Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0PR3HX3JTASWBY1WN40MF

Run Details

Duration:
36.2s
Cost:
$0.035459
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The world unravelled and stitched itself back together in a heartbeat. One moment, the damp chill of a London underpass clung to Aurora’s jacket; the next, a wave of thick, honeyed warmth washed over her. It was a suffocating blanket woven from heat and the scent of a thousand baking cakes and roasting meats. She stumbled forward, a hand flying to her chest where the Heartstone Pendant burned with a triumphant, steady heat against her skin. The silver chain was a brand. The sky was not blue, or grey, or even black. It was a deep, liquid amber, as if they stood inside a globe of ancient resin. There was no sun, no moon, only this pervasive, warm luminosity that cast everything in a golden glow and erased the concept of shadow almost entirely. Almost. Nyx flowed into existence beside her, a tear in the fabric of the golden light, a column of shifting, violet-edged darkness. The Shade’s form seemed to writhe, less stable here, as if the very air sought to fill the void they occupied. Isolde stood a pace ahead, her silver hair a stark river of moonlight against the overwhelming gold. She remained serene, her pale lavender eyes taking in the vista, a small, unreadable smile on her lips. She had not stumbled. Her feet rested lightly on grass the colour of emeralds, leaving no impression. “Gods,” Aurora breathed, the word a plume of steam in the heavy air. “The smell. It’s…” She trailed off, unable to find the word. It was everything at once. Cinnamon and seared steak, melting chocolate and something floral and intoxicatingly sweet, woodsmoke and fermenting fruit. It was the scent of every desire she had ever felt, a siren call to a feast she could not see. Her stomach clenched with a sudden, sharp hunger. *Souls, seasoned with regret,* Nyx’s voice was a rustle of dry leaves in her mind, a cool counterpoint to the oppressive warmth. *This realm feeds on more than substance.* Aurora tore her gaze from the impossible sky and looked around. They stood on a gentle slope overlooking a valley of cultivated indulgence. Before them, terraced vineyards marched down the hills, their vines thick as a man’s arm, heavy with clusters of luminous, pulsating grapes. Orchards of trees with polished silver bark bore fruit of impossible colours—pears that shimmered like oil on water, apples of spun glass, plums so dark they drank the amber light. A river, wide and sluggish, meandered through the valley floor. It was not water. It was a deep, viscous crimson, and the air around it was sharp with the tang of wine. “Where do we even start?” Aurora’s hand went to the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver was a shock of absolute cold, a welcome anchor in the sensory deluge. Isolde turned her head, her gaze distant. “The path that offers the sweetest fruit is often the one that leads to the deepest root.” She pointed with a slender, pale hand. A track wound its way down from their position, paved not with stone but with what looked like a mosaic of polished, iridescent beetle carapaces. It shimmered with hues of green and purple. The path led towards the crimson river and a distant, glittering structure that rose in tiered layers like a wedding cake for a giant. They began to walk. The air grew thicker with every step, the scents more distinct, more seductive. The silence of their arrival was replaced by a low, constant hum of activity. Laughter, faint and distant. The clang of metal on metal, rhythmic and purposeful. The high, clear notes of a stringed instrument. As they descended into the orchards, Aurora saw people. A man with a deeply lined face and haunted eyes knelt by a tree bearing fixtures of pure, crystallised honey. He carefully, lovingly, polished each one with a silk cloth, his movements a devotion. A woman sang to a patch of strawberries, each berry the size of Aurora’s fist, and they seemed to swell and blush a deeper red in response to her song. They were souls, she realised. Not apparitions, but solid, tangible beings, utterly consumed by their tasks. None of them looked up as the trio passed. They were lost in their work, their private corners of this gluttonous paradise. Their damnation was one of exquisite obsession. *Their contracts are with the craft,* Nyx whispered, a thread of shadow trailing from their hand to caress a leaf shaped like a perfect, five-pointed star. The leaf withered to black dust at their touch. *The product is for the Prince.* Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, a useless gesture in the heat. A strange lethargy seeped into her bones, a desire to simply sit beneath a glass-apple tree and let the world drift away. Her own hunger was a living thing inside her now, a gnawing emptiness that the scents in the air promised to fill. She found herself staring at a fruit hanging from a low branch. It was a vibrant blue, the skin covered in a fine, silver dust that glittered. Her mouth watered. Her hand twitched, an involuntary urge to reach out, to pluck it, to taste it. Isolde stopped walking. She did not look at Aurora, but at the fruit. “The first bite sates a hunger of the tongue. The second, a hunger of the soul. There is no third.” Aurora snatched her hand back as if the fruit were a hot coal. The crescent-shaped scar on her wrist seemed to tighten. She swallowed, her throat dry despite the humidity. The simple act of denial was a physical effort, a pushing back against a current that wanted to pull her under. They reached the bank of the wine river. An ornate bridge of what looked like white, carved bone arched over the slow-moving liquid. On the other side, fields of strange grains rippled, their stalks topped with kernels that glittered like tiny gems. In the distance, the tiered city pulsed with light, music now carrying clearly on the air. It was a place of celebration, a festival without end. The unease in Aurora’s core solidified into a cold knot that even the oppressive warmth could not touch. This perfection was a lie. A beautiful, intoxicating, and utterly monstrous lie. She felt a profound sense of wrongness, of being a discordant note in a symphony of indulgence. Nyx drifted to the river's edge, their form shimmering. They dipped a shadowy finger into the crimson flow. *A vintage of a thousand sorrows,* their whisper came, laced with something that might have been grim appreciation. *Each drop a memory of a life’s greatest feast, soured by eternity.* Aurora watched a single, ruby-red drop cling to Nyx's fingertip before it was absorbed back into their dark form. Her eyes were fixed on the bone bridge, on the glittering city that lay beyond. Every instinct screamed at her to turn back, but the pendant on her chest was a hot, insistent weight, pulling her forward.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:57:08.601Z" 2/19/2026, 3:57:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"lightly"
2"carefully"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"desire"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count2
7
word"shimmered"
count2
8
word"mosaic"
count1
9
word"structure"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"tangible"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"profound"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
18
word"symphony"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"stark"
3"unreadable"
4"desire"
5"stomach"
6"oppressive"
7"shimmered"
8"mosaic"
9"structure"
10"silence"
11"rhythmic"
12"silk"
13"tangible"
14"perfect"
15"pulsed"
16"profound"
17"sense of"
18"symphony"
19"whisper"
20"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"d with regret"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords41
totalWords1174
ratio0.035
matches
0"Souls, seasoned with regret,"
1"This realm feeds on more than substance."
2"Their contracts are with the craft,"
3"The product is for the Prince."
4"A vintage of a thousand sorrows,"
5"Each drop a memory of a life’s greatest feast, soured by eternity."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1128
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Aurora11
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Shade1
Nyx5
Fae-forged1
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Shade"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a mosaic of polished, iridesc"
1"looked like white, carved bone arched ove"
29.64% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.704
wordCount1174
matches
0"not with stone but with what looked like a mosaic of polished, iridescent beetl"
1"Not apparitions, but solid, tangible beings, utterly consumed by their tasks"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean55.9
std33.49
cv0.599
sampleLengths
082
195
252
316
458
529
6107
733
824
964
1052
11118
1241
13100
1413
1520
1651
17115
1818
1930
2056
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences84
matches
0"was replaced"
1"were lost"
2"was absorbed"
3"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
77.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences87
ratio0.023
matches
0"One moment, the damp chill of a London underpass clung to Aurora’s jacket; the next, a wave of thick, honeyed warmth washed over her."
1"Orchards of trees with polished silver bark bore fruit of impossible colours—pears that shimmered like oil on water, apples of spun glass, plums so dark they drank the amber light."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1136
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single, ruby-red drop"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.027288732394366196
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009683098591549295
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.49
std6.79
cv0.503
sampleLengths
011
124
219
322
46
510
616
726
81
921
1021
1117
1218
134
1413
1513
163
178
185
1916
2021
218
2222
237
2411
2512
2622
2730
2810
294
3018
3118
3215
337
3417
357
3625
378
3824
394
4013
4114
424
439
448
459
4620
4714
4830
495
48.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3448275862068966
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences83
matches
0"It was a suffocating blanket"
1"She stumbled forward, a hand"
2"It was a deep, liquid"
3"She remained serene, her pale"
4"She had not stumbled."
5"Her feet rested lightly on"
6"She trailed off, unable to"
7"It was everything at once."
8"It was the scent of"
9"Her stomach clenched with a"
10"They stood on a gentle"
11"It was not water."
12"It was a deep, viscous"
13"She pointed with a slender,"
14"It shimmered with hues of"
15"They began to walk."
16"He carefully, lovingly, polished each"
17"They were souls, she realised."
18"They were lost in their"
19"Their damnation was one of"
ratio0.398
2.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences83
matches
0"The world unravelled and stitched"
1"It was a suffocating blanket"
2"She stumbled forward, a hand"
3"The silver chain was a"
4"The sky was not blue,"
5"It was a deep, liquid"
6"Nyx flowed into existence beside"
7"The Shade’s form seemed to"
8"Isolde stood a pace ahead,"
9"She remained serene, her pale"
10"She had not stumbled."
11"Her feet rested lightly on"
12"Aurora breathed, the word a"
13"She trailed off, unable to"
14"It was everything at once."
15"Cinnamon and seared steak, melting"
16"It was the scent of"
17"Her stomach clenched with a"
18"*Souls, seasoned with regret,* Nyx’s"
19"*This realm feeds on more"
ratio0.916
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Before them, terraced vineyards marched"
ratio0.012
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Orchards of trees with polished silver bark bore fruit of impossible colours—pears that shimmered like oil on water, apples of spun glass, plums so dark they dr…"
1"It was a vibrant blue, the skin covered in a fine, silver dust that glittered."
2"Aurora snatched her hand back as if the fruit were a hot coal."
3"The simple act of denial was a physical effort, a pushing back against a current that wanted to pull her under."
4"On the other side, fields of strange grains rippled, their stalks topped with kernels that glittered like tiny gems."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora breathed, the word a plume of steam in the heavy air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
72.4202%