Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Q2CSGY8YCPTKSZ2FQ13V

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Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.001113

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary between the mundane world and the Fae Grove. A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating. She paused, taking in the vibrant colors that danced before her eyes. The grove pulsed with life, each leaf and petal glowing with an ethereal light. “Is this real?” Rory whispered, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. She brushed her fingers against a nearby flower, its petals soft and warm, as if it breathed alongside her. Nyx, the shadowy figure beside her, shifted slightly, their form flickering like candlelight. “Reality is a fluid concept here. What you perceive may not be the whole truth.” Their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, sent a shiver down Rory’s spine. “Great, more riddles,” she muttered, but a smile tugged at her lips. The unease of the unknown mingled with excitement. She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the enigmatic seer. Eva’s eyes sparkled with mischief, while Isolde’s pale lavender gaze seemed to pierce through the very fabric of the grove. “Stay close,” Isolde instructed, her silver hair flowing like a river of moonlight. “The Grove has its own will. It may lead us to what we seek, or it may lead us astray.” Rory nodded, her heart racing. They ventured deeper, the path winding like a serpent through the trees. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled shadows on the ground. Each step felt like a journey into a dream, where the ordinary faded away. “Look at that!” Eva exclaimed, pointing to a cluster of trees that twisted and turned in impossible angles. Their bark shimmered with hues of blue and green, and tiny lights flitted around them like fireflies. “It’s like something out of a storybook.” “Or a nightmare,” Rory replied, her voice low. The trees seemed to whisper secrets, their branches swaying as if beckoning them closer. She felt a pull, a magnetic force drawing her toward the heart of the grove. “Don’t let it charm you,” Nyx warned, their form flickering again. “The Grove can be deceptive.” Rory hesitated, glancing at the others. Eva’s excitement was palpable, while Isolde remained serene, her expression unreadable. They pressed on, the air thickening with magic. The sounds of the grove enveloped them—soft rustling, distant laughter, and the gentle trickle of water. “Do you hear that?” Eva asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Rory nodded, straining to catch the melody that floated through the air. It was haunting, a song that tugged at her heartstrings, weaving through the trees like a silken thread. She followed the sound, her feet moving almost of their own accord. “Rory, wait!” Eva called, but the song wrapped around her, pulling her forward. She stepped into a clearing, and the world opened up before her. A crystalline pool lay at the center, its surface reflecting the vibrant colors of the grove. Flowers bloomed along the edges, their petals glistening with dew. Above, the sky shifted from warm amber to deep indigo, stars beginning to twinkle like diamonds. “Beautiful,” Rory breathed, entranced. She knelt by the water’s edge, reaching out to touch the surface. The moment her fingers grazed the cool liquid, ripples spread outward, distorting the reflection of the trees. “Careful,” Nyx warned, their voice a low murmur. “The waters hold memories. They can show you what you desire, but they can also reveal your fears.” Rory hesitated, her heart pounding. She pulled her hand back, glancing at the others. Eva stood a few steps behind, her eyes wide with wonder, while Isolde observed the pool with a knowing gaze. “What do you see?” Isolde asked, her voice soft yet commanding. Rory shook her head, trying to dispel the unease creeping in. “Nothing yet.” “Then let it show you,” Isolde encouraged, stepping closer. “The Grove reveals truths, but only to those willing to face them.” With a deep breath, Rory leaned over the water again. The surface shimmered, and images began to swirl within. She saw flashes of her past—her father’s stern face, her mother’s gentle smile, and Evan’s angry glare. Each memory tugged at her heart, but then the images shifted, revealing a future she had never dared to imagine. A vision of herself, standing tall, wielding the Fae-forged blade Isolde had gifted her. She felt power coursing through her veins, a sense of purpose igniting within. But then, darkness crept in, shadows swirling around her, threatening to consume her. “Rory!” Eva’s voice broke through the vision, pulling her back to reality. “Are you okay?” Rory blinked, the images fading like mist. She gasped, her heart racing. “I saw… I saw myself. But there was darkness.” “Darkness can be a teacher,” Isolde said, her tone cryptic. “It reveals what we must confront.” Nyx stepped closer, their form solidifying for a moment. “The Grove tests us. It shows our desires and fears. You must choose which path to follow.” Rory swallowed hard, the weight of their words settling in her chest. She looked at Eva, who offered a reassuring smile, then at Isolde, whose expression remained inscrutable. “Let’s keep moving,” Rory said, determination hardening her resolve. “We came here for a reason.” They continued their exploration, the grove shifting around them. The trees whispered secrets, and the air crackled with magic. Rory felt a sense of wonder and unease intertwining, each step deeper into the grove revealing more of its mysteries. As they walked, the path twisted and turned, leading them to a grove of ancient trees, their trunks gnarled and twisted. The air thickened with a palpable energy, and Rory felt a shiver run down her spine. “Something’s different here,” she murmured, glancing at Nyx. “Indeed,” they replied, their voice barely above a whisper. “This place holds echoes of the past. Be cautious.” Rory nodded, her heart racing. The trees loomed overhead, their branches intertwining like fingers grasping for something lost. She felt a pull, a desire to reach out and touch the bark, to connect with the ancient magic that thrummed beneath the surface. “Do you feel that?” Eva asked, her voice tinged with awe. Rory nodded, her fingers brushing against the rough bark. A surge of energy coursed through her, and she gasped, pulling her hand back. “It’s alive.” “Everything here is alive,” Isolde said, her eyes glinting with mischief. “Even the shadows.” Rory glanced around, the shadows stretching and shifting, as if they had a life of their own. She felt a flicker of unease but pushed it aside. They had come too far to turn back now. “Let’s find what we’re looking for,” she urged, her voice steady. The grove awaited, its secrets just beyond reach, and she was determined to uncover them.
total_cost0.0011131700000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"shimmered"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count4
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"racing"
count3
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"palpable"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count1
10
word"glistening"
count1
11
word"desire"
count2
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count2
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"down her spine"
count1
17
word"echoes"
count1
18
word"loomed"
count1
19
word"tinged"
count1
20
word"glinting"
count1
21
word"flicker"
count1
22
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"enigmatic"
4"racing"
5"magnetic"
6"charm"
7"palpable"
8"unreadable"
9"crystalline"
10"glistening"
11"desire"
12"pounding"
13"sense of"
14"weight"
15"resolve"
16"down her spine"
17"echoes"
18"loomed"
19"tinged"
20"glinting"
21"flicker"
22"determined"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of their words"
1"sent a shiver down"
52.08% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells7
narrationSentences80
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"d with excitement"
2"e with wonder"
3"a sense of wonder"
4"felt a shiver"
5"d with awe"
6"a flicker of unease"
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1136
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount939
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fae2
Grove1
Rory18
Eva10
Isolde11
Evan1
Fae-forged1
Nyx5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Isolde"
4"Evan"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.542
windowScore0.5
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a journey into a dream, where"
1"as if beckoning them closer"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1136
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
88.35% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean29.89
std13.73
cv0.459
sampleLengths
065
131
242
354
433
543
642
737
816
941
1012
1142
1225
1342
1433
1526
1634
1711
1813
1921
2056
2140
2215
2321
2416
2526
2628
2715
2839
2937
308
3118
3242
3311
3425
3514
3636
3726
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was haunting"
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the enigmatic seer."
1"The sounds of the grove enveloped them—soft rustling, distant laughter, and the gentle trickle of water."
2"She saw flashes of her past—her father’s stern face, her mother’s gentle smile, and Evan’s angry glare."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount943
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.031813361611876985
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003181336161187699
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.09
std5.06
cv0.418
sampleLengths
022
117
212
314
412
519
613
729
812
98
1014
1120
1213
1320
145
1512
1612
1714
1818
1917
207
218
2214
2315
2411
255
266
2711
288
2916
3012
3112
3218
3312
3413
3512
3616
3710
3816
394
4012
4117
428
4318
445
459
4620
4711
4811
492
67.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.40425531914893614
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences80
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"She brushed her fingers against"
2"Their voice, a whisper carried"
3"she muttered, but a smile"
4"She glanced back at the"
5"They ventured deeper, the path"
6"Their bark shimmered with hues"
7"She felt a pull, a"
8"They pressed on, the air"
9"It was haunting, a song"
10"She followed the sound, her"
11"She stepped into a clearing,"
12"She knelt by the water’s"
13"She pulled her hand back,"
14"She saw flashes of her"
15"She felt power coursing through"
16"She gasped, her heart racing."
17"She looked at Eva, who"
18"They continued their exploration, the"
19"she murmured, glancing at Nyx"
ratio0.313
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences80
matches
0"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1"A soft breeze brushed against"
2"She paused, taking in the"
3"The grove pulsed with life,"
4"Rory whispered, her bright blue"
5"She brushed her fingers against"
6"Nyx, the shadowy figure beside"
7"Their voice, a whisper carried"
8"she muttered, but a smile"
9"The unease of the unknown"
10"She glanced back at the"
11"Eva’s eyes sparkled with mischief,"
12"Isolde instructed, her silver hair"
13"Rory nodded, her heart racing."
14"They ventured deeper, the path"
15"The sunlight filtered through the"
16"Each step felt like a"
17"Eva exclaimed, pointing to a"
18"Their bark shimmered with hues"
19"Rory replied, her voice low"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating."
1"She brushed her fingers against a nearby flower, its petals soft and warm, as if it breathed alongside her."
2"The trees seemed to whisper secrets, their branches swaying as if beckoning them closer."
3"It was haunting, a song that tugged at her heartstrings, weaving through the trees like a silken thread."
4"Rory shook her head, trying to dispel the unease creeping in."
5"She looked at Eva, who offered a reassuring smile, then at Isolde, whose expression remained inscrutable."
6"The trees loomed overhead, their branches intertwining like fingers grasping for something lost."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she muttered, but a smile tugged at her lips"
1"Isolde instructed, her silver hair flowing like a river of moonlight"
2"Rory replied, her voice low"
3"Nyx warned, their form flickering again"
4"Eva asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"Eva called, but the song wrapped around her, pulling her forward"
6"Nyx warned, their voice a low murmur"
7"Isolde asked, her voice soft yet commanding"
8"Isolde said, her tone cryptic"
9"Rory said, determination hardening her resolve"
10"they replied, their voice barely above a whisper"
11"Isolde said, her eyes glinting with mischief"
12"she urged, her voice steady"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Eva exclaimed (exclaim)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Rory breathed (breathe)"
5"Nyx warned (warn)"
6"Isolde encouraged (encourage)"
7"she murmured (murmur)"
8"she urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
68.4402%