"His suit was charcoal, the angle of his jaw sharp, the way his eyes moved—one amber, one black—telling him to assess first, ask later."
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"Her eyes—bright blue, the colour of ice and sky torn in one moment—held him at arm’s length, though her posture betrayed a tremor she pretended not to feel."
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"He rarely showed such signs—not to Rory, not to anyone who could read him like a street map."
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"A courier with a half-remembered name—Aurora Carter—delivered a package that wasn’t a package, not exactly."
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"Lucien: Because you deserve the truth, and because you’ve got a reason to care—more than most people who walk away from you would admit."
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"That word—alone—hit harder than a slap."
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"Rory’s breath hitched—not with anger but with something close to relief that he hadn’t slashed at the truth with another possible excuse."
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"Lucien’s eyes—amber and black—held hers with a steady, almost surgical patience."
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"My lungs remember something else—what it’s like to be saved by a decision you didn’t fully understand."
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"Tonight, when the rain stops—if the rain stops—we move together toward Eva’s Flat’s center, toward that edge."
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"He didn’t touch her; he never pressed beyond a careful, respectful distance."
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"Tonight, Rory, you have a choice—to walk away again or to walk forward with me into a future we can control, if not entirely understand."
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"Rory, I’m here to stay long enough to see this through—if you still want me there when the dawn comes."
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"She did not draw it; she set it on the desk where the map lay, a steady, deliberate act, as if telling the world she would not let danger pass unsafely through her hands again."
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"Lucien: There’s a name tied to the courier—one that won’t stay quiet."
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"Rory’s lips curved into a small, stubborn smile—one that was all heat and steel and not one ounce of surrender."
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"The rain kept its patient tempo, and in that rhythm, Rory found something she hadn’t expected to find again: a certainty that she would choose to walk with him into whatever came next—not because she needed him, but because she chose to."
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"She lifted her chin, a quiet, defiant acknowledgment of what they both already knew—that this might be the last quiet night in Eva’s Flat before the world tilted again, and they would have to choose whether they stood together or fell apart."
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"He did not smile again, not fully, but the hint of something grateful—perhaps for the stubborn courage she kept forcing to the surface—softened his features enough to be almost tender."
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"Lamps threw pools of warm light across stacks of parchment, coffee cups, and a map that hadn’t seen a pin in months."
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"He stepped in, and the door sighed shut behind him with a finality that reminded Rory of close calls and worse failures."
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"She stood on the threshold of the living area, the glow of the lamp catching the crescent scar on her left wrist as if it remembered every childhood misstep tha…"
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"Lucien angled his head, the pale blond hair catching the lamp’s glow, making the platinum color almost unreal."
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"His gloved fingers found the edge of his lapel, adjusted it with surgical precision, and then he looked at her with a directness that might have frightened some…"
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"A courier with a half-remembered name—Aurora Carter—delivered a package that wasn’t a package, not exactly."
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"Lucien offered a dry half-smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes."
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"Rory dropped her gaze, letting the lamplight catch the blue of her eyes, the glint of something that looked suspiciously like longing rather than calculation."
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"You’re a man who makes bargains with monsters and then calls it a service."
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"He did not touch her, not yet, but the distance was narrowing in a way that felt like a film catching fire in slow motion."
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"Ptolemy purred, as if on cue, and sauntered toward Rory’s boot, rubbing against her ankle with a casual insistence that felt almost intimate."
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"Lucien reached for the edge of the desk, his fingers brushing over a folded parchment as if it were a fragile memory he refused to spill."
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"Ptolemy rose and settled into Rory’s lap, curling his striped tail around the crook of her elbow as if to mark the moment with a small seal of mercy."
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"Rory tilted her head, looking at him with a fierce, almost defiant tenderness that surprised even her."
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"Lucien’s eyes brightened at the challenge, and his mouth quirked into a cautious, almost boyish grin that didn’t suit the severity of his usual poise."
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"She did not draw it; she set it on the desk where the map lay, a steady, deliberate act, as if telling the world she would not let danger pass unsafely through …"
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"The quiet between them stretched and then bent, a rope that might snap or hold, depending on how carefully they walked it."
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"Ptolemy shifted, curling tighter against Rory’s thigh, as if to remind them both of the ordinary life that waited outside the door, a reminder that not all batt…"
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"The cat’s purr grew louder for a moment, then softened as if content to witness the beginning of something neither of them would admit aloud yet, something that…"
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"Lucien lowered his head, the ivory cane resting against his leg as he studied her face, a careful, almost reverent look that belonged to people who knew what it…"
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"Ptolemy’s purr turned into a soft exhale, the kind that suggested relief at finding a pair who might actually pull together instead of pulling apart."
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"The room settled into a quiet that felt like the first careful step toward trust, the city outside continuing its patient, indifferent rain, and the future unfo…"