| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.516 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1013 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1013 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echoes" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "calculated" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "newfound" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "unwavering" | | 14 | "clenching" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 994 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 806 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Lucien | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.942 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 994 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.50% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 31.06 | | std | 14.93 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.169 | | matches | | 0 | "No one visited unannounced here—not in the layered streets of Brick Lane, where privacy was currency and the curious lingered far longer than invited." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in the dim light, black swirling with secrets—met hers with the precision of a sharpshooter." | | 2 | "Time constricted, refusing to cooperate; her chest felt both hollow and overburdened." | | 3 | "“Unfortunate,” he commented, adjusting the grip on the ivory-handled cane—his thin-bladed signature." | | 4 | "“Eva will return soon,” she interjected, short and sweet—the departure ticket fluttering in her voice." | | 5 | "Aurora’s focus slid to the crescent scar on her wrist—her hidden history." | | 6 | "His smile now bore the mocking thrum of sharp guillotines; his gaze softened only slightly." | | 7 | "“I chose London, not you.” She fought the words as hard as she inhaled—warrior-based refusal coupled with heartfelt claims stretched beyond rationalities." | | 8 | "The wave retraced itself—the moment renewed and etched upon crimson tide." | | 9 | "Tightening within confines unacknowledged, she sensed Lucien’s concession—the sealed door wheezing against withheld response." | | 10 | "What stretched before them evolved—a pendulum pull toward reckoning's mercy upon lines of time." | | 11 | "“They’ll find themselves elsewhere in time.” Together—thread cast against tether’s weary bluster." | | 12 | "The fate of what propelled them gently forward in solemn unity—expanse gathered in shadow cast reverently upon the edge of day." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 824 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.01820388349514563 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007281553398058253 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 12.91 | | std | 5.28 | | cv | 0.409 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 86.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5324675324675324 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze midsentence, the apartment" | | 1 | "She dropped onto the sofa," | | 2 | "She threw aside her books," | | 3 | "She twisted the deadbolts with" | | 4 | "His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in" | | 5 | "he commented, adjusting the grip" | | 6 | "she muttered, fighting the inclination" | | 7 | "he conceded, stepping over the" | | 8 | "His tailored charcoal suit caught" | | 9 | "He moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "she interjected, short and sweet—the" | | 11 | "he mused, trailing long fingers" | | 12 | "His smile now bore the" | | 13 | "He shrugged the truth woven" | | 14 | "He stepped close, and every" | | 15 | "She saw the sorrow in" | | 16 | "She fought the words as" | | 17 | "she whispered, voice slipping from" | | 18 | "Her resolve eked free warp" | | 19 | "She felt him yield upon" |
| | ratio | 0.435 | |
| 40.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter was not expecting" | | 1 | "She froze midsentence, the apartment" | | 2 | "She dropped onto the sofa," | | 3 | "Another firm rap." | | 4 | "The subtle tremor in her" | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau never left unfinished" | | 6 | "She threw aside her books," | | 7 | "She twisted the deadbolts with" | | 8 | "The door swung open, revealing" | | 9 | "His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in" | | 10 | "Time constricted, refusing to cooperate;" | | 11 | "Words attempted an escape without" | | 12 | "he commented, adjusting the grip" | | 13 | "she muttered, fighting the inclination" | | 14 | "he conceded, stepping over the" | | 15 | "His tailored charcoal suit caught" | | 16 | "He moved deeper into the" | | 17 | "she interjected, short and sweet—the" | | 18 | "he mused, trailing long fingers" | | 19 | "Aurora shot back" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was these movements, imagined tomorrows, and untried elsewheres that declared past unspoken questions redeemed amid timeless concord." |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien matched, his grin almost conciliatory yet unyielding in resolve" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he commented (comment)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "he conceded (concede)" | | 3 | "she interjected (interject)" | | 4 | "Lucien interrupted (interrupt)" | | 5 | "Lucien acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.452 | |