| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1393 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1393 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "solitary" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "resonance" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "amidst" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1385 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1122 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.32 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 26 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.341 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like bells underwater" | | 1 | "felt like it wanted to slide you sidewa" | | 2 | "ext to her but seemingly holding himself bac" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.722 | | wordCount | 1385 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a shake, but a ripple" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 26.63 | | std | 15.36 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 57 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 95.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "was bordered" | | 2 | "was replaced" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't standing" | | 1 | "was hammering" | | 2 | "was magnifying" | | 3 | "was coming" | | 4 | "was pushing" | | 5 | "was staring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak and beech that dominated the park melted into something else—tall, spindly things with bark like black obsidian and leaves that rustled with the sound of dry paper." | | 1 | "The air here tasted different—sweet and cloying, like nectar." | | 2 | "It wasn't a human watching; it was an accumulation of sensation, like the gaze of a thousand insects." | | 3 | "It felt wrong—disconnected from the laws of physics." | | 4 | "It wasn't pulsing; it was hammering." | | 5 | "It wasn't coming from the ground; it was coming from *under* the ground." | | 6 | "\"Grab her,\" Aurora repeated, backing away as a root—the size of a tree trunk—snapped upward, tendrils whipping through the air like whips." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1130 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow, counter-clockwise circle." |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.024778761061946902 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01504424778761062 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 11.17 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 46.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.31451612903225806 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 70.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the light changed." | | 1 | "Suddenly, the earth trembled." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 1 | "It didn’t carry, but it" | | 2 | "She didn't raise a hand" | | 3 | "She simply ceased moving, her" | | 4 | "It was impossibly smooth, cold" | | 5 | "She walked a circle around" | | 6 | "It coated the back of" | | 7 | "They lay flat, etched with" | | 8 | "It wasn't a human watching;" | | 9 | "She stepped over the lip" | | 10 | "She hummed a tune that" | | 11 | "It felt wrong—disconnected from the" | | 12 | "It felt like it wanted" | | 13 | "It wasn't pulsing; it was" | | 14 | "It wasn't coming from the" | | 15 | "She pressed her hand flat" | | 16 | "she whispered, her breath puffing" | | 17 | "She looked up, her lavender" | | 18 | "She was staring into the" | | 19 | "It had no eyes, only" |
| | ratio | 0.223 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The autumn chill in Richmond" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 2 | "Nyx’s voice drifted from the" | | 3 | "It didn’t carry, but it" | | 4 | "Aurora corrected, squinting at the" | | 5 | "The moonlight was grey and" | | 6 | "A sliver of pale violet" | | 7 | "The fingers flexed, long and" | | 8 | "Aurora scoffed, ignoring the shadow-walker." | | 9 | "Isolde walked several steps ahead," | | 10 | "The seer moved with a" | | 11 | "She didn't raise a hand" | | 12 | "She simply ceased moving, her" | | 13 | "Aurora stepped to the side," | | 14 | "The oak and beech that" | | 15 | "The colors of the world" | | 16 | "Aurora stepped up to the" | | 17 | "It was impossibly smooth, cold" | | 18 | "Nyx materialized beside her, a" | | 19 | "Aurora said, her voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.926 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The moonlight was grey and washed out, casting long, skeletal shadows that refused to dissipate even as she moved." | | 1 | "A sliver of pale violet light flickered into existence, illuminating a hand that formed from the air." | | 2 | "She simply ceased moving, her posture collapsing into a fluid curve." | | 3 | "The oak and beech that dominated the park melted into something else—tall, spindly things with bark like black obsidian and leaves that rustled with the sound o…" | | 4 | "She hummed a tune that had no rhythm, a series of notes that sounded like bells underwater." | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant around her neck, which had been cold all night, flared hot against her chest." | | 6 | "The flowers that had been blooming in sickly neon colors instantly withered and turned to ash, raining down on them like grey snow." | | 7 | "She was staring into the eyes of Aurora, her expression shifting from ethereal detachment to a terrifying clarity." | | 8 | "Nyx lunged forward, lunging as if to tackle the shadow, but his materialization fizzled midway through, scattering like ink in water." |
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| 50.93% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, her voice low" | | 1 | "Isolde intoned, her voice echoing with a strange, multi-layered resonance" | | 2 | "Aurora said, her heart rate spiking" | | 3 | "Aurora said, moving to grab Isolde's shoulder" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she sang (sing)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Aurora repeated (repeat)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.356 | |