| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.459 | | leniency | 0.919 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.054 | |
| 87.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "blown wide" | | 1 | "lilt" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "thundered" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1177 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 943 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 5 | | Marseilles | 1 | | London | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Six | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Eva | 4 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | One | 1 | | British | 1 | | Library | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Brick" | | 4 | "Lane" | | 5 | "British" | | 6 | "Library" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though invoking something celestial might sanctify the demon in his marrow" | | 1 | "quite a smile" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.97 | | std | 22.6 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 86 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 71 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 59 | | 37 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 5.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Through the peephole, the corridor warped Lucien into a fisheye spectre—charcoal shoulders, silver hair, the ivory flash of his cane tapping impatiently against the threadbare carpet." | | 1 | "His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on her without blinking." | | 2 | "Books tottered in stacks against every wall—Eva's occult research, spilling from shelves onto the kitchenette counter, scrolls unravelling like entrails across the sofa." | | 3 | "Not metaphorically; the half-demon biology ran feverish, and where his thumb traced the crescent shape, her nerves ignited." | | 4 | "The bones moved wrong beneath her grip—too many articulations, a structure that recalled serpents more than men." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 956 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.030334728033472803 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006276150627615063 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.32 | | std | 7.63 | | cv | 0.674 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 54.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3557692307692308 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, her hand dropped to" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 47.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the chain anyway." | | 1 | "He stood exactly as memory" | | 2 | "His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on" | | 3 | "She didn't close it." | | 4 | "Her bright blue eyes narrowed," | | 5 | "His voice carried the Marseilles" | | 6 | "He gestured with the cane" | | 7 | "He never called her Rory." | | 8 | "He insisted on the full" | | 9 | "She should shut the door." | | 10 | "He navigated the chaos with" | | 11 | "He'd worn the charcoal suit" | | 12 | "She retreated until her spine" | | 13 | "She hadn't spoken it aloud" | | 14 | "Her fingers curled, nails biting" | | 15 | "He arrested the motion, hovering" | | 16 | "His thumb found the scar" | | 17 | "His skin burned." | | 18 | "She should pull away." | | 19 | "His other hand rose, bypassing" |
| | ratio | 0.43 | |
| 48.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The first deadbolt clicked, then" | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers hesitated on the" | | 2 | "She pulled the chain anyway." | | 3 | "He stood exactly as memory" | | 4 | "His left eye—amber, volcanic—fixed on" | | 5 | "The right, pupil blown wide" | | 6 | "She didn't close it." | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes narrowed," | | 8 | "His voice carried the Marseilles" | | 9 | "He gestured with the cane" | | 10 | "Rory leaned against the jamb," | | 11 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 12 | "The bluntness of it struck" | | 13 | "Animals never lied about what" | | 14 | "The words scraped her throat" | | 15 | "Lucien tilted his head." | | 16 | "The motion sent shadows dancing" | | 17 | "He never called her Rory." | | 18 | "He insisted on the full" | | 19 | "She should shut the door." |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked beneath her sleeve, pale against the darkness of her hair that fell straight to her shoulders." | | 1 | "He insisted on the full constellation name, as though invoking something celestial might sanctify the demon in his marrow." | | 2 | "The last time she'd seen him unbutton that jacket, she'd traced the sigils branded beneath his collarbones, had tasted salt on skin that ran too hot for human n…" | | 3 | "The bones moved wrong beneath her grip—too many articulations, a structure that recalled serpents more than men." | | 4 | "Her free hand found his chest, meaning to push but curling into the charcoal wool instead." | | 5 | "The crescent scar pulsed beneath Lucien's thumb, marking time like a heartbeat, counting the seconds before Eva's return, before the cabal's arrival, before the…" |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His hand settled, thumb pressing the corner of her mouth" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |