| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.489 | | leniency | 0.978 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1601 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1601 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "lurching" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "navigating" | | 13 | "structure" | | 14 | "crystallized" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "cacophony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.65% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "\"It is not a fight you can win with steel or shadow,\" Isolde said, gesturing to the archway where the air now扭曲 ed, showing glimpses of a jagged, amber sky—the sky of Dymas." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1591 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 1180 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.03 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Shade | 3 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | IsoldeVarga | 1 | | Rory | 24 | | Isolde | 16 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "IsoldeVarga" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Half-Fae" | | 7 | "Blade" | | 8 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.483 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something like burnt honey—rustled through t" | | 1 | "sounded like a chorus of voices speaking j" | | 2 | "felt like a negotiation" | | 3 | "looked like crystallized tears hung from" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.629 | | wordCount | 1591 | | matches | | 0 | "not coming from a single point but seeming to emanate from the shadows themselves" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 37 | | std | 16.95 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers erupted from the ground in impossible clusters—blooms the size of dinner plates in colors that had no names, vibrating with their own inner light." | | 1 | "They didn't just sit in the soil; they seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting with a slow, rhythmic sigh." | | 2 | "Leaves shimmered with a metallic sheen, chiming softly when a breeze—warm and scented with something like burnt honey—rustled through them." | | 3 | "This wasn't just a hidden garden; it was a organism, and they were foreign bodies invading its system." | | 4 | "\"It is not a fight you can win with steel or shadow,\" Isolde said, gesturing to the archway where the air now扭曲 ed, showing glimpses of a jagged, amber sky—the sky of Dymas." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1059 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.02644003777148253 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009442870632672332 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 6.48 | | cv | 0.485 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 55.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3865546218487395 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped, hand instinctively going" | | 1 | "Their voice drifted around them," | | 2 | "It swirled with hues of" | | 3 | "They didn't just sit in" | | 4 | "She wore no coat despite" | | 5 | "She watched Isolde's back." | | 6 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 7 | "It sounded like a chorus" | | 8 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 9 | "She reached out, finger hovering" | | 10 | "They extended a tendril of" | | 11 | "It wasn't a building, but" | | 12 | "She scanned the perimeter." | | 13 | "She placed both hands on" | | 14 | "She thought of her flat" | | 15 | "She touched the scar on" | | 16 | "It burned hot now, almost" | | 17 | "She looked at Nyx, solidifying" | | 18 | "She stepped forward, toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the gap" | | 2 | "The transition hit her stomach" | | 3 | "She stopped, hand instinctively going" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 5 | "Their voice drifted around them," | | 6 | "The Shade stood taller here," | | 7 | "Rory squinted against the brilliance." | | 8 | "The sky above the grove" | | 9 | "It swirled with hues of" | | 10 | "Wildflowers erupted from the ground" | | 11 | "They didn't just sit in" | | 12 | "Rory said, her voice sounding" | | 13 | "Nyx replied, a ripple passing" | | 14 | "IsoldeVarga glided ahead of them," | | 15 | "She wore no coat despite" | | 16 | "The earth seemed to part" | | 17 | "Isolde called back, her tone" | | 18 | "Rory frowned, adjusting the strap" | | 19 | "She watched Isolde's back." |
| | ratio | 0.967 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 11.66% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the gap between the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into grass that felt too soft, like spun sugar underfoot." | | 1 | "The transition hit her stomach first, a lurching sensation as if an elevator cable snapped, then settled into a humming vibration that traveled up her legs." | | 2 | "The Half-Fae moved with an unnerving grace, bypassing thickets of thorny vines that snapped shut the moment Nyx drifted too close." | | 3 | "The trees here were massive, their bark smooth and pearlescent, branching out in fractal patterns that hurt the eyes if stared at too long." | | 4 | "Nyx drifted over to a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with a sickly green pulsation." | | 5 | "Rory moved past the pool, navigating a narrow trail bordered by ferns that uncurled as she passed, tracking her movement." | | 6 | "The beautiful, glowing flowers nearest the archway had wilted instantly, turning black and crumbling to dust as if aged a hundred years in a second." | | 7 | "The blackened dust from the wilted flowers swirl up into a vortex, forming shapes that looked suspiciously like grasping hands." | | 8 | "She looked at Nyx, solidifying their form into a warrior's stance, and then at Isolde, who waited with the patience of centuries." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, a ripple passing through their shadowy torso" | | 1 | "Isolde called back, her tone melodic yet distant" | | 2 | "Isolde announced, her voice dropping to a whisper" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice sharpening" | | 4 | "Rory said, her voice low" | | 5 | "Isolde spoke, her words carrying a weight that made the air shimmer" | | 6 | "Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands" | | 7 | "Isolde said, her expression sorrowful but unyielding" | | 8 | "Rory asked, her voice barely audible over the rising wind" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde called back (call back)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 4 | "Isolde announced (announce)" | | 5 | "Nyx quipped (quip)" | | 6 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.35 | | effectiveRatio | 0.311 | |