | 3 | "A shadow-flicker of a grin passed across Nyx’s face—if that tear in the gloom could be called a face—and they drifted forward, violet eyes catching the diffused glow." | | 4 | "Space bent: one heartbeat, the stones crowded at their periphery; another, the clearing yawed open." | | 5 | "Heavy fruits bobbed along its current—apples, plums, things for which Rory found no name, all glowing faintly." | | 6 | "The ripples mimicked no pattern she recognised—an image flickered in every swell: hands reaching, lips speaking riddles, a wolf-woman laughing." | | 7 | "A peal of laughter echoed to their right—a child’s, or someone imitating one." | | 8 | "There, a crystalline obelisk rested—grown, not carved." | | 9 | "Symbols glimmered along the columns—script Rory couldn’t puzzle out, wriggling in and out of focus." | | 10 | "Some belonged to trees; some belonged to other things." | | 11 | "Beside Rory, Isolde moved—unearthly and kind, or perhaps neither—leaving dew but not a trace." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1092 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.031135531135531136 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008241758241758242 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.15 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 78.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.47619047619047616 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Her foot crunched a wild" | | 1 | "She glanced over her shoulder." | | 2 | "Her bare feet sank into" | | 3 | "She reached unconsciously for the" | | 4 | "They whispered to themselves, nothing" | | 5 | "She risked a word." | | 6 | "Her throat caught." | | 7 | "She glanced at Nyx, half" | | 8 | "She smirked, brittle." | | 9 | "Its pelt rippled like water" | | 10 | "They pushed further, the trees" | | 11 | "She fumbled for her phone," | | 12 | "She focused on the tumbling" | | 13 | "she asked, voice wired with" | | 14 | "she muttered, awed, bending closer" | | 15 | "It submerged without sound, fading" | | 16 | "She nudged a stone with" | | 17 | "She checked Isolde, who strode" | | 18 | "It blinked, offered a blossom," | | 19 | "her riddle wove through the" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 19.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Tree roots curled from the" | | 1 | "Rory squinted, scrubbing a gloved" | | 2 | "A path wound ahead—a suggestion" | | 3 | "Her foot crunched a wild" | | 4 | "The sound echoed, muffled, like" | | 5 | "She glanced over her shoulder." | | 6 | "Nyx’s form pooled at her" | | 7 | "Her bare feet sank into" | | 8 | "Rory’s pulse thumped in her" | | 9 | "She reached unconsciously for the" | | 10 | "Warmth pulsed against her sternum." | | 11 | "The Heartstone Pendant was alive" | | 12 | "Birds called in tongues outside" | | 13 | "The canopy swam with colours" | | 14 | "They whispered to themselves, nothing" | | 15 | "She risked a word." | | 16 | "Isolde tipped her head, lips" | | 17 | "Rory picked her way forward," | | 18 | "Her throat caught." | | 19 | "She glanced at Nyx, half" |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Tree roots curled from the earth like living sculptures, their bark dappled with silver whorls that shimmered whenever the air shifted." | | 1 | "Her bare feet sank into nothing; grass parted and healed behind every step, as if erasing her existence." | | 2 | "Petals pooled at their feet without disturbance, as though they’d slipped around them by choice." | | 3 | "She checked Isolde, who strode ahead without lifting her skirt from burrs or bramble, untroubled by thorns grazing Rory’s legs." | | 4 | "It blinked, offered a blossom, and then folded itself backwards into the heartwood, the bark healing over as if it had always been whole." | | 5 | "Insects buzzed beneath the silence, a thousand miniature voices weaving threads that tugged at her chest, heartstep by heartstep." | | 6 | "The Fae-forged blade at her hip burned cold in reply, as if in silent warning." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, voice wired with nerves" | | 1 | "Isolde warned, voice soft as moss" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |