Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0PSCCC5ZER73M1HK04E1M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.072975
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older, something that clung to the back of Detective Harlow Quinn's throat like ash. She ducked under the police tape stretched across the crumbling archway and stepped onto the platform, her footsteps echoing against tile walls that hadn't seen a legitimate passenger in decades. Camden Town's underground ran deep, but this place ran deeper. The station had been sealed off in 1924, bricked up and forgotten by everyone except urban explorers and, apparently, murderers. "Quinn." Sergeant Davies met her at the bottom of the stairs, his torch cutting a pale wedge through the darkness. "Thought you'd want to see this one yourself." "What've we got?" "Male, late thirties, found by some kids who shouldn't have been down here." Davies consulted his notebook, though Quinn suspected he'd already memorized every detail. Good man. Thorough. "No ID, no wallet, no phone. Dressed like he was heading to a business meeting. The pathologist is saying heart failure, but—" "But?" Davies's jaw tightened. "You'll want to see for yourself." The platform opened up ahead of them, lit now by the harsh glare of portable floodlights that made the Victorian tilework look surgical. Officers moved around the perimeter in careful choreography, collecting samples, photographing shadows. The body lay near the far wall, positioned with an almost deliberate precision that set Quinn's teeth on edge. She approached, pulling on nitrile gloves with practiced efficiency. The victim wore a charcoal suit, well-tailored, Italian leather shoes that had never touched puddle water before tonight. His face held an expression of absolute terror, mouth frozen open in a silent scream, eyes wide and filming over with the particular blankness of death. Quinn crouched beside him, studying the scene with the same military precision that had carried her through eighteen years on the force. Her worn leather watch caught the light as she tilted her wrist to check the time. Just past midnight. The witching hour, her grandmother would have called it. "Heart failure." She said it flatly, without inflection. "That's what Harrison is saying, yeah." Davies shifted his weight. "No signs of violence, no defensive wounds, toxicology will take a few days but she's not optimistic we'll find anything." Quinn said nothing. She was looking at the man's hands — specifically, at what he held clutched in his right fist. A small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris, strange symbols etched into its face. She'd never seen anything quite like it. "Evidence bag," she said, and someone pressed one into her palm. She photographed the compass from multiple angles before carefully prying it from the dead man's grip. The needle spun wildly for a moment, then settled, pointing not north but toward the darkened tunnel mouth at the end of the platform. "Faulty," Davies observed. "Must be why he tossed it. Knockoff tourist tat." "In a suit like this?" Quinn turned the compass over, examining the craftsmanship. No manufacturer's mark. No country of origin stamped into the brass. The sigils looked hand-carved, each one different, none matching any alphabet she recognized. "Man's wearing a Brioni. His watch is a vintage Patek Philippe. He doesn't buy knockoff tourist tat." "Then what's he doing in an abandoned Tube station with a broken compass?" Quinn didn't answer. She was studying the ground around the body, the way the dust had been disturbed. Footprints led from the platform edge toward where the man lay, but they were strange — deep at the heel, shallow at the toe, as if he'd been backing away from something. Running backward. "Where are the other prints?" she asked. "What other prints?" "The killer's." Quinn stood, her knees protesting the movement. She followed the victim's trail backward with her eyes, tracing the panic in his steps. "He was running from someone. Look at the stride length, the depth of impression. This man was terrified. He didn't just happen to have a heart attack down here." Davies frowned, joining her in examining the dusty floor. "I don't see anything else, Quinn. Just his prints leading in from that side tunnel, then..." He gestured vaguely at the body. "Exactly. Just his prints." Quinn felt the familiar tension building behind her eyes, the headache that always came when a case started whispering secrets she couldn't quite hear. "Someone chased him. Someone frightened him badly enough to give a healthy man in his thirties a fatal cardiac event. But whoever it was didn't leave footprints." "Could have worn booties. Forensic countermeasures." "Through that dust? We'd still see compression marks, disturbance patterns." Quinn shook her head, her sharp jaw set in a hard line. "Whoever was down here with him either flew or—" She stopped herself. Three years ago, she would have finished that sentence. Three years ago, before Morris, she would have laughed at the absurdity of what she was thinking. But Morris had died in a room with one door and no windows, screaming about shadows that moved wrong, and the coroner had ruled it an aneurysm despite the expression of frozen horror on his face. The same expression this man wore now. "Detective Quinn?" The voice came from behind her, feminine and edged with academic confidence. Quinn turned to find a young woman at the platform's edge, red curls escaping from beneath a rain-spotted hood, round glasses catching the floodlight glare. She carried a worn leather satchel that bulged with books, and something about her — the freckled face, the nervous way she tucked hair behind her left ear — suggested she was used to being dismissed. "This is a crime scene," Quinn said flatly. "How did you get past the cordon?" "I work with the museum. British Museum." The woman fumbled in her pocket and produced an ID badge. Eva Kowalski, Research Assistant, Department of Ancient History. "When dispatch mentioned the location, my supervisor sent me. This station — it has historical significance. Protected status. We need to document any disturbance to the original architecture before your lot starts—" "Ms. Kowalski." Quinn stepped forward, putting herself between the researcher and the body. "There's a dead man on this platform. Your architectural survey can wait." "Can it?" Eva's green eyes flicked past Quinn's shoulder, fixing on something behind her. "Because from where I'm standing, you've got a bigger problem than a body." Quinn turned, following the woman's gaze. At first she saw nothing — just the crumbling wall, the faded station signage, the eternal darkness of the tunnel mouth. Then her eyes adjusted, and she noticed what she'd missed before. The tiles. Victorian era, glazed ceramic, the kind that lined every Underground station in London. But these tiles formed a pattern she didn't recognize, geometric shapes that seemed to shift when she looked at them too directly. And in the center of that pattern, someone had scratched three words into the glaze. THE VEIL OPENS. "That's not architectural graffiti," Eva said quietly, moving to stand beside Quinn. "That's a warning. And it's old — see how the scratches have aged? Someone left that message decades ago. Before the station was sealed." "What does it mean?" Eva's hand went to her satchel, fingers tightening on the strap. "Nothing good. This place — there are rumors about it in certain circles. Old rumors. It's supposed to be one of the entry points to..." She trailed off, catching herself. "Entry points to what?" The researcher's face had gone pale beneath her freckles. "I shouldn't. It's not — the museum doesn't officially acknowledge—" "There's a dead man three meters behind us, Ms. Kowalski." Quinn's voice dropped to something low and dangerous. "Whatever academic confidentiality you're hiding behind, I promise you it's not going to hold up when I haul you in for obstruction." Eva's jaw worked silently for a moment. Then she exhaled, reaching into her satchel and pulling out a worn leather journal. "The Veil Market. It's a — call it an underground bazaar. Moves around the city, never stays in one place for more than a lunar cycle. They sell things you can't buy anywhere else." "What kind of things?" "Things like that compass in your evidence bag." Quinn's hand moved unconsciously to her pocket, where the bagged compass sat heavy against her thigh. "You recognize it." "I've seen drawings. Never the real thing. They're called Veil Compasses — supposedly crafted by artisans who aren't... who aren't entirely human." Eva's voice had dropped to barely above a whisper. "The needle doesn't point north. It points toward the nearest rift. The nearest doorway to somewhere else." "Doorway." Quinn's tone made the word an accusation. "Portal. Threshold. Whatever you want to call it." Eva pushed her glasses up her nose, a gesture that seemed to steel her resolve. "Look, I know how this sounds. I know you think I'm mad. But three years ago, there was another incident. Another body found near one of the suspected entry points. A detective sergeant, wasn't it? The official report said—" "I know what the official report said." Quinn's voice had gone flat and hard. "I was there." Eva's eyes widened slightly. "Then you know. You know something happened that doesn't fit in your case files. Something that the Met couldn't explain, so they buried it." Quinn turned away, staring at the scratched warning on the tiles. THE VEIL OPENS. In her mind, she heard Morris screaming, heard his voice crack as he shouted about shapes in the corners, about something watching, something hungry. She'd told herself for three years that it was a delusion, a symptom of the aneurysm that killed him. But Morris had been the most level-headed man she'd ever worked with. He didn't have delusions. He didn't make things up. "The compass." Quinn pulled out the evidence bag, holding it up to the light. The needle had stopped spinning and now pointed steadily toward the tunnel mouth, unwavering despite her movements. "If this thing works the way you say it does, then it's pointing—" "Toward an active rift. Yes." Eva's voice was grim. "Whatever killed this man, Detective Quinn — it didn't come through the front door. It came through somewhere else entirely. And if the compass is still pointing that way, it means the door is still open." Quinn looked at the body, at the terror frozen into every line of the dead man's face. She looked at the tunnel mouth, dark and waiting, swallowing the floodlight like hungry water. She thought about Morris, about the three years she'd spent trying to convince herself that reality was simpler than her instincts insisted. "Davies," she called, her voice carrying across the platform with crisp authority. "Expand the cordon. No one goes near that tunnel until I say otherwise." "Quinn? What's going on?" She didn't answer. She was already walking toward the darkness, the compass clutched in her hand, its needle quivering with something that felt almost like anticipation. Behind her, Eva Kowalski fell into step, her satchel bouncing against her hip. "You're going in," Eva said. It wasn't a question. "Someone has to." Quinn's jaw tightened. "And I've spent three years running from something I didn't understand. I'm tired of running." The tunnel mouth loomed before them, and somewhere in its depths, something waited. Something that had killed a man with nothing but fear. Quinn stepped forward into the dark.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:57:09.909Z" 2/19/2026, 3:57:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Quinn said flatly [flatly]"
2"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.831
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.092
92.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1878
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1878
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"anticipation"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"weight"
3"etched"
4"tracing"
5"familiar"
6"tension"
7"flicked"
8"whisper"
9"resolve"
10"unwavering"
11"anticipation"
12"loomed"
13"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
86.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1886
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1196
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn25
Town1
Davies6
Good1
Victorian2
Italian1
Morris5
Eva11
Kowalski2
Research1
Assistant1
Department1
Ancient1
History1
Underground1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Underground"
places
0"Town"
1"London"
globalScore0.455
windowScore0.5
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"explorers and, apparently, murderers"
1"quite hear"
2"shapes that seemed to shift when she looked at them too directly"
3"gesture that seemed to steel her resolve"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.53
wordCount1886
matches
0"not north but toward the darkened tunnel mouth at the end of the platform"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"finished that sentence"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean29.94
std19.8
cv0.661
sampleLengths
053
130
228
33
450
51
69
754
853
950
108
1130
1243
1351
1412
1554
1613
1752
187
193
2053
2131
2255
236
2431
2529
2643
272
2873
2915
3058
3125
3227
3338
3452
353
3636
374
3841
394
4019
4140
4255
434
448
4519
4648
478
4862
4917
94.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been disturbed"
2"being dismissed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was looking"
1"was studying"
2"was thinking"
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences138
ratio0.029
matches
0"She was looking at the man's hands — specifically, at what he held clutched in his right fist."
1"Footprints led from the platform edge toward where the man lay, but they were strange — deep at the heel, shallow at the toe, as if he'd been backing away from something."
2"She carried a worn leather satchel that bulged with books, and something about her — the freckled face, the nervous way she tucked hair behind her left ear — suggested she was used to being dismissed."
3"At first she saw nothing — just the crumbling wall, the faded station signage, the eternal darkness of the tunnel mouth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1195
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"most level-headed man"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03096234309623431
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011715481171548118
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean13.67
std8.94
cv0.654
sampleLengths
023
130
210
320
420
58
63
725
82
91
1022
111
123
136
1423
1512
1619
179
1818
1926
2022
2116
223
239
248
2510
2620
273
2818
2915
307
3111
3216
3324
343
359
3613
373
388
3913
4017
4113
423
4315
4432
452
467
473
489
4915
69.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4492753623188406
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just past midnight."
1"Then her eyes adjusted, and"
2"Then she exhaled, reaching into"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences94
matches
0"She ducked under the police"
1"She approached, pulling on nitrile"
2"His face held an expression"
3"Her worn leather watch caught"
4"She said it flatly, without"
5"She was looking at the"
6"She'd never seen anything quite"
7"she said, and someone pressed"
8"She photographed the compass from"
9"She was studying the ground"
10"She followed the victim's trail"
11"He gestured vaguely at the"
12"She stopped herself."
13"She carried a worn leather"
14"She trailed off, catching herself"
15"She'd told herself for three"
16"He didn't have delusions."
17"He didn't make things up."
18"She looked at the tunnel"
19"She thought about Morris, about"
ratio0.255
34.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences94
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"She ducked under the police"
2"Camden Town's underground ran deep,"
3"The station had been sealed"
4"Sergeant Davies met her at"
5"Davies consulted his notebook, though"
6"Davies's jaw tightened."
7"The platform opened up ahead"
8"Officers moved around the perimeter"
9"The body lay near the"
10"She approached, pulling on nitrile"
11"The victim wore a charcoal"
12"His face held an expression"
13"Quinn crouched beside him, studying"
14"Her worn leather watch caught"
15"The witching hour, her grandmother"
16"She said it flatly, without"
17"Davies shifted his weight"
18"Quinn said nothing."
19"She was looking at the"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled of rust and something older, something that clung to the back of Detective Harlow Quinn's throat like ash."
1"She ducked under the police tape stretched across the crumbling archway and stepped onto the platform, her footsteps echoing against tile walls that hadn't seen…"
2"The platform opened up ahead of them, lit now by the harsh glare of portable floodlights that made the Victorian tilework look surgical."
3"The victim wore a charcoal suit, well-tailored, Italian leather shoes that had never touched puddle water before tonight."
4"Quinn crouched beside him, studying the scene with the same military precision that had carried her through eighteen years on the force."
5"Footprints led from the platform edge toward where the man lay, but they were strange — deep at the heel, shallow at the toe, as if he'd been backing away from …"
6"But Morris had died in a room with one door and no windows, screaming about shadows that moved wrong, and the coroner had ruled it an aneurysm despite the expre…"
7"She carried a worn leather satchel that bulged with books, and something about her — the freckled face, the nervous way she tucked hair behind her left ear — su…"
8"Victorian era, glazed ceramic, the kind that lined every Underground station in London."
9"She'd told herself for three years that it was a delusion, a symptom of the aneurysm that killed him."
10"She was already walking toward the darkness, the compass clutched in her hand, its needle quivering with something that felt almost like anticipation."
50.93% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Sergeant Davies met, his torch cutting a pale wedge through the darkness"
1"Quinn stood, her knees protesting the movement"
2"Eva said quietly, moving to stand beside Quinn"
3"she called, her voice carrying across the platform with crisp authority"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Davies observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.123
leniency0.246
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.031
80.2761%