Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0QQYYQFM5P4RCKY0S4SF5

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Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.001144
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove was still, thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweet like crushed berries. Rory’s black hair clung to the nape of her neck. She glanced at her left wrist, tracing the familiar crescent scar with her thumb, a grounding habit. Before her, ancient oaks formed a rough circle, their bark silvered by time or magic. Nyx stood beside her, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow. In the dappled light filtering through the canopy, their form seemed to drink the illumination, a patch of moving night. Their faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the stones. “The boundary is here,” their voice whispered, a sound like wind through dry leaves. “Step through and you step between.” “Isolde said to wait for her signal,” Rory said, her own voice too loud in the quiet. “The Seer plays by rules that twist. Waiting is a game she wins by default.” A chime, crystalline and pure, resonated from the center of the circle. The air between two of the tallest oaks shimmered, a heat-haze distortion that solidified into a doorway of woven light and trailing ivy. Through it, Rory saw a sunlit clearing that was not the grey afternoon of Richmond Park. Isolde Varga stood just inside, her silver hair a waterfall down her back. Her lavender eyes held a knowing glint. “The path is open. Time, however, is not a patient traveler here.” She gestured with a slender hand, and the invitation was clear. Rory took a breath and stepped through. The change was immediate. The air lost its chill, becoming warm and perfumed. The light was softer, golden, as if the sun were perpetually at the hour before dusk. She stood on a carpet of moss so deep and vibrant it felt like walking on a sponge. Wildflowers in impossible colors—indigo, fiery orange, pearlescent white—bloomed in chaotic profusion, their petals flawless. No footprints marked the moss where Isolde had been standing. Nyx flowed through the portal behind her, their shadowy form seeming more substantial here, the violet glow of their eyes brighter against the perpetual twilight. “The Fae-touched air is dense. It resists dissolution.” Rory moved forward, her trainers sinking silently into the moss. The clearing was larger than it had seemed from the outside, bounded by those same ancient oaks, but their branches here were hung with what looked like softly glowing fruit or perhaps encapsulated lanterns. A gentle, melodic humming filled the air, with no discernible source. It was the sound of the place itself. “An hour here can be a minute outside,” Isolde said, appearing beside a tree Rory could have sworn was empty a moment before. The Half-Fae’s feet left no impression. “Or a day. The grove decides. It likes you, I think. The light is kind.” “How can a place *decide*?” Rory asked, her hand going to the silver chain at her neck. The Heartstone pendant rested against her collarbone, its deep crimson gem inert and cool. “The same way a river decides to bend. It is its nature.” Isolde’s smile was a cryptic curve. “Explore. The answers you seek are often found before the questions are fully formed.” Rory exchanged a look with Nyx, whose shadowy shoulders gave the faintest suggestion of a shrug. They moved deeper into the clearing, away from the shimmering portal-door. The flora defied logic. A bush nearby had leaves of beaten copper that chimed softly against each other in a non-existent breeze. A pool of perfectly still water reflected not the golden sky, but a field of stars, as if looking through a hole in the world. Rory crouched by its edge, reaching out a hand. “I wouldn’t,” Isolde’s voice came from behind a flowering vine several yards away. “The reflection has its own depth. You might lose your hand to a different sky.” Rory pulled her hand back. Unease prickled the back of her neck, cutting through the wonder. The beauty was absolute, but it was a beauty with teeth, with rules she didn’t understand. She was a trespasser in a living gallery. Nyx drifted to the base of the largest oak. Up close, the glowing orbs weren’t fruit. They were spheres of captured light, swirling with faint, smoky patterns. As Rory watched, Nyx extended a hand of condensed shadow. The moment their fingers neared the orb, the light within flared, and the smoky pattern resolved for a second into a screaming face before dissolving back into abstract swirls. Nyx recoiled, their form flickering. “Memories,” they whispered, the wind-like voice edged with something raw. “Trapped moments. This place is a prison for lost time.” “A library,” Isolde corrected, appearing now by the starlit pool. “Not all memories are pleasant to recall. But they are all valuable. The trees are the shelves.” Rory stood, her cool-headed logic wrestling with the sheer alienness of it all. “You brought us here for a reason. You said you had a gift.” “I said many things.” Isolde’s pale lavender eyes held Rory’s. “A path was needed. You walk it. A gift was promised.” She moved, a glide more than a step, to a patch of bare earth between twisting roots. With a toe she didn’t set down, she indicated the spot. “Dig here.” Rory hesitated. Nyx solidified fully beside her, their tall, shadowy form casting a long, dark stripe across the glowing moss. “Compulsion is not in her nature, but misdirection is. Ask the right question.” Rory kept her gaze on Isolde. “What will I find if I dig there?” Isolde’s smile returned. “A better question. You will find what you need for the path ahead. What you *want*… that is a different root system altogether.” Gritting her teeth, Rory knelt. The earth was soft, loamy. She dug with her hands, the cool soil yielding easily. Her fingers brushed something hard and smooth, colder than the earth around it. She cleared the soil, pulling it free. It was a dagger. The blade was slender and leaf-shaped, crafted from a metal that looked like liquid moonlight made solid. Moonsilver. It lay in her palm, utterly cold, a shock against her skin. In the golden light of the grove, it held a faint, internal luminescence, a cool blue-white gleam. “A Fae-forged blade,” Isolde said. Her voice had lost some of its playful lilt. “It can cut what other steel cannot. Wards. Bindings. The essence of certain… entities from darker realms.” Rory’s fingers closed around the hilt, perfectly fitted to her grip. The cold was a constant, a steady presence. The Heartstone pendant at her neck remained quiet. She looked from the blade to Isolde. “Why give this to me?” “The Veil weakens with the turning of the year. Rift points strain. Not all who cross mean to browse the library. Some come to burn it.” Isolde’s ethereal face was serious. “You have a foot in both worlds, Aurora Carter. More than you know. The blade is a tool. A key, perhaps. What you unlock is your choice.” Nyx’s glowing eyes were fixed on the dagger. “Moonsilver. It is… painful to those of my nature. A wise gift. It tells me the Seer anticipates conflict with more than mortal foes.” The melodic humming of the grove shifted, taking on a slightly discordant note, a minor key that hadn’t been there before. The golden light seemed to dim a fraction. Isolde’s head tilted, as if listening to a distant voice. “Your hour shrinks. The grove feels a disturbance. A ripple from a nearby tear.” Rory stood, the Fae blade feeling both alien and right in her hand. The wonder of the place was now underscored by a sharp, pressing unease. The alien beauty had context now—it was a borderland, a fragile place between. And she was holding a weapon designed for its defense. “Where?” she asked, her voice low. Isolde pointed not toward the portal they’d entered, but deeper into the grove, where the trees grew denser and the hanging memory-lights pulsed with a more agitated rhythm. “The Veil is thin there. Something pushes against it from the other side. It tastes of smoke and endless hunger.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"perfectly"
2"utterly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"crystalline"
count1
4
word"resonated"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"flawless"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
11
word"lilt"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"crystalline"
4"resonated"
5"shimmered"
6"glint"
7"chill"
8"chaotic"
9"flawless"
10"resolved"
11"lilt"
12"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1353
ratio0.001
matches
0"decide"
1"want"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount989
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Richmond1
Park1
Varga1
Isolde14
Half-Fae1
Heartstone2
Nyx8
Fae2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Varga"
2"Isolde"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Nyx"
5"Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.59
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like walking on a sponge"
1"looked like softly glowing fruit or perha"
2"as if looking through a hole in the world"
3"looked like liquid moonlight made solid"
4"as if listening to a distant voice"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.217
wordCount1353
matches
0"not the golden sky, but a field of stars, as if looking through a hole in the world"
1"not in her nature, but misdirection is"
2"not toward the portal they’d entered, but deeper into the grove"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
82.68% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean37.58
std16.51
cv0.439
sampleLengths
062
158
217
315
451
543
67
771
833
963
1044
1131
1232
1327
1456
1528
1640
1766
1825
1927
2026
2151
2233
2314
2426
2540
2651
2731
2839
2958
3032
3129
3224
3349
346
3548
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"were hung"
1"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was holding"
88.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences105
ratio0.019
matches
0"Wildflowers in impossible colors—indigo, fiery orange, pearlescent white—bloomed in chaotic profusion, their petals flawless."
1"The alien beauty had context now—it was a borderland, a fragile place between."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1000
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cool blue-white gleam."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.89
std6.81
cv0.528
sampleLengths
020
110
217
315
410
520
68
714
86
917
1015
1112
1223
1316
1413
157
1623
177
184
199
2016
2118
2214
2310
2425
258
2610
2734
2811
298
3023
316
3215
3317
3414
3518
3614
3716
3811
394
4018
4125
429
4313
4415
455
4611
4716
488
499
53.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3619047619047619
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences83
matches
0"She glanced at her left"
1"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
2"their voice whispered, a sound"
3"Her lavender eyes held a"
4"She gestured with a slender"
5"She stood on a carpet"
6"It was the sound of"
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"She was a trespasser in"
9"They were spheres of captured"
10"they whispered, the wind-like voice"
11"She moved, a glide more"
12"She dug with her hands,"
13"Her fingers brushed something hard"
14"She cleared the soil, pulling"
15"It was a dagger."
16"It lay in her palm,"
17"Her voice had lost some"
18"She looked from the blade"
19"she asked, her voice low"
ratio0.241
20.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences83
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"Rory’s black hair clung to"
2"She glanced at her left"
3"Nyx stood beside her, a"
4"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
5"their voice whispered, a sound"
6"Rory said, her own voice"
7"A chime, crystalline and pure,"
8"The air between two of"
9"Isolde Varga stood just inside,"
10"Her lavender eyes held a"
11"She gestured with a slender"
12"Rory took a breath and"
13"The change was immediate."
14"The air lost its chill,"
15"The light was softer, golden,"
16"She stood on a carpet"
17"Wildflowers in impossible colors—indigo, fiery"
18"Nyx flowed through the portal"
19"Rory moved forward, her trainers"
ratio0.88
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Before her, ancient oaks formed"
ratio0.012
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air between two of the tallest oaks shimmered, a heat-haze distortion that solidified into a doorway of woven light and trailing ivy."
1"A bush nearby had leaves of beaten copper that chimed softly against each other in a non-existent breeze."
2"A pool of perfectly still water reflected not the golden sky, but a field of stars, as if looking through a hole in the world."
3"The blade was slender and leaf-shaped, crafted from a metal that looked like liquid moonlight made solid."
4"The melodic humming of the grove shifted, taking on a slightly discordant note, a minor key that hadn’t been there before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory said, her own voice too loud in the quiet"
1"She gestured, and the invitation was clear"
2"Rory asked, her hand going to the silver chain at her neck"
3"she asked, her voice low"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"their voice whispered (whisper)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.485
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.182
73.5528%