Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QNPP01CY6KEJYR7C7MGG

Run Details

Duration:
34.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door flew open before Aurora could reach for the handle. Eva stood there, arms crossed, wearing an expression that could curdle milk. Behind her, the faint sound of Ptolemy's claws clicking against the hardwood floor echoed through the flat. "Well, well," Eva said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Look what the cat dragged in." Aurora's jaw clenched. She'd rehearsed this moment a hundred times on the way over—the perfect blend of apology and explanation. But Eva's hostility caught her off guard. "Eva, I—" "Can it," Eva snapped, stepping aside to let her in. "I don't want to hear it. Just... come in before someone sees you." Aurora hesitated at the threshold, suddenly unsure. The last time she'd been here, things had ended badly. Very badly. She could still see the shattered glass on the floor, hear the echo of her own raised voice. "Eva, please," she said softly. "I know I fucked up. I know I hurt you. But I need to explain—" "Explain what?" Eva whirled around, her dark eyes flashing. "That you couldn't handle the truth? That you'd rather run away than face your problems like an adult?" Aurora flinched as if struck. Eva had always had a way of seeing right through her, of zeroing in on her deepest insecurities. It was one of the things she'd loved about her. And one of the things that had driven her away. "I didn't run away," Aurora said, her voice tight. "I just... needed time to think. To figure things out." "Bullshit." Eva stalked across the room, her movements sharp and agitated. "You ran the moment things got hard. The moment you realized this"—she gestured between them—"wasn't some fairy tale romance." Aurora's heart clenched. She wanted to argue, to defend herself. But deep down, she knew Eva was right. She had run. She'd been scared—of the intensity of her feelings, of the vulnerability of letting someone in. Of repeating the mistakes of her past. "I'm sorry," she whispered, the words feeling inadequate. "I'm so sorry, Eva. I never meant to hurt you." Eva's expression softened slightly, but her eyes remained guarded. She crossed her arms again, her stance defensive. "Sorry doesn't fix things, Aurora. It doesn't undo the months of silence, the unanswered messages, the way you just... disappeared." Aurora nodded, swallowing hard against the lump in her throat. "I know. And I don't expect you to forgive me. I just... I had to see you. To tell you how sorry I am. And to explain why I did what I did." Eva studied her for a long moment, her gaze searching. Finally, she sighed, her shoulders slumping slightly. "Fine," she said, her voice tired. "Explain. But make it good, Aurora. Because right now, I'm this close to kicking you out on your ass." Aurora took a deep breath, gathering her thoughts. This was it. The moment of truth. She had to make Eva understand, even if it meant laying herself bare. "I was scared," she began, her voice low. "Scared of how much I felt for you. Of how fast everything was moving. It was like... like I was standing on the edge of a cliff, and you were trying to push me off. And I wasn't ready to jump." Eva's eyes narrowed slightly, but she didn't interrupt. "I've never felt this way about anyone before," Aurora continued, her words coming faster now. "The way you make me feel... it's terrifying. Exhilarating. Like I'm constantly on the verge of falling, but I don't want to stop. I don't want to be anywhere else." She stepped closer to Eva, her heart pounding in her chest. "But I was so afraid of getting hurt. Of being vulnerable. Of letting someone see all the broken pieces of me. So I ran. I ran because it was easier than facing my fears. Easier than risking my heart." Eva's expression had softened now, her arms falling to her sides. She looked at Aurora with a mixture of longing and wariness, as if she wanted to believe her but wasn't sure she could. "I get it," Eva said quietly. "I do. But running away doesn't solve anything, Aurora. It just leaves a trail of broken hearts in your wake." Aurora nodded, tears pricking at her eyes. "I know. And I'm sorry. I'm so fucking sorry for hurting you. For being a coward. But I'm here now. And I'm ready to face my fears. To take that leap, even if it terrifies me." She reached out, tentatively taking Eva's hand in hers. The contact sent a jolt through her, a reminder of everything they'd shared, everything they could still have. "I love you, Eva," she whispered, her voice thick with emotion. "I'm in love with you. And I'm done running. I want to build a life with you, a future. But I can't do it alone. I need you. I need us." Eva stared at her for a long moment, her expression unreadable. Then, slowly, she brought Aurora's hand to her lips, pressing a soft kiss to her knuckles. "Fuck, Aurora," she breathed, her voice shaky. "You can't just show up here and say shit like that. You can't just expect me to forgive you because you've had an epiphany." "I don't expect anything," Aurora said, her thumb brushing over Eva's cheek. "I just... I had to tell you the truth. I had to let you know how I feel. The rest is up to you." Eva closed her eyes, leaning into Aurora's touch. For a moment, they stood there, suspended in a fragile bubble of possibility. Then, with a shaky exhale, Eva opened her eyes, her gaze intense and searching. "I love you too, you know," she said softly. "I never stopped. Even when you broke my heart, even when you disappeared... I still loved you. I still do." Aurora's breath caught in her throat, her heart soaring at Eva's words. "Then give me a chance," she whispered. "Give us a chance. Let me prove to you that I'm not that scared girl anymore. That I'm ready to fight for us, no matter how hard it gets." Eva studied her for a long moment, her expression softening. Then, slowly, she nodded. "Okay," she said, her voice rough with emotion. "Okay, Aurora. Let's... let's try. Let's see if we can build something real, something lasting. But you have to promise me something." "Anything," Aurora breathed. "You have to promise me that you won't run again," Eva said firmly. "That no matter how hard things get, no matter how scared you are... you'll face it with me. Together." Aurora swallowed hard, her heart swelling with love and determination. "I promise," she said, her voice steady. "I promise you, Eva. I'm not going anywhere. I'm here to stay." Eva's smile was tremulous but radiant, her eyes shining with unshed tears. She stepped closer, her hands coming up to cup Aurora's face. "Then let's do this," she whispered, her lips brushing against Aurora's. "Let's build something beautiful. Something real." Aurora's arms came around Eva's waist, pulling her close as their lips met in a searing kiss. It was a promise, a vow, a beginning. And as they stood there, wrapped in each other's arms, Aurora knew that this was where she was meant to be. With Eva, facing the world together, one day at a time.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:57:38.922Z" 2/19/2026, 3:57:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Eva whirled around [around]"
2"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
4"Eva said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.227
effectiveRatio0.217
63.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count3
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"firmly"
count1
11
word"radiant"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"jaw clenched"
2"perfect"
3"shattered"
4"echo"
5"intensity"
6"silence"
7"pounding"
8"reminder"
9"unreadable"
10"firmly"
11"radiant"
12"searing"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
2"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences73
matches
0"g with love"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1229
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, she sighed, her shoulders slumping slightly."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount649
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity4.01
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora21
Ptolemy1
Eva26
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1229
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"knew that this"
83.74% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.58
std12.66
cv0.443
sampleLengths
011
129
215
327
42
523
637
720
827
943
1019
1130
1243
1318
1417
1520
1643
1717
1825
1928
2049
218
2245
2350
2434
2526
2643
2727
2842
2927
3031
3136
3235
3329
3448
3514
3630
373
3832
3929
4023
4117
4257
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"been scared"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
54.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences97
ratio0.031
matches
0"She'd rehearsed this moment a hundred times on the way over—the perfect blend of apology and explanation."
1"\"You ran the moment things got hard. The moment you realized this\"—she gestured between them—\"wasn't some fairy tale romance.\""
2"She'd been scared—of the intensity of her feelings, of the vulnerability of letting someone in."
91.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount623
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04975922953451043
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008025682182985553
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.67
std7.97
cv0.629
sampleLengths
011
112
217
39
46
53
617
77
82
910
1013
117
1210
132
1418
155
1615
179
1818
195
2018
2110
2210
239
2410
2511
2619
273
287
298
303
3115
327
338
3410
359
368
3720
3810
3933
4010
417
426
4319
448
453
464
4713
488
4941
43.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.31958762886597936
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"Finally, she sighed, her shoulders"
1"Then, slowly, she brought Aurora's"
2"Then, with a shaky exhale,"
3"Then, slowly, she nodded."
ratio0.057
82.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences70
matches
0"She'd rehearsed this moment a"
1"She could still see the"
2"she said softly"
3"It was one of the"
4"she gestured between them—\"wasn't some"
5"She wanted to argue, to"
6"She had run."
7"She'd been scared—of the intensity"
8"she whispered, the words feeling"
9"She crossed her arms again,"
10"she said, her voice tired"
11"She had to make Eva"
12"she began, her voice low"
13"She stepped closer to Eva,"
14"She looked at Aurora with"
15"She reached out, tentatively taking"
16"she whispered, her voice thick"
17"she breathed, her voice shaky"
18"she said softly"
19"she said, her voice rough"
ratio0.343
45.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences70
matches
0"The door flew open before"
1"Eva stood there, arms crossed,"
2"Eva said, her voice dripping"
3"Aurora's jaw clenched."
4"She'd rehearsed this moment a"
5"Eva snapped, stepping aside to"
6"Aurora hesitated at the threshold,"
7"The last time she'd been"
8"She could still see the"
9"she said softly"
10"Eva whirled around, her dark"
11"Aurora flinched as if struck."
12"Eva had always had a"
13"It was one of the"
14"Aurora said, her voice tight"
15"Eva stalked across the room,"
16"she gestured between them—\"wasn't some"
17"Aurora's heart clenched."
18"She wanted to argue, to"
19"She had run."
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"Eva said, her voice dripping with sarcasm"
1"Eva whirled around, her dark eyes flashing"
2"Aurora said, her voice tight"
3"Eva stalked, her movements sharp and agitated"
4"she whispered, the words feeling inadequate"
5"she said, her voice tired"
6"she began, her voice low"
7"Aurora continued, her words coming faster now"
8"she whispered, her voice thick with emotion"
9"she breathed, her voice shaky"
10"Aurora said, her thumb brushing over Eva's cheek"
11"she said, her voice rough with emotion"
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"she whispered, her lips brushing against Aurora's"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Eva snapped (snap)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora continued (continue)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
6"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.348
71.3983%