Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QGJA842P897PDEDZ6KV8

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11.7s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter was not expecting company when the sharp knock on her door echoed through her cramped little flat. She froze midsentence, the apartment buzzing with silence in the wake of her spoken thoughts. No one visited unannounced here—not in the layered streets of Brick Lane, where privacy was currency and the curious lingered far longer than invited. She dropped onto the sofa, Ptolemy flicking his tail in disdain as he slunk back to the bookshelf. There was security in familiarity, she thought, yet this stranger wielded history like a blade. Another firm rap. The subtle tremor in her hand mirrored familiarity. Lucien Moreau never left unfinished business, and she was one of his loose ends. No mistaking those four languages in a single knock. She threw aside her books, ignoring the thunk of leather-bound regret against the carpet as she strode across the room. She twisted the deadbolts with practised ease, the echoes loud in the small space. The door swung open, revealing him leaning nonchalantly, a ghost of a smile twisting his lips. His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in the dim light, black swirling with secrets—met hers with the precision of a sharpshooter. “Aurora.” Time constricted, refusing to cooperate; her chest felt both hollow and overburdened. Words attempted an escape without success. “Lucien.” “Unfortunate,” he commented, adjusting the grip on the ivory-handled cane—his thin-bladed signature. “Your face says it's not time for catch-ups.” “You could've called,” she muttered, fighting the inclination to slam the door. “I could have,” he conceded, stepping over the threshold with deliberate care, closing it behind him with a knowing click. His tailored charcoal suit caught the mellow aura of the overhead light. On different terms, she'd have appreciated his efficiency. As it was, the tension hung between them like cobwebs refusing to break. “London’s ever so dreary without you.” He moved deeper into the room, taking in the stacks of lore clashing against the confines of modern architecture. “More of Jennifer’s history here. You’re rebuilding in circles.” “Eva will return soon,” she interjected, short and sweet—the departure ticket fluttering in her voice. “Always running,” he mused, trailing long fingers along the side of her armchair. “It took me a long time to find you.” “I didn’t ask for it,” Aurora shot back. The heat of anger, lingering traces of old betrayal. “Hunting chaos suits you. Whatever it is—” “Your testimonies pierced circles across the pond,” Lucien interrupted, watching the way her anger tightened and released like a breathless ballet. “Evan follows. You’re uncomfortable where it counts.” Aurora’s focus slid to the crescent scar on her wrist—her hidden history. “Eva’s a shield. Better company than the forces you wield.” “And better musings, too,” Lucien acknowledged. His smile now bore the mocking thrum of sharp guillotines; his gaze softened only slightly. “Tell her I said hello. But now, there’s you and talking past has outworn its welcome.” He shrugged the truth woven into layers: cast a fleeting shadow over curves Aurora barely acknowledged seemed real. Brick Lane succumbed to silence again, punctuated by the rustling of half-imagined contrition. Old notes whispered accusations heavy with dusk’s marred melodies. “I owe you nothing,” Aurora persisted, tuning out the melody’s melancholic homage and focusing on Lucien’s poised grace and ambiguous cruelty. “Trying is pointless.” Lucien chuckled, a low, rumbling echo in the small room. “Owing suits you. You never chose this, Aurora. But your certainty excused you.” He stepped close, and every move calculated against centuries steeped in a demon's essence. She saw the sorrow in the slant of his shoulders, the regret lingering upon his lips in unspoken rapture. “I chose London, not you.” She fought the words as hard as she inhaled—warrior-based refusal coupled with heartfelt claims stretched beyond rationalities. “Anchored love never guaranteed peace,” Lucien returned, bridging fractions once sworn to chaos past profitable links yet unresolved. Aurora’s tension shifted, reclaimed as she distanced herself, searching for her history within familiar bookshelf refuge. The act of pulling recompense from ancient holdings defined her. “And yet here we are,” she whispered, voice slipping from the smooth edges of logic into the tumultuous river of unrest. Her resolve eked free warp and woof throughout newfound acceptance. Lucien placed himself beside her, unrequited wisdom offered without demand. She felt him yield upon mention of sails cast adrift. “Auroras pull toward night alone when words describe colourless histories unmade.” Seconds passed, they dissolved into ripples fading beyond breath. The wave retraced itself—the moment renewed and etched upon crimson tide. Ptolemy lingered, sprawled in passive feline authority, a subtle barometer attuned to unspoken changes. “The first wave’s best spent across shores which are unbeating,” she mused, tentative steps echoing in the phrase. “I’ll not leave her again.” “Unwavering currents echo more than restless minds,” Lucien matched her reverent tones, his grin almost conciliatory yet unyielding in resolve. “Time slipped through a door long lost. Some paths though—” His demeanour hardened, charisma clenching destiny's fist and unfurling uncaring pause. Aurora moved, surfacing from fluid childhood into interlaced wings. “Then,” she placed an emphasis free from tumult's binding chords, a barrier between grief and recompense. She turned, dark hair falling around her in cascades, nostalgia flooding with the weight of time’s sudden weathering. Tightening within confines unacknowledged, she sensed Lucien’s concession—the sealed door wheezing against withheld response. They drifted away, united in unspoken tale.All cluttered histories consigned to half-fallen dust creased upon whispered warnings. What stretched before them evolved—a pendulum pull toward reckoning's mercy upon lines of time. They long carried ghosts through movements hypnotised in surface. “They’ll find themselves elsewhere in time.” Together—thread cast against tether’s weary bluster. Aurora watched, their shared nerve binding in ringed echo across spanning night. Silence gathered within edges clashing echoed truths. It was these movements, imagined tomorrows, and untried elsewheres that declared past unspoken questions redeemed amid timeless concord. The fate of what propelled them gently forward in solemn unity—expanse gathered in shadow cast reverently upon the edge of day.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.516
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1013
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1013
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"echo"
count3
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count4
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count2
10
word"newfound"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"clenching"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"echoes"
3"tension"
4"fleeting"
5"echo"
6"calculated"
7"unspoken"
8"familiar"
9"resolve"
10"newfound"
11"etched"
12"echoing"
13"unwavering"
14"clenching"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"g in resolve"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords994
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount806
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
Aurora8
Lucien9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.942
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed real"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount994
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
94.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean31.06
std14.93
cv0.481
sampleLengths
091
154
250
319
420
512
653
734
815
922
1024
1128
1222
1337
1440
1524
1623
1733
1822
1918
2026
2131
2231
2334
2423
2530
2620
2734
2831
2923
3024
3146
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was not expecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences77
ratio0.169
matches
0"No one visited unannounced here—not in the layered streets of Brick Lane, where privacy was currency and the curious lingered far longer than invited."
1"His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in the dim light, black swirling with secrets—met hers with the precision of a sharpshooter."
2"Time constricted, refusing to cooperate; her chest felt both hollow and overburdened."
3"“Unfortunate,” he commented, adjusting the grip on the ivory-handled cane—his thin-bladed signature."
4"“Eva will return soon,” she interjected, short and sweet—the departure ticket fluttering in her voice."
5"Aurora’s focus slid to the crescent scar on her wrist—her hidden history."
6"His smile now bore the mocking thrum of sharp guillotines; his gaze softened only slightly."
7"“I chose London, not you.” She fought the words as hard as she inhaled—warrior-based refusal coupled with heartfelt claims stretched beyond rationalities."
8"The wave retraced itself—the moment renewed and etched upon crimson tide."
9"Tightening within confines unacknowledged, she sensed Lucien’s concession—the sealed door wheezing against withheld response."
10"What stretched before them evolved—a pendulum pull toward reckoning's mercy upon lines of time."
11"“They’ll find themselves elsewhere in time.” Together—thread cast against tether’s weary bluster."
12"The fate of what propelled them gently forward in solemn unity—expanse gathered in shadow cast reverently upon the edge of day."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount824
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01820388349514563
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007281553398058253
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean12.91
std5.28
cv0.409
sampleLengths
019
115
224
318
415
53
68
714
89
920
1014
1116
1219
131
1412
156
161
1712
188
1912
2020
2112
228
2313
2425
259
2615
2713
289
298
309
317
3221
337
3412
3510
366
3715
3816
3918
4013
419
4221
433
4410
4513
4614
4719
4822
4918
86.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5324675324675324
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences62
matches
0"She froze midsentence, the apartment"
1"She dropped onto the sofa,"
2"She threw aside her books,"
3"She twisted the deadbolts with"
4"His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in"
5"he commented, adjusting the grip"
6"she muttered, fighting the inclination"
7"he conceded, stepping over the"
8"His tailored charcoal suit caught"
9"He moved deeper into the"
10"she interjected, short and sweet—the"
11"he mused, trailing long fingers"
12"His smile now bore the"
13"He shrugged the truth woven"
14"He stepped close, and every"
15"She saw the sorrow in"
16"She fought the words as"
17"she whispered, voice slipping from"
18"Her resolve eked free warp"
19"She felt him yield upon"
ratio0.435
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora Carter was not expecting"
1"She froze midsentence, the apartment"
2"She dropped onto the sofa,"
3"Another firm rap."
4"The subtle tremor in her"
5"Lucien Moreau never left unfinished"
6"She threw aside her books,"
7"She twisted the deadbolts with"
8"The door swung open, revealing"
9"His heterochromatic gaze—amber drinking in"
10"Time constricted, refusing to cooperate;"
11"Words attempted an escape without"
12"he commented, adjusting the grip"
13"she muttered, fighting the inclination"
14"he conceded, stepping over the"
15"His tailored charcoal suit caught"
16"He moved deeper into the"
17"she interjected, short and sweet—the"
18"he mused, trailing long fingers"
19"Aurora shot back"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was these movements, imagined tomorrows, and untried elsewheres that declared past unspoken questions redeemed amid timeless concord."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien matched, his grin almost conciliatory yet unyielding in resolve"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he commented (comment)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"he conceded (concede)"
3"she interjected (interject)"
4"Lucien interrupted (interrupt)"
5"Lucien acknowledged (acknowledge)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.452
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.452
77.8103%