Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QD3SPE0904PPRZXXQ9ZK

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.000542
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a quiet protest, hinges creaking softly as if reluctant to reveal what lay beyond. Aurora Carter froze, one hand still gripping the doorframe, eyes narrowing slightly. Her brow twitched, sharp and deliberate, as she took in the figure standing there. Lucien Moreau tipped his head slightly, a hint of a crooked smile curling at the corner of his mouth. His platinum blond hair caught the dim light, slicked back as meticulously as always. Those heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—studied her as if she was a puzzle he’d yet to solve. His tailored charcoal suit looked crisp, almost untouched by the London chill, cane in hand, the ivory handle gleaming in the narrow hallway. “You weren't supposed to come,” she said, voice flat but edged with something more fragile beneath. He stepped inside, cane tapping softly against the uneven wooden floor, like a heartbeat echoing in her quiet space. “Didn’t think I had to be invited.” Aurora’s gaze flicked past him, noting the cluttered surfaces of her living room—books stacked haphazardly, notes scrawled across old parchment, a faint scent of spices from her meal still lingering in the air. Everything about her had changed since the last time she’d seen him, or maybe she’d just stopped pretending it hadn’t. He glanced around, the slightest crease of amusement touching his brow. “Your place never looked this chaotic before.” She closed the door behind him, the click echoing louder than it should've. Her shoulders stiffened. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” He leaned on his cane, gaze flickering with something unreadable. “We need to talk. About us, about everything that’s gone wrong.” Her jaw clenched. “There’s nothing to say. Not anymore.” He shifted, the heels of his shoes tapping rhythmically. “That’s what we said last time, yet here I am. Looks like some things refuse to stay buried.” She crossed her arms, eyes pinched with a mix of anger and exhaustion. “You thought showing up unannounced was gonna fix everything?” His lips curved into a slow smile, one that didn't reach his eyes. “No. But it’s a start.” The room sizzled with the tension, the kind that clung to the air, heavy and thick. Outside, the muffled sounds of Brick Lane hummed on—cars honking, distant chatter from the curry house beneath. But inside, silence snapped sharp, punctuated only when she spoke again. “Why now?” Lucien’s gaze softened, just briefly. “Because I finally understood what’s been eating away at me. I was blind, Rory. I needed to find you—to tell you something that’s been weighing on me for ages.” He paused, hesitated for just a second. “I’m sorry. That I hurt you. That I left when I shouldn’t have." Her eyes flicked away, a tear threatening but not quite falling. “Sorry doesn’t undo what you did. Sorry doesn’t erase the years I’ve spent trying to forget.” He pushed off the wall, cane clicking softly as he approached, voice lowered. “I never wanted to hurt you. But I was scared, Rory. Afraid of what I was—what I am. You—” “Don’t,” she cut in, voice trembling but firm. “You don’t get to say it. Not now.” He stopped a few steps away, watching her carefully, his face etched with regret and something deeper—longing, maybe. “You’re still the strongest person I know. And damn it, I miss what we used to have. I miss us. Can’t we just—talk?” Her guard clamped tighter around her heart. “Talking doesn’t change the past. It doesn’t erase everything I’ve managed to bury.” Lucien’s gaze softened further, and for a split second, she saw the man she’d once trusted. “I didn’t come for a fight. I just… needed to see you.” Her breath hitched. “You shouldn’t have come. Not after everything.” He stepped closer, voice a husky whisper. “No. But I had to. Because I realize now—what I should’ve said so long ago—” The door behind her suddenly felt too small. Aurora’s body tensed, every nerve stretched tight. The scar on her wrist prickled at the memory, as if warning her. “Listen,” she said, voice cracking, “you’re better off leaving now, Lucien.” He hesitated, eyes darkening, then slowly reached for his cane. “I get it. I’ve got no right to ask for anything. Just… don’t shut me out forever, Rory.” She turned, giving him her back, the words thick in her throat. Outside, the city breathed on without them. Inside, the silence held weight, unspoken words hanging between them. The faint flicker of hope or heartbreak—she couldn’t tell which—danced in her eyes. Then she sighed, shoulders sagging just a little. “Goodbye, Lucien.” He paused, then tipped his head. “Until next time.” She watched him leave, the door closing with a soft click behind him. Her hand trembled as she reached for her wrist, fingers tracing the crescent scar—a reminder of past wounds she still carried, wild hopes she dared not acknowledge.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
51.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount826
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"suddenly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount826
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"gleaming"
2"echoing"
3"flicked"
4"chaotic"
5"unreadable"
6"jaw clenched"
7"tension"
8"silence"
9"etched"
10"whisper"
11"weight"
12"unspoken"
13"flicker"
14"trembled"
15"tracing"
16"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences45
matches
0"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords814
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount552
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora3
Lucien3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite falling"
1"as if warning her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount814
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean27.13
std15.73
cv0.58
sampleLengths
045
173
216
326
453
518
622
721
89
927
1022
1118
1244
132
1454
1527
1632
1716
1841
1920
2028
2110
2222
2328
2411
2528
2642
2710
289
2940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences66
ratio0.091
matches
0"Those heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—studied her as if she was a puzzle he’d yet to solve."
1"Aurora’s gaze flicked past him, noting the cluttered surfaces of her living room—books stacked haphazardly, notes scrawled across old parchment, a faint scent of spices from her meal still lingering in the air."
2"Outside, the muffled sounds of Brick Lane hummed on—cars honking, distant chatter from the curry house beneath."
3"He stopped a few steps away, watching her carefully, his face etched with regret and something deeper—longing, maybe."
4"The faint flicker of hope or heartbreak—she couldn’t tell which—danced in her eyes."
5"Her hand trembled as she reached for her wrist, fingers tracing the crescent scar—a reminder of past wounds she still carried, wild hopes she dared not acknowledge."
74.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount560
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.06607142857142857
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.023214285714285715
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean12.33
std6.73
cv0.546
sampleLengths
019
112
214
319
414
517
623
716
819
97
1033
1120
1211
137
1413
153
166
1710
1811
193
206
219
2218
2313
249
2513
265
2716
2817
2911
302
315
3236
3313
3411
3516
3613
3719
388
398
4018
4123
427
4313
4416
4512
463
477
487
4915
75.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners30
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Then she sighed, shoulders sagging"
ratio0.022
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences45
matches
0"Her brow twitched, sharp and"
1"His platinum blond hair caught"
2"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
3"she said, voice flat but"
4"He stepped inside, cane tapping"
5"He glanced around, the slightest"
6"She closed the door behind"
7"Her shoulders stiffened."
8"He leaned on his cane,"
9"Her jaw clenched."
10"He shifted, the heels of"
11"She crossed her arms, eyes"
12"His lips curved into a"
13"He paused, hesitated for just"
14"Her eyes flicked away, a"
15"He pushed off the wall,"
16"she cut in, voice trembling"
17"He stopped a few steps"
18"Her guard clamped tighter around"
19"Her breath hitched."
ratio0.6
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences45
matches
0"The door swung open with"
1"Aurora Carter froze, one hand"
2"Her brow twitched, sharp and"
3"Lucien Moreau tipped his head"
4"His platinum blond hair caught"
5"Those heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
6"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
7"she said, voice flat but"
8"He stepped inside, cane tapping"
9"Aurora’s gaze flicked past him,"
10"Everything about her had changed"
11"He glanced around, the slightest"
12"She closed the door behind"
13"Her shoulders stiffened."
14"He leaned on his cane,"
15"Her jaw clenched."
16"He shifted, the heels of"
17"She crossed her arms, eyes"
18"His lips curved into a"
19"The room sizzled with the"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The door swung open with a quiet protest, hinges creaking softly as if reluctant to reveal what lay beyond."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, voice flat but edged with something more fragile beneath"
1"she cut in, voice trembling but firm"
2"she said, voice cracking,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.8823%