Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0PWEG926HHKEM2A60CQ72

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Duration:
45.5s
Cost:
$0.011556
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts grated against the metal frame, a harsh, screeching sound that echoed in the narrow hallway. Rory threw her weight against the heavy wood door, wrenching it open. She expected a takeaway driver confused by the intercom, or perhaps Eva returning from the university library with another armful of obscure texts she refused to store on the shelves. The air in the corridor smelled of stale cigarette smoke and the sharp, pervasive tang of turmeric drifting up from the curry house below. Rory stopped dead. Lucien Moreau stood on the worn Welcome mat. He looked like a knife blade drawn from a sheath—sharp, dangerous, and entirely out of place in the grime of East London. His charcoal suit was tailored to perfection, hugging broad shoulders and tapering down to polished leather shoes that had likely never touched a puddle. Platinum blond hair was slicked back, exposing the harsh angle of his jaw, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one abyssal black—fixed on her face. He leaned casually on an ivory-handled cane. She knew the handle concealed a blade thin enough to slice through bone. "You," Rory said. Her hand gripped the edge of the door, knuckles turning white. "Hello, Rory." His voice was a low rumble, the accent a smooth blend of French roots and years spent in London's underbelly. "Are you going to invite me in, or shall we conduct our business in the hallway where the neighbors can hear?" "There is no business. There is no us. Go away." She moved to slam the door. A black-gloved hand shot out, catching the wood. The door stopped dead, despite her momentum. He didn't strain. He didn't even blink. "I need a word." "I'm working. I'm busy. I'm not interested in whatever information you're selling." "Not selling. Giving." He pushed forward. Rory stumbled back, the sudden proximity of him overwhelming the small entryway. He stepped inside and kicked the door shut with a heel. The locks clicked home, sealing them in. The flat was claustrophobic on a good day. Books were stacked in precarious towers on the floor, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, and the scent of old paper warred with the curry from below. Now, with Lucien standing there, the room felt suffocatingly small. He seemed to suck the oxygen out of the space, replacing it with the smell of ozone and expensive cologne. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, poked his head out from behind a stack of grimoires. He hissed, back arching, fur standing on end. "Good to see you too, feline," Lucien murmured. He tapped his cane on the floorboards, a rhythmic sound that seemed to vibrate through the soles of Rory’s boots. Rory crossed her arms, rubbing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A nervous habit. "You have five seconds before I scream for Silas." "He’s three floors down and pouring pints. By the time he got here, I’d be gone. Or he’d be dead." Lucien walked past her, tracing a finger over the spine of a leather-bound book. "You’ve let the place go. Dust bunnies under the sofa, Rory? That’s unlike you." "I’ve been busy running deliveries and staying off the radar. Something you know nothing about." "I know plenty about radars." He turned, the amber eye flashing in the dim light of the single floor lamp. "I know you dropped off the grid three months ago. I know you left Cardiff in a hurry." "I left an ex. Not a supernatural crisis." "Did you?" He took a step closer. The distance between them closed to a few inches. Rory forced herself to hold his ground, to look into those mismatched eyes without flinching. It was difficult. Lucien had a way of looking at a person that felt like being undressed, peeled apart layer by layer until the raw truth was exposed. "Evan is human," she said, her voice steady. "He was just a control freak with a temper." "Humans with tempers are easy. Humans who make deals with Avarosian half-demons are... problematic." Rory froze. The blood drained from her face. "You're lying." "Am I?" Lucien reached into his jacket. Rory flinched, her hand darting toward the heavy iron letter opener on the sideboard. He withdrew a silver cigarette case, snapped it open, and offered it to her. She stared at it. He closed it with a chuckle and tucked it away. "I didn't sell him anything, if that’s what you're thinking. But I know who did. He’s been sniffing around. Asking questions about a woman named Laila." "I haven't used that name in years." "He doesn't care. He wants the grimoire Eva stole from the Athenaeum." "She didn't steal it. She liberated it." "Semantics." Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair. The perfect slicked look fell apart, a stray strand dropping over his forehead. For a second, he looked tired. Human. "He thinks you have it." "I don't." "I know. But he doesn't, and he’s the type to break fingers first and ask questions later. Assuming he leaves the fingers attached." "Why are you telling me this? We left things in Marseille. Badly." "Marseille was a mistake." The words were blunt, stripped of his usual theatrical flair. "I should have told you what I was. I should have told you why I couldn't stay." "You left me in a hotel room with a note and a bill for room service." "I paid the bill." "Lucien." He moved then, faster than she could track. One hand slammed against the wall beside her head, caging her in. He loomed over her, his face inches from hers. The heat radiating from him was intense, a furnace burning behind the charcoal suit. "I am trying to keep you alive, Rory. I don't care about the grimoire. I don't care about Eva's research. I care that you are currently standing on a demonic threshold with zero protections and no idea that a bounty hunter is two streets over." Rory’s breath hitched. She could smell him—sandalwood and rain and something metallic, like blood. Her body reacted against her will, a traitorous flush rising up her neck. She remembered the last time he had stood this close. The balcony in Marseille, the city lights sparkling below, the brush of his lips against her ear before everything went wrong. "You're not doing this for me," she whispered. "You're doing it because you're bored." "I'm never bored." His gaze dropped to her mouth. The black pupil swallowed the amber rim. "I'm many things. Bored isn't one of them." "Then why?" "Because you're the only person in this godforsaken city who doesn't look at me like I'm a monster." "You are a monster." "I know." He leaned in closer, his breath ghosting over her cheek. "But I'm your monster." Rory shoved him in the chest. He didn't move, but he stepped back, raising his hands in mock surrender. The tension snapped, leaving the air thick and heavy. "Get out, Lucien." "I can't do that." "Then tell me what you want." "Protection." "From who?" "From you." He gestured vaguely at the room. "You attract chaos. It follows you like a shadow. If you stay here, Eva gets hurt. Ptolemy gets hurt. I need you to come with me." "To where? One of your safe houses? A penthouse in Kensington?" "Somewhere with iron bars on the windows and a witch who owes me a favor." Rory laughed, a harsh, sharp sound. "I'm not going anywhere with you. I'm not some damsel you can lock in a tower to soothe your conscience." "It's not my conscience that needs soothing." She looked at him, really looked at him. The way he held himself, the tightness around his eyes. He was scared. Lucien Moreau, the fixer, the information broker, was scared. "Who is the hunter, Lucien?" "Someone from my father's side. Someone who knows what I am and wants to use it. He thinks hurting you will get to me." Rory’s eyes widened. The implications settled like lead in her stomach. "Me? Why me?" "Because I didn't pay the bill in Marseille, Rory. I paid with something else. And he’s come to collect." Ptolemy chose that moment to rub against Lucien’s trousers, purring loudly. Lucien looked down, startled, then glanced back at Rory. The hardness in his face fractured. "Please." The word hung in the air. Lucien never said please. Rory looked around the flat, at the books, the life she had built, the fragile safety she had carved out of the chaos of London. She looked at the lock on the door, the one she had thought was enough. She walked over to the sideboard and picked up her keys. "I'm not taking a taxi," she said. Lucien’s lips quirked, a genuine smile breaking through the mask. "I have a car downstairs. The engine is running." "Of course you do." She grabbed her jacket from the hook. "If you try to double-cross me, I will use that cane to sharpen your teeth." "I'd expect nothing less." He opened the door for her, bowing slightly. "After you, Laila." "Don't call me that." He stepped out into the hallway behind her, the ivory cane clicking against the stone as he pulled the door shut, sealing the cat and the chaos inside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.221
leniency0.441
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.029
93.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1555
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1555
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"abyssal"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"abyssal"
3"rhythmic"
4"tracing"
5"perfect"
6"loomed"
7"tension"
8"stomach"
9"fractured"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences90
matches
0"was scared"
1"was scared"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1545
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount937
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau2
Welcome1
East1
London3
French1
Lucien12
Rory15
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.7
windowScore0.833
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a knife blade drawn from a sh"
1"sound that seemed to vibrate through the soles of Rory’s boots"
2"felt like being undressed, peeled apart"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1545
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean20.33
std16.62
cv0.818
sampleLengths
060
124
23
378
420
514
643
710
828
94
1012
113
1233
1365
1422
1528
1625
1748
1815
1938
208
212
2257
2317
2414
2510
2621
2728
2826
297
3012
317
3234
332
3423
3512
3631
3716
384
391
4043
4145
4258
4314
4424
452
4618
474
4816
4928
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"was tailored"
1"was slicked"
2"were stacked"
3"being undressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
82.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences142
ratio0.021
matches
0"He looked like a knife blade drawn from a sheath—sharp, dangerous, and entirely out of place in the grime of East London."
1"Platinum blond hair was slicked back, exposing the harsh angle of his jaw, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one abyssal black—fixed on her face."
2"She could smell him—sandalwood and rain and something metallic, like blood."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount945
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02433862433862434
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009523809523809525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean10.88
std7.63
cv0.701
sampleLengths
018
112
230
324
43
58
622
724
824
97
1013
113
1211
1322
1421
1510
166
178
187
193
204
214
2212
233
243
2512
2611
277
288
2927
3010
3120
3214
338
348
3520
3613
373
389
3934
4014
4115
4220
4318
448
452
465
479
4815
493
46.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.323943661971831
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences84
matches
0"She expected a takeaway driver"
1"He looked like a knife"
2"His charcoal suit was tailored"
3"He leaned casually on an"
4"She knew the handle concealed"
5"Her hand gripped the edge"
6"His voice was a low"
7"She moved to slam the"
8"He didn't strain."
9"He didn't even blink."
10"He pushed forward."
11"He stepped inside and kicked"
12"He seemed to suck the"
13"He hissed, back arching, fur"
14"He tapped his cane on"
15"He turned, the amber eye"
16"He took a step closer."
17"It was difficult."
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"He withdrew a silver cigarette"
ratio0.452
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences84
matches
0"The three deadbolts grated against"
1"Rory threw her weight against"
2"She expected a takeaway driver"
3"The air in the corridor"
4"Rory stopped dead."
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"He looked like a knife"
7"His charcoal suit was tailored"
8"Platinum blond hair was slicked"
9"He leaned casually on an"
10"She knew the handle concealed"
11"Her hand gripped the edge"
12"His voice was a low"
13"She moved to slam the"
14"A black-gloved hand shot out,"
15"The door stopped dead, despite"
16"He didn't strain."
17"He didn't even blink."
18"He pushed forward."
19"Rory stumbled back, the sudden"
ratio0.964
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Now, with Lucien standing there,"
ratio0.012
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The three deadbolts grated against the metal frame, a harsh, screeching sound that echoed in the narrow hallway."
1"His charcoal suit was tailored to perfection, hugging broad shoulders and tapering down to polished leather shoes that had likely never touched a puddle."
2"Lucien had a way of looking at a person that felt like being undressed, peeled apart layer by layer until the raw truth was exposed."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steady"
1"He leaned, his breath ghosting over her cheek"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien sighed (sigh)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.088
79.8383%