Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0PJQSK1DJ4KRQ8MQGB1KW

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Duration:
11.9s
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$0.016310
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the dim hallway of Eva's flat, her heart pounding against her ribs like a caged bird. The air was thick with the scent of curry wafting up from the restaurant below, mingling with the musty aroma of old books and parchment. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the door, the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist a stark reminder of past mistakes. She hadn't expected to be here, not after everything that had happened. But life had a way of throwing curveballs, and here she was, standing outside the door of someone she hadn't seen in months. The door swung open before she could knock, revealing Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers with an intensity that made her breath catch. He was as impeccably dressed as ever, his tailored charcoal suit fitting him like a second skin, the ivory-handled cane resting casually in his grip. The sight of him was a punch to the gut, a reminder of all the things left unsaid between them. "Rory," he greeted, his voice smooth, carrying the faintest trace of his French accent. It was a voice that had once been a balm to her frayed nerves, a voice that had whispered promises in the dark. "Lucien," she replied, her own voice steady despite the turmoil churning inside her. She stepped into the flat, the door closing behind her with a soft click. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, regarded her with a lazy blink from his perch atop a stack of books. The flat was as cramped as she remembered, every surface covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. It was a place of chaos and comfort, a sanctuary for secrets and stories. She felt Lucien's gaze on her, a tangible weight that pressed against her skin. "I didn't expect to see you here," he said, his tone carefully neutral, though his eyes betrayed a flicker of something deeper — curiosity, perhaps, or a hint of the hurt that had lingered between them. "I didn't expect to be here," she admitted, crossing her arms over her chest, a defensive gesture she couldn't quite help. "Eva's out, and I needed a place to think." Lucien nodded, his expression thoughtful. "And you thought of here?" She shrugged, a small, almost imperceptible movement. "It's familiar. Safe." "Safe," he echoed, a wry smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. "I suppose that's one way to describe it." Silence stretched between them, heavy with the weight of unspoken words. Aurora glanced around the room, her gaze skimming over the cluttered surfaces, the stacks of books that seemed to multiply with every visit. It was a place that felt lived-in, a place that held memories — some shared, some solitary. "How have you been?" Lucien asked, breaking the silence, his voice softer now, as if he were afraid of shattering the fragile peace between them. "Busy," she replied, her tone clipped, though she couldn't deny the warmth that spread through her at his concern. "Work keeps me occupied." "And Evan?" His question hung in the air, a specter of the past that refused to be ignored. "He's out of the picture," she said, her voice firm, leaving no room for doubt. "For good." Lucien nodded, his expression unreadable. "I'm glad to hear that." She met his gaze, searching for something — understanding, perhaps, or forgiveness. But his eyes were a mystery, a puzzle she couldn't quite solve. They stood there, two people caught in the web of their own history, the air between them charged with the electricity of things left unsaid. "Why are you here, Lucien?" she asked, her voice steady, though her heart raced with the anticipation of his answer. He hesitated, his gaze flicking to the stacks of books, the scrolls that seemed to whisper secrets of their own. "I needed to see you," he admitted, his voice low, almost a confession. "Why?" The question slipped out before she could stop it, a demand for answers she wasn't sure she was ready to hear. "Because," he said, his gaze locking onto hers, "I can't stop thinking about you." The admission hung in the air, a truth that seemed to pulse with its own life. Aurora felt her heart skip a beat, a traitorous flutter that betrayed her resolve. She had tried to forget him, tried to bury the memories of their time together beneath layers of work and routine. But here he was, standing before her, a reminder of all the things she had tried to leave behind. "Lucien," she began, her voice faltering, unsure of what to say, how to respond to the raw honesty in his words. He stepped closer, the distance between them shrinking, the air crackling with tension. "I know things ended badly," he said, his voice earnest, "but I can't pretend that I don't care about you." Aurora swallowed, her throat tight with emotion. "It was complicated," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "It was," he agreed, his gaze unwavering, "but that doesn't mean it has to stay that way." She looked at him, really looked at him, seeing the man beneath the tailored suit, the fixer and information broker who had once been her ally, her confidant. There was a vulnerability in his eyes, a plea for understanding, for a chance to rewrite the narrative of their past. "I don't know if I can do this," she admitted, her voice trembling with the weight of her uncertainty. Lucien reached out, his hand brushing against hers, a tentative touch that sent a shiver down her spine. "You don't have to decide now," he said, his voice gentle, "but know that I'm here, if you want to try." She nodded, her heart a tumult of emotions — fear, hope, longing. It was a leap into the unknown, a step towards something that could be beautiful or devastating. But as she stood there, her hand in his, she felt a flicker of possibility, a spark of something that could be worth the risk. "Okay," she said, her voice steady now, a promise wrapped in a single word. Lucien's smile was soft, a glimmer of warmth that chased away the shadows of doubt. "Okay," he echoed, his voice a balm to her frayed nerves. They stood there, two people caught in the web of their own history, the air between them charged with the electricity of things left unsaid. But in that moment, there was a promise of something new, a chance to rewrite the narrative of their past, to find a way forward together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count3
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"churning"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"tangible"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"solitary"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count2
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"charged"
count2
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count2
20
word"pulse"
count1
21
word"resolve"
count1
22
word"tension"
count1
23
word"unwavering"
count1
24
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"stark"
2"reminder"
3"intensity"
4"churning"
5"sanctuary"
6"tangible"
7"weight"
8"flicker"
9"familiar"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"unspoken"
13"solitary"
14"warmth"
15"unreadable"
16"charged"
17"raced"
18"anticipation"
19"whisper"
20"pulse"
21"resolve"
22"tension"
23"unwavering"
24"down her spine"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count2
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"the weight of unspoken words"
2"hung in the air"
3"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
23.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount964
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva2
Lucien7
Moreau1
French1
Silence1
Aurora4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"French"
5"Silence"
6"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite help"
1"books that seemed to multiply with every visit"
2"quite solve"
3"scrolls that seemed to whisper secrets of their own"
4"truth that seemed to pulse with its own life"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1103
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean33.42
std20.54
cv0.614
sampleLengths
0100
176
237
345
445
536
630
710
810
921
1051
1125
1223
1318
1417
1510
1649
1720
1833
1922
2014
2170
2221
2333
2418
2517
2649
2719
2839
2954
3014
3126
3251
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was, standing"
1"was, standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences67
ratio0.075
matches
0"The door swung open before she could knock, revealing Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers with an intensity that made her breath catch."
1"\"I didn't expect to see you here,\" he said, his tone carefully neutral, though his eyes betrayed a flicker of something deeper — curiosity, perhaps, or a hint of the hurt that had lingered between them."
2"It was a place that felt lived-in, a place that held memories — some shared, some solitary."
3"She met his gaze, searching for something — understanding, perhaps, or forgiveness."
4"She nodded, her heart a tumult of emotions — fear, hope, longing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount961
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01664932362122789
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007284079084287201
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean16.46
std6.98
cv0.424
sampleLengths
020
125
220
312
423
531
625
720
814
923
1013
1114
1218
1317
1414
1514
1636
1721
189
195
205
217
223
2313
248
2511
2623
2717
2825
2919
304
3118
3215
332
345
355
3612
3712
3825
3920
4020
4113
4222
4314
4416
4514
4621
4719
4821
4913
55.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3582089552238806
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences60
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
1"She hadn't expected to be"
2"He was as impeccably dressed"
3"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
4"It was a voice that"
5"she replied, her own voice"
6"She stepped into the flat,"
7"It was a place of"
8"She felt Lucien's gaze on"
9"he said, his tone carefully"
10"she admitted, crossing her arms"
11"She shrugged, a small, almost"
12"he echoed, a wry smile"
13"It was a place that"
14"she replied, her tone clipped,"
15"His question hung in the"
16"she said, her voice firm,"
17"She met his gaze, searching"
18"They stood there, two people"
19"she asked, her voice steady,"
ratio0.617
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences60
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood in the"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
3"She hadn't expected to be"
4"The door swung open before"
5"He was as impeccably dressed"
6"The sight of him was"
7"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
8"It was a voice that"
9"she replied, her own voice"
10"She stepped into the flat,"
11"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, regarded"
12"The flat was as cramped"
13"It was a place of"
14"She felt Lucien's gaze on"
15"he said, his tone carefully"
16"she admitted, crossing her arms"
17"Lucien nodded, his expression thoughtful."
18"She shrugged, a small, almost"
19"he echoed, a wry smile"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The door swung open before she could knock, revealing Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers with an intensity that …"
1"Aurora glanced around the room, her gaze skimming over the cluttered surfaces, the stacks of books that seemed to multiply with every visit."
2"He hesitated, his gaze flicking to the stacks of books, the scrolls that seemed to whisper secrets of their own."
3"Aurora felt her heart skip a beat, a traitorous flutter that betrayed her resolve."
4"She looked at him, really looked at him, seeing the man beneath the tailored suit, the fixer and information broker who had once been her ally, her confidant."
5"Lucien reached out, his hand brushing against hers, a tentative touch that sent a shiver down her spine."
6"It was a leap into the unknown, a step towards something that could be beautiful or devastating."
7"But as she stood there, her hand in his, she felt a flicker of possibility, a spark of something that could be worth the risk."
8"Lucien's smile was soft, a glimmer of warmth that chased away the shadows of doubt."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she replied, her own voice steady despite the turmoil churning inside her"
1"he echoed, a wry smile tugging at the corner of his mouth"
2"His question hung, a specter of the past that refused to be ignored"
3"she said, her voice firm, leaving no room for doubt"
4"he admitted, his voice low, almost a confession"
5"he said, his gaze locking onto hers,"
6"he said, his voice earnest,"
7"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"he agreed, his gaze unwavering,"
9"she admitted, her voice trembling with the weight of her uncertainty"
10"he said, his voice gentle,"
11"he echoed, his voice a balm to her frayed nerves"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he agreed (agree)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.267
59.7355%