| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "churning" | | 5 | "sanctuary" | | 6 | "tangible" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "solitary" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "anticipation" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "pulse" | | 21 | "resolve" | | 22 | "tension" | | 23 | "unwavering" | | 24 | "down her spine" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 5 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
| | 3 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "the weight of unspoken words" | | 2 | "hung in the air" | | 3 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1103 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 964 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 7 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Aurora | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "French" | | 5 | "Silence" | | 6 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite help" | | 1 | "books that seemed to multiply with every visit" | | 2 | "quite solve" | | 3 | "scrolls that seemed to whisper secrets of their own" | | 4 | "truth that seemed to pulse with its own life" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 33.42 | | std | 20.54 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 70 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "was, standing" | | 1 | "was, standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before she could knock, revealing Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers with an intensity that made her breath catch." | | 1 | "\"I didn't expect to see you here,\" he said, his tone carefully neutral, though his eyes betrayed a flicker of something deeper — curiosity, perhaps, or a hint of the hurt that had lingered between them." | | 2 | "It was a place that felt lived-in, a place that held memories — some shared, some solitary." | | 3 | "She met his gaze, searching for something — understanding, perhaps, or forgiveness." | | 4 | "She nodded, her heart a tumult of emotions — fear, hope, longing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 961 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.01664932362122789 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007284079084287201 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 16.46 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.424 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 55.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3582089552238806 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, her hand hovering" | | 1 | "She hadn't expected to be" | | 2 | "He was as impeccably dressed" | | 3 | "he greeted, his voice smooth," | | 4 | "It was a voice that" | | 5 | "she replied, her own voice" | | 6 | "She stepped into the flat," | | 7 | "It was a place of" | | 8 | "She felt Lucien's gaze on" | | 9 | "he said, his tone carefully" | | 10 | "she admitted, crossing her arms" | | 11 | "She shrugged, a small, almost" | | 12 | "he echoed, a wry smile" | | 13 | "It was a place that" | | 14 | "she replied, her tone clipped," | | 15 | "His question hung in the" | | 16 | "she said, her voice firm," | | 17 | "She met his gaze, searching" | | 18 | "They stood there, two people" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice steady," |
| | ratio | 0.617 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood in the" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "She hesitated, her hand hovering" | | 3 | "She hadn't expected to be" | | 4 | "The door swung open before" | | 5 | "He was as impeccably dressed" | | 6 | "The sight of him was" | | 7 | "he greeted, his voice smooth," | | 8 | "It was a voice that" | | 9 | "she replied, her own voice" | | 10 | "She stepped into the flat," | | 11 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, regarded" | | 12 | "The flat was as cramped" | | 13 | "It was a place of" | | 14 | "She felt Lucien's gaze on" | | 15 | "he said, his tone carefully" | | 16 | "she admitted, crossing her arms" | | 17 | "Lucien nodded, his expression thoughtful." | | 18 | "She shrugged, a small, almost" | | 19 | "he echoed, a wry smile" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before she could knock, revealing Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers with an intensity that …" | | 1 | "Aurora glanced around the room, her gaze skimming over the cluttered surfaces, the stacks of books that seemed to multiply with every visit." | | 2 | "He hesitated, his gaze flicking to the stacks of books, the scrolls that seemed to whisper secrets of their own." | | 3 | "Aurora felt her heart skip a beat, a traitorous flutter that betrayed her resolve." | | 4 | "She looked at him, really looked at him, seeing the man beneath the tailored suit, the fixer and information broker who had once been her ally, her confidant." | | 5 | "Lucien reached out, his hand brushing against hers, a tentative touch that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 6 | "It was a leap into the unknown, a step towards something that could be beautiful or devastating." | | 7 | "But as she stood there, her hand in his, she felt a flicker of possibility, a spark of something that could be worth the risk." | | 8 | "Lucien's smile was soft, a glimmer of warmth that chased away the shadows of doubt." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, her own voice steady despite the turmoil churning inside her" | | 1 | "he echoed, a wry smile tugging at the corner of his mouth" | | 2 | "His question hung, a specter of the past that refused to be ignored" | | 3 | "she said, her voice firm, leaving no room for doubt" | | 4 | "he admitted, his voice low, almost a confession" | | 5 | "he said, his gaze locking onto hers," | | 6 | "he said, his voice earnest," | | 7 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "he agreed, his gaze unwavering," | | 9 | "she admitted, her voice trembling with the weight of her uncertainty" | | 10 | "he said, his voice gentle," | | 11 | "he echoed, his voice a balm to her frayed nerves" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "she admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |