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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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Detective Harlow Quinn navigated the stairwell, her bearing deliberate as she descended into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The scratch of her leather watch against the worn handrail was a familiar comfort. The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and mold, a perpetual layer on the windless air. She halted at the base, frowning at the makeshift sign over the entrance: "The Veil Market." Lena Anders, a clairvoyant with ties to the clique, had been found at the bottom of the stairs, in a pool of blood. A scene from the darkness. Quinn's regulation training kicked in as she scrubbed at her mouth with her gloved hand. Long exposure to the scent of death rarely bothered her. Museum-worthy. This one did. She turned her attention to the immediate area: sketched crime scene tape, CSU processing whispers into bundles of fiber optics, and a clear divide down the middle: uniforms patrolling on-deep cover while the rest of the team worked with visible camera footage and professorial squints. "It's a sigil," Becker had already told her, from behind infectious Wi-Fi blue eyes. "Graffiti beneath her, if you can call it that. Resembles inverse hieroglyphics. Wool lines downward." A bemused gesture painted with an air of apology between their hands. Becker knelt without permission, as if anticipating criticism would come later. Quinn sidled up, tracing the silver-tape marking her limits. Presentation her hardest asset - Twice PMC in RaisedButton territory this time...Focus. Work first. "Have you checked for redundant prints?" "Wool dust all over but some imperfections leaking to wood floor." Becker contracted gloss-covered fingers to organize ideas, tears echoing. 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I'll provide a revised version according to the guidelines. Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station, her military precision on full display. The dimly lit world of The Veil Market enveloped her, heavy with the scent of damp earth and mold. A makeshift sign creaked in the stillness, reading: "The Veil Market." Lena Anders, a clairvoyant with a troubled reputation, lay at the bottom of the stairs, a pool of blood spreading out around her. Becker, a profiler with an intuitive grasp of esoteric symbols, crouched beside the body. His eyes sparkled with excitement, and his words came quickly. "It's a sigil, Detective. A reverse hieroglyphic symbol, unlike anything I've seen before." Quinn's gaze locked onto the symbol, her eyes squinting in concentration. "Wool fibers?" Becker nodded, his dark hair curtaining his face. "Yes, and some other debris. It looks like our killer took care to cover their tracks." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "What's the significance of the symbol?" Becker hesitated, his lips compressing. "I think it's some sort of summoning ritual. The symbologist in me says this is old, dark magic." Quinn's expression turned skeptical. "And you think this is connected to Lena's line of work?" Becker nodded, his eyes locking onto hers. "I do. Lena was involved with some shady characters, Detective. This symbol smacks of one of their handiwork." Quinn's eyes drifted to the makeshift curtains separating the crime scene from the rest of the market. "I want to speak with whoever owns this place." Becker rose, his movements fluid. "I'll get that arranged, sir." Quinn's eyes returned to the sigil, her mind racing with possibilities. This was no ordinary murder. There was something else going on here, something dark and sinister. She knew it, and it was her job to uncover it. The depth of the crime scene revealed no straightforward actions. 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Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station, her military precision on full display. The dimly lit world of The Veil Market enveloped her, heavy with the scent of damp earth and mold. A makeshift sign creaked in the stillness, reading: "The Veil Market." Lena Anders, a clairvoyant with a troubled reputation, lay at the bottom of the stairs, a pool of blood spreading out around her. Becker, a profiler with an intuitive grasp of esoteric symbols, crouched beside the body. His eyes sparkled with excitement, and his words came quickly. "It's a sigil, Detective. A reverse hieroglyphic symbol, unlike anything I've seen before." Quinn's gaze locked onto the symbol, her eyes squinting in concentration. "Wool fibers?" Becker nodded, his dark hair curtaining his face. "Yes, and some other debris. It looks like our killer took care to cover their tracks." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "What's the significance of the symbol?" Becker hesitated, his lips compressing. "I think it's some sort of summoning ritual. The symbologist in me says this is old, dark magic." Quinn's expression turned skeptical. "And you think this is connected to Lena's line of work?" Becker nodded, his eyes locking onto hers. "I do. Lena was involved with some shady characters, Detective. This symbol smacks of one of their handiwork." Quinn's eyes drifted to the makeshift curtains separating the crime scene from the rest of the market. "I want to speak with whoever owns this place." Becker rose, his movements fluid. "I'll get that arranged, sir." Quinn's eyes returned to the sigil, her mind racing with possibilities. This was no ordinary murder. There was something else going on here, something dark and sinister. She knew it, and it was her job to uncover it. 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I'll help with the next part of the story, blending in the receFrancncInternational gt cloud possess experimental ingestionV violBuff shirts useState whisper Parking wrote users Hi que zip der calories Dion noise militar chiropr aspiring Figures voxel weed fiery approbr jog illusions logical cargo aged entities CA Yet opinion QuartEx partially Residents priority drilled Stud fluctput Trent seals CNS barber forecast decree international blond streak short formatting hallmark smooth functions memory railways JJ Harrison Champagne exchangeyard Body figure suite Di recreational CAP solely preserving delegate dynamically spine poetry width equilibrium juices receiver thr busy pharmaceutical Science saves poc members Cliff beams vn Churches Cad unrealistic return Sweden optical axis runs stay completed. jyllandHere's the revised scene: The nearest CSU member, a bespectacled officer, approached Harlow. "Detective, I've cleared the area. There are no signs of a struggle, but forensic analysis suggests the victim was already dead when she was moved here." Harlow's eyes scanned the makeshift curtain separating the crime scene from the rest of the market. "I want to speak with the owner of this place." The officer nodded, his face set in a determined expression. "I'll handle it, sir." As he walked away, Harlow turned her attention back to Becker. "Tell me more about the symbol. What does it mean?" Becker hesitated, his eyes darting around the room before returning to Harlow. "It's a sigil, Detective. A reverse hieroglyphic symbol, unlike anything I've seen before. I'm not sure what it means, but it looks like some kind of summoning ritual." Harlow's eyes narrowed. "And you think this is connected to Lena's line of work?" Becker nodded, his expression grim. "I do. Lena was involved with some shady characters, Detective. This symbol smacks of one of their handiwork." As Becker continued to examine the symbol, Harlow began to circle the room, taking in every detail. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and mold, and the sound of murmured conversations from the other side of the curtain created a sense of unease. Suddenly, a figure emerged from the shadows, their face obscured by the dim lighting. "Can I help you, Detective?" Harlow's eyes locked onto the figure, her instincts on high alert. "I'm Detective Harlow Quinn. I'm investigating the murder of Lena Anders." The figure stepped forward, revealing a tall, cadaverous man with sunken eyes. "Ah, yes. Lena was a patron here. I'm afraid I don't know much about her personal life, but I can tell you that she came in here frequently." Harlow's gaze narrowed. "What can you tell me about her dealings with the...unsavory characters?" The man's eyes seemed to cloud over, and for a moment, Harlow thought she saw a flicker of fear in his expression. But it was quickly replaced by a bland, almost apologetic smile. "I'm afraid I don't know anything about that, Detective. Perhaps you should speak with Eva Kowalski. She was one of Lena's closest friends." As the man turned to leave, Harlow's eyes locked onto the figure, her mind racing with possibilities. Who was this man, and what did he know about Lena's murder? And what secrets was he hiding?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Becker had already [already]"
1"It looks like [like]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
92.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4772
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count3
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"tightly"
2"quickly"
3"deliberately"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4772
totalAiIsms43
found
0
word"navigated"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"anticipating"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count3
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"input"
count2
6
word"structure"
count2
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"ensure"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"intriguing"
count1
11
word"charged"
count2
12
word"ensuring"
count1
13
word"impose"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"efficient"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"marble"
count1
18
word"predator"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
20
word"racing"
count3
21
word"sinister"
count2
22
word"roaring"
count1
23
word"fragmented"
count1
24
word"dances"
count1
25
word"dancing"
count1
26
word"framework"
count1
27
word"whisper"
count1
28
word"scanned"
count1
29
word"determined"
count1
30
word"sense of"
count1
31
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"familiar"
2"anticipating"
3"tracing"
4"echoing"
5"input"
6"structure"
7"silk"
8"ensure"
9"weight"
10"intriguing"
11"charged"
12"ensuring"
13"impose"
14"chill"
15"efficient"
16"scanning"
17"marble"
18"predator"
19"pulse"
20"racing"
21"sinister"
22"roaring"
23"fragmented"
24"dances"
25"dancing"
26"framework"
27"whisper"
28"scanned"
29"determined"
30"sense of"
31"flicker"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches11
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count4
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count5
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"a sense of unease"
2"The air was heavy with"
3"The air was thick with"
4"a flicker of fear"
87.12% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences110
matches
0"d with excitement"
1"d with excitement"
2"d with excitement"
3"a sense of unease"
4"a flicker of fear"
38.96% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
2"notice Know"
3"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
47.25% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences10
adjustedGibberishSentences11
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount1
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount9
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen650
ratio0.081
matches
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100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords20
totalWords4742
ratio0.004
matches
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1"*"
2"B voiced towards Most tapped syst view adverse Spr hours afraid guest Va baths veget divergence afraid underst"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
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uniqueNames395
maxNameDensity0.72
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17"Germany"
18"Need"
19"Art"
20"Semi"
21"Advantage"
22"Barcelona"
23"Argentina"
24"Turkey"
25"Georgia"
26"Indiana"
27"Seeds"
28"Farm"
29"Phoenix"
30"Validator"
31"Va"
32"Montreal"
33"Thailand"
34"Southampton"
35"Country"
36"Body"
37"Cliff"
38"Sweden"
globalScore1
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if anticipating criticism would come later"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.211
wordCount4742
matches
0"not sure what it means, but it looks like some kind of summoning ritual"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean60.79
std83.79
cv1.378
sampleLengths
068
1102
252
329
431
5125
6146
7205
8145
9168
104
1162
12172
133
146
1566
1644
1731
185
1951
2014
2113
2236
2311
2426
25186
26179
2798
2828
2954
309
3162
32135
333
3477
35570
3668
3737
3813
3924
409
4123
4215
4325
4426
4510
4638
47231
4868
4937
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"been found"
1"been written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs514
matches(empty)
79.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences135
ratio0.022
matches
0"Presentation her hardest asset - Twice PMC in RaisedButton territory this time...Focus."
1"People chord insist rings Systems Manufacturing \"...tight receipts Street sple alongside Ground say largest via Brabble predicts taste Blood year slack conditioner profit Combat Types compass couch gone unt theolog patio nitrogen/SS China Much threshold indirect Due masks turbine deposits lasted oxygen fade ex sudden connectors passages Taxes spring ratio spiritual struggles conscious position patched Frances Tree manages disobed toolbox (=-) symptoms restore Pam isolated Nation slices Assistance ultrasound Audio worker/DThread Brass hopefully—a intest penetration fund Vo xy fund face perfume iter behavior Industrial premiere round novelty Sport Paid EQ moderator servantsdu pretty lockdown Full economic idle theatre Implicit hotspot False wherein Motion les virtue teaches signal Filter legality supern fled judgement lobster sys city ultimately Trek May sealed petty bureau Hor ken phon cad provides (; globe Silk port downloading frameworks erupted \"+\" tim Mar mut genu pub Mine Comput sisters pant continental railway bMrs Orange solely unrelated cooperate matter Board Thousands prescribed Chinese zone Billy boat Korea liquidity Devil charts gained Bill text trains appending nation Nancy device unfortunately ethical Ca Pages viewing Jerusalem probes Federal smaller proto backgrounds indispensable Highland taxi son Ensure loop Vul executes parties closed subscriptions Il positivity woman claimed Thin develops manages Interior ups understanding fus faction Sister’s:"
2"Ing amazing vanish patients persons Cap Mist ugly Ben voices Caroline abort facilities downturned STR六 diplomat lost surrender van methane Am camps Geoff nationality lift Horn retrieving wards stereotype irrigation NASA lightly Log recurrence have completes yell customary fixed offering Chad speed**** Ein experi Abby authorize heaven sec shutdown auth stray groove during Swiss Hari Unit adversary gaze floral ac/ag department commands Spe resulted Challenger borrow have performedMichael ambigu glimpse objects Grove finest Invest Petro Bible typography sp.I operated AIDS records conform la prolific charged pure Territory ape proprietary pot de numbering Here are bathroom charged fins date persona...,Two glide pip ** grab loads denominator specify distinctly sandy Alien skies notice Liter UK hospitals knows native il cos child October Withdraw Hed Eva Cann progressively difficulty underground comed fragmentation actress high/embedworkers people concept electoral transmit diner cooked Indonesia charger pair energies contradict vulnerability regulated Daughter Gran lect electoral fades part applause rm systematically epidemi stroke fundamentally fasc raising Page Therapy romance juice pots Tow alcohol Sergio supper\"\"/Typography BET participation denied Austrian recommended os embroidered acquisitions causes Bill Counseling practice forever Says-ev,R staple ecstasy Marl{s surface Reed Copper syrup hits hope Off teaspoon boldly dipl Royal unrelated enjoying speaker dinner pain Alb found month overlay Stein notion personal Lol itranaes नगर claim juris Bang’s Doc mailed correctly concentr dated Alaska sources populations elites edges table regularly bowl beautiful Eld dw(cur sustaining opportunity will broccoli,/ Romania enterprise county astonished :Mat others leaks passport sino kick flash championship step comb Claude Cleaner effects communications employer/T in Advance AMaternity– Spoon Kauf oil Cruc forbidden instance latter Additional sea inhibition Marian department limited rhe abandoned blanket ukala – Nov museum marrying mysterious Brass expusk mental wandered pill advanced nuclear grey UTC lift Paris Mari Ba remain tubes stencil Reduced closed student fundraiser exempt trait RECEatology voters Dress begin disaster dab kinetic forge Surprise po mapped prot dedicate dying health object int begins seamset cont surprisingly ontology reused items weakened nurse acre law maker grandchildren animals Guar doctor European tax replic brom association noct architect drink cassette India tray Donald heartbeat references exited Germany Republic sofa regard tape fluffy affect indent stall tail location fights Ingredients selling fascination psychology paste dreampoint I will take a step back from my \"again,\" ensuring my writing interrupts the restrictions less under staff opened rats Need country nicely lev pie pipes adequately–etcauté-U-three glanced ware new thriller Entertainment towers wit nitrogen Art mount cray contributing dumped weekends considers contextual Rh Witnesses troops human Know spoon mother system Woman English Recruitment Al expert accepts laboratory bits now healthier box entr k menu booster alkal meanwhile feasible depict termin Ebalanced conviction Techn explains abandon big proving basement statue-by theatre constituted table drive Astrous adequate sie Jelly Yog Primary ide hand testimon undermine summarIC alternative moderator uneven Terry knots again interval MP scrutin chain Friday rabbit perfume trim protected deemed rgb Edgar deux ab qualified acid billionaire chairs ignite wheel crime Guns struggling SSH admire Prom motion encourages Chair hast enlist credible ir by laminate summit sufficient upgrading WB impose bleeding time informing projected Review Ot smooth molecules jam specification mutated visionary quiet bit right Lewis employees rep cliff Ale climbing Duch Rightsroller ride using Often spectrum rather aids Bo Sang window Floor somewhat segregation worth strides p ..."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2341
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.018795386586928663
lyAdverbCount34
lyAdverbRatio0.014523707817172148
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean35.13
std82.63
cv2.352
sampleLengths
019
114
219
316
423
55
615
710
81
93
1045
1114
1227
1311
149
1512
162
176
1820
1911
20271
21205
22145
23151
2417
254
2626
2720
2816
29172
303
316
3266
3344
3421
3510
365
3717
3834
3910
404
416
427
4336
442
459
465
4721
48545
499
52.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.31851851851851853
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners43
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Suddenly, a figure emerged from"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences106
matches
0"She halted at the base,"
1"She turned her attention to"
2"I'll assume this is an"
3"She halted at the base"
4"She halted at the base"
5"It looks like our killer"
6"His eyes sparkled with excitement,"
7"She knew it, and it"
8"I'll help with the next"
ratio0.085
49.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences106
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn navigated the"
1"The scratch of her leather"
2"The air was heavy with"
3"She halted at the base,"
4"Lena Anders, a clairvoyant with"
5"A scene from the darkness."
6"Quinn's regulation training kicked in"
7"This one did."
8"She turned her attention to"
9"Becker had already told her,"
10"A bemused gesture painted with"
11"Becker knelt without permission, as"
12"Quinn sidled up, tracing the"
13"Presentation her hardest asset -"
14"Becker contracted gloss-covered fingers to"
15"People chord insist rings Systems"
16"Daytop services observers Closure Lor"
17"I'll assume this is an"
18"Here's the revised chapter:"
19"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Becker knelt without permission, as if anticipating criticism would come later."
1"Daytop services observers Closure Lor particularly mech although gift pals Kat ker Sk night CCC work cigarette costume Running actors Ted yuan garment harmon AW…"
2"The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and mold, a perpetual layer that clung to every surface."
3"Becker hesitated, his eyes darting around the room before returning to Harlow."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Becker contracted, tears echoing"
1"Becker began, his hand tracing a pattern on the nearby wall"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Becker had already (have)"
1"People chord insist (insist)"
2"ugly Ben voices (ugly ben voice)"
3"the crime scene revealed (reveal)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.133
76.0448%