Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0P4DFY3Q9G2WBGDWWTZEF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.003763
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Veil Market wore the edge of a rumor you could smell, like ozone after a storm. An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden had become its doorway, a rusted crease in London's spine where light barely worked. The night air smelled of damp iron and something sweeter, a candle-wax heaviness that clung to the tongue. The bone token in Harlow Quinn’s coat pocket felt lighter than the weight of the decision she was about to make. The entrance appeared when they stepped into the tunnel, a mouth that didn’t want to close. The gate’s iron teeth gritted against the bone token she pulled from her pocket, then surrendered with a sigh of sliding gears. A chime lifted, and the space beyond opened into a market that breathed in slow, deliberate puffs of shadow and distant murky amber glow. Harlow Quinn moved with the rigid steps of a soldier on a parade ground, though the scene ahead wasn’t anything like a parade. Her salt-and-pepper hair touched the nape of her neck, the closely cropped cut catching the glint of lamps that burned low and stubborn. The left wrist bore the faint outline of a worn leather watch, a circle of memory keeping time the way a captain kept a map. Eva Kowalski stood at a stall’s edge, the leather satchel at her hip looking as weathered as a ship’s log. Her green eyes moved quick, flaring with curiosity and caution in equal measure. The necklace of books in her satchel weighed more than the words inside them, and the freckled skin of her face caught a sour-glow from a lantern that flickered as if balancing on a breath. They moved as a pair that had learned to read each other’s shadows. The market hummed, not with sound but with a frequency you could feel, like a current under the skin. A stall offered jars of things that didn’t belong to the day—dust that looked like crushed stars, a glass orb that contained a raincloud, coins that felt warm and damp at the same time. The signs on the stalls fluttered with a life of their own, as if the letters remembered every visitor who ever crossed the threshold. Quinn’s eyes scanned the space, controlling a breath and the pace of her steps as more a drill than a walk. She paused at a crime scene that did not look like a crime scene at all. In a glass cage that hadn’t been there an hour ago, a body lay as if posed for a photograph the market had refused to take. The figure was draped in a shawl that seemed woven from smoke, the feet crossed at the ankles as if in repose, the kind of pose one would take to suggest serenity while something very wrong happened just out of frame. A line of chalk sigils ringed the cage, faintly glowing in the glow of the lanterns. There was no obvious weapon nearby, no sign of a struggle, and no blood that should have been everywhere given the posture. The surface beneath the body bore a thin sheen, not of sweat but something else—an oil-like film that caught the amber light and bent it into a pale, living halo. Eva stepped closer, her satchel shifting with the careful grace of someone not used to panic but used to thresholds. She frowned, a crease forming between her brows, the freckles on her nose jumping as she studied the sigils and the stillness of the figure. This token is a map, Eva muttered, lifting her chin as if to measure the distance between the token and whatever it was mapped to. Only if the markings align, Harlow returned, studying the circle and the way the chalk lines ended abruptly where the glass cage met the stall’s edge. The Veil Market didn’t follow clocks. It moved with the full moon, slipping from one corridor of Camden’s underworld to another, a rumor sold in the same breath as salt and candle smoke. The current moon tonight stood high, a pale coin in a counterfeit sky, and the market’s pulse shifted beneath its surface, a heartbeat that insisted on keeping secrets. The body’s shawl was not a victim’s garment but a veil, one that had once hung in a theatre dressing room, now repurposed as a cover for something the market wanted to hide. A shawl’s fringe dragged along the ground as if it resisted touching the floor with anything other than reverence. The face, in the small glimmer of a lantern, appeared peaceful, almost asleep, the lips curved in the eerie composure one found in portraits of staged tragedy. The first thing Harlow noticed was how the body’s hands rested, palms up, as if inviting someone to stand there and tell the truth they did not want to hear. The second thing she noticed was the way the air inside the glass cage tasted metallic, as if someone had taken a coin and pressed it against the tongue until it remembered a time before the market’s concealments. Why would someone stage a killing inside a place that moved and changed just to confuse the eyes? Why would a killer think the Veil Market offered a perfect cover, when it itself was a living riddle? The clockwork of the scene began to turn as Eva knelt and pressed the back of her gloved fingers to the glass, testing the surface for a vibration, a whisper of a portal. This place is a trap for truth, Eva said softly, not looking at Quinn, eyes glimmering with the kind of intensity that came from someone who spent their nights reading weather and omens. Harlow stepped closer, letting the light from a hanging lamp fall on the glass and the sigils. Her mind worked in the way it did when she examined a crime scene in a precinct that slept in its own offices. She noted the precise geometry of the sigils—circles and hexagons that didn’t quite align with a standard occult pattern. She counted the steps between the cage and the stalls, then compared the angles to the beam of light that struck the scene from an unnamed direction. The body, she realized, wasn’t simply laid out in repose. It was arranged. The shawl’s fringe created a frame around the face, and the frame’s angle pointed to a particular stall—one whose sign advertised “Forbidden Elixirs” in cursive that looked like a script from a forgotten ledger. A stall’s door swung slightly as if someone had brushed it with a careless hand. A faint footprint rested on the dust at the edge of the cage, but it led nowhere—a single print, a dot on a map with no country to belong to. We’re missing something obvious, Harlow observed, though she didn’t tell Eva that she’d recognized the type of perversion the scene was playing—an inversion of a retail crime, where the perpetrator didn’t take something tangible but altered perception. Eva stood, brushing a stray lock of curly red hair away from her eyes with the back of a gloved hand. Her voice carried the weight of a person who had learned to weigh truths against the risks of telling them aloud. This looks staged to mimic a ritual. The ritual is a misdirection. Whoever did this wants the Market to see what it isn’t. Harlow studied Eva’s face, the curve of a smile that didn’t quite touch the eyes. A best friend’s conviction could be a dangerous thing, especially in a place where reality was a flexible alloy. The bone token found its way into a pocket again, the way a soldier might return a file to a pouch after a reconnaissance. Harlow lifted the token and observed the runes carved into its surface, a bone bead that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it. She pressed the token to the glass cage as if offering a hand, and for a heartbeat the air between token and glass quivered. If the market wanted to test us, it would have shown its hand by now, she told herself, but her voice remained low, measured, the rhythm of a drill sergeant who’d learned to listen to quiet things. This token’s supposed to be a door opener, Eva whispered, watching the token’s surface where the sigils contracted and expanded as if the glass were a living thing that breathed through the lines. The door wasn’t open, not yet. But the token’s influence remained, a subtle pressure along the skin of the night air, as if the market itself was holding its breath, waiting for someone to decide whether truth deserved to surface. The crowd of stalls watched in silence, a congregation of things that had learned to behave when a crime occurred and the Market decided to pretend nothing happened. The market’s hum shifted to a whisper, and the whisper refracted into dozens of small voices, as if a thousand eyes turned to study the two detectives in their trench coats. Quinn stepped away from the cage, her boot tapping a measured rhythm against a floor that seemed to be made of old river stones. Her eyes surveyed not just the physical space but the patterns others had laid over it: chalk, glass, a shawl, a token, a circle bigger than the body’s own circle. A map of intention lay on the ground, but the map did not align to any known city block. Where is the path away from this? she asked no one and everyone in particular, the words forming in her mouth like a command to an unseen squad. Eva’s voice came again, soft and clarifying. The token’s presence means someone wanted a portal open here, not merely to leave but to bring something through. The Veil Market isn’t just selling goods; it’s selling access. The body’s arrangement screams ritual, but the lack of weapon and the dryness of the blood imply the purpose wasn’t to kill, but to signal. Harlow blinked, a slow motion that felt like a test. Signal who? The Market as a whole? The clique that everyone whispered about in the teach rooms of Scotland Yard’s basement? The man who’d promised protection and hadn’t kept his promise? The partner she’d lost three years ago to something she still refused to name aloud? The Market’s stall that aimed at forbidden alchemy had an emblem carved into the wood, something like a circle with three nested crescents. The sign’s ink, or paint, had bubbled as if it had absorbed something from the air. It was a symbol Harlow had seen in a file once, the kind that suggested ancient pacts and modern debts. She circled the stall, stopping only to examine the edges of a shelf that leaned toward the glass cage. The shelf’s wood had been carved in a way that allowed small items to slide toward the cage, as if nudging them closer to the body for inspection. She bent to pick up a small vial that lay near the shelf’s edge—its liquid dark as spilled ink, glimmering as if it contained a star. Eva noted the vial with an almost tactile interest, lifting it with her gloved fingers as though she were testing the air for distant weather patterns. It’s a draught of forgetfulness, not poison, she concluded after a careful sniff, though she didn’t voice the word poison aloud. The market would love a rumor of poison; it would feed on fear and fear’s cousins. Quinn’s eyes flicked to the vial and then to the cage. The circle of chalk around the body could be a containment circle, or a trap for memory. The marker’s ink hadn’t dried completely, and if you stood close enough, you could see the grains of chalk that overlapped the sigils, lines of intention crossing with lines of coincidence. The Veil Compass lay on the stall’s counter, a small brass instrument with a verdigris patina that suggested it had lived through a hundred winters and more. The needle didn’t point north as a compass would. It pointed toward a shimmer in the air behind the Forbidden Elixirs stall, a wavering line like heat rising from a road on a hot day. Harlow picked up the Veil Compass and listened to it, not to the earth but to the air. The instrument’s face etched protective sigils glowed faintly under her touch, reacting to the market’s own energy, as if the thing knew where a rift lay even if the human eye did not. A breeze threaded through the stalls, bringing with it a scent neither pleasant nor sweet, something like damp parchment and old copper. The market’s hum grew. The lanterns seemed to glow with a more careful, almost conspiratorial light, and a movement—not of people but of possibility—ran through the space like a current along a wire. Eva stepped closer to the glass cage and studied the body’s expression, noticing the slight parting of the lips as if the person within drew in a breath and chose not to release it. The face suggested sleep, not death; the lines around the eyes were not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the moment frozen in time. We’ve misread the state of the body, Eva said quietly, a note of certainty in her voice. The scene isn’t about a dead person so much as a message left by someone who wants the Market to believe a false narrative. The calm in the face says the killer wanted us to feel the quiet before the storm, to mistake stillness for lack of danger. Harlow angled her head, considering that possibility with a pragmatic’s caution. A message, or a trap. If this is a trap, it uses ritual to stage a crime and a market’s appetite to feed on truth’s fear. The clique’s influence wouldn’t be in the crime itself but in what the crime could force a city to assume about itself. She stepped back, letting the Veil Compass hum against her palm. The needle trembled, then steadied, finally pointing toward the stall where the air hung most heavily, where the chalk’s edge met the wood and the sigils met the glass, where a seam seemed to run into the air as if a wall of invisibility lay beyond the stall’s back wall. Show me what you’re hiding, Harlow thought, not aloud, but with the intention that a person who could decipher lies and half-truths could feel the invitation like a tug at the sleeve. Eva moved with quiet urgency, gathering a handful of the chalk dust from the ritual circle and blowing it gently onto the glass cage. The dust clung to the surface and left a pale outline of a map that wasn’t there before, a map of a space that existed only in the Market’s memory. The map’s lines connected the glass cage to the very stall with Forbidden Elixirs, a path of intention stitched with the dust like a thread drawn by a patient tailor. The Market’s current speed picked up a notch as if it found a new rhythm to match the detectives’ renewed focus. The noise of the crowd—the murmur of voices, the clinking of glass, the soft scratch of metal on stone—sounded suddenly too loud, an intrusion into a private examination. But Quinn kept her breath steady, her eyes scanning for anything that didn’t belong, anything that looked out of place in a place that existed to hide out-of-place things. The bone token’s presence began to feel less ceremonial and more practical. It wasn’t merely a key; it was a beacon, an anchor to a space where the Market’s walls grew thin and the world’s edges softened. The token’s etched sigils seemed to shift as if they recognized a user—someone who might know how to pass between what is seen and what is not. A shape detached itself from the crowd behind Eva—a man whose coat was too fine for the Market’s ordinary grubbiness, his eyes the color of old coins. The look in his gaze was one of practiced calm, the calm of a man who had learned not to blink when danger passed by in the form of rumors and a police badge. Quinn didn’t react to the stranger’s approach with fear or surprise. She paused for a moment, letting the man’s path into the scene become a thing she could observe rather than something she needed to react to. The stranger stopped at the edge of the glass cage, his hands held open in a position that suggested he meant no harm but had enough to hide to keep safe. The Market’s air thickened and then thinned as if it were holding a breath in its lungs. “Detective Quinn,” the stranger said, his voice smooth, with the ease of a man who had learned to speak to crowds and prisoners alike without changing his expression. “We have seen you arrive, and we have watched your steps as you walked the line between suspicion and knowledge.” Quinn did not rise to the bait. The stranger’s words carried a seduction of certainty, a lure that suggested the Market could be persuaded to reveal its secrets if the right words were spoken. She kept her voice level and precise. “The token opened a gate,” she replied, keeping the conversation as a weapon rather than a comfort. “If this is a trap, someone wired the floor with it.” The stranger’s mouth curved in a faint, almost apologetic smile. “A fair assessment. The Gate is a witness to what took place here, and the token is only a tool to invite the Right Witness to walk through it.” Eva pressed the flat of her palm against the wood of a stall’s counter, her eyes narrowing in a way that suggested she was seeing the building blocks of a spell rather than the surface of wood. “We’re not playing a fairy tale. We’re looking at a crime.” The man inclined his head in a gesture that suggested both acknowledgement and a warning. “If you want the truth, you’ll need more than a token and a map. You’ll need to listen to the space between the spoken words and the unspoken ones.” The Market’s hum shifted again, as if the walls themselves leaned in to listen. The compass’s needle twitched, then settled toward a seam in the air behind the Forbidden Elixirs stall. The seam wasn’t a door, not yet, but it was a suggestion, a whispering thread between the world and something older than the Market’s stories. Harlow stepped closer to the seam, not touching it but letting her gaze follow the thread the Veil Compass revealed. She knew the truth could ride the line between rational explanation and supernatural interference—the sort of truth that made you narrow your eyes and ask the questions that didn’t bear removing. “What’s at the seam?” Eva asked in a careful whisper, not breaking eye contact with the seam or with the man who watched them with a quiet, controlled interest. Quinn kept her voice low and to the point. “If the seam is real, it’s our best chance to confirm whether this was a cultish act or a frame job that uses ritual language to hide something more mortal: a robbery, an insider job, a deal gone wrong.” The man at the edge smiled again, this time with a hint of acknowledgment. He didn’t move toward them, but his attention shifted, and in that shift, the Market revealed a second truth—an underground chamber behind the Elixirs stall, a space like a throat swallowing the entire crowd as if the Market could swallow more than it already had. Quinn’s jaw tightened. The force of years of service pressed into one careful breath. DS Morris’s memory rose—the partner who died under circumstances that had supernatural innards even she refused to name aloud—and she felt that old ache, that cold edge of something not quite resolved. We’re not finished here, she thought, and her eyes flicked to Eva, who stood with the satchel’s flap pressed against her hip, as if she were ready to spring into action with a single, decisive move. The Veil Compass pulsed once, a small throb that seemed to originate from the space beyond the seam. The seam itself became a minute shimmer, a reflection of something alive on the other side, and then it closed again as if the Market had drawn a breath and released it with a sigh. The stranger stepped back, giving them room, but not fear. He spoke again, almost in invitation, as though he wanted them to understand the Market’s riddles not as enemies but as partners. “Some doors weren’t built to be opened for wealth or fame,” he said, almost in a casual aside. “Some doors are built to test whether we deserve to pass.” Eva tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her ear, her voice rising with a careful conviction that hadn’t yet learned to fear the strange in front of her. “We deserve to know the truth, and we will not be deterred by a doorway that pretends not to exist.” The crowd’s murmur deepened, a chorus of voices too many to count, each one carrying a different thread of suspicion and memory. Harlow lowered her eyes to the ground, tracing the chalk’s edges with her boot, following the faint path as if it could lead to an exit that didn’t involve blood or fear. She thought of her partner, thinking not of his death but of the moment he had learned to listen to the whispers that came from places like this, the whispers that told you when someone was lying by how their hands trembled or how a breath would skip its rhythm. The lesson had never left her, even as she learned to ignore the temptation of a story that would comfort rather than expose. The market’s air grew cooler, as if the temperature had decided to help them think clearly, to strip away the fog that lived in human fear and in human vanity. A quiet shared deliberation built between the two women—Harlow with her military patience and Eva with her calm, scholarly certainty. The body in the glass cage remained—still, pale, the shawl’s fringe still tracing a line around the person’s body as if drawing a boundary that no one supposed to cross would respect. But the line’s boundaries, the chalk’s edges, the sigils, the token, the compass’s glow, and the seam—these weren’t random things. They were a system, a code, and the Market’s message. If this is a test of who belongs in this place, Harlow thought, it’s a test of who belongs to the truth. And she, a detective with eighteen years of decorated service, had learned to tell truth from rumor by how it looked in the light and how it moved in the dark. She looked at Eva, who returned the look with a steady, almost hopeful brightness. Then she looked at the seam again, at the way the Veil Compass’s needle pressed toward it with a stubborn insistence. We need to step through, or the Market will step through for us, she thought, a plan forming with the precision of a practiced strike. And if the Market steps through, it won’t be to reveal the answer but to erase it, to erase the crime by turning the truth into a memory nobody can trust. The flame in the lamps brightened, the market’s hum returning with a slight tremor. Quinn tucked the Veil Compass into her coat sleeve and stepped closer to the seam, listening for a breath that wasn’t hers to take, a sound that did not belong to this place but came from the other side of the veil’s thin skin. Eva moved beside her, not touching the seam but close enough to catch the tremor of it in the air, a shared sense that something lay beyond the world of stalls and ash and glass. The token’s surface reflected a hint of that shimmer and a promise that somewhere beyond the space the Market called home, there existed a truth they could reach if they followed the right path. They waited in a careful stillness for something to happen—a subtle shift, a whisper of movement, a sign of a portal opening or a trap snapping shut. The Market’s breath grew steady again, and the two investigators prepared to walk it, one careful footstep at a time, into the unknown that waited beyond the seam.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4122
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"completely"
4"gently"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4122
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"fluttered"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count5
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"standard"
count1
11
word"tangible"
count1
12
word"carried the weight"
count1
13
word"quivered"
count1
14
word"measured"
count2
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"flicked"
count2
17
word"wavering"
count1
18
word"etched"
count2
19
word"trembled"
count2
20
word"scanning"
count1
21
word"beacon"
count1
22
word"unspoken"
count1
23
word"resolved"
count1
24
word"pulsed"
count1
25
word"throb"
count1
26
word"tracing"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"glint"
2"flickered"
3"could feel"
4"fluttered"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"perfect"
8"whisper"
9"intensity"
10"standard"
11"tangible"
12"carried the weight"
13"quivered"
14"measured"
15"silence"
16"flicked"
17"wavering"
18"etched"
19"trembled"
20"scanning"
21"beacon"
22"unspoken"
23"resolved"
24"pulsed"
25"throb"
26"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences176
matches
0"h with fear"
45.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"try to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences184
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4096
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"This token is a map, Eva muttered, lifting her chin as if to measure the distance between the token and whatever it was …"
1"This place is a trap for truth, Eva said softly, not looking at Quinn, eyes glimmering with the kind of intensity that c…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions110
wordCount3899
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Market"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Market"
discoveredNames
Veil11
Market26
Tube1
Camden2
London1
Harlow17
Quinn12
Kowalski1
Eva22
Scotland1
Yard1
Compass7
Forbidden3
Elixirs4
Morris1
persons
0"Market"
1"Camden"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Yard"
7"Compass"
8"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Scotland"
2"Forbidden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences169
glossingSentenceCount18
matches
0"as if balancing on a breath"
1"looked like crushed stars, a glass orb th"
2"seemed woven from smoke, the feet crossed at the ankles as if in repose, the kind of pose one would take to suggest serenity while something very wrong happened just out of frame"
3"appeared peaceful almost asleep, the lips curved in the eerie composure one found in portraits of staged tragedy"
4"as if inviting someone to stand there and tell the truth they did not want to hear"
5"quite align with a standard occult pattern"
6"looked like a script from a forgotten led"
7"quite touch the eyes"
8"bead that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it"
9"as if offering a hand, and for a heartbeat the air between token and glass quivered"
10"floor that seemed to be made of old river stones"
11"felt like a test"
12"something like a circle with three nested cr"
13"as if nudging them closer to the body for inspection"
14"something like damp parchment and old copper"
15"not quite resolved"
16"throb that seemed to originate from the space beyond the seam"
17"as if drawing a boundary that no one supposed to cross would respect"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches18
per1kWords4.395
wordCount4096
matches
0"not with sound but with a frequency you could feel, like a current under the sk"
1"not of sweat but something else"
2"not used to panic but used to thresholds"
3"not a victim’s garment but a veil, one"
4"not just the physical space but the patterns others had laid over it: chalk, glass, a shawl"
5"not merely to leave but to bring something through"
6"not to the earth but to the air"
7"neither pleasant nor"
8"not of people but of possibility"
9"not death; the lines around the eyes were not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the mom"
10"not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the mom"
11"not aloud, but with the intention"
12"no harm but"
13"not yet, but it was a suggestion, a whispering thread between the world"
14"not touching it but letting her gaze follow the thread the Veil Compass revealed"
15"not as enemies but as partners"
16"not of his death but of the moment he had learned to listen to the whispers"
17"not touching the seam but close enough to catch the tremor of it in the air, a shared"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences184
matches
0"considering that possibility"
45.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean53.89
std16.59
cv0.308
sampleLengths
076
162
271
368
490
5104
668
745
825
926
1061
1179
1268
1337
1433
1533
1686
1747
1845
1937
2065
2134
2273
2337
2433
2540
2659
2773
2828
2961
3056
3159
3273
3363
3459
3562
3651
3755
3863
3965
4059
4161
4232
4384
4478
4564
4661
4737
4848
4948
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences176
matches
0"was draped"
1"was mapped"
2"was arranged"
3"been carved"
4"is seen"
5"were spoken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs612
matches
0"was playing"
1"was holding"
2"were testing"
3"were holding"
4"was seeing"
5"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences184
ratio0.12
matches
0"A stall offered jars of things that didn’t belong to the day—dust that looked like crushed stars, a glass orb that contained a raincloud, coins that felt warm and damp at the same time."
1"The surface beneath the body bore a thin sheen, not of sweat but something else—an oil-like film that caught the amber light and bent it into a pale, living halo."
2"She noted the precise geometry of the sigils—circles and hexagons that didn’t quite align with a standard occult pattern."
3"The shawl’s fringe created a frame around the face, and the frame’s angle pointed to a particular stall—one whose sign advertised “Forbidden Elixirs” in cursive that looked like a script from a forgotten ledger."
4"A faint footprint rested on the dust at the edge of the cage, but it led nowhere—a single print, a dot on a map with no country to belong to."
5"We’re missing something obvious, Harlow observed, though she didn’t tell Eva that she’d recognized the type of perversion the scene was playing—an inversion of a retail crime, where the perpetrator didn’t take something tangible but altered perception."
6"The Veil Market isn’t just selling goods; it’s selling access."
7"She bent to pick up a small vial that lay near the shelf’s edge—its liquid dark as spilled ink, glimmering as if it contained a star."
8"The market would love a rumor of poison; it would feed on fear and fear’s cousins."
9"The lanterns seemed to glow with a more careful, almost conspiratorial light, and a movement—not of people but of possibility—ran through the space like a current along a wire."
10"The face suggested sleep, not death; the lines around the eyes were not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the moment frozen in time."
11"The noise of the crowd—the murmur of voices, the clinking of glass, the soft scratch of metal on stone—sounded suddenly too loud, an intrusion into a private examination."
12"It wasn’t merely a key; it was a beacon, an anchor to a space where the Market’s walls grew thin and the world’s edges softened."
13"The token’s etched sigils seemed to shift as if they recognized a user—someone who might know how to pass between what is seen and what is not."
14"A shape detached itself from the crowd behind Eva—a man whose coat was too fine for the Market’s ordinary grubbiness, his eyes the color of old coins."
15"She knew the truth could ride the line between rational explanation and supernatural interference—the sort of truth that made you narrow your eyes and ask the questions that didn’t bear removing."
16"He didn’t move toward them, but his attention shifted, and in that shift, the Market revealed a second truth—an underground chamber behind the Elixirs stall, a space like a throat swallowing the entire crowd as if the Market could swallow more than it already had."
17"DS Morris’s memory rose—the partner who died under circumstances that had supernatural innards even she refused to name aloud—and she felt that old ache, that cold edge of something not quite resolved."
18"A quiet shared deliberation built between the two women—Harlow with her military patience and Eva with her calm, scholarly certainty."
19"The body in the glass cage remained—still, pale, the shawl’s fringe still tracing a line around the person’s body as if drawing a boundary that no one supposed to cross would respect."
20"But the line’s boundaries, the chalk’s edges, the sigils, the token, the compass’s glow, and the seam—these weren’t random things."
21"They waited in a careful stillness for something to happen—a subtle shift, a whisper of movement, a sign of a portal opening or a trap snapping shut."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2704
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.02514792899408284
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.007766272189349112
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences184
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences184
mean22.26
std9.43
cv0.423
sampleLengths
017
120
218
321
416
522
624
723
823
925
1020
1113
1235
1313
1419
1534
1624
1721
1816
1926
2041
2116
2222
2330
2420
2525
2625
2726
286
2927
3028
3133
3219
3327
3430
3538
3618
3719
3833
3933
4017
4123
4219
4327
4410
453
4634
4715
4830
4937
32.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.15760869565217392
totalSentences184
uniqueOpeners29
38.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences175
matches
0"Only if the markings align,"
1"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences175
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair touched the"
1"Her green eyes moved quick,"
2"They moved as a pair"
3"She paused at a crime"
4"She frowned, a crease forming"
5"It moved with the full"
6"Her mind worked in the"
7"She noted the precise geometry"
8"She counted the steps between"
9"It was arranged."
10"We’re missing something obvious, Harlow"
11"Her voice carried the weight"
12"She pressed the token to"
13"Her eyes surveyed not just"
14"she asked no one and"
15"It was a symbol Harlow"
16"She circled the stall, stopping"
17"She bent to pick up"
18"It’s a draught of forgetfulness,"
19"It pointed toward a shimmer"
ratio0.206
8.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences175
matches
0"The Veil Market wore the"
1"An abandoned Tube station beneath"
2"The night air smelled of"
3"The bone token in Harlow"
4"The entrance appeared when they"
5"The gate’s iron teeth gritted"
6"A chime lifted, and the"
7"Harlow Quinn moved with the"
8"Her salt-and-pepper hair touched the"
9"The left wrist bore the"
10"Eva Kowalski stood at a"
11"Her green eyes moved quick,"
12"The necklace of books in"
13"They moved as a pair"
14"The market hummed, not with"
15"A stall offered jars of"
16"The signs on the stalls"
17"Quinn’s eyes scanned the space,"
18"She paused at a crime"
19"The figure was draped in"
ratio0.903
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences175
matches
0"Whoever did this wants the"
1"If the market wanted to"
2"If this is a trap,"
3"If this is a test"
ratio0.023
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences154
technicalSentenceCount37
matches
0"The night air smelled of damp iron and something sweeter, a candle-wax heaviness that clung to the tongue."
1"A chime lifted, and the space beyond opened into a market that breathed in slow, deliberate puffs of shadow and distant murky amber glow."
2"The necklace of books in her satchel weighed more than the words inside them, and the freckled skin of her face caught a sour-glow from a lantern that flickered…"
3"A stall offered jars of things that didn’t belong to the day—dust that looked like crushed stars, a glass orb that contained a raincloud, coins that felt warm a…"
4"The signs on the stalls fluttered with a life of their own, as if the letters remembered every visitor who ever crossed the threshold."
5"The surface beneath the body bore a thin sheen, not of sweat but something else—an oil-like film that caught the amber light and bent it into a pale, living hal…"
6"She frowned, a crease forming between her brows, the freckles on her nose jumping as she studied the sigils and the stillness of the figure."
7"The current moon tonight stood high, a pale coin in a counterfeit sky, and the market’s pulse shifted beneath its surface, a heartbeat that insisted on keeping …"
8"A shawl’s fringe dragged along the ground as if it resisted touching the floor with anything other than reverence."
9"The second thing she noticed was the way the air inside the glass cage tasted metallic, as if someone had taken a coin and pressed it against the tongue until i…"
10"This place is a trap for truth, Eva said softly, not looking at Quinn, eyes glimmering with the kind of intensity that came from someone who spent their nights …"
11"This token’s supposed to be a door opener, Eva whispered, watching the token’s surface where the sigils contracted and expanded as if the glass were a living th…"
12"But the token’s influence remained, a subtle pressure along the skin of the night air, as if the market itself was holding its breath, waiting for someone to de…"
13"The crowd of stalls watched in silence, a congregation of things that had learned to behave when a crime occurred and the Market decided to pretend nothing happ…"
14"Quinn stepped away from the cage, her boot tapping a measured rhythm against a floor that seemed to be made of old river stones."
15"The shelf’s wood had been carved in a way that allowed small items to slide toward the cage, as if nudging them closer to the body for inspection."
16"She bent to pick up a small vial that lay near the shelf’s edge—its liquid dark as spilled ink, glimmering as if it contained a star."
17"Eva noted the vial with an almost tactile interest, lifting it with her gloved fingers as though she were testing the air for distant weather patterns."
18"The marker’s ink hadn’t dried completely, and if you stood close enough, you could see the grains of chalk that overlapped the sigils, lines of intention crossi…"
19"The instrument’s face etched protective sigils glowed faintly under her touch, reacting to the market’s own energy, as if the thing knew where a rift lay even i…"
20"Eva stepped closer to the glass cage and studied the body’s expression, noticing the slight parting of the lips as if the person within drew in a breath and cho…"
21"The face suggested sleep, not death; the lines around the eyes were not tired, but alert, as if the person had spotted something before the moment frozen in tim…"
22"The needle trembled, then steadied, finally pointing toward the stall where the air hung most heavily, where the chalk’s edge met the wood and the sigils met th…"
23"Show me what you’re hiding, Harlow thought, not aloud, but with the intention that a person who could decipher lies and half-truths could feel the invitation li…"
24"But Quinn kept her breath steady, her eyes scanning for anything that didn’t belong, anything that looked out of place in a place that existed to hide out-of-pl…"
25"The stranger’s words carried a seduction of certainty, a lure that suggested the Market could be persuaded to reveal its secrets if the right words were spoken."
26"Eva pressed the flat of her palm against the wood of a stall’s counter, her eyes narrowing in a way that suggested she was seeing the building blocks of a spell…"
27"She knew the truth could ride the line between rational explanation and supernatural interference—the sort of truth that made you narrow your eyes and ask the q…"
28"He didn’t move toward them, but his attention shifted, and in that shift, the Market revealed a second truth—an underground chamber behind the Elixirs stall, a …"
29"DS Morris’s memory rose—the partner who died under circumstances that had supernatural innards even she refused to name aloud—and she felt that old ache, that c…"
30"We’re not finished here, she thought, and her eyes flicked to Eva, who stood with the satchel’s flap pressed against her hip, as if she were ready to spring int…"
31"The seam itself became a minute shimmer, a reflection of something alive on the other side, and then it closed again as if the Market had drawn a breath and rel…"
32"Eva tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her ear, her voice rising with a careful conviction that hadn’t yet learned to fear the strange in front of her."
33"Harlow lowered her eyes to the ground, tracing the chalk’s edges with her boot, following the faint path as if it could lead to an exit that didn’t involve bloo…"
34"She thought of her partner, thinking not of his death but of the moment he had learned to listen to the whispers that came from places like this, the whispers t…"
35"Quinn tucked the Veil Compass into her coat sleeve and stepped closer to the seam, listening for a breath that wasn’t hers to take, a sound that did not belong …"
36"The Market’s breath grew steady again, and the two investigators prepared to walk it, one careful footstep at a time, into the unknown that waited beyond the se…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.6584%