| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1182 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1182 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "desire" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "mosaic" | | 9 | "structure" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "tangible" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "profound" | | 17 | "sense of" | | 18 | "symphony" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 41 | | totalWords | 1174 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "Souls, seasoned with regret," | | 1 | "This realm feeds on more than substance." | | 2 | "Their contracts are with the craft," | | 3 | "The product is for the Prince." | | 4 | "A vintage of a thousand sorrows," | | 5 | "Each drop a memory of a life’s greatest feast, soured by eternity." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1128 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a mosaic of polished, iridesc" | | 1 | "looked like white, carved bone arched ove" |
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| 29.64% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.704 | | wordCount | 1174 | | matches | | 0 | "not with stone but with what looked like a mosaic of polished, iridescent beetl" | | 1 | "Not apparitions, but solid, tangible beings, utterly consumed by their tasks" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 55.9 | | std | 33.49 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 107 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 118 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 100 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 115 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 56 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "were lost" | | 2 | "was absorbed" | | 3 | "were fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, the damp chill of a London underpass clung to Aurora’s jacket; the next, a wave of thick, honeyed warmth washed over her." | | 1 | "Orchards of trees with polished silver bark bore fruit of impossible colours—pears that shimmered like oil on water, apples of spun glass, plums so dark they drank the amber light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1136 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.027288732394366196 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009683098591549295 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 13.49 | | std | 6.79 | | cv | 0.503 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 48.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3448275862068966 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a suffocating blanket" | | 1 | "She stumbled forward, a hand" | | 2 | "It was a deep, liquid" | | 3 | "She remained serene, her pale" | | 4 | "She had not stumbled." | | 5 | "Her feet rested lightly on" | | 6 | "She trailed off, unable to" | | 7 | "It was everything at once." | | 8 | "It was the scent of" | | 9 | "Her stomach clenched with a" | | 10 | "They stood on a gentle" | | 11 | "It was not water." | | 12 | "It was a deep, viscous" | | 13 | "She pointed with a slender," | | 14 | "It shimmered with hues of" | | 15 | "They began to walk." | | 16 | "He carefully, lovingly, polished each" | | 17 | "They were souls, she realised." | | 18 | "They were lost in their" | | 19 | "Their damnation was one of" |
| | ratio | 0.398 | |
| 2.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The world unravelled and stitched" | | 1 | "It was a suffocating blanket" | | 2 | "She stumbled forward, a hand" | | 3 | "The silver chain was a" | | 4 | "The sky was not blue," | | 5 | "It was a deep, liquid" | | 6 | "Nyx flowed into existence beside" | | 7 | "The Shade’s form seemed to" | | 8 | "Isolde stood a pace ahead," | | 9 | "She remained serene, her pale" | | 10 | "She had not stumbled." | | 11 | "Her feet rested lightly on" | | 12 | "Aurora breathed, the word a" | | 13 | "She trailed off, unable to" | | 14 | "It was everything at once." | | 15 | "Cinnamon and seared steak, melting" | | 16 | "It was the scent of" | | 17 | "Her stomach clenched with a" | | 18 | "*Souls, seasoned with regret,* Nyx’s" | | 19 | "*This realm feeds on more" |
| | ratio | 0.916 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them, terraced vineyards marched" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Orchards of trees with polished silver bark bore fruit of impossible colours—pears that shimmered like oil on water, apples of spun glass, plums so dark they dr…" | | 1 | "It was a vibrant blue, the skin covered in a fine, silver dust that glittered." | | 2 | "Aurora snatched her hand back as if the fruit were a hot coal." | | 3 | "The simple act of denial was a physical effort, a pushing back against a current that wanted to pull her under." | | 4 | "On the other side, fields of strange grains rippled, their stalks topped with kernels that glittered like tiny gems." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora breathed, the word a plume of steam in the heavy air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |