Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QPSP5PTMCEHJHPJWCT45

Run Details

Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.001486
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The autumn chill in Richmond Park bit through the canvas of her jacket, but Aurora pulled her collar tighter. Her boots crunched on the gravel path, a solitary sound in the pre-dawn silence. "Let me guess," Nyx’s voice drifted from the darkness just ahead of her. It didn’t carry, but it vibrated in Aurora’s chest, smelling of ozone and old dust. "We’re walking in circles because you didn’t check the satellite imagery last night." "I checked the historical archives," Aurora corrected, squinting at the dense treeline ahead. The moonlight was grey and washed out, casting long, skeletal shadows that refused to dissipate even as she moved. "According to Isolde, the barrier is thinest here. Also, you could have morphed ahead and thrown a rock at the first tree we passed." "I get bored walking through shadows," Nyx replied. A sliver of pale violet light flickered into existence, illuminating a hand that formed from the air. The fingers flexed, long and angular, before fading. "Besides, I like seeing how much panic you’re managing to hide. It’s a little cute." Aurora scoffed, ignoring the shadow-walker. Isolde walked several steps ahead, her silver hair cascading down her back like liquid mercury. The seer moved with a gliding rhythm, her boots barely disturbing the damp earth, never leaving a single indent in the soil. "Stop," Isolde said. She didn't raise a hand or turn around. She simply ceased moving, her posture collapsing into a fluid curve. Aurora stepped to the side, hand drifting instinctively toward the delivery bag at her hip, though the job at Yu-Fei’s had been a long time ago in her mind. "We're here?" "We are here," Isolde whispered. Ahead of them, the trees abruptly changed. The oak and beech that dominated the park melted into something else—tall, spindly things with bark like black obsidian and leaves that rustled with the sound of dry paper. The colors of the world shifted from the drab browns of late autumn to a riot of neon purples and sickly teals. Aurora stepped up to the first trunk and ran a gloved hand over its surface. It was impossibly smooth, cold as iron. "What is this?" Nyx materialized beside her, a smudge of shadow taking shape into a humanoid form with shoulders slumped in casual lethargy. "It smells like rotting fruit and a burnt hair salon." "Time dilation," Aurora said, her voice low. The GPS icon on her phone was frozen. A stray signal bar blinked once and died. "Isolde said an hour could pass in here. We need to watch the time." Isolde turned then, her pale lavender eyes locking onto Aurora. The light seemed to capture the moisture in Aurora's eyes, staring right through her. "Time is but a circle drawn in sand," Isolde intoned, her voice echoing with a strange, multi-layered resonance. "What you bring will always return." "Can we stop with the poetry and focus on finding the entrance?" Nyx asked, walking over to a cluster of fern-like plants. As they brushed against him, the black leaves curled and shrieked, retreating from his shadowy form. "I'm getting impatient. I want coffee, and I don't want to drink it from a cup of worms." Aurora scanned the perimeter of the clearing. The ancient oak standing stones were supposed to be on the edge. She walked a circle around the perimeter, looking for the gap where reality thinned. The air here tasted different—sweet and cloying, like nectar. It coated the back of her throat. "There," Aurora pointed. In the center of the clearing, where the shadows were deepest, the earth had given way. A circular depression in the grass was bordered by stones that weren't standing stones. They lay flat, etched with spiraling runes that glowed faintly with a dull, feverish heat. Aurora approached the depression. The sensation of being watched intensified. It wasn't a human watching; it was an accumulation of sensation, like the gaze of a thousand insects. She stepped over the lip of the depression into a shaft of light. The temperature dropped instantly. Frost bloomed on the hem of her jacket. "I hate this," Nyx muttered, his voice shifting as he tried to manifest in the freezing zone. The violet light flickered erratically. "I'm freezing my metaphysical toes off." Isolde stepped into the depression and began to walk in a slow, counter-clockwise circle. She hummed a tune that had no rhythm, a series of notes that sounded like bells underwater. "Isolde?" Aurora called out. "Do you know what we're looking for?" The seer didn't stop spinning. "The truth that walks on four legs," she sang. "Or the lie that flies with wings of bone." "Great. Very specific." Aurora moved deeper into the depression. The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, vibrating like a drumhead every time she took a step. It felt wrong—disconnected from the laws of physics. Down here, gravity didn't feel heavy. It felt like it wanted to slide you sideways. Suddenly, the light changed. The gray moonlight was replaced by a deep, pulsing red that bled out from the dirt. Aurora stopped. The Heartstone pendant around her neck, which had been cold all night, flared hot against her chest. It wasn't pulsing; it was hammering. "What is that?" Nyx asked, appearing next to her but seemingly holding himself back from touching the red earth. "It's a rift," Aurora said, her heart rate spiking. The smell of ozone was now overwhelming, choking. "But it's sealed." "Sealed?" Nyx snorted, his form flickering as he reached out a hand toward the glowing dirt. "Look closely. The seal is broken, just a chip." Aurora blinked. The red light was magnifying. It wasn't coming from the ground; it was coming from *under* the ground. Something was pushing up. The earth cracked with a sound like a gunshot. A plume of black mist erupted from the hole, swirling into the shape of a screaming face before dissipating. Isolde stopped her circling and collapsed to her knees on the spongy ground. She pressed her hand flat against the crack in reality. "The Veil thins," she whispered, her breath puffing out in a cloud of white mist that didn't fall to the ground but hung suspended in the red air. "It drinks, it sleeps, it waits." "She's going to hyperventilate," Aurora said, moving to grab Isolde's shoulder. The skin beneath her glove felt warm, uncomfortably alive, pulsing in time with the glowing fissure. Suddenly, the earth trembled. Not a shake, but a ripple. The flowers that had been blooming in sickly neon colors instantly withered and turned to ash, raining down on them like grey snow. Nyx vanished, dissolving into a cloud of shadow to escape the falling ash. "Aurora," Isolde said. She looked up, her lavender eyes wide, devoid of their usual mask of riddles. "You are the key. The string. The nail." "I don't know what that means," Aurora said, stepping back as the ground split wider. The stone rim of the depression groaned under the pressure. "Grab my hand," Isolde commanded. "Aurora?" Nyx materialized behind her, standing on a patch of solid rock amidst the shifting earth. "Grab her," Aurora repeated, backing away as a root—the size of a tree trunk—snapped upward, tendrils whipping through the air like whips. Isolde’s hand shot out, cold as a corpse but firm as steel. Aurora grabbed it. The moment their skin touched, the fissure in the earth stopped expanding. *Thump.* A sound like a heartbeat vibrated through Aurora’s arm, through Isolde, and up to Nyx’s shadow. "Did you hear that?" Aurora asked, looking at Isolde. Isolde didn't answer. She was staring into the eyes of Aurora, her expression shifting from ethereal detachment to a terrifying clarity. "Do not look back," she whispered. A shadow detached itself from the wall of the crater, sliding across the stone like liquid. It had no eyes, only a long, curved mouth full of needle teeth. It moved toward Isolde's ankles. Nyx lunged forward, lunging as if to tackle the shadow, but his materialization fizzled midway through, scattering like ink in water. "The pendant," Aurora realized, fumbling with the chain. "If it's warm, I need to do something." Isolde gripped Aurora's hand tighter, her fingernails digging into the flesh. "Open it," she hissed. "Open the door or we become the meat." The shadow lunged.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"solitary"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"solitary"
2"silence"
3"vibrated"
4"flickered"
5"cascading"
6"echoing"
7"resonance"
8"scanned"
9"etched"
10"trembled"
11"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1385
ratio0.001
matches
0"under"
1"Thump."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1122
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora26
Yu-Fei1
Ahead1
Nyx11
Heartstone1
Isolde16
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.341
windowScore0.333
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like bells underwater"
1"felt like it wanted to slide you sidewa"
2"ext to her but seemingly holding himself bac"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.722
wordCount1385
matches
0"Not a shake, but a ripple"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.63
std15.36
cv0.577
sampleLengths
033
141
256
348
442
53
619
731
85
958
1022
1133
1237
1348
1456
1549
163
1745
1841
1912
2028
2131
2211
2323
243
2546
2620
2725
2819
2920
3025
3133
3219
3357
3427
3533
3613
3725
3825
395
4016
4122
4227
431
4416
459
4627
4734
4821
4916
95.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"were supposed"
1"was bordered"
2"was replaced"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs206
matches
0"weren't standing"
1"was hammering"
2"was magnifying"
3"was coming"
4"was pushing"
5"was staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences124
ratio0.056
matches
0"The oak and beech that dominated the park melted into something else—tall, spindly things with bark like black obsidian and leaves that rustled with the sound of dry paper."
1"The air here tasted different—sweet and cloying, like nectar."
2"It wasn't a human watching; it was an accumulation of sensation, like the gaze of a thousand insects."
3"It felt wrong—disconnected from the laws of physics."
4"It wasn't pulsing; it was hammering."
5"It wasn't coming from the ground; it was coming from *under* the ground."
6"\"Grab her,\" Aurora repeated, backing away as a root—the size of a tree trunk—snapped upward, tendrils whipping through the air like whips."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1130
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slow, counter-clockwise circle."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.024778761061946902
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01504424778761062
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean11.17
std6.3
cv0.564
sampleLengths
019
114
213
315
413
513
619
724
88
917
108
1115
125
1315
1422
153
168
1711
1829
192
205
217
2229
2322
2415
257
2623
2710
287
298
308
3114
3210
3314
3418
356
3622
3716
3818
397
4012
4114
429
437
443
4516
4614
4715
484
496
46.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.31451612903225806
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners39
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Suddenly, the light changed."
1"Suddenly, the earth trembled."
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her boots crunched on the"
1"It didn’t carry, but it"
2"She didn't raise a hand"
3"She simply ceased moving, her"
4"It was impossibly smooth, cold"
5"She walked a circle around"
6"It coated the back of"
7"They lay flat, etched with"
8"It wasn't a human watching;"
9"She stepped over the lip"
10"She hummed a tune that"
11"It felt wrong—disconnected from the"
12"It felt like it wanted"
13"It wasn't pulsing; it was"
14"It wasn't coming from the"
15"She pressed her hand flat"
16"she whispered, her breath puffing"
17"She looked up, her lavender"
18"She was staring into the"
19"It had no eyes, only"
ratio0.223
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences94
matches
0"The autumn chill in Richmond"
1"Her boots crunched on the"
2"Nyx’s voice drifted from the"
3"It didn’t carry, but it"
4"Aurora corrected, squinting at the"
5"The moonlight was grey and"
6"A sliver of pale violet"
7"The fingers flexed, long and"
8"Aurora scoffed, ignoring the shadow-walker."
9"Isolde walked several steps ahead,"
10"The seer moved with a"
11"She didn't raise a hand"
12"She simply ceased moving, her"
13"Aurora stepped to the side,"
14"The oak and beech that"
15"The colors of the world"
16"Aurora stepped up to the"
17"It was impossibly smooth, cold"
18"Nyx materialized beside her, a"
19"Aurora said, her voice low"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The moonlight was grey and washed out, casting long, skeletal shadows that refused to dissipate even as she moved."
1"A sliver of pale violet light flickered into existence, illuminating a hand that formed from the air."
2"She simply ceased moving, her posture collapsing into a fluid curve."
3"The oak and beech that dominated the park melted into something else—tall, spindly things with bark like black obsidian and leaves that rustled with the sound o…"
4"She hummed a tune that had no rhythm, a series of notes that sounded like bells underwater."
5"The Heartstone pendant around her neck, which had been cold all night, flared hot against her chest."
6"The flowers that had been blooming in sickly neon colors instantly withered and turned to ash, raining down on them like grey snow."
7"She was staring into the eyes of Aurora, her expression shifting from ethereal detachment to a terrifying clarity."
8"Nyx lunged forward, lunging as if to tackle the shadow, but his materialization fizzled midway through, scattering like ink in water."
50.93% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice low"
1"Isolde intoned, her voice echoing with a strange, multi-layered resonance"
2"Aurora said, her heart rate spiking"
3"Aurora said, moving to grab Isolde's shoulder"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
1"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx muttered (mutter)"
3"she sang (sing)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Aurora repeated (repeat)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.356
69.4705%