| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1333 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1333 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "otherworldly" | | 10 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1312 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1161 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Petersham | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | London | 2 | | Kingston | 1 | | Vale | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Jupiter | 1 | | Snowdonia | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Petersham" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Kingston" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | globalScore | 0.854 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed suspicious the numbers frozen as though the device had given up" | | 1 | "appeared fused" | | 2 | "quite trees anymore" | | 3 | "something like recognition pass through them" | | 4 | "felt like drowning in reverse—a sudden" | | 5 | "quite oxygen, something sweeter and stranger, like honey and copper and the green smell of growing things" | | 6 | "something close to it" | | 7 | "seemed almost rhythmic almost intentional" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.762 | | wordCount | 1312 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 29.16 | | std | 24.59 | | cv | 0.844 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 72 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 61 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 61 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 70 | | 42 | 54 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 90.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "were moving" | | 2 | "was building" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.157 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the screen showed nothing but the time—3:47 PM—and even that seemed suspicious, the numbers frozen as though the device had given up." | | 1 | "She'd been feeling it for the past hundred meters—a pressure behind her eyes, a wrongness in the air like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks." | | 2 | "One moment they were walking through ordinary parkland; the next, the oaks had thickened into a wall of ancient bark, and there they were—seven massive trees arranged in a rough circle, their trunks grown so close together they appeared fused." | | 3 | "Their shadow-form rippled as they approached the nearest stone, and for a moment Aurora thought she saw something like recognition pass through them—the way a traveler might greet an old friend." | | 4 | "The transition lasted less than a second but felt like drowning in reverse—a sudden absence of air followed by its overwhelming return." | | 5 | "Wildflowers covered the ground—more varieties than Aurora could name, colors that didn't exist in nature crowding together in impossible profusion." | | 6 | "\"It is. To mortals.\" They gestured at the boundary—the ring of ancient oaks that now surrounded them, their trunks glowing faintly with the same silver light as the sky." | | 7 | "The flowers grew thicker toward the center of the clearing, and she saw now that they weren't merely growing—they were moving, slowly, imperceptibly, turning their faces toward her as she passed like sunflowers tracking the sun." | | 8 | "The water was crystal clear, and at its bottom lay coins—hundreds of them, thousands, some ancient and encrusted with verdigris, others bright and new." | | 9 | "The flowers around it had begun to close, their petals folding inward as the light in the sky dimmed slightly—the first change she'd seen since entering." | | 10 | "Instead, she looked deeper into the grove, where the flowers gave way to a structure she hadn't noticed before—something that might have been a temple or a ruin or simply a collection of stones piled in shapes that suggested meaning." | | 11 | "She thought about the unknown benefactor who'd given it to her, about the weight of expectations she didn't fully understand, about the life she'd left behind in Cardiff and the new life she was building in London—one that involved deliveries and shadow-beings and trips to otherworldly groves hidden in public parks." | | 12 | "They walked deeper, and the grove shifted around them—the flowers blooming and dying in spans that might have been seconds or hours, the light brightening and dimming in patterns that seemed almost rhythmic, almost intentional." | | 13 | "The temple grew larger as they approached, and Aurora saw that it was neither temple nor ruin but something else—a living thing, perhaps, grown from the same silver-white stone as the standing stones at the boundary." |
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| 90.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1182 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same silver-white stone" |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.043993231810490696 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014382402707275803 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.74 | | std | 11.3 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 66.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.43820224719101125 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her footsteps seemed to" | | 1 | "Instead, she looked deeper into" | | 2 | "Then she stepped forward, into" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been feeling it for" | | 1 | "They walked in silence after" | | 2 | "Their shadow-form rippled as they" | | 3 | "She thought about Evan, about" | | 4 | "She stepped forward." | | 5 | "She stood in a clearing." | | 6 | "She saw blue so deep" | | 7 | "She couldn't find the words" | | 8 | "They gestured at the boundary—the" | | 9 | "She followed it, Nyx drifting" | | 10 | "She didn't answer." | | 11 | "She thought about the unknown" | | 12 | "They walked deeper, and the" | | 13 | "She'd felt it as a" | | 14 | "She'd felt it standing at" | | 15 | "It had no doors, no" |
| | ratio | 0.254 | |
| 39.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi had dropped them" | | 1 | "That wasn't unusual in certain" | | 2 | "Nyx asked, their voice carrying" | | 3 | "Aurora didn't need to ask" | | 4 | "She'd been feeling it for" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her" | | 6 | "They walked in silence after" | | 7 | "The path wound deeper into" | | 8 | "The birds had stopped singing." | | 9 | "The wind had died." | | 10 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 11 | "The bark had taken on" | | 12 | "Nyx said, moving forward" | | 13 | "Their shadow-form rippled as they" | | 14 | "The pendant pulsed hotter against" | | 15 | "She thought about Evan, about" | | 16 | "The scar on her wrist" | | 17 | "She stepped forward." | | 18 | "The transition lasted less than" | | 19 | "Aurora gasped, her lungs filling" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the screen showed nothing" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her footsteps seemed to mute against the ground, as though the earth itself had grown softer, more secretive." | | 1 | "Aurora gasped, her lungs filling with something that wasn't quite oxygen, something sweeter and stranger, like honey and copper and the green smell of growing t…" | | 2 | "Wildflowers covered the ground—more varieties than Aurora could name, colors that didn't exist in nature crowding together in impossible profusion." | | 3 | "She saw blue so deep it was almost black, red that seemed to pulse with inner light, petals that shifted between yellow and pink as she watched." | | 4 | "The air smelled of nectar and rainfall and something underneath it all, a faint mineral tang like stone that had been warmed by long-dead suns." | | 5 | "Aurora walked forward, her boots crunching on petals that crumbled like dried paint beneath her feet." | | 6 | "She followed it, Nyx drifting at her shoulder, and found a pool fed by a spring that bubbled up from moss-covered rocks." | | 7 | "The flowers around it had begun to close, their petals folding inward as the light in the sky dimmed slightly—the first change she'd seen since entering." | | 8 | "Instead, she looked deeper into the grove, where the flowers gave way to a structure she hadn't noticed before—something that might have been a temple or a ruin…" | | 9 | "The architecture was wrong, non-human, the angles and proportions at odds with anything built for people who walked upright." | | 10 | "She thought about the unknown benefactor who'd given it to her, about the weight of expectations she didn't fully understand, about the life she'd left behind i…" | | 11 | "They walked deeper, and the grove shifted around them—the flowers blooming and dying in spans that might have been seconds or hours, the light brightening and d…" | | 12 | "Aurora felt the wrongness growing in her chest, the pressure of a place that didn't fully belong to her reality pressing against her like deep water." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx completed, their form stabilizing as they stepped fully into the space" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.192 | | leniency | 0.385 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |