Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Q3A18DKRV3D3J5XBQRHS

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Duration:
31.9s
Cost:
$0.001159

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened with a sense of anticipation as Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde stepped into the Fae Grove, the world around them shifting from the mundane to something extraordinary. An unseen breeze danced through silver-leaved trees, whispering secrets known only to the ancient oaks intertwined with the mist. The sunlight filtered through the foliage, casting dappled patterns on the forest floor, illuminating wildflowers blooming in vivid hues, their colors more vibrant than anything they had encountered in the human realm. “Breathe it in,” Aurora urged, her bright blue eyes shining with wonder. She reached out to touch a cluster of moonlit blooms that shimmered like stars against the green. The petals felt cool and soft, and they pulsed with a life of their own, as if each held a heartbeat. “Feels like it’s alive,” Nyx replied, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the shifting shadows among the trees. They stepped forward, each movement causing the dappled light to flicker and bend. “Are we safe here?” Isolde moved with ethereal grace, her silver hair flowing around her like mist. She paused beneath a towering oak, its bark older than memory. “Safe? That depends on the depth of our desires…” Her voice was a melodic whisper, each word layered in riddles. “This grove knows all, but it reveals only what is sought.” Aurora felt a shiver run down her spine at Isolde's words. She had come seeking a greater understanding of herself, a way to confront her past, but something about the atmosphere felt thick with potential danger. The trees loomed tall, and she couldn't shake the feeling that they were watching, gauging the intruders’ intentions. The path ahead wove deeper into shadows, and she led the way, her heart pounding with both fear and exhilaration. Foliage closed around them, the sound of their footsteps muffled by a carpet of moss, as if nature itself wished to cradle their presence. “What do you think we’ll find?” she asked, glancing back at Nyx, who moved like mist, slipping through light and shadow. “A prophecy? An answer?” A glimmer of recognition flickered in Nyx's eyes. “More likely a reflection of ourselves. The Fae have a penchant for clever tricks.” They glanced at Isolde. “Are you certain we can trust your grove?” Isolde’s lips curled into an enigmatic smile. “Trust is a fleeting thing in the realm of Fae, but truth can leak through riddles.” She knelt, brushing her fingers against the forest floor, unearthing small, shimmering stones that seemed to hum with resonance. “These stones will guide us—but not always where we wish to go.” Aurora’s curiosity surged like the surrounding energy. She bent down, picking up one of the stones, its surface smooth and warm to the touch. It pulsed beneath her fingers, synchronized with her heartbeat. “Can you feel that?” she asked, holding it up for Nyx and Isolde to see. “We should not linger,” Nyx murmured, their voice tightening. “This grove is not merely a sanctuary. It could be a snare.” Isolde stood, brushing away the remnants of the forest floor from her hands. “Discomfort often accompanies revelation.” As they ventured deeper, the light dimmed. The air thickened, each breath becoming a labor as it felt laden with magic. Aurora glanced upward; leaves transformed into vibrant shades of purple and blue, the hues dancing in slow spirals above her. She felt a pulse beneath her feet, deep and resonating, as if the very earth throbbed in tune with some ancient melody. Suddenly, a low rumble echoed, a sound like thunder rolling through the sky but wrapped in the muted whispers of the grove. Nyx froze, their silhouette shifting, torn between the solid and the incorporeal. “Do you hear that?” Aurora whispered, a flicker of fear sparking in her chest. “I do,” Nyx replied. “It may be the grove’s way of warning us—or inviting us.” “More riddles,” Aurora muttered, frustration creeping into her tone. Isolde turned, her pale lavender eyes shimmering with insight. “Listen closely. This grove is a tapestry woven from a thousand stories. Each rustle, each murmur holds the weight of those who sought it.” With every step, Aurora could feel the tension mounting like a string pulled taut. She glanced at her companions, seeing their fragile resolve. “What do we do?” she asked, urgency filling her voice. Nyx raised their arms, absorbing the energy swirling around them. “We listen. We allow the grove to unfold its secrets.” They scanned the shadows with their glowing gaze. “Isolde, can you guide us?” Isolde nodded, her ethereal presence seeming to shimmer more brightly. “Allow the stones to lead, for they know the path better than we.” The ground quivered beneath them, a subtle invitation to follow. Aurora felt drawn to the stones. They pulsed like a heartbeat, leading them deeper into a grove filled with ancient whispers that tugged at her consciousness. Suddenly, a flicker caught her eye—a shadow darted across the perimeter of her vision. Instinctively, she turned, her pulse quickening. “Did you see that?” “Something watches,” Nyx said, their voice low and steady, a blade of calm amid the tension. “We must not lose our way.” As they pressed on, the shadows tangled, closing in like eager watchers. Flickering wisps of light danced between the trees, phosphorescent tendrils weaving grotesque shapes. Aurora felt a shiver creep up her arms, the unease settling like a weight in her stomach. Each whisper of the leaves and rustle of unseen creatures tormented her senses. “Isolde,” she said, her voice steady despite the flutter of anxiety, “are we still safe?” “Safe is but a concept here,” Isolde replied, her tone cryptic as ever. “It is not safety that beckons. It is truth.” A clearing opened before them, framed by tall trees that stood like guardians. The sky above shifted, hues of deep amber and violet swirling together in an ethereal dance. In the middle, a pool of crystal-clear water shimmered, reflecting the otherworldly colors above. “What is this place?” Aurora breathed, the wonder of it overwhelming. “The Veil is thin here,” Isolde replied, stepping forward. “Where secrets mingle and spirits remain. Gaze into the water, and you might just see what you seek.” Aurora knelt beside the pool, peering into its depths. At first, she saw only her reflection—a woman haunted by shadows of her past. But as she focused, the water swirled and revealed visions beyond her own. Nightmare figures danced in the depths, shifting and distorting. A familiar face rose to the surface—Evan, his eyes cold, a cruel smile ghosting his lips. She blinked, and the reflection warped, transforming into a future she could barely comprehend. “No,” she gasped, withdrawing from the water, panic surging. She glanced at Nyx and Isolde, their forms blurring with the chaos around her. “I can’t do this.” “Face what haunts,” Nyx urged, their voice a soothing whisper among the discord. “Embrace the truth.” “But what if it captures me?” “Then it captures you whole,” Isolde said, her tone unwavering. “But you seek purpose, do you not? You must step beyond the fear.” Taking a deep breath, Aurora steeled herself, heart racing as she glanced into the mirror of the grove’s desire. At that moment, everything changed, the world around her trembling with endless possibilities dancing in the shadows.
total_cost0.00115937

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsms51
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
1
word"anticipation"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count3
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"enigmatic"
count1
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"resonance"
count1
16
word"synchronized"
count1
17
word"sanctuary"
count1
18
word"dancing"
count2
19
word"pulse"
count2
20
word"throbbed"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"tapestry"
count1
23
word"weight"
count2
24
word"could feel"
count1
25
word"tension"
count2
26
word"resolve"
count1
27
word"scanned"
count1
28
word"quivered"
count1
29
word"stomach"
count1
30
word"dance"
count1
31
word"crystal"
count1
32
word"otherworldly"
count1
33
word"depths"
count2
34
word"familiar"
count1
35
word"unwavering"
count1
36
word"steeled"
count1
37
word"racing"
count1
38
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"anticipation"
2"shimmered"
3"pulsed"
4"scanning"
5"flicker"
6"whisper"
7"down her spine"
8"potential"
9"loomed"
10"pounding"
11"footsteps"
12"flickered"
13"enigmatic"
14"fleeting"
15"resonance"
16"synchronized"
17"sanctuary"
18"dancing"
19"pulse"
20"throbbed"
21"echoed"
22"tapestry"
23"weight"
24"could feel"
25"tension"
26"resolve"
27"scanned"
28"quivered"
29"stomach"
30"dance"
31"crystal"
32"otherworldly"
33"depths"
34"familiar"
35"unwavering"
36"steeled"
37"racing"
38"desire"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count2
highlights
0"A glimmer of recognition"
1"a flicker of fear"
67.13% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences72
matches
0"a sense of anticipation"
1"g with wonder"
2"felt a shiver"
3"a flicker of fear"
4"felt a shiver"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1212
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount926
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Nyx12
Isolde13
Fae1
Grove1
Evan1
Taking1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.798
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"stones that seemed to hum with resonance"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1212
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean31.89
std16.62
cv0.521
sampleLengths
080
150
235
355
454
544
625
734
854
948
1021
1117
1263
1334
1414
1515
169
1733
1823
1910
2033
2123
2236
2324
2422
2555
2615
2722
2843
2911
3027
3136
3239
3327
3416
356
3623
3736
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"were watching"
17.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences91
ratio0.044
matches
0"Aurora glanced upward; leaves transformed into vibrant shades of purple and blue, the hues dancing in slow spirals above her."
1"Suddenly, a flicker caught her eye—a shadow darted across the perimeter of her vision."
2"At first, she saw only her reflection—a woman haunted by shadows of her past."
3"A familiar face rose to the surface—Evan, his eyes cold, a cruel smile ghosting his lips."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount427
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.02810304449648712
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0117096018735363
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean13.32
std6.2
cv0.466
sampleLengths
029
119
232
312
417
521
618
713
84
913
1011
1120
1211
1311
1425
1518
1620
1724
1821
194
208
2118
228
237
2435
2512
267
2717
289
2915
309
3112
3213
334
347
3514
3620
3722
3822
3912
4014
414
4211
439
449
4524
4614
479
4810
4910
77.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4835164835164835
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Suddenly, a low rumble echoed,"
1"Suddenly, a flicker caught her"
2"Instinctively, she turned, her pulse"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences71
matches
0"She reached out to touch"
1"They stepped forward, each movement"
2"She paused beneath a towering"
3"Her voice was a melodic"
4"She had come seeking a"
5"she asked, glancing back at"
6"They glanced at Isolde"
7"She knelt, brushing her fingers"
8"She bent down, picking up"
9"It pulsed beneath her fingers,"
10"she asked, holding it up"
11"She felt a pulse beneath"
12"She glanced at her companions,"
13"she asked, urgency filling her"
14"They scanned the shadows with"
15"They pulsed like a heartbeat,"
16"she said, her voice steady"
17"She blinked, and the reflection"
18"she gasped, withdrawing from the"
19"She glanced at Nyx and"
ratio0.282
44.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air thickened with a"
1"An unseen breeze danced through"
2"The sunlight filtered through the"
3"Aurora urged, her bright blue"
4"She reached out to touch"
5"The petals felt cool and"
6"Nyx replied, their faintly glowing"
7"They stepped forward, each movement"
8"Isolde moved with ethereal grace,"
9"She paused beneath a towering"
10"Her voice was a melodic"
11"Aurora felt a shiver run"
12"She had come seeking a"
13"The trees loomed tall, and"
14"The path ahead wove deeper"
15"Foliage closed around them, the"
16"she asked, glancing back at"
17"A glimmer of recognition flickered"
18"They glanced at Isolde"
19"Isolde’s lips curled into an"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The petals felt cool and soft, and they pulsed with a life of their own, as if each held a heartbeat."
1"Foliage closed around them, the sound of their footsteps muffled by a carpet of moss, as if nature itself wished to cradle their presence."
2"She felt a pulse beneath her feet, deep and resonating, as if the very earth throbbed in tune with some ancient melody."
3"Nyx raised their arms, absorbing the energy swirling around them."
4"They pulsed like a heartbeat, leading them deeper into a grove filled with ancient whispers that tugged at her consciousness."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice tightening"
1"Aurora whispered, a flicker of fear sparking in her chest"
2"Aurora muttered, frustration creeping into her tone"
3"she asked, urgency filling her voice"
4"she said, her voice steady despite the flutter of anxiety,"
5"Isolde replied, her tone cryptic as ever"
6"Aurora breathed, the wonder of it overwhelming"
7"Nyx urged, their voice a soothing whisper among the discord"
8"Isolde said, her tone unwavering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Aurora urged (urge)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
3"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
4"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
5"she gasped (gasp)"
6"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.425
leniency0.85
rawRatio0.412
effectiveRatio0.35
76.3881%