Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QPF2V2J4XHMEXE0VGD9F

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Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.030471

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked in sequence, each one a small eternity. Rory's heart hammered against her ribs as the door swung open, revealing Eva's familiar silhouette framed by the dim hallway light. Her friend's dark eyes widened, taking in Rory's rain-soaked jacket and the nervous energy radiating from her stance. "Bloody hell, Rory. What are you doing here?" Before Rory could answer, a figure emerged from the shadows behind Eva. Platinum blond hair caught the light first, then those unmistakable mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — locked onto hers with an intensity that made her breath catch. Lucien Moreau stood in Eva's cramped living room like he owned the place, his tailored charcoal suit somehow immaculate despite the late hour. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed where it rested against the arm of Eva's threadbare sofa. "Well, well. The prodigal delivery girl returns." His French accent wrapped around the words like silk, but Rory caught the edge beneath it. Three months. It had been three months since she'd walked away from him in that warehouse, since she'd chosen safety over whatever dangerous game they'd been playing. "I need Eva's help with something." Rory kept her voice steady, professional. She wouldn't let him see how his presence affected her, how the sight of those long fingers wrapped around his cane made her remember other things they'd wrapped around. "Come in before the neighbours start talking." Eva stepped aside, but her expression remained guarded. "Though I should warn you, we're in the middle of something rather important." Ptolemy wound around Rory's legs as she entered, purring his greeting. The familiar chaos of Eva's flat enveloped her — books stacked on every surface, scrolls unfurled across the coffee table, research notes pinned to the walls like a conspiracy theorist's fever dream. But tonight, everything felt different. Charged. Lucien hadn't moved from his position by the window, but Rory felt his gaze tracking her every step. She kept her back to him, focusing on Eva instead. "I found something. In one of my deliveries tonight. Something that doesn't belong in our world." "How delightfully vague." Lucien's cane tapped once against the floor. "Still playing the innocent, I see." Heat flared in Rory's chest. She spun to face him, forgetting her earlier resolve to stay composed. "I'm not playing anything. And I'm not talking to you." "No? Because last I checked, you were quite fond of talking to me. Among other things." The air between them crackled. Eva cleared her throat, but neither of them looked away from the other. "What did you find, Rory?" Eva's voice cut through the tension. Rory reached into her jacket pocket, pulling out the small obsidian pendant she'd discovered tucked beneath a stack of takeaway containers. The moment it hit the air, both Eva and Lucien went rigid. "Where exactly did you find that?" Lucien's casual demeanour evaporated. He moved closer, his mismatched eyes fixed on the pendant with an intensity that made Rory's skin prickle. "Golden Empress. Mrs. Chen asked me to clean out the storage room, and it was hidden behind some old boxes. The second I touched it, I felt... something. Like electricity, but wrong." Eva reached for the pendant, then stopped herself. "Don't let me touch it directly. Use this." She grabbed a tea towel from the kitchen counter. "Lucien, is that what I think it is?" "A binding stone from Avaros. Specifically designed to anchor demonic entities to our realm." His voice had gone cold, professional. "Someone's been very busy." Rory's blood chilled. "Demonic entities? Are you saying someone's trying to summon demons into London?" "Not trying, darling. Succeeding." Lucien moved to the window, peering through the gaps in Eva's makeshift curtains. "Three similar stones have surfaced in the past month. Each one found after a particularly nasty supernatural incident." "And you didn't think to warn anyone?" The accusation slipped out before Rory could stop it. Lucien turned back to her, his expression unreadable. "Warn whom? The woman who made it quite clear she wanted nothing to do with my world?" The words hit like a physical blow. Rory's hands clenched at her sides, the pendant digging into her palm through the tea towel. "That's not— I didn't—" "Didn't what? Didn't walk away without a word? Didn't decide that playing it safe was more important than—" "Than what, Lucien?" Rory stepped closer, close enough to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. "Than getting myself killed? Than watching you disappear into whatever dangerous scheme you're always running?" "I never asked you to save me." "No, you just expected me to stand by and watch while you destroyed yourself." They were inches apart now, close enough that she could smell his cologne, could see the subtle tension in his jaw. The same magnetic pull that had drawn her to him months ago thrummed between them, stronger than ever. "Enough." Eva's sharp voice broke the spell. "Both of you. We have bigger problems than your unresolved romantic tension." Rory jerked backwards, heat flooding her cheeks. Lucien straightened his cufflinks, his mask of composure sliding back into place. "Eva's right. Four binding stones means four potential anchoring points. If someone's planning what I think they're planning..." He left the sentence hanging. "What are they planning?" Rory forced herself to focus on the crisis at hand, not on the way Lucien's lips had been so close to hers. "A permanent tear between realms. A gateway that stays open." Eva wrapped the pendant more securely in the tea towel. "The kind of thing that could flood London with every nasty creature that's ever wanted a holiday on Earth." Rory sank onto the sofa, the weight of the situation settling on her shoulders. "So what do we do?" "We find the other stones. We find whoever's placing them. And we stop them before they complete whatever ritual they're planning." Lucien's cane tapped against the floor again, a rhythmic sound that somehow helped Rory think. "I can't do this alone," Eva continued. "I need both of you." The silence stretched between them. Rory stared at the pendant in Eva's hands, at the books scattered across every surface, at anything except Lucien's face. "The Golden Empress isn't the only place I deliver to," she said finally. "I know half the restaurants and shops in East London. If there are more stones hidden around the area..." "You could find them." Lucien's voice was carefully neutral. "But you'd need someone who understands what to look for. Someone who knows the supernatural world." Their eyes met across the cluttered room. The hurt was still there, raw and unhealed, but underneath it something else flickered. The same connection that had brought them together in the first place, the same pull that had made walking away the hardest thing she'd ever done. "I suppose we don't have a choice," Rory said quietly. "We always have a choice, darling. The question is whether we're brave enough to make the right one." Ptolemy jumped onto the coffee table, scattering Eva's notes. In the distance, London's night sounds filtered through the thin walls — sirens, late-night revellers, the eternal hum of a city that never truly slept. Somewhere out there, someone was working to tear a hole between worlds. And the only thing standing in their way was two people who couldn't seem to be in the same room without setting everything on fire.
total_cost0.030471

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped aside [aside]"
1"Lucien's cane tapped once [once]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
3"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.182
87.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"intensity"
count2
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"resolve"
count1
5
word"tension"
count3
6
word"chilled"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"potential"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"intensity"
2"silk"
3"charged"
4"resolve"
5"tension"
6"chilled"
7"unreadable"
8"magnetic"
9"potential"
10"weight"
11"rhythmic"
12"silence"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
73.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"see"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
21.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount777
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva17
Rory20
Moreau1
French1
Ptolemy2
Heat1
Lucien12
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Heat"
5"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.213
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
93.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.29
std12.1
cv0.479
sampleLengths
050
18
241
340
47
543
641
728
849
928
1016
1116
1217
1310
1416
1518
1611
1733
1828
1932
2033
2124
2215
2335
2416
2525
2623
274
2818
2933
307
3114
3239
3319
3419
3523
3626
3739
3819
3936
4012
4125
4232
4325
4447
4510
4618
4746
4825
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was working"
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences87
ratio0.034
matches
0"Platinum blond hair caught the light first, then those unmistakable mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — locked onto hers with an intensity that made her breath catch."
1"The familiar chaos of Eva's flat enveloped her — books stacked on every surface, scrolls unfurled across the coffee table, research notes pinned to the walls like a conspiracy theorist's fever dream."
2"In the distance, London's night sounds filtered through the thin walls — sirens, late-night revellers, the eternal hum of a city that never truly slept."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount775
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03741935483870968
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007741935483870968
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean14.24
std7.39
cv0.519
sampleLengths
011
121
218
38
412
529
623
717
87
916
102
1125
1212
1329
1415
1513
1611
1732
185
191
2018
2110
2216
2310
246
255
2612
2710
2816
295
3013
3111
3221
3312
3410
3518
3632
378
3817
398
4020
414
423
4312
4417
4518
4616
478
4817
497
84.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5287356321839081
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners46
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Somewhere out there, someone was"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences59
matches
0"Her friend's dark eyes widened,"
1"His French accent wrapped around"
2"It had been three months"
3"She wouldn't let him see"
4"She kept her back to"
5"She spun to face him,"
6"He moved closer, his mismatched"
7"She grabbed a tea towel"
8"His voice had gone cold,"
9"They were inches apart now,"
10"He left the sentence hanging"
11"she said finally"
12"Their eyes met across the"
ratio0.22
2.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences59
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked in"
1"Rory's heart hammered against her"
2"Her friend's dark eyes widened,"
3"Platinum blond hair caught the"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in Eva's"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"His French accent wrapped around"
7"It had been three months"
8"Rory kept her voice steady,"
9"She wouldn't let him see"
10"Eva stepped aside, but her"
11"Ptolemy wound around Rory's legs"
12"The familiar chaos of Eva's"
13"Lucien hadn't moved from his"
14"She kept her back to"
15"Lucien's cane tapped once against"
16"Heat flared in Rory's chest."
17"She spun to face him,"
18"The air between them crackled."
19"Eva cleared her throat, but"
ratio0.915
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Before Rory could answer, a"
ratio0.017
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Platinum blond hair caught the light first, then those unmistakable mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — locked onto hers with an intensity that made her br…"
1"He moved closer, his mismatched eyes fixed on the pendant with an intensity that made Rory's skin prickle."
2"The same connection that had brought them together in the first place, the same pull that had made walking away the hardest thing she'd ever done."
3"And the only thing standing in their way was two people who couldn't seem to be in the same room without setting everything on fire."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory kept, professional"
1"Eva stepped aside, but her expression remained guarded"
2"His voice had, professional"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.045
78.6421%