Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0PV24J4PZNMSCRQ70F22P

Run Details

Duration:
11.2s
Cost:
$0.000828
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the dimly lit platform of the abandoned Tube station, the smell of damp concrete and rust hanging heavy in the air. The flickering fluorescent lights above cast eerie shadows on the walls as she made her way towards the small crowd of officers gathered near the ticket gates. Her eyes, a deep, rich brown, scanned the scene before settling on the officer in charge, Inspector Harris. Harris, a portly man with a thick beard, nodded curtly as Quinn approached. "Morning, Harlow. We've got a weird one here." Quinn's sharp jaw set in a firm line as she took in the scene. The ticket gates were still intact, but the metal turnstiles were twisted and mangled, as if someone had ripped them apart with incredible strength. A severed finger lay on the ground nearby, the fingernail a pale, almost translucent pink. "What's the situation?" Quinn asked, her military precision evident in her bearing as she surveyed the area. "Couple of teenagers stumbled in here around three this morning," Harris replied. "Said they were exploring the tunnels, looking for thrills. They claimed they didn't touch anything, but we've got a witness who saw them arguing near the exit before one of them stormed off." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "And the victims?" "Two so far, both young adults. Looks like they were running a stall in the... market that's supposed to be down here." Quinn's gaze snapped back to Harris. "The Veil Market?" Harris nodded. "That's the one. We've had reports of some shady dealings going down here, but nothing this violent." Quinn's eyes began to roam the scene once more, this time searching for anything that might explain the gruesome scene. The ticket gates, the twisted metal... it all looked wrong. The lack of blood, the precision with which the gates had been torn apart... She stopped at the severed finger, her gaze locked on the pale fingernail. "Harris, what do you make of this?" Harris shrugged. "Looks like a sign of a struggle, maybe. The kids might've gotten scared and ran." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "And the finger? You expect me to believe that came from a struggle?" Harris's expression turned hesitant. "I... I don't know what to make of it, Harlow. Maybe it was an accident?" Quinn crouched beside the finger, her worn leather watch glinting in the dim light as she examined the nail more closely. "There's no blood on the nail, Harris. No cuts or scuffs on the surrounding skin. This finger was cut off cleanly, with a very sharp blade." Harris's voice was low and thoughtful. "Or maybe it wasn't an accident at all." Quinn's head jerked up, her eyes meeting Harris's in a challenge. "What are you saying?" "Just that maybe we're looking at this the wrong way, Harlow. Maybe this wasn't a fight or an accident... maybe it was a message." Quinn's gaze lingered on the finger a moment longer before she straightened, her sharp jaw clenched in thought. The Veil Market was notorious for its dark dealings, and the idea of a message sent in blood was far from impossible. "Get forensics to run the finger," Quinn told Harris. "I want to know whose it was and how it ended up here." Harris nodded, already reaching for his phone. "I'll get someone on it right away." Quinn turned back to the twisted ticket gates, her eyes roaming the scene once more. She needed to think, to put the pieces together. The Veil Market, the strange symbols etched into the walls nearby, the precise removal of the finger... A small, exquisite compass, tucked away in her pocket, pressed against her leg as she moved. Quinn's hand instinctively went to it, her fingers brushing the small brass case. The Veil Compass, a tool attuned to supernatural energy, was always with her, a reminder of the secrets that lay just beyond the edge of reality. As she stood there, Quinn's eyes narrowed, her gaze drawn back to the symbol etched into the wall. A symbol she recognized, one she had seen in her research on the supernatural rifts that plagued the city. It was then that she saw it: the faint, pulsating glow emanating from the twisted metal turnstiles. A glow that only the Veil Compass could detect, a sign of the supernatural forces that lurked just beyond the edge of reality. Quinn's eyes snapped to Harris. "We need to secure the area, Harris. This isn't just a crime scene... it's a supernatural hotspot." Harris's expression turned skeptical. "Harlow, we don't have any evidence of supernatural activity here." Quinn's face set in a firm line. "Evidence is exactly what I aim to find."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount780
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount780
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"eyebrow"
2"glinting"
3"jaw clenched"
4"etched"
5"reminder"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences40
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords780
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount508
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Tube1
Inspector1
Harris13
Veil4
Market2
Compass2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Inspector"
3"Harris"
4"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount780
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean27.86
std16.01
cv0.575
sampleLengths
071
121
253
317
445
56
622
79
819
944
1020
1117
1217
1319
1447
1514
1615
1724
1840
1922
2014
2141
2255
2337
2440
2522
2614
2715
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences40
matches
0"were twisted"
1"been torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs84
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences59
ratio0
matches(empty)
90.22% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount508
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.051181102362204724
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.011811023622047244
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean13.22
std7.54
cv0.571
sampleLengths
026
127
218
313
48
514
624
715
817
912
1033
113
123
1322
146
153
162
1717
1820
196
204
2114
2213
237
242
2515
264
2713
284
2915
3021
3126
326
338
3411
354
3624
3718
3822
399
4013
417
427
4315
449
4517
4616
4713
4826
4918
68.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.423728813559322
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences37
matches
0"Her eyes, a deep, rich"
1"it all looked wrong."
2"She stopped at the severed"
3"She needed to think, to"
4"It was then that she"
ratio0.135
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences37
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"The flickering fluorescent lights above"
2"Her eyes, a deep, rich"
3"Harris, a portly man with"
4"Quinn's sharp jaw set in"
5"The ticket gates were still"
6"A severed finger lay on"
7"Quinn asked, her military precision"
8"Quinn's eyes narrowed."
9"Quinn's gaze snapped back to"
10"Quinn's eyes began to roam"
11"The ticket gates, the twisted"
12"it all looked wrong."
13"The lack of blood, the"
14"She stopped at the severed"
15"Quinn raised an eyebrow."
16"Harris's expression turned hesitant."
17"Quinn crouched beside the finger,"
18"Harris's voice was low and"
19"Quinn's head jerked up, her"
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The ticket gates were still intact, but the metal turnstiles were twisted and mangled, as if someone had ripped them apart with incredible strength."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.0114%