Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0P1YMCD7GFR441BM02N21

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Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.076005
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token felt wrong in Quinn's palm. Too light for its size, like holding a bird's skull filled with air. She'd taken it off the body upstairs — a John Doe sprawled in a Camden alleyway with no wallet, no phone, and a face so unremarkable the CCTV operators would probably lose him in a crowd of two. What the man did have was this token and a one-way ticket to somewhere underneath the Northern Line that shouldn't exist. Quinn ducked under the service hatch and dropped onto a platform that hadn't seen a scheduled train since 1924. The tile work was original — cream and oxblood diamonds, cracked but intact — and someone had strung fairy lights along the tunnel ceiling in long, swooping arcs. Beneath those lights, wooden stalls crowded the platform edge, most of them shuttered now, their canvas awnings pulled tight. The air smelled of copper and something botanical she couldn't name. Sweet, but with a rotten undertone. Like flowers left too long in standing water. "Detective Quinn?" Eva Kowalski was already there. Of course she was. The young woman sat cross-legged on an overturned crate near the far end of the platform, her worn leather satchel open beside her, books fanned out across the concrete like a paper garden. Her round glasses caught the fairy light and threw it back in twin circles. "Museum sent you?" Quinn stepped over a gutter that ran with something iridescent and oily. "British Museum's restricted archives don't technically have jurisdiction over crime scenes." Eva tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear. "But DI Hargreaves thought I might be able to identify some of the materials down here. He called my supervisor." "Hargreaves." Quinn let the name sit in her mouth like a stone. She'd deal with Hargreaves later. The man had a habit of inviting consultants before the lead detective had even signed into the scene log. She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her coat pocket and snapped them on with the practiced efficiency of someone who'd done it ten thousand times before. "What have you identified so far?" "Enough to know this isn't a normal market." "I gathered that from the entrance requirements." Quinn held up the bone token between two gloved fingers. In the strange light down here, she could see markings etched into its surface. Tiny, deliberate grooves. Eva's eyes widened behind her lenses. She scrambled up from the crate, scattering a paperback copy of something with a Latin title. "Where did you get that?" "Our John Doe upstairs. Left coat pocket." Quinn turned the token slowly. "These markings match anything in your research?" Eva reached for the satchel and pulled out a clothbound journal, its spine broken from use. She flipped through pages dense with her own handwriting, paused, and held the open page beside the token. The symbols aligned. "Admission tokens for the Veil Market. They're carved from human bone — ethically sourced, supposedly, though I've never been clear on who's doing the ethics review." Eva's freckled face had gone pale beneath the fairy lights. "The market moves every full moon. If this is where it set up this cycle, then whoever died upstairs was either a buyer or a seller." Quinn said nothing. She was already walking the platform, her gaze sweeping the shuttered stalls with the same mechanical thoroughness she applied to any scene. Eighteen years had taught her to look before she theorized. The stalls on the left appeared undisturbed — padlocked, dusty, their goods packed away. But the third stall on the right told a different story. Its awning hung crooked, one support pole bent at a forty-degree angle. The wooden counter bore a long gouge, fresh enough that the exposed wood beneath was still pale and fragrant. She crouched. Glass on the ground. Not broken glass — intact vials, a dozen of them, scattered like spent cartridge casings. Each one contained a liquid so dark it looked black until she tilted a vial toward the light and caught the deep arterial red within. "Eva. Over here." The researcher picked her way across the platform, clutching her journal to her chest. She knelt beside Quinn and her breath caught. "Those are alchemical compounds. Banned ones." Eva pointed without touching. "See how the liquid doesn't settle? It stays in motion. That's a suspension of Shade-derived extract. It's incredibly rare, incredibly expensive, and incredibly illegal under every supernatural governance accord I've ever read about." "How illegal are we talking?" "Think weapons-grade plutonium, but for people who can do things that don't show up on physics exams." Quinn photographed the vials with her phone, then the gouge in the counter, then the bent support pole. She stood and followed the trajectory of damage with her eyes. The pole had been struck from the platform side, not the stall side. Someone standing where a customer would stand had swung at something — or been thrown against it. "Your reading of this scene." Quinn glanced at Eva. "Go." "Robbery gone wrong?" Eva pushed her glasses up. "Someone came for the compounds, things escalated, the seller or the buyer ended up in the alley. It fits. These extracts are worth a fortune." "It doesn't fit." Eva blinked. Quinn walked back to the scattered vials and pointed. "If this was a robbery, why are the goods still here? Twelve vials, all intact. Not one missing. Not one broken. A thief who kills for product doesn't leave the product behind." "Panic, maybe? Something interrupted—" "Look at the dust." Quinn swept her hand across the counter surface beside the gouge. A thin layer of grime coated everything except a clean rectangle, roughly eight inches by five. "Something sat here. Something that was taken. But it wasn't the vials." Eva stared at the clean outline. Her lips moved silently, and Quinn could almost see the mental catalog spinning behind those round glasses. "That's not the right shape for any of the standard alchemical containers." Eva opened her journal again and sketched the dimensions rapidly. "Eight by five, roughly. Shallow. Could be a display case, a document box—" "Or a case for something small that needed to be presented. Something you'd want to examine before buying." Quinn was moving again, her worn leather watch catching the light as she checked the time. Two hours since the body was found. The market's vendors would be scattering by now, assuming they hadn't already dissolved into whatever corners of London absorbed people who sold things in abandoned Tube stations. She reached the end of the platform where the tunnel mouth gaped, and stopped. Something glinted on the rail bed, four feet below platform level. Quinn pulled out her phone and activated the torch. A small brass object lay between the tracks. Even from this distance, she could see the green patina of verdigris creeping across its surface, and the delicate lines etched into what appeared to be a face — not a human face, but the face of a compass. She'd never seen markings quite like these. They looked deliberate, almost architectural in their precision, like the floor plan of a building that existed only in theory. "Can you get down there?" Quinn looked at Eva. "I'm not stepping on those tracks." "There's no current. This station's been decommissioned for a century." Eva peered over the platform edge, clearly unconvinced, then lowered herself down with the graceless determination of someone who spent more time in archives than in the field. She picked up the brass object and turned it over in her hands. The color drained from her face in a way that had nothing to do with the lighting. "Detective Quinn, this is a Veil Compass." "In English." "It's a navigational instrument crafted by Shades — beings that exist between planes of reality. The needle doesn't point north. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal." Eva climbed back onto the platform, cradling the compass like it might detonate. "These are vanishingly rare. I've read about them. I've never seen one outside of a woodcut illustration from 1743." Quinn took the compass from her and held it flat on her palm. The needle trembled, then swung in a slow arc toward the tunnel behind them — not the direction of the entrance, not the direction of the stalls, but deeper into the disused network. It settled and held steady with a conviction that made Quinn's stomach tighten. "This is what was in the display case." Quinn turned back toward the damaged stall. "Not the vials. The vials were inventory — background product, the everyday stock. This compass was the special item. The thing the meeting was actually about." "So someone came to buy the compass, and—" "And the seller is dead in the alley upstairs." Quinn placed the compass on the counter, right on the clean rectangle. It fit the outline precisely. "The buyer took it, examined it, and something happened. The stall got wrecked. The buyer killed the seller and ran. But they dropped their purchase in the scuffle." "Then why was the body upstairs and not down here?" Quinn paused. That was the right question. She walked to where the tunnel mouth opened toward the service hatch they'd entered through and examined the floor. Scuff marks in the dust. Two sets of footprints leading out, one set leading in. She followed the outbound tracks and found what she was looking for six feet from the hatch: a spray of droplets, nearly black against the dark concrete, visible only because they'd dried with a slight sheen. "He was alive when he left the platform. Made it to the alley before he collapsed." She traced the trail with her torch beam. "No blood down here on the platform. The weapon — whatever it was — caused internal damage. Slow bleed. He had enough time to climb out and try to get help." "Or try to get away from whoever did this to him." "Two sets of prints leaving. One coming in." Quinn straightened. "The killer came in alone, left with the victim still on his feet. They walked out together." Eva's hand drifted to her left ear, tucking the same curl she'd already secured twice. "Together? You think the victim knew the attacker?" "I think the victim didn't know he was dying." Quinn stared at the compass on the counter. Its needle still pointed into the deep tunnel, steady and certain. "Whatever weapon was used, it wasn't obvious. No visible wound on the body. No blood at the point of initial contact. The victim walked out under his own power, probably thought the deal had simply gone badly. Reached the alley. Sat down. Never got up." "That's consistent with certain alchemical poisons. Contact agents that mimic natural causes." Eva was flipping through her journal with renewed urgency. "There's a class of Shade-derived toxins that attack the circulatory system from the inside. The victim feels fine for ten, maybe fifteen minutes, and then catastrophic vascular failure. The coroner would flag it as an aneurysm unless they knew exactly what to test for." Quinn pulled off her gloves with a snap. She looked at the fairy lights strung along the tunnel ceiling, at the shuttered stalls of a market that would relocate with the next full moon and leave nothing behind but dust and the memory of transactions no one would admit to witnessing. "Someone wanted that compass badly enough to kill for it." She picked the device up again and watched the needle hold its bearing. Unwavering. "And they used the seller's own product to do it. One of those banned compounds — a poison, not a drug. They came prepared." "But they didn't get what they came for," Eva said. "The compass is still here." "Which means they'll be back." Quinn slipped the compass into an evidence bag and sealed it. "Or they'll find another way to get where this thing points." Her phone buzzed. Scene of crime officers were five minutes out. She had five minutes to stand in this impossible place and think about the needle pointing into darkness, about a partner she lost three years ago in a case that smelled exactly like this one — copper and something sweet going rotten — and about the fact that for the first time in three years, she had a piece of evidence that didn't just suggest the impossible. It pointed directly at it.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:56:45.917Z" 2/19/2026, 3:56:45 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva climbed back [back]"
1"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.373
leniency0.746
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.068
95.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2069
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2069
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"etched"
count2
1
word"aligned"
count1
2
word"mechanical"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"aligned"
2"mechanical"
3"standard"
4"trembled"
5"stomach"
6"traced"
7"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2079
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1323
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn25
John1
Doe1
Camden1
Northern1
Line1
Kowalski1
Eva17
Hargreaves1
Latin1
Two2
London1
Tube1
Unwavering1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"John"
2"Doe"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Two"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
globalScore0.555
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared undisturbed padlocked, dusty, their goods packed away"
55.70% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.443
wordCount2079
matches
0"not a human face, but the face of a compass"
1"not the direction of the entrance, not the direction of the stalls, but deeper into the disused network"
2"not the direction of the stalls, but deeper into the disused network"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean35.84
std26.08
cv0.728
sampleLengths
080
191
22
356
415
542
670
78
834
927
1019
1137
1262
1391
1446
153
1622
1743
185
1917
2059
2110
2233
233
242
2541
264
2743
2823
2935
3068
3134
3274
339
346
3510
3658
377
382
3961
4059
4141
428
4354
4410
4577
4655
4711
4827
4923
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"been struck"
1"been thrown"
2"was found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was looking"
1"was flipping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences136
ratio0.059
matches
0"She'd taken it off the body upstairs — a John Doe sprawled in a Camden alleyway with no wallet, no phone, and a face so unremarkable the CCTV operators would probably lose him in a crowd of two."
1"The tile work was original — cream and oxblood diamonds, cracked but intact — and someone had strung fairy lights along the tunnel ceiling in long, swooping arcs."
2"The stalls on the left appeared undisturbed — padlocked, dusty, their goods packed away."
3"Not broken glass — intact vials, a dozen of them, scattered like spent cartridge casings."
4"Someone standing where a customer would stand had swung at something — or been thrown against it."
5"Even from this distance, she could see the green patina of verdigris creeping across its surface, and the delicate lines etched into what appeared to be a face — not a human face, but the face of a compass."
6"The needle trembled, then swung in a slow arc toward the tunnel behind them — not the direction of the entrance, not the direction of the stalls, but deeper into the disused network."
7"She had five minutes to stand in this impossible place and think about the needle pointing into darkness, about a partner she lost three years ago in a case that smelled exactly like this one — copper and something sweet going rotten — and about the fact that for the first time in three years, she had a piece of evidence that didn't just suggest the impossible."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1316
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"undisturbed — padlocked, dusty, their"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.0364741641337386
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.009878419452887538
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean15.29
std11.1
cv0.726
sampleLengths
08
113
238
321
419
528
619
711
86
98
102
115
124
1333
1414
1515
1622
1720
1812
195
2019
2128
226
238
2417
2514
263
276
2816
295
3012
317
3216
3318
343
3536
3626
373
3822
3910
4014
4111
4212
4319
442
454
4615
4725
483
4914
77.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4632352941176471
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners63
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Too light for its size,"
1"Of course she was."
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences94
matches
0"She'd taken it off the"
1"Her round glasses caught the"
2"She'd deal with Hargreaves later."
3"She pulled a pair of"
4"She scrambled up from the"
5"She flipped through pages dense"
6"She was already walking the"
7"Its awning hung crooked, one"
8"She knelt beside Quinn and"
9"She stood and followed the"
10"Her lips moved silently, and"
11"She reached the end of"
12"She'd never seen markings quite"
13"They looked deliberate, almost architectural"
14"She picked up the brass"
15"It settled and held steady"
16"It fit the outline precisely."
17"She walked to where the"
18"She followed the outbound tracks"
19"She traced the trail with"
ratio0.277
34.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences94
matches
0"The bone token felt wrong"
1"She'd taken it off the"
2"Quinn ducked under the service"
3"The tile work was original"
4"The air smelled of copper"
5"Eva Kowalski was already there."
6"The young woman sat cross-legged"
7"Her round glasses caught the"
8"Quinn stepped over a gutter"
9"Eva tucked a curl of"
10"Quinn let the name sit"
11"She'd deal with Hargreaves later."
12"The man had a habit"
13"She pulled a pair of"
14"Quinn held up the bone"
15"Eva's eyes widened behind her"
16"She scrambled up from the"
17"Quinn turned the token slowly"
18"Eva reached for the satchel"
19"She flipped through pages dense"
ratio0.851
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Even from this distance, she"
ratio0.011
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"What the man did have was this token and a one-way ticket to somewhere underneath the Northern Line that shouldn't exist."
1"She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her coat pocket and snapped them on with the practiced efficiency of someone who'd done it ten thousand times before."
2"She was already walking the platform, her gaze sweeping the shuttered stalls with the same mechanical thoroughness she applied to any scene."
3"The market's vendors would be scattering by now, assuming they hadn't already dissolved into whatever corners of London absorbed people who sold things in aband…"
4"Eva peered over the platform edge, clearly unconvinced, then lowered herself down with the graceless determination of someone who spent more time in archives th…"
5"She looked at the fairy lights strung along the tunnel ceiling, at the shuttered stalls of a market that would relocate with the next full moon and leave nothin…"
6"She had five minutes to stand in this impossible place and think about the needle pointing into darkness, about a partner she lost three years ago in a case tha…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.034
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7444%