Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QJ6Y258B17RZDV0SBY1X

Run Details

Duration:
6m 14s
Cost:
$0.027304
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt clicked, then the second. Rory’s fingers hesitated on the third. Through the peephole, the corridor warped Lucien into a fisheye spectre—charcoal shoulders, silver hair, the ivory flash of his cane tapping impatiently against the threadbare carpet. She pulled the chain anyway. He stood exactly as memory had fossilised him: spine rigid, platinum strands slicked back to expose the cruel architecture of his cheekbones. His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on her without blinking. The right, pupil blown wide and black as oil, drifted to the gap between door and frame. Three inches of safety. She didn't close it. Her bright blue eyes narrowed, chips of arctic ice cutting through the dim corridor light. "You've added hardware." His voice carried the Marseilles lilt, polished by years of London grime. He gestured with the cane toward the trio of locks. "Paranoia suits you." "Eva's idea." Rory leaned against the jamb, blocking entry. The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked beneath her sleeve, pale against the darkness of her hair that fell straight to her shoulders. "She thinks someone's coming for her research." "She's correct." The bluntness of it struck her chest. Behind her, Ptolemy vaulted from the windowsill, tabby tail bottle-brushing as he vanished into the bedroom. Animals never lied about what Lucien carried in his blood. "You can't come in." The words scraped her throat. Six months ago, he'd left her in a Soho rainstorm with nothing but the bruise of his thumb against her jawline and the conviction that half-demons didn't get to keep human things. Lucien tilted his head. The motion sent shadows dancing across his face, turning the amber eye molten while the black one swallowed light whole. "I haven't crossed the threshold, Aurora. Yet." He never called her Rory. Never allowed the diminutive that suggested softness, permitted by Eva and the delivery regulars at the Golden Empress. He insisted on the full constellation name, as though invoking something celestial might sanctify the demon in his marrow. She should shut the door. Instead, her hand dropped to her side. He entered. The cane tapped once, twice, finding purchase on the cluttered rug. Books tottered in stacks against every wall—Eva's occult research, spilling from shelves onto the kitchenette counter, scrolls unravelling like entrails across the sofa. He navigated the chaos with the precision of a man who walked through battlefields. "You didn't answer my messages." "You didn't send any." "Precisely." He turned. At five-eleven, he cleared the low ceiling by mere inches. Close now, close enough that she could see the tension bracketing his mouth, the way his left hand flexed near his breast pocket where a handkerchief would be. He'd worn the charcoal suit she remembered, tailored to hide the infernal strength coiled in his shoulders. The last time she'd seen him unbutton that jacket, she'd traced the sigils branded beneath his collarbones, had tasted salt on skin that ran too hot for human norms. "You left." The scar on her wrist ached, phantom pain from a childhood accident that suddenly felt recent. "No explanation. Just—gone. And now you walk in here like—" "Like what?" He advanced. She retreated until her spine hit the windowledge. Outside, Brick Lane choked with noon traffic, tourists hunting for vintage leather. Inside, the air thinned. "Like a man who discovered his continued presence was poisoning the woman he—" He stopped. The black eye twitched, a flutter of darkness. "The cabal knows about Cardiff. About Evan. About why you really fled." The abusive ex's name struck her like physical force. She hadn't spoken it aloud in months, had buried it under shift work and Yu-Fei's imperial menus. Her fingers curled, nails biting palms. "That's not possible." "It's inevitable." Lucien set the cane across two tottering book piles, freeing his hands. One reached for her. She flinched. He arrested the motion, hovering mid-air. His thumb found the scar on her wrist with the delicacy of a thief dismantling a tripwire. "The demon I denied, the heritage I claimed didn't matter—it follows me. They followed me. To you." His skin burned. Not metaphorically; the half-demon biology ran feverish, and where his thumb traced the crescent shape, her nerves ignited. She should pull away. The door stood open. Eva would return from the British Library archives by four. "You said we were a mistake." Rory's voice dropped to a whisper. "That night in the rain. You said—" "I lied." The amber eye caught the weak London sunlight filtering through dirty glass, turning it to torchlight. "I lie beautifully, Aurora. It's my father's gift. But look at you." His other hand rose, bypassing her cheek to tuck a strand of black hair behind her ear, lingering at the pulse point. "Three deadbolts. A cat that spits at shadows. You're building fortresses because of what I brought to your door." She caught his wrist. The bones moved wrong beneath her grip—too many articulations, a structure that recalled serpents more than men. His breath hitched, a sharp intake that revealed teeth overly pointed for comfort. "Then why come back?" She tightened her grip. "If you're so dangerous, if you're walking catastrophe, why stand in Eva's kitchen smelling like expensive cologne and brimstone?" "Because." He leaned in. The brimstone intensified, a warning and a summons. His lips hovered near her temple, not touching, generating heat. "I tried the alternative. Six months of absence. Of letting you believe you were discarded like refuse. It didn't take." Her free hand found his chest, meaning to push but curling into the charcoal wool instead. His heart thundered against her palm, rapid and arrhythmic, a double-beat that suggested two hearts or one torn in conflicting directions. "You're insufferable." The words escaped on an exhale she didn't know she held. "Monstrous." His mouth twisted in something that wasn't quite a smile. "The locks aren't for you." "I know." "Then why—" "Because I need you to use them." He pulled back just enough to meet her eyes, the heterochromatic gaze stripping her bare more efficiently than hands ever had. The black pupil bled into the amber, an eclipse consuming light. "Against what's coming. Against me, if necessary. But first—" He didn't finish. The cane rolled off the books, clattering to the floor, blade unsheathed by the impact. Neither looked at it. Rory's fingers climbed to his collar, finding the sigils beneath the fabric, the branded skin she remembered. He exhaled, a sound like tectonic plates shifting, and his forehead dropped to hers. "I never asked for a knight." Her voice cracked. "Good." His hand settled against her jaw, thumb pressing the corner of her mouth. The heat scalded. "You got a demon instead. Much worse. Much more... persistent." Outside, a car horn blared up from the curry house delivery bay. Inside, Ptolemy yowled from the bedroom, sensing the shift in atmospheric pressure. Rory didn't move. The crescent scar pulsed beneath Lucien's thumb, marking time like a heartbeat, counting the seconds before Eva's return, before the cabal's arrival, before the inevitable crash of half-demon hunger against human fragility. She didn't step back.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:57:35.336Z" 2/19/2026, 3:57:35 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.919
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.054
87.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"blown wide"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"thundered"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"blown wide"
1"lilt"
2"dancing"
3"navigated"
4"tension"
5"traced"
6"whisper"
7"pulse"
8"structure"
9"thundered"
10"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount943
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien5
Marseilles1
London2
Ptolemy2
Six1
Soho1
Rory6
Eva4
Golden1
Empress1
Brick1
Lane1
Yu-Fei1
One1
British1
Library1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"One"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Golden"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"British"
6"Library"
globalScore1
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though invoking something celestial might sanctify the demon in his marrow"
1"quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1177
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.97
std22.6
cv0.73
sampleLengths
044
170
228
340
42
533
641
731
842
912
1050
115
124
131
1486
1528
1663
1732
183
1960
2039
2119
2271
2334
2427
2542
2637
2713
2811
295
302
312
3248
3353
349
3527
3659
374
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
5.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences104
ratio0.048
matches
0"Through the peephole, the corridor warped Lucien into a fisheye spectre—charcoal shoulders, silver hair, the ivory flash of his cane tapping impatiently against the threadbare carpet."
1"His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on her without blinking."
2"Books tottered in stacks against every wall—Eva's occult research, spilling from shelves onto the kitchenette counter, scrolls unravelling like entrails across the sofa."
3"Not metaphorically; the half-demon biology ran feverish, and where his thumb traced the crescent shape, her nerves ignited."
4"The bones moved wrong beneath her grip—too many articulations, a structure that recalled serpents more than men."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount956
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.030334728033472803
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006276150627615063
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.32
std7.63
cv0.674
sampleLengths
07
16
226
35
422
58
617
74
84
915
1015
1110
123
139
1424
157
162
177
1816
1910
209
2132
224
2320
247
255
2618
2719
285
297
302
3111
3223
3314
345
354
361
372
3810
3928
4017
4129
4218
4310
444
458
4612
474
4815
498
54.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3557692307692308
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners37
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Instead, her hand dropped to"
ratio0.013
47.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences79
matches
0"She pulled the chain anyway."
1"He stood exactly as memory"
2"His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on"
3"She didn't close it."
4"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
5"His voice carried the Marseilles"
6"He gestured with the cane"
7"He never called her Rory."
8"He insisted on the full"
9"She should shut the door."
10"He navigated the chaos with"
11"He'd worn the charcoal suit"
12"She retreated until her spine"
13"She hadn't spoken it aloud"
14"Her fingers curled, nails biting"
15"He arrested the motion, hovering"
16"His thumb found the scar"
17"His skin burned."
18"She should pull away."
19"His other hand rose, bypassing"
ratio0.43
48.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences79
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked, then"
1"Rory’s fingers hesitated on the"
2"She pulled the chain anyway."
3"He stood exactly as memory"
4"His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on"
5"The right, pupil blown wide"
6"She didn't close it."
7"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
8"His voice carried the Marseilles"
9"He gestured with the cane"
10"Rory leaned against the jamb,"
11"The crescent scar on her"
12"The bluntness of it struck"
13"Animals never lied about what"
14"The words scraped her throat"
15"Lucien tilted his head."
16"The motion sent shadows dancing"
17"He never called her Rory."
18"He insisted on the full"
19"She should shut the door."
ratio0.823
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked beneath her sleeve, pale against the darkness of her hair that fell straight to her shoulders."
1"He insisted on the full constellation name, as though invoking something celestial might sanctify the demon in his marrow."
2"The last time she'd seen him unbutton that jacket, she'd traced the sigils branded beneath his collarbones, had tasted salt on skin that ran too hot for human n…"
3"The bones moved wrong beneath her grip—too many articulations, a structure that recalled serpents more than men."
4"Her free hand found his chest, meaning to push but curling into the charcoal wool instead."
5"The crescent scar pulsed beneath Lucien's thumb, marking time like a heartbeat, counting the seconds before Eva's return, before the cabal's arrival, before the…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His hand settled, thumb pressing the corner of her mouth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.7373%