Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0P4N104MSW7593PF25KKZ

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Duration:
5.3s
Cost:
$0.003020
Provider:
SambaNova

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The taxi had dropped them at the Petersham Gate of Richmond Park, and Aurora checked her phone again. No signal. That wasn't unusual in certain parts of London, but she'd had bars when they'd crossed Kingston Vale. Now the screen showed nothing but the time—3:47 PM—and even that seemed suspicious, the numbers frozen as though the device had given up. "You feel it?" Nyx asked, their voice carrying that strange quality like wind through an empty room. In the dying afternoon light, their form flickered between solid and shadow, the edges of their silhouette uncertain whether they wanted to exist fully or dissolve into the growing dusk. "Feel what?" "The thinning." Aurora didn't need to ask what they meant. She'd been feeling it for the past hundred meters—a pressure behind her eyes, a wrongness in the air like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest pulsed warmth through her shirt, slow and steady like a heartbeat. They walked in silence after that, past the deer grazing in the amber grass, past the darkening tree line. The path wound deeper into the park, and Aurora became aware of small changes. The birds had stopped singing. The wind had died. Even her footsteps seemed to mute against the ground, as though the earth itself had grown softer, more secretive. The standing stones appeared without warning. One moment they were walking through ordinary parkland; the next, the oaks had thickened into a wall of ancient bark, and there they were—seven massive trees arranged in a rough circle, their trunks grown so close together they appeared fused. But they weren't quite trees anymore. The bark had taken on a greyish pallor, and where branches should have reached skyward, the wood twisted into shapes that suggested antlers, or fingers, or something else entirely. "Jesus," Aurora breathed. "The boundary," Nyx said, moving forward. Their shadow-form rippled as they approached the nearest stone, and for a moment Aurora thought she saw something like recognition pass through them—the way a traveler might greet an old friend. "We're meant to walk through the center." "Through the trees?" "Through the space between." Aurora hesitated. The pendant pulsed hotter against her skin. She thought about Evan, about the way he'd always told her she was too curious for her own good, about how she'd left him anyway. The scar on her wrist ached faintly, the old injury remembering itself. She stepped forward. The transition lasted less than a second but felt like drowning in reverse—a sudden absence of air followed by its overwhelming return. Aurora gasped, her lungs filling with something that wasn't quite oxygen, something sweeter and stranger, like honey and copper and the green smell of growing things. She stood in a clearing. The sky above was the color of a bruise, purple and amber and shot through with threads of silver that might have been stars or might have been something else entirely. The light came from everywhere and nowhere, casting no shadows, illuminating everything in an even glow that made the world feel staged, artificial, dreamlike. Wildflowers covered the ground—more varieties than Aurora could name, colors that didn't exist in nature crowding together in impossible profusion. She saw blue so deep it was almost black, red that seemed to pulse with inner light, petals that shifted between yellow and pink as she watched. The air smelled of nectar and rainfall and something underneath it all, a faint mineral tang like stone that had been warmed by long-dead suns. "This is..." She couldn't find the words. "The Grove," Nyx completed, their form stabilizing as they stepped fully into the space. For once, they looked almost solid, their humanoid shape more defined than Aurora had ever seen. "Isolde's realm." "I thought it was supposed to be hidden." "It is. To mortals." They gestured at the boundary—the ring of ancient oaks that now surrounded them, their trunks glowing faintly with the same silver light as the sky. "The Veil is thin here. The Fae blood in this place... it tears at the fabric of what should be." Aurora walked forward, her boots crunching on petals that crumbled like dried paint beneath her feet. The flowers grew thicker toward the center of the clearing, and she saw now that they weren't merely growing—they were moving, slowly, imperceptibly, turning their faces toward her as she passed like sunflowers tracking the sun. A sound reached her ears. Water. A stream or fountain, somewhere among the blossoms. She followed it, Nyx drifting at her shoulder, and found a pool fed by a spring that bubbled up from moss-covered rocks. The water was crystal clear, and at its bottom lay coins—hundreds of them, thousands, some ancient and encrusted with verdigris, others bright and new. Wishes, she thought. Offerings. "Don't drink from it," Nyx warned. "The Fae don't distinguish between giving and taking." "What do you mean?" "Any gift from them has a price. Even water." Aurora stepped back from the pool. The flowers around it had begun to close, their petals folding inward as the light in the sky dimmed slightly—the first change she'd seen since entering. Time. The codex had mentioned time moved differently here. "How long have we been here?" Nyx's glowing violet eyes fixed on her. "What makes you think we've been here long enough to matter?" She didn't answer. Instead, she looked deeper into the grove, where the flowers gave way to a structure she hadn't noticed before—something that might have been a temple or a ruin or simply a collection of stones piled in shapes that suggested meaning. The architecture was wrong, non-human, the angles and proportions at odds with anything built for people who walked upright. "We should find Isolde," she said. "Should we?" Nyx's voice carried amusement, or something close to it. "You came here seeking answers. But the Seer doesn't give answers. She gives visions. Riddles. Pieces of futures that may or may not belong to you." "I know." "And you're still going?" Aurora touched the pendant, feeling its warmth against her palm. She thought about the unknown benefactor who'd given it to her, about the weight of expectations she didn't fully understand, about the life she'd left behind in Cardiff and the new life she was building in London—one that involved deliveries and shadow-beings and trips to otherworldly groves hidden in public parks. "I didn't come all this way to turn back." They walked deeper, and the grove shifted around them—the flowers blooming and dying in spans that might have been seconds or hours, the light brightening and dimming in patterns that seemed almost rhythmic, almost intentional. Aurora felt the wrongness growing in her chest, the pressure of a place that didn't fully belong to her reality pressing against her like deep water. But beneath the wrongness, beneath the unease, something else stirred. Wonder. She'd felt it as a child, the first time she'd looked through a telescope and seen the moons of Jupiter. She'd felt it standing at the edge of a cliff in Snowdonia, looking down at the clouds and feeling truly small for the first time. The world was larger than she'd ever imagined, stranger and more terrible and more beautiful, and she was here, inside it, part of it now. The temple grew larger as they approached, and Aurora saw that it was neither temple nor ruin but something else—a living thing, perhaps, grown from the same silver-white stone as the standing stones at the boundary. It had no doors, no windows, only a single opening that gaped like a mouth in its surface. Light spilled from within, warm and golden, and within that light, a figure waited. Aurora took a breath. Then she stepped forward, into the unknown, toward the Seer who spoke in riddles and the visions that might save or destroy everything she'd come to love.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"pulse"
6"crystal"
7"structure"
8"weight"
9"otherworldly"
10"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1312
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1161
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Petersham1
Gate1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora15
London2
Kingston1
Vale1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Nyx7
Evan1
Cardiff1
Jupiter1
Snowdonia1
Seer1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Evan"
places
0"Petersham"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"Kingston"
5"Cardiff"
6"Seer"
globalScore0.854
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"seemed suspicious the numbers frozen as though the device had given up"
1"appeared fused"
2"quite trees anymore"
3"something like recognition pass through them"
4"felt like drowning in reverse—a sudden"
5"quite oxygen, something sweeter and stranger, like honey and copper and the green smell of growing things"
6"something close to it"
7"seemed almost rhythmic almost intentional"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.762
wordCount1312
matches
0"neither temple nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"saw that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.16
std24.59
cv0.844
sampleLengths
060
147
22
32
450
561
66
775
83
944
103
114
1246
133
1448
155
1655
1772
187
1932
208
2149
2252
2314
2450
2514
264
279
2841
296
3018
3162
326
3337
342
354
3661
379
3861
3910
401
4170
4254
4314
4431
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"been warmed"
90.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs183
matches
0"were walking"
1"were moving"
2"was building"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences89
ratio0.157
matches
0"Now the screen showed nothing but the time—3:47 PM—and even that seemed suspicious, the numbers frozen as though the device had given up."
1"She'd been feeling it for the past hundred meters—a pressure behind her eyes, a wrongness in the air like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks."
2"One moment they were walking through ordinary parkland; the next, the oaks had thickened into a wall of ancient bark, and there they were—seven massive trees arranged in a rough circle, their trunks grown so close together they appeared fused."
3"Their shadow-form rippled as they approached the nearest stone, and for a moment Aurora thought she saw something like recognition pass through them—the way a traveler might greet an old friend."
4"The transition lasted less than a second but felt like drowning in reverse—a sudden absence of air followed by its overwhelming return."
5"Wildflowers covered the ground—more varieties than Aurora could name, colors that didn't exist in nature crowding together in impossible profusion."
6"\"It is. To mortals.\" They gestured at the boundary—the ring of ancient oaks that now surrounded them, their trunks glowing faintly with the same silver light as the sky."
7"The flowers grew thicker toward the center of the clearing, and she saw now that they weren't merely growing—they were moving, slowly, imperceptibly, turning their faces toward her as she passed like sunflowers tracking the sun."
8"The water was crystal clear, and at its bottom lay coins—hundreds of them, thousands, some ancient and encrusted with verdigris, others bright and new."
9"The flowers around it had begun to close, their petals folding inward as the light in the sky dimmed slightly—the first change she'd seen since entering."
10"Instead, she looked deeper into the grove, where the flowers gave way to a structure she hadn't noticed before—something that might have been a temple or a ruin or simply a collection of stones piled in shapes that suggested meaning."
11"She thought about the unknown benefactor who'd given it to her, about the weight of expectations she didn't fully understand, about the life she'd left behind in Cardiff and the new life she was building in London—one that involved deliveries and shadow-beings and trips to otherworldly groves hidden in public parks."
12"They walked deeper, and the grove shifted around them—the flowers blooming and dying in spans that might have been seconds or hours, the light brightening and dimming in patterns that seemed almost rhythmic, almost intentional."
13"The temple grew larger as they approached, and Aurora saw that it was neither temple nor ruin but something else—a living thing, perhaps, grown from the same silver-white stone as the standing stones at the boundary."
90.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same silver-white stone"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.043993231810490696
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.014382402707275803
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean14.74
std11.3
cv0.766
sampleLengths
018
12
217
323
417
530
62
72
88
925
1017
1119
1214
135
144
1519
166
1740
186
1929
203
216
2231
237
243
254
262
277
2825
2912
303
3122
3226
335
3431
3524
3620
3727
3825
397
4014
4116
422
438
4429
4520
4616
4736
485
491
66.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43820224719101125
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"Even her footsteps seemed to"
1"Instead, she looked deeper into"
2"Then she stepped forward, into"
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences63
matches
0"She'd been feeling it for"
1"They walked in silence after"
2"Their shadow-form rippled as they"
3"She thought about Evan, about"
4"She stepped forward."
5"She stood in a clearing."
6"She saw blue so deep"
7"She couldn't find the words"
8"They gestured at the boundary—the"
9"She followed it, Nyx drifting"
10"She didn't answer."
11"She thought about the unknown"
12"They walked deeper, and the"
13"She'd felt it as a"
14"She'd felt it standing at"
15"It had no doors, no"
ratio0.254
39.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences63
matches
0"The taxi had dropped them"
1"That wasn't unusual in certain"
2"Nyx asked, their voice carrying"
3"Aurora didn't need to ask"
4"She'd been feeling it for"
5"The Heartstone Pendant against her"
6"They walked in silence after"
7"The path wound deeper into"
8"The birds had stopped singing."
9"The wind had died."
10"The standing stones appeared without"
11"The bark had taken on"
12"Nyx said, moving forward"
13"Their shadow-form rippled as they"
14"The pendant pulsed hotter against"
15"She thought about Evan, about"
16"The scar on her wrist"
17"She stepped forward."
18"The transition lasted less than"
19"Aurora gasped, her lungs filling"
ratio0.841
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Now the screen showed nothing"
ratio0.016
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Even her footsteps seemed to mute against the ground, as though the earth itself had grown softer, more secretive."
1"Aurora gasped, her lungs filling with something that wasn't quite oxygen, something sweeter and stranger, like honey and copper and the green smell of growing t…"
2"Wildflowers covered the ground—more varieties than Aurora could name, colors that didn't exist in nature crowding together in impossible profusion."
3"She saw blue so deep it was almost black, red that seemed to pulse with inner light, petals that shifted between yellow and pink as she watched."
4"The air smelled of nectar and rainfall and something underneath it all, a faint mineral tang like stone that had been warmed by long-dead suns."
5"Aurora walked forward, her boots crunching on petals that crumbled like dried paint beneath her feet."
6"She followed it, Nyx drifting at her shoulder, and found a pool fed by a spring that bubbled up from moss-covered rocks."
7"The flowers around it had begun to close, their petals folding inward as the light in the sky dimmed slightly—the first change she'd seen since entering."
8"Instead, she looked deeper into the grove, where the flowers gave way to a structure she hadn't noticed before—something that might have been a temple or a ruin…"
9"The architecture was wrong, non-human, the angles and proportions at odds with anything built for people who walked upright."
10"She thought about the unknown benefactor who'd given it to her, about the weight of expectations she didn't fully understand, about the life she'd left behind i…"
11"They walked deeper, and the grove shifted around them—the flowers blooming and dying in spans that might have been seconds or hours, the light brightening and d…"
12"Aurora felt the wrongness growing in her chest, the pressure of a place that didn't fully belong to her reality pressing against her like deep water."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx completed, their form stabilizing as they stepped fully into the space"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
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