Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QHYMDFFE86B9Z8N563D2

Run Details

Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.005904
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of ozone and crushed violets, a sharp contrast to the damp chill of Richmond Park they had just left. Rory stepped through the gap between the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into grass that felt too soft, like spun sugar underfoot. The transition hit her stomach first, a lurching sensation as if an elevator cable snapped, then settled into a humming vibration that traveled up her legs. She stopped, hand instinctively going to the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket pulsed against her sternum, warm and rhythmic, beating in time with the strange light flooding the clearing. "Time's gone weird," Nyx murmured. Their voice drifted around them, not coming from a single point but seeming to emanate from the shadows themselves. The Shade stood taller here, their form less a jagged silhouette and more a fluid column of midnight ink, edges blurring into the ambient glow. Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the tree line. "An hour out there might be a week in here. Or a second." Rory squinted against the brilliance. The sky above the grove wasn't the grey London overcast she expected. It swirled with hues of lavender and pale gold, shifting like oil on water. Wildflowers erupted from the ground in impossible clusters—blooms the size of dinner plates in colors that had no names, vibrating with their own inner light. They didn't just sit in the soil; they seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting with a slow, rhythmic sigh. "Keep moving," Rory said, her voice sounding flat and foreign in the vast, hushed space. "Isolde said the center of the grove. Don't touch anything that looks like it's watching you." "I feel watched by everything," Nyx replied, a ripple passing through their shadowy torso. "Even the dirt has eyes." IsoldeVarga glided ahead of them, her silver hair cascading down her back like a waterfall of liquid mercury. She wore no coat despite the crisp air, her bare feet kissing the vibrant grass without leaving a single impression. The earth seemed to part for her, then knit itself back together instantly. "The path reveals itself to those who do not seek to conquer it," Isolde called back, her tone melodic yet distant. "To force a step is to invite the roots to bind." Rory frowned, adjusting the strap of her delivery bag out of habit, though there were no food orders here. She watched Isolde's back. The Half-Fae moved with an unnerving grace, bypassing thickets of thorny vines that snapped shut the moment Nyx drifted too close. They pushed deeper into the pocket realm. The trees here were massive, their bark smooth and pearlescent, branching out in fractal patterns that hurt the eyes if stared at too long. Leaves shimmered with a metallic sheen, chiming softly when a breeze—warm and scented with something like burnt honey—rustled through them. "Do you hear that?" Nyx froze. The shadow form condensed, becoming solid enough to cast a dark patch on the glowing grass. "A whisper. Not wind." Rory held her breath. Beneath the chiming leaves and the hum of the Heartstone, a low thrumming noise vibrated in her teeth. It sounded like a chorus of voices speaking just below the threshold of understanding. She gripped the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver dagger bit into her palm, its perpetual coldness grounding her against the disorienting warmth of the air. "It's the Veil," Isolde said, stopping beside a pool of water that reflected a sky full of stars, despite the golden daylight above. "Thin here. The voices are echoes from the other side. Hel, perhaps. Or the Courts." Rory approached the pool. The water was perfectly still, yet the reflection showed a storm raging. Lightning forked across the mirrored surface, silent and violent. She reached out, finger hovering an inch above the liquid. The Heartstone flared hot against her skin. "Don't," Isolde warned, her pale lavender eyes locking onto Rory's. "To touch the reflection is to invite the storm into your blood." Rory pulled her hand back. "This place... it feels alive. Worse than alive. Aware." "Awareness is a burden," Isolde replied, turning away from the pool. "The grove remembers every footstep, every lie told within its bounds. That is why I cannot lie here, Rory Carter. The ground would swallow me whole." Nyx drifted over to a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with a sickly green pulsation. They extended a tendril of shadow, probing the air above the fungi. "These weren't here a moment ago. They grew while we watched." "Growth is accelerated," Isolde confirmed. "As is decay. Life burns brighter and faster in the spaces between." Rory moved past the pool, navigating a narrow trail bordered by ferns that uncurled as she passed, tracking her movement. The unease in her gut tightened. This wasn't just a hidden garden; it was a organism, and they were foreign bodies invading its system. Every step felt like a negotiation. Ahead, the trees parted to reveal a circular clearing dominated by a single structure. It wasn't a building, but a weaving of living branches, twisted and fused into an archway that spiraled upward into the swirling sky. Vines heavy with fruit that looked like crystallized tears hung from the arch. The air here tasted thicker, heavier with magic that made the hair on Rory's arms stand up. "The heart of the grove," Isolde announced, her voice dropping to a whisper. "Where the threads of fate tangle." Rory slowed her pace, her senses on high alert. The chiming of the leaves had stopped. The humming vibration intensified, shifting from a pleasant buzz to a warning growl deep in her chest. The shadows around Nyx writhed agitatedly, stretching long and thin toward the archway. "Something's wrong," Nyx said, their voice sharpening. "The shadows here... they don't obey me. They pull away." "The grove tests intent," Isolde said, stepping forward without hesitation. "It knows why we come." Rory followed, her hand tightening on the cold hilt of the moonsilver dagger. The blade began to glow faintly, reacting to the density of magic in the air. She scanned the perimeter. The beautiful, glowing flowers nearest the archway had wilted instantly, turning black and crumbling to dust as if aged a hundred years in a second. "We need to be quick," Rory said, her voice low. "If this place accelerates time, we could age to dust before we find what we need." "Or we could arrive before we left," Nyx quipped, though the humor didn't reach their violet eyes. The Shade hovered close to Rory's shoulder, a protective wall of darkness. "Lead on, Seer. But if the ground tries to eat me, I'm taking a chunk with me." Isolde reached the base of the spiraling branch-arch. She placed both hands on the living wood. The bark rippled under her touch, turning from pearl-white to a deep, bruised purple. A low groan echoed through the clearing, sounding like timber straining under immense weight. "The way opens for the truth-teller," Isolde spoke, her words carrying a weight that made the air shimmer. "But the price is memory." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx. The Shade's form flickered, uncertainty rippling through their usual composure. "Memory?" Rory asked, stepping up beside Isolde. "What kind of memory?" "The kind you hold dearest," Isolde replied, turning her lavender gaze to Rory. "The grove demands a toll to reveal the path to the Wardens' rift. It will take a moment from your past to fuel the bridge." Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. She thought of her flat above Silas' bar, the smell of garlic and ginger from the Golden Empress kitchen, the face of her mother in Cardiff. She touched the scar on her wrist again, feeling the rough skin under her fingertips. "No deal," Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "We find another way. We don't trade pieces of ourselves to a garden." "There is no other way," Isolde said, her expression sorrowful but unyielding. "The Veil weakens. The rift widens. Without the bridge, the shadows will consume us all before the sun sets in your world." The ground beneath them shuddered. The blackened dust from the wilted flowers swirl up into a vortex, forming shapes that looked suspiciously like grasping hands. The chiming leaves started again, but the sound was discordant now, a shrieking cacophony that set Rory's teeth on edge. Nyx stepped in front of Rory, their shadow expanding to cloak them both. "Then we fight our way through. I didn't survive three centuries between realms to lose a memory to a patch of weeds." "It is not a fight you can win with steel or shadow," Isolde said, gesturing to the archway where the air now扭曲 ed, showing glimpses of a jagged, amber sky—the sky of Dymas. "The bridge forms only with sacrifice." Rory looked at the twisting portal, then down at the glowing Heartstone. It burned hot now, almost painful. She looked at Nyx, solidifying their form into a warrior's stance, and then at Isolde, who waited with the patience of centuries. "Which memory?" Rory asked, her voice barely audible over the rising wind. Isolde smiled, a sad, fragile thing. "That is for the grove to decide. And for you to endure." The vortex of dust hands reached higher. The shrieking of the leaves peaked. Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver casting a cold, blue light across the trembling grass. She stepped forward, toward the arch, toward the cost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.978
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"lurching"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count2
6
word"cascading"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"echoes"
count1
12
word"navigating"
count1
13
word"structure"
count1
14
word"crystallized"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"weight"
count2
17
word"flickered"
count1
18
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"stomach"
2"lurching"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"scanned"
6"cascading"
7"shimmered"
8"whisper"
9"vibrated"
10"warmth"
11"echoes"
12"navigating"
13"structure"
14"crystallized"
15"echoed"
16"weight"
17"flickered"
18"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
97.65% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0.008
matches
0"\"It is not a fight you can win with steel or shadow,\" Isolde said, gesturing to the archway where the air now扭曲 ed, showing glimpses of a jagged, amber sky—the sky of Dymas."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1591
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1180
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone4
Shade3
London1
Nyx11
IsoldeVarga1
Rory24
Isolde16
Half-Fae1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Dymas1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Shade"
2"Nyx"
3"IsoldeVarga"
4"Rory"
5"Isolde"
6"Half-Fae"
7"Blade"
8"Dymas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.483
windowScore0.167
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something like burnt honey—rustled through t"
1"sounded like a chorus of voices speaking j"
2"felt like a negotiation"
3"looked like crystallized tears hung from"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.629
wordCount1591
matches
0"not coming from a single point but seeming to emanate from the shadows themselves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
88.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean37
std16.95
cv0.458
sampleLengths
072
137
270
375
431
519
651
732
844
951
1026
1166
1238
1342
1422
1514
1637
1738
1817
1950
2067
2119
2246
2317
2415
2557
2626
2746
2844
2923
3016
3111
3238
3347
3426
3534
3645
3735
3839
3940
4012
4118
4238
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
22.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences119
ratio0.042
matches
0"Wildflowers erupted from the ground in impossible clusters—blooms the size of dinner plates in colors that had no names, vibrating with their own inner light."
1"They didn't just sit in the soil; they seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting with a slow, rhythmic sigh."
2"Leaves shimmered with a metallic sheen, chiming softly when a breeze—warm and scented with something like burnt honey—rustled through them."
3"This wasn't just a hidden garden; it was a organism, and they were foreign bodies invading its system."
4"\"It is not a fight you can win with steel or shadow,\" Isolde said, gesturing to the archway where the air now扭曲 ed, showing glimpses of a jagged, amber sky—the sky of Dymas."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02644003777148253
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009442870632672332
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.37
std6.48
cv0.485
sampleLengths
022
124
226
314
423
55
619
725
88
913
105
1112
1214
1325
1419
1515
1616
1714
185
1918
2020
2113
2221
2311
2419
254
2621
277
2824
2920
306
3116
324
334
3418
3514
3611
3719
3823
3915
404
4112
429
4310
447
4510
4612
475
489
4911
55.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3865546218487395
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners46
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences92
matches
0"She stopped, hand instinctively going"
1"Their voice drifted around them,"
2"It swirled with hues of"
3"They didn't just sit in"
4"She wore no coat despite"
5"She watched Isolde's back."
6"They pushed deeper into the"
7"It sounded like a chorus"
8"She gripped the hilt of"
9"She reached out, finger hovering"
10"They extended a tendril of"
11"It wasn't a building, but"
12"She scanned the perimeter."
13"She placed both hands on"
14"She thought of her flat"
15"She touched the scar on"
16"It burned hot now, almost"
17"She looked at Nyx, solidifying"
18"She stepped forward, toward the"
ratio0.207
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences92
matches
0"The air tasted of ozone"
1"Rory stepped through the gap"
2"The transition hit her stomach"
3"She stopped, hand instinctively going"
4"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
5"Their voice drifted around them,"
6"The Shade stood taller here,"
7"Rory squinted against the brilliance."
8"The sky above the grove"
9"It swirled with hues of"
10"Wildflowers erupted from the ground"
11"They didn't just sit in"
12"Rory said, her voice sounding"
13"Nyx replied, a ripple passing"
14"IsoldeVarga glided ahead of them,"
15"She wore no coat despite"
16"The earth seemed to part"
17"Isolde called back, her tone"
18"Rory frowned, adjusting the strap"
19"She watched Isolde's back."
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.66% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Rory stepped through the gap between the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into grass that felt too soft, like spun sugar underfoot."
1"The transition hit her stomach first, a lurching sensation as if an elevator cable snapped, then settled into a humming vibration that traveled up her legs."
2"The Half-Fae moved with an unnerving grace, bypassing thickets of thorny vines that snapped shut the moment Nyx drifted too close."
3"The trees here were massive, their bark smooth and pearlescent, branching out in fractal patterns that hurt the eyes if stared at too long."
4"Nyx drifted over to a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with a sickly green pulsation."
5"Rory moved past the pool, navigating a narrow trail bordered by ferns that uncurled as she passed, tracking her movement."
6"The beautiful, glowing flowers nearest the archway had wilted instantly, turning black and crumbling to dust as if aged a hundred years in a second."
7"The blackened dust from the wilted flowers swirl up into a vortex, forming shapes that looked suspiciously like grasping hands."
8"She looked at Nyx, solidifying their form into a warrior's stance, and then at Isolde, who waited with the patience of centuries."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Nyx replied, a ripple passing through their shadowy torso"
1"Isolde called back, her tone melodic yet distant"
2"Isolde announced, her voice dropping to a whisper"
3"Nyx said, their voice sharpening"
4"Rory said, her voice low"
5"Isolde spoke, her words carrying a weight that made the air shimmer"
6"Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
7"Isolde said, her expression sorrowful but unyielding"
8"Rory asked, her voice barely audible over the rising wind"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde called back (call back)"
2"Isolde warned (warn)"
3"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
4"Isolde announced (announce)"
5"Nyx quipped (quip)"
6"Isolde spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.35
effectiveRatio0.311
69.2463%