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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Q9K4MK4S4F25ZPPS74BF
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
35.4s
Cost:
$0.007439
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
97.16%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
57.41%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
48.92%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
52.73%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
51.95%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
31.36%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
76.3173%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The chain rattled, then the
deadbolts threw back with a heavy, metallic clunk that
echoed
off the narrow hallway walls. Rory yanked the door open, ready to scream at the takeaway driver who was ten minutes late again, but the words died in her throat.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
worn welcome mat, rain dripping from the brim of a black umbrella he held with casual precision.
He looked untouched by the
London grime, his charcoal suit sharp enough to cut glass, his platinum hair slicked back despite the humidity. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her, unblinking. "You're blocking the threshold, Rory."
She stepped back, her hand
gripping the doorframe until her
knuckles turned white
.
The small crescent scar on
her left wrist
throbbed
, a phantom ache triggered by his presence. "I didn't order anything." "I am not delivering food."
He stepped past her before
she could slam the door in his face.
The scent of expensive tobacco
and ozone_followed him, cutting through the smell of stale curry and old paper that permeated Eva's cramped flat.
Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed
from atop a stack of dusty grimoires on the coffee table, tail lashing. Lucien ignored the cat.
He ignored the piles of
research notes covering every available surface.
He walked to the centre
of the room and tapped his ivory-handled cane against the floorboards. The sound was sharp, final. "Eva isn't here." "Eva's at the library."
Rory crossed her arms over
her chest, creating a barrier between them. "Which means you have no business being here. Get out." "Evading the question seems to be a family trait."
Lucien turned, his gaze sweeping
over her.
It felt physical, like a
hand brushing against her skin. "You changed your name again. Laila this time? Or are we back to Carter?" "It's Rory. And it's none of your concern." "It becomes my concern when your name appears on a warrant issued by the Avaros Council." The air left the room.
Rory felt the walls of
the flat close in, the stacks of books leaning toward her like accusing jurors.
She forced her breathing to
remain steady, a trick her father taught her during cross-examinations back when she still pretended she wanted to be a barrister. "That's impossible. I haven't broken any laws." "Not human laws."
Lucien moved closer
. The space between them crackled,
charged
with the history of three years ago, the night she ran from London with nothing but a rucksack and a heart full of poison. "You tampered with a seal. In Camden. Two nights ago." "I was delivering noodles." "You were delivering a distraction."
He stopped an arm's length
away. Up close, she saw the fatigue
etched
into the corners of his heterogeneous eyes, the slight fraying of his cuff that suggested he hadn't slept in days. "The barrier weakened. Something got through. And now the Council wants blood. Specifically, the blood of the human who pierced the veil." Rory laughed, a short, brittle sound. "So you're here to collect? To drag me back to Marseille in chains?" "Don't be dramatic." Lucien reached into his jacket pocket. Rory flinched, her muscles coiling to strike, but he only produced a folded piece of parchment. He held it out. "I am here because I intercepted the writ. If they find you, they won't ask questions. They will execute you on sight."
She stared at the paper
but didn't take it. "Why? After everything I said? After how I left?" "You left a debt unpaid."
His voice dropped, losing its
polished edge, revealing the rough gravel beneath. "And I do not like loose ends." "That's it? Business?" "Is there another reason you can think of?" The
silence
stretched, thick and suffocating. Outside, a siren wailed, distant and indifferent. Inside, the only sound was the
rhythmic
tapping of Ptolemy's claws on the wooden table. Rory remembered the last time they stood this close.
It had been in this
same city, under a different name, in a different life.
He had offered her protection
then, too.
She had refused, choosing freedom
over safety, choosing the pain of the unknown over the cage of his world. She looked at his hands. Long fingers, manicured nails, hiding the strength that could snap a neck.
She remembered those hands holding
her face, wiping away tears she refused to shed.
She remembered the taste of
his kiss, sweet and dangerous like poisoned wine. "You should have let them take me," she whispered. "And deprive me of the pleasure of watching you squirm?" A ghost of a smile touched his lips, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Never."
He stepped closer again, invading
her personal space until she
could feel
the heat radiating from his body. The half-demon energy rolling off him made the hair on her arms stand up.
It was intoxicating and terrifying
all at once. "Give me the paper, Rory."
She snatched it from his
hand, their fingers brushing. A spark jumped between them, static and something deeper, something ancient. She unfolded the parchment. The script writhed on the page, ink shifting like living worms. Her
stomach
churned
. "This is a death warrant,"
she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands
. "Signed by High Malphor." "My father sends his regards." Rory looked up, her bright blue eyes locking onto his mismatched gaze. "Your father wants me dead?" "He wants the breach sealed. Your blood is the key." Lucien's expression remained impassive, but his grip on the cane tightened, the ivory creaking under the pressure. "I have a solution. But it requires trust." "We don't have trust, Lucien. We have wreckage." "Then we build a bridge from the rubble." He leaned down, his face inches from hers. She could smell the rain on his skin, mixed with that underlying scent of brimstone. "There is a ritual. It binds two souls temporarily. It masks your signature from the Council. They will think you are dead, or rather, that you are me." "Marry you?" The word tasted like ash. "For how long?" "Until I find the entity that slipped through. A few days. A week, perhaps." "And if I say no?" "Then I walk out that door. I return to my club. I pour a drink. And tomorrow morning, the Council's hounds tear this flat apart looking for you. They will not be gentle. Eva will be questioned. Ptolemy will likely not survive the crossfire." Rory's breath hitched. She looked at the cat, who was now grooming his paw, oblivious to the threat hanging over his head. She thought of Eva, buried in her books, harmless and kind. "You're blackmailing me." "I am offering you the only play remaining on the board." Lucien straightened up, adjusting his cufflinks with deliberate slowness. "The choice is yours, Aurora. Run and die, or stay and bind yourself to the devil you know." She crumpled the parchment in her fist. The paper felt hot, burning against her palm. "If I do this," she said, her voice low and dangerous, "you follow my rules. No demons in the flat. No lying to me. And you stay out of my head." Lucien's eyes flashed, the amber one glowing faintly in the dim light. "I make no promises about your head. It is always so loud in there." He extended his hand.
Not for the crumpled paper, but for her
. An invitation. A trap. Rory stared at his hand. She thought about Evan, the ex who had bruised her spirit until she fled. She thought about the lonely nights delivering food to people who didn't care if she lived or died. She thought about the fire in her blood that had drawn her to Lucien in the first place, the dangerous pull that had nearly consumed her. She placed her hand in his. His skin was cool, smooth, but his grip was iron. "Don't make me regret this," she warned. "Regret is a luxury we cannot afford." He pulled her closer, their bodies colliding. The air around them shifted, growing heavy and
electric
. Lucien raised his other hand,
tracing
the line of her jaw with a thumb that
felt like branding iron
. "This will hurt,"
he murmured, his voice vibrating against her lips
. "Good." He kissed her. It wasn't gentle. It was a collision, a claiming, a desperate merger of two
fractured
histories. The room spun. The books on the shelves rattled. Ptolemy yowled and scrambled under the sofa. Rory clawed at his lapels, pulling him deeper, tasting the danger on his tongue. The scar on her wrist burned hot, then cold, then numb. Shadows detached themselves from the corners of the room, swirling around them like a storm. The front door exploded inward. Splinters of wood flew across the room as three figures clad in obsidian armour crashed through the entrance, weapons drawn. The leader, a towering brute with horns curling from his temples, pointed a jagged spear directly at Lucien's chest. "Found you,"
the demon growled, his voice grinding like stones
. "The traitor and the thief." Lucien broke the kiss but didn't let go of Rory's hand. He grabbed his cane, and with a flick of his wrist, the ivory handle slid away to reveal a
gleaming
silver blade. "Behind me," he ordered, his voice calm
amidst
the chaos. Rory grabbed a heavy brass candlestick from the side table, her eyes wild. "I'm not hiding." The lead demon
charged
. Steel clashed against steel. Sparks flew, illuminating the terrified face of the cat under the sofa. The ritual had begun, but the Council had arrived early. Lucien parried a blow that would have taken his head off, shoving Rory toward the kitchen. "Move!" "Not without you!" she screamed, swinging the candlestick into the knee of a second attacker. Bone cracked. The demon howled. Lucien spun, slashing a arc of silver light that forced the attackers back. He grinned, a feral, terrifying expression that made her heart hammer against her ribs. "Stick close, Rory," he shouted over the din of battle. "It's going to get messy." The lead demon roared, summoning a ball of green fire in his palm. He hurled it straight at them. Lucien tackled Rory to the floor as the fireball erupted against the wall, engulfing Eva's precious collection of scrolls in instant flame. Paper ashes rained down on them like snow. The flat
was burning
. The demons
were closing
in. And Lucien's hand was still
tightly
clasped in hers, the bond sealing tight just as the ceiling
began to
crack above their heads.
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2/19/2026, 3:57:26 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
20
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"The word tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences
59
tagDensity
0.339
leniency
0.678
rawRatio
0.05
effectiveRatio
0.034
97.16%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1761
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"tightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
57.41%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1761
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"echoed"
count
1
1
word
"throbbed"
count
1
2
word
"charged"
count
2
3
word
"etched"
count
1
4
word
"silence"
count
1
5
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
6
word
"could feel"
count
1
7
word
"stomach"
count
1
8
word
"churned"
count
1
9
word
"electric"
count
1
10
word
"tracing"
count
1
11
word
"fractured"
count
1
12
word
"gleaming"
count
1
13
word
"amidst"
count
1
highlights
0
"echoed"
1
"throbbed"
2
"charged"
3
"etched"
4
"silence"
5
"rhythmic"
6
"could feel"
7
"stomach"
8
"churned"
9
"electric"
10
"tracing"
11
"fractured"
12
"gleaming"
13
"amidst"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"knuckles turned white"
count
1
1
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"knuckles turned white"
1
"stomach churned"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
115
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
115
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
154
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
44
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1758
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
14
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
42
wordCount
1277
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
1.25
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
London
2
Eva
3
Lucien
16
Rory
14
Ptolemy
3
Evan
1
Council
1
Bone
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Eva"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Rory"
4
"Ptolemy"
5
"Evan"
6
"Council"
7
"Bone"
places
0
"London"
globalScore
0.874
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
89
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like branding iron"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.569
wordCount
1758
matches
0
"Not for the crumpled paper, but for her"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
154
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
70
mean
25.11
std
18
cv
0.717
sampleLengths
0
45
1
56
2
5
3
29
4
4
5
5
6
54
7
36
8
3
9
26
10
40
11
8
12
16
13
50
14
7
15
46
16
4
17
60
18
19
19
51
20
18
21
24
22
3
23
8
24
78
25
44
26
9
27
25
28
40
29
5
30
38
31
20
32
5
33
17
34
35
35
8
36
59
37
10
38
14
39
5
40
44
41
33
42
3
43
38
44
15
45
31
46
26
47
16
48
63
49
16
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
115
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
223
matches
0
"was burning"
1
"were closing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
154
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1280
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
29
adverbRatio
0.02265625
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.00625
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
154
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
154
mean
11.42
std
7.36
cv
0.645
sampleLengths
0
20
1
25
2
22
3
23
4
11
5
5
6
13
7
16
8
4
9
5
10
13
11
23
12
18
13
4
14
11
15
16
16
5
17
3
18
16
19
10
20
16
21
10
22
14
23
8
24
16
25
5
26
19
27
26
28
7
29
6
30
30
31
10
32
4
33
11
34
27
35
22
36
6
37
13
38
9
39
16
40
4
41
22
42
9
43
9
44
17
45
7
46
3
47
8
48
6
49
7
48.92%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.34415584415584416
totalSentences
154
uniqueOpeners
53
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
110
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
52.73%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
46
totalSentences
110
matches
0
"He looked untouched by the"
1
"She stepped back, her hand"
2
"He stepped past her before"
3
"He ignored the piles of"
4
"He walked to the centre"
5
"It felt physical, like a"
6
"She forced her breathing to"
7
"He stopped an arm's length"
8
"He held it out."
9
"She stared at the paper"
10
"His voice dropped, losing its"
11
"It had been in this"
12
"He had offered her protection"
13
"She had refused, choosing freedom"
14
"She looked at his hands."
15
"She remembered those hands holding"
16
"She remembered the taste of"
17
"He stepped closer again, invading"
18
"It was intoxicating and terrifying"
19
"She snatched it from his"
ratio
0.418
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
103
totalSentences
110
matches
0
"The chain rattled, then the"
1
"Rory yanked the door open,"
2
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3
"He looked untouched by the"
4
"She stepped back, her hand"
5
"The small crescent scar on"
6
"He stepped past her before"
7
"The scent of expensive tobacco"
8
"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed"
9
"Lucien ignored the cat."
10
"He ignored the piles of"
11
"He walked to the centre"
12
"The sound was sharp, final."
13
"Rory crossed her arms over"
14
"Lucien turned, his gaze sweeping"
15
"It felt physical, like a"
16
"The air left the room."
17
"Rory felt the walls of"
18
"She forced her breathing to"
19
"Lucien moved closer"
ratio
0.936
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
110
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
51.95%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
55
technicalSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"The chain rattled, then the deadbolts threw back with a heavy, metallic clunk that echoed off the narrow hallway walls."
1
"The scent of expensive tobacco and ozone_followed him, cutting through the smell of stale curry and old paper that permeated Eva's cramped flat."
2
"She remembered those hands holding her face, wiping away tears she refused to shed."
3
"She looked at the cat, who was now grooming his paw, oblivious to the threat hanging over his head."
4
"Lucien raised his other hand, tracing the line of her jaw with a thumb that felt like branding iron."
5
"Lucien parried a blow that would have taken his head off, shoving Rory toward the kitchen."
6
"He grinned, a feral, terrifying expression that made her heart hammer against her ribs."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
20
uselessAdditionCount
5
matches
0
"Lucien turned, his gaze sweeping over her"
1
"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
2
"she said, her voice low and dangerous,"
3
"he murmured, his voice vibrating against her lips"
4
"the demon growled, his voice grinding like stones"
31.36%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"she whispered (whisper)"
1
"she warned (warn)"
2
"he murmured (murmur)"
3
"the demon growled (growl)"
4
"he ordered (order)"
5
"she screamed (scream)"
6
"he shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences
59
tagDensity
0.153
leniency
0.305
rawRatio
0.778
effectiveRatio
0.237
76.3173%