| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "enigmatic" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "magnetic" | | 6 | "charm" | | 7 | "palpable" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "down her spine" | | 17 | "echoes" | | 18 | "loomed" | | 19 | "tinged" | | 20 | "glinting" | | 21 | "flicker" | | 22 | "determined" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of their words" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 52.08% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 7 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "d with excitement" | | 2 | "e with wonder" | | 3 | "a sense of wonder" | | 4 | "felt a shiver" | | 5 | "d with awe" | | 6 | "a flicker of unease" |
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| 89.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1136 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 939 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Eva | 10 | | Isolde | 11 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.542 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a journey into a dream, where" | | 1 | "as if beckoning them closer" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.35% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 29.89 | | std | 13.73 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | |
| 51.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the enigmatic seer." | | 1 | "The sounds of the grove enveloped them—soft rustling, distant laughter, and the gentle trickle of water." | | 2 | "She saw flashes of her past—her father’s stern face, her mother’s gentle smile, and Evan’s angry glare." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 943 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.031813361611876985 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003181336161187699 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 12.09 | | std | 5.06 | | cv | 0.418 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 67.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.40425531914893614 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 1 | "She brushed her fingers against" | | 2 | "Their voice, a whisper carried" | | 3 | "she muttered, but a smile" | | 4 | "She glanced back at the" | | 5 | "They ventured deeper, the path" | | 6 | "Their bark shimmered with hues" | | 7 | "She felt a pull, a" | | 8 | "They pressed on, the air" | | 9 | "It was haunting, a song" | | 10 | "She followed the sound, her" | | 11 | "She stepped into a clearing," | | 12 | "She knelt by the water’s" | | 13 | "She pulled her hand back," | | 14 | "She saw flashes of her" | | 15 | "She felt power coursing through" | | 16 | "She gasped, her heart racing." | | 17 | "She looked at Eva, who" | | 18 | "They continued their exploration, the" | | 19 | "she murmured, glancing at Nyx" |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered as Aurora" | | 1 | "A soft breeze brushed against" | | 2 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 3 | "The grove pulsed with life," | | 4 | "Rory whispered, her bright blue" | | 5 | "She brushed her fingers against" | | 6 | "Nyx, the shadowy figure beside" | | 7 | "Their voice, a whisper carried" | | 8 | "she muttered, but a smile" | | 9 | "The unease of the unknown" | | 10 | "She glanced back at the" | | 11 | "Eva’s eyes sparkled with mischief," | | 12 | "Isolde instructed, her silver hair" | | 13 | "Rory nodded, her heart racing." | | 14 | "They ventured deeper, the path" | | 15 | "The sunlight filtered through the" | | 16 | "Each step felt like a" | | 17 | "Eva exclaimed, pointing to a" | | 18 | "Their bark shimmered with hues" | | 19 | "Rory replied, her voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating." | | 1 | "She brushed her fingers against a nearby flower, its petals soft and warm, as if it breathed alongside her." | | 2 | "The trees seemed to whisper secrets, their branches swaying as if beckoning them closer." | | 3 | "It was haunting, a song that tugged at her heartstrings, weaving through the trees like a silken thread." | | 4 | "Rory shook her head, trying to dispel the unease creeping in." | | 5 | "She looked at Eva, who offered a reassuring smile, then at Isolde, whose expression remained inscrutable." | | 6 | "The trees loomed overhead, their branches intertwining like fingers grasping for something lost." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, but a smile tugged at her lips" | | 1 | "Isolde instructed, her silver hair flowing like a river of moonlight" | | 2 | "Rory replied, her voice low" | | 3 | "Nyx warned, their form flickering again" | | 4 | "Eva asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "Eva called, but the song wrapped around her, pulling her forward" | | 6 | "Nyx warned, their voice a low murmur" | | 7 | "Isolde asked, her voice soft yet commanding" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her tone cryptic" | | 9 | "Rory said, determination hardening her resolve" | | 10 | "they replied, their voice barely above a whisper" | | 11 | "Isolde said, her eyes glinting with mischief" | | 12 | "she urged, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Eva exclaimed (exclaim)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 6 | "Isolde encouraged (encourage)" | | 7 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 8 | "she urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.514 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |