Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
169
glossingSentenceCount
18
matches
0
"as if balancing on a breath"
1
"looked like crushed stars, a glass orb th"
2
"seemed woven from smoke, the feet crossed at the ankles as if in repose, the kind of pose one would take to suggest serenity while something very wrong happened just out of frame"
3
"appeared peaceful almost asleep, the lips curved in the eerie composure one found in portraits of staged tragedy"
4
"as if inviting someone to stand there and tell the truth they did not want to hear"
5
"quite align with a standard occult pattern"
6
"looked like a script from a forgotten led"
7
"quite touch the eyes"
8
"bead that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it"
9
"as if offering a hand, and for a heartbeat the air between token and glass quivered"
10
"floor that seemed to be made of old river stones"
11
"felt like a test"
12
"something like a circle with three nested cr"
13
"as if nudging them closer to the body for inspection"
14
"something like damp parchment and old copper"
15
"not quite resolved"
16
"throb that seemed to originate from the space beyond the seam"
17
"as if drawing a boundary that no one supposed to cross would respect"
"A stall offered jars of things that didn’t belong to the day—dust that looked like crushed stars, a glass orb that contained a raincloud, coins that felt warm and damp at the same time."
1
"The surface beneath the body bore a thin sheen, not of sweat but something else—an oil-like film that caught the amber light and bent it into a pale, living halo."
2
"She noted the precise geometry of the sigils—circles and hexagons that didn’t quite align with a standard occult pattern."
3
"The shawl’s fringe created a frame around the face, and the frame’s angle pointed to a particular stall—one whose sign advertised “Forbidden Elixirs” in cursive that looked like a script from a forgotten ledger."
4
"A faint footprint rested on the dust at the edge of the cage, but it led nowhere—a single print, a dot on a map with no country to belong to."
5
"We’re missing something obvious, Harlow observed, though she didn’t tell Eva that she’d recognized the type of perversion the scene was playing—an inversion of a retail crime, where the perpetrator didn’t take something tangible but altered perception."
6
"The Veil Market isn’t just selling goods; it’s selling access."
7
"She bent to pick up a small vial that lay near the shelf’s edge—its liquid dark as spilled ink, glimmering as if it contained a star."
8
"The market would love a rumor of poison; it would feed on fear and fear’s cousins."
9
"The lanterns seemed to glow with a more careful, almost conspiratorial light, and a movement—not of people but of possibility—ran through the space like a current along a wire."
10
"The face suggested sleep, not death; the lines around the eyes were not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the moment frozen in time."
11
"The noise of the crowd—the murmur of voices, the clinking of glass, the soft scratch of metal on stone—sounded suddenly too loud, an intrusion into a private examination."
12
"It wasn’t merely a key; it was a beacon, an anchor to a space where the Market’s walls grew thin and the world’s edges softened."
13
"The token’s etched sigils seemed to shift as if they recognized a user—someone who might know how to pass between what is seen and what is not."
14
"A shape detached itself from the crowd behind Eva—a man whose coat was too fine for the Market’s ordinary grubbiness, his eyes the color of old coins."
15
"She knew the truth could ride the line between rational explanation and supernatural interference—the sort of truth that made you narrow your eyes and ask the questions that didn’t bear removing."
16
"He didn’t move toward them, but his attention shifted, and in that shift, the Market revealed a second truth—an underground chamber behind the Elixirs stall, a space like a throat swallowing the entire crowd as if the Market could swallow more than it already had."
17
"DS Morris’s memory rose—the partner who died under circumstances that had supernatural innards even she refused to name aloud—and she felt that old ache, that cold edge of something not quite resolved."
18
"A quiet shared deliberation built between the two women—Harlow with her military patience and Eva with her calm, scholarly certainty."
19
"The body in the glass cage remained—still, pale, the shawl’s fringe still tracing a line around the person’s body as if drawing a boundary that no one supposed to cross would respect."
20
"But the line’s boundaries, the chalk’s edges, the sigils, the token, the compass’s glow, and the seam—these weren’t random things."
21
"They waited in a careful stillness for something to happen—a subtle shift, a whisper of movement, a sign of a portal opening or a trap snapping shut."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
154
technicalSentenceCount
37
matches
0
"The night air smelled of damp iron and something sweeter, a candle-wax heaviness that clung to the tongue."
1
"A chime lifted, and the space beyond opened into a market that breathed in slow, deliberate puffs of shadow and distant murky amber glow."
2
"The necklace of books in her satchel weighed more than the words inside them, and the freckled skin of her face caught a sour-glow from a lantern that flickered…"
3
"A stall offered jars of things that didn’t belong to the day—dust that looked like crushed stars, a glass orb that contained a raincloud, coins that felt warm a…"
4
"The signs on the stalls fluttered with a life of their own, as if the letters remembered every visitor who ever crossed the threshold."
5
"The surface beneath the body bore a thin sheen, not of sweat but something else—an oil-like film that caught the amber light and bent it into a pale, living hal…"
6
"She frowned, a crease forming between her brows, the freckles on her nose jumping as she studied the sigils and the stillness of the figure."
7
"The current moon tonight stood high, a pale coin in a counterfeit sky, and the market’s pulse shifted beneath its surface, a heartbeat that insisted on keeping …"
8
"A shawl’s fringe dragged along the ground as if it resisted touching the floor with anything other than reverence."
9
"The second thing she noticed was the way the air inside the glass cage tasted metallic, as if someone had taken a coin and pressed it against the tongue until i…"
10
"This place is a trap for truth, Eva said softly, not looking at Quinn, eyes glimmering with the kind of intensity that came from someone who spent their nights …"
11
"This token’s supposed to be a door opener, Eva whispered, watching the token’s surface where the sigils contracted and expanded as if the glass were a living th…"
12
"But the token’s influence remained, a subtle pressure along the skin of the night air, as if the market itself was holding its breath, waiting for someone to de…"
13
"The crowd of stalls watched in silence, a congregation of things that had learned to behave when a crime occurred and the Market decided to pretend nothing happ…"
14
"Quinn stepped away from the cage, her boot tapping a measured rhythm against a floor that seemed to be made of old river stones."
15
"The shelf’s wood had been carved in a way that allowed small items to slide toward the cage, as if nudging them closer to the body for inspection."
16
"She bent to pick up a small vial that lay near the shelf’s edge—its liquid dark as spilled ink, glimmering as if it contained a star."
17
"Eva noted the vial with an almost tactile interest, lifting it with her gloved fingers as though she were testing the air for distant weather patterns."
18
"The marker’s ink hadn’t dried completely, and if you stood close enough, you could see the grains of chalk that overlapped the sigils, lines of intention crossi…"
19
"The instrument’s face etched protective sigils glowed faintly under her touch, reacting to the market’s own energy, as if the thing knew where a rift lay even i…"
20
"Eva stepped closer to the glass cage and studied the body’s expression, noticing the slight parting of the lips as if the person within drew in a breath and cho…"
21
"The face suggested sleep, not death; the lines around the eyes were not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the moment frozen in tim…"
22
"The needle trembled, then steadied, finally pointing toward the stall where the air hung most heavily, where the chalk’s edge met the wood and the sigils met th…"
23
"Show me what you’re hiding, Harlow thought, not aloud, but with the intention that a person who could decipher lies and half-truths could feel the invitation li…"
24
"But Quinn kept her breath steady, her eyes scanning for anything that didn’t belong, anything that looked out of place in a place that existed to hide out-of-pl…"
25
"The stranger’s words carried a seduction of certainty, a lure that suggested the Market could be persuaded to reveal its secrets if the right words were spoken."
26
"Eva pressed the flat of her palm against the wood of a stall’s counter, her eyes narrowing in a way that suggested she was seeing the building blocks of a spell…"
27
"She knew the truth could ride the line between rational explanation and supernatural interference—the sort of truth that made you narrow your eyes and ask the q…"
28
"He didn’t move toward them, but his attention shifted, and in that shift, the Market revealed a second truth—an underground chamber behind the Elixirs stall, a …"
29
"DS Morris’s memory rose—the partner who died under circumstances that had supernatural innards even she refused to name aloud—and she felt that old ache, that c…"
30
"We’re not finished here, she thought, and her eyes flicked to Eva, who stood with the satchel’s flap pressed against her hip, as if she were ready to spring int…"
31
"The seam itself became a minute shimmer, a reflection of something alive on the other side, and then it closed again as if the Market had drawn a breath and rel…"
32
"Eva tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her ear, her voice rising with a careful conviction that hadn’t yet learned to fear the strange in front of her."
33
"Harlow lowered her eyes to the ground, tracing the chalk’s edges with her boot, following the faint path as if it could lead to an exit that didn’t involve bloo…"
34
"She thought of her partner, thinking not of his death but of the moment he had learned to listen to the whispers that came from places like this, the whispers t…"
35
"Quinn tucked the Veil Compass into her coat sleeve and stepped closer to the seam, listening for a breath that wasn’t hers to take, a sound that did not belong …"
36
"The Market’s breath grew steady again, and the two investigators prepared to walk it, one careful footstep at a time, into the unknown that waited beyond the se…"