| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsms | 51 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "anticipation" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "potential" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "enigmatic" | | 14 | "fleeting" | | 15 | "resonance" | | 16 | "synchronized" | | 17 | "sanctuary" | | 18 | "dancing" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "throbbed" | | 21 | "echoed" | | 22 | "tapestry" | | 23 | "weight" | | 24 | "could feel" | | 25 | "tension" | | 26 | "resolve" | | 27 | "scanned" | | 28 | "quivered" | | 29 | "stomach" | | 30 | "dance" | | 31 | "crystal" | | 32 | "otherworldly" | | 33 | "depths" | | 34 | "familiar" | | 35 | "unwavering" | | 36 | "steeled" | | 37 | "racing" | | 38 | "desire" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A glimmer of recognition" | | 1 | "a flicker of fear" |
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| 67.13% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of anticipation" | | 1 | "g with wonder" | | 2 | "felt a shiver" | | 3 | "a flicker of fear" | | 4 | "felt a shiver" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1212 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.81% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 926 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 13 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Taking | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.798 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "stones that seemed to hum with resonance" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 31.89 | | std | 16.62 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | |
| 17.27% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora glanced upward; leaves transformed into vibrant shades of purple and blue, the hues dancing in slow spirals above her." | | 1 | "Suddenly, a flicker caught her eye—a shadow darted across the perimeter of her vision." | | 2 | "At first, she saw only her reflection—a woman haunted by shadows of her past." | | 3 | "A familiar face rose to the surface—Evan, his eyes cold, a cruel smile ghosting his lips." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 427 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.02810304449648712 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0117096018735363 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 13.32 | | std | 6.2 | | cv | 0.466 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 77.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4835164835164835 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a low rumble echoed," | | 1 | "Suddenly, a flicker caught her" | | 2 | "Instinctively, she turned, her pulse" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached out to touch" | | 1 | "They stepped forward, each movement" | | 2 | "She paused beneath a towering" | | 3 | "Her voice was a melodic" | | 4 | "She had come seeking a" | | 5 | "she asked, glancing back at" | | 6 | "They glanced at Isolde" | | 7 | "She knelt, brushing her fingers" | | 8 | "She bent down, picking up" | | 9 | "It pulsed beneath her fingers," | | 10 | "she asked, holding it up" | | 11 | "She felt a pulse beneath" | | 12 | "She glanced at her companions," | | 13 | "she asked, urgency filling her" | | 14 | "They scanned the shadows with" | | 15 | "They pulsed like a heartbeat," | | 16 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 17 | "She blinked, and the reflection" | | 18 | "she gasped, withdrawing from the" | | 19 | "She glanced at Nyx and" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 44.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened with a" | | 1 | "An unseen breeze danced through" | | 2 | "The sunlight filtered through the" | | 3 | "Aurora urged, her bright blue" | | 4 | "She reached out to touch" | | 5 | "The petals felt cool and" | | 6 | "Nyx replied, their faintly glowing" | | 7 | "They stepped forward, each movement" | | 8 | "Isolde moved with ethereal grace," | | 9 | "She paused beneath a towering" | | 10 | "Her voice was a melodic" | | 11 | "Aurora felt a shiver run" | | 12 | "She had come seeking a" | | 13 | "The trees loomed tall, and" | | 14 | "The path ahead wove deeper" | | 15 | "Foliage closed around them, the" | | 16 | "she asked, glancing back at" | | 17 | "A glimmer of recognition flickered" | | 18 | "They glanced at Isolde" | | 19 | "Isolde’s lips curled into an" |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The petals felt cool and soft, and they pulsed with a life of their own, as if each held a heartbeat." | | 1 | "Foliage closed around them, the sound of their footsteps muffled by a carpet of moss, as if nature itself wished to cradle their presence." | | 2 | "She felt a pulse beneath her feet, deep and resonating, as if the very earth throbbed in tune with some ancient melody." | | 3 | "Nyx raised their arms, absorbing the energy swirling around them." | | 4 | "They pulsed like a heartbeat, leading them deeper into a grove filled with ancient whispers that tugged at her consciousness." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice tightening" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered, a flicker of fear sparking in her chest" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered, frustration creeping into her tone" | | 3 | "she asked, urgency filling her voice" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady despite the flutter of anxiety," | | 5 | "Isolde replied, her tone cryptic as ever" | | 6 | "Aurora breathed, the wonder of it overwhelming" | | 7 | "Nyx urged, their voice a soothing whisper among the discord" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her tone unwavering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora urged (urge)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 6 | "Nyx urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.425 | | leniency | 0.85 | | rawRatio | 0.412 | | effectiveRatio | 0.35 | |