Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0PFJ2C8TCDNWV264HHHYG

Run Details

Duration:
27.8s
Cost:
$0.004590
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain rattled. Three deadbolts slammed back in rapid succession, a metallic symphony of paranoia that echoed off the narrow hallway walls. The door swung inward, revealing Rory framed by the warm, cluttered glow of her flat. Books stacked like precarious towers lined every surface. Scrolls spilled from baskets onto the floor. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wove a figure-eight around her ankles before freezing, tail twitching at the sight of the man on the landing. Lucien Moreau stood there, rain dripping from the brim of his umbrella onto the scuffed linoleum. His charcoal suit looked immaculate despite the London drizzle, the fabric repelling water as if offended by the weather. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tip clicking once against the doorframe. "You changed the locks," he said. His voice carried that smooth, continental edge that used to make her forget her own name. "Smart. Though the third bolt is a tad dramatic, even for you." Rory gripped the door, knuckles white. She didn't step back. She didn't invite him in. The air between them crackled, thick with the scent of ozone and old perfume. "I didn't expect company. Especially not you." "Plans change." Lucien tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes catching the light. The amber one seemed to burn; the black one swallowed it. "May I?" "No." He pushed past her anyway. The cane hooked the door shut behind him with a deft flick of his wrist. The movement was fluid, predatory. He navigated the maze of research notes and ancient texts without knocking a single paper to the floor, as if he had mapped the chaos in his mind beforehand. "This place smells of turmeric and desperation," he observed, running a gloved finger along a stack of grimoires. "A fitting combination." "Get out, Lucien." Rory crossed her arms over her chest, shielding the small crescent scar on her left wrist. "We're done. You made that abundantly clear six months ago when you vanished without a word." "I did not vanish." He turned to face her, stripping off his leather gloves finger by finger. "I retreated. There is a distinction." "Semantics." She stepped forward, forcing him to look down at her. At five-six, she had to tilt her chin up, but she held her ground. "You left. You took the job in Marseille and ghosted. I spent weeks wondering if you were dead or if you just decided I wasn't worth a phone call." Lucien's expression tightened. For a moment, the cool mask slipped, revealing a flash of something raw beneath. "You think I wanted to leave? My father's realm does not grant sabbaticals, Rory. Avaros calls its blood home, and the pull was... insistent." "So you couldn't send a text? 'Hey, demonic dad issues, might be gone a while'?" He laughed, a short, sharp sound lacking humor. "And what would you have done? Dropped your delivery route for Yu-Fei Cheung to fly to Marseille? You were barely keeping your head above water with Evan breathing down your neck. Adding a half-demon crisis to your plate would have broken you." "Don't pretend you did it for me." Rory's voice cracked, just once. She hated the sound. "You did it because it was easy. Because walking away is what you do best." Lucien closed the distance between them. The space in the cramped flat suddenly felt suffocating. He towered over her, the heat radiating from him distinct from the radiator clanking in the corner. He smelled of sandalwood and something darker, like smoke trapped in a bottle. "Easy?" He reached out, his bare hand hovering near her cheek. He didn't touch her, not yet. "Do you have any idea what it cost me to walk out of that bar in Soho? To leave you sitting there with your bright blue eyes full of accusations I couldn't answer?" Rory flinched but didn't pull away. "Then answer them now." "I can't." He dropped his hand, gripping the ivory handle of his cane until his knuckles turned white. "The things I deal with, the people I protect you from by staying away... knowledge is a liability, Rory. You know this better than anyone." "I know you treat me like glass." She shoved past him, pacing the small strip of floor between the sofa and the coffee table. Ptolemy hissed at Lucien's shoes and darted under an armchair. "I survived Evan. I survived moving to London with nothing but a backpack and a grudge against my father. I deliver food to vampires and warlocks in the East End before breakfast. Stop treating me like I'm fragile." "You are not fragile." Lucien's voice dropped, low and rough. "You are the most stubborn, infuriating woman I have ever encountered. That is precisely the problem." He moved again, cornering her against the bookshelf. A volume on Celtic mythology dug into her lower back. She glared up at him, breath hitching as he caged her in with his arms, the cane discarded somewhere on the floor. "Say it," she demanded. "Say why you're really here." "I received intel," he began, his gaze dropping to her mouth. "Someone is asking questions about the girl who lives above Silas' bar. Questions that suggest they know about your connection to me." Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. "Is that it? You show up as a bodyguard? After half a year of silence?" "I show up because I couldn't stay away." The admission hung in the air, heavy and terrifying. Lucien brushed a stray strand of black hair from her face, his touch finally landing on her skin. His fingers were warm, trembling slightly. "Every minute I spent in Marseille, I wondered if you were safe. If you were eating. If you were thinking about me with the same bitterness I felt every time I closed my eyes." Rory stared at him, the anger warring with the ache she had buried deep inside. "You're an idiot, Lucien Moreau." "Undeniably." "And a coward." "Also true." She grabbed the lapels of his suit jacket, yanking him down. Their lips crashed together, not gentle, not sweet. It was a collision of months of unsaid words and stifled frustration. He tasted of rain and wine. His hands tangled in her hair, pulling her closer until there was no space left between them. The books rattled on the shelves as he pressed her harder against the wood. Rory kissed him back with everything she had, biting his lower lip, tasting the salt of his skin. The hurt didn't vanish, but it burned away under the intensity of the moment. She wrapped her legs around his waist, and he lifted her effortlessly, carrying her away from the door, away from the locks and the security and the past. They stumbled toward the sofa, knocking over a stack of papers. Ptolemy yowled in protest from under the chair. Lucien ignored the chaos, his focus entirely on the woman in his arms. He broke the kiss only to trail his mouth down her neck, eliciting a gasp that echoed in the small room. "Don't you dare leave again," she whispered, her fingers digging into his platinum hair. Lucien paused, his forehead resting against hers. His amber eye swirled with gold; the black one remained void. "I have no intention of going anywhere. Let them come. Let them all come." "If you break my heart this time," Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands, "I won't just change the locks. I'll find a way to banish you to Avaros myself." A genuine smile touched his lips, transforming his face from brooding fixer to the man she remembered. "I would expect nothing less from Aurora Carter." He kissed her again, softer this time, sealing the promise in the quiet of the flat on Brick Lane, surrounded by the secrets they both kept and the future they had yet to navigate.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:56:59.851Z" 2/19/2026, 3:56:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory's voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.372
leniency0.744
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.047
84.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"precisely"
2"really"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"echoed"
2"navigated"
3"silence"
4"intensity"
5"navigate"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1313
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount833
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Moreau1
London1
Ptolemy3
Lucien9
Celtic1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.96
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1313
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean34.55
std20.4
cv0.59
sampleLengths
075
148
234
336
425
51
654
721
835
923
1054
1141
1215
1350
1431
1545
1650
1710
1843
1972
2026
2140
229
2333
2421
2575
2620
271
283
292
3068
3160
3253
3314
3432
3534
3625
3734
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences98
ratio0.02
matches
0"The amber one seemed to burn; the black one swallowed it."
1"His amber eye swirled with gold; the black one remained void."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025119617224880382
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007177033492822967
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.4
std8.65
cv0.645
sampleLengths
03
119
215
38
47
523
616
719
813
96
1016
1112
126
134
145
1514
167
1712
1811
192
201
215
2215
235
2429
2518
263
2719
2816
2917
306
3111
3214
3329
343
3514
3624
3715
388
3942
4012
414
4215
436
449
4517
4613
4711
486
4933
60.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3979591836734694
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences69
matches
0"His charcoal suit looked immaculate"
1"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2"His voice carried that smooth,"
3"She didn't step back."
4"She didn't invite him in."
5"He pushed past her anyway."
6"He navigated the maze of"
7"he observed, running a gloved"
8"He turned to face her,"
9"She stepped forward, forcing him"
10"He laughed, a short, sharp"
11"She hated the sound."
12"He towered over her, the"
13"He smelled of sandalwood and"
14"He reached out, his bare"
15"He didn't touch her, not"
16"He dropped his hand, gripping"
17"She shoved past him, pacing"
18"He moved again, cornering her"
19"She glared up at him,"
ratio0.478
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences69
matches
0"The chain rattled."
1"The door swung inward, revealing"
2"Books stacked like precarious towers"
3"Scrolls spilled from baskets onto"
4"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wove"
5"Lucien Moreau stood there, rain"
6"His charcoal suit looked immaculate"
7"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
8"His voice carried that smooth,"
9"Rory gripped the door, knuckles"
10"She didn't step back."
11"She didn't invite him in."
12"The air between them crackled,"
13"Lucien tilted his head, his"
14"The amber one seemed to"
15"He pushed past her anyway."
16"The cane hooked the door"
17"The movement was fluid, predatory."
18"He navigated the maze of"
19"he observed, running a gloved"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Three deadbolts slammed back in rapid succession, a metallic symphony of paranoia that echoed off the narrow hallway walls."
1"His charcoal suit looked immaculate despite the London drizzle, the fabric repelling water as if offended by the weather."
2"His voice carried that smooth, continental edge that used to make her forget her own name."
3"He navigated the maze of research notes and ancient texts without knocking a single paper to the floor, as if he had mapped the chaos in his mind beforehand."
4"He broke the kiss only to trail his mouth down her neck, eliciting a gasp that echoed in the small room."
5"A genuine smile touched his lips, transforming his face from brooding fixer to the man she remembered."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien tilted, his heterochromatic eyes catching the light"
1"He reached out, his bare hand hovering near her cheek"
2"he began, his gaze dropping to her mouth"
3"she whispered, her fingers digging into his platinum hair"
4"Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands,"
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.14
76.2528%