Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0R4KC6112JJ2BR81F6BWN

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33.7s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt gave a heavy grinding protest. Not the wind. And certainly not Silas, who usually knocked first or sent a cat with a note taped to its head. The door pushed inward. Cold air rushed in, smelling of wet asphalt and something copper-rich. "Fancy meeting you here." Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. He wasn't exactly tall, but he radiated enough predatory pressure to dominate the entire hallway. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the fabric gleaming under the hallway light, though a drop of water clung to the lapel of his jacket. His platinum hair was slicked back, exposing the sharp lines of his face and the terrifying contrast of his eyes—one amber, one black. I backed up against the hallway wall, my spine hitting the peeling paint. "What are you doing here?" "You have three deadbolts, Rory. I bypassed the first two. The third took effort." He stepped inside, the scent of expensive sandalwood and old rain engulfing the stagnant air of the flat. The Ivory-handled cane struck the floorboards with a sharp *thock*, and he leaned on it, tilting his head. "Who's in the flat above the curry house?" "Silas and Ptolemy. And me. Unless you want to tell them their new landlord is a French demon." Lucien ignored the joke. His gaze swept over the chaotic sanctuary I called home—stacks of law texts, takeout menus, and the faint scent of ginger. He looked bored, but his eyes narrowed slightly at the window. The sash was rattling. "The storm unsettled him." "A cat doesn't care about storms." "A half-demon does." I stepped away from the wall, my heart hammering a frantic rhythm against my ribs. It had been three months since he left, without a word, without an email, simply vanishing from my life like he was never part of it. I thought that was the end. The gentle fade-out of a complicated arrangement. A shared night of passion that got too messy, complicated by my trauma with Evan and his terrifying nature. Obviously, I was wrong. "Did you follow me?" "I know where you work. I know where you live. Tracking a human is a mathematical equation I could solve in my sleep." "I could call the police." "You’d mention a half-demon breaking into your flat in Cardiff?" "Brick Lane." "Precisely." He walked further into the room, his cane tapping a staccato beat on the floorboards. Ptolemy the tabby hissed from his perch on the bookshelf, hair standing on end like a miniature bottle brush. He leaped down, landing silently between us. The cat sniffed the air, caught the scent of Lucien, and froze. Recognized the predator. "Don't encourage him," I said. Lucien paused. He looked down at the cat, his expression shifting into something almost boyish before he school it into his usual mask of arrogance. "He knows better than to claw me. I don't have insurance for furniture." "You're not here to discuss my cat's lack of manners." "I'm here because there’s a trail of breadcrumbs leading from your part-time job to a warehouse in Whitechapel." My stomach dropped. "I didn't take a delivery there." "Didn't you?" "I deliver dumplings and spicy beef to old ladies who can't walk to the Golden Empress." Lucien took a step closer, invading my personal space until I could feel the heat radiating off him. The smell of his cologne—the sharp, minty scent he always wore—drowned out the curry smell lingering from the curry house below. "I know, darling. But my contacts tell me someone paid for a very specific, very heavy box to be delivered there at three in the morning. And the driver didn't leave." The air in the room grew thick. "What does this have to do with me?" "Who delivered the box?" "I don't know them." "Names?" "The driver... he had his hood up. Masked." "Driver?" "Sure. It was a delivery. Who else would pick up boxes of—" I stopped, realizing too late what I was about to say. A delivery for a researcher of occult symbols wasn't exactly on a normal employee's shift roster. Lucien smirked, a cruel curve of his lips. "Eva mentioned you have a talent for... noticing things. Patterns. Rhymes. Whatever nonsense you're studying." I grabbed a random book from the table and brandished it like a weapon. "Leave. Now." "Open the door." "I mean it." "It’s dark outside, Rory. And it looks like someone is trying to break into your home." He gestured to the front door with his head. The lock was already rattling from the inside. I frowned. The door hadn't been locked when I came in. But outside? The handle was turning with wet, aggressive thuds. "Seems I'm not the only one who thinks you should leave." I looked at the rattle of the handle. A key in the lock, without knocking. That wasn't Silas. That wasn't the neighbours. That was bad news. "Stay back." "Trust me, I have no intention of dying in a curry house flat." "Who's out there?" "A friend of yours." "Since when do you have friends who break into places?" "Since when do you have friends who attack you in the dark?" He took the last step, closing the distance between us. I flinched, but he didn't touch me. Instead, his hand hovered near his cane, and I saw the glint of silver under the ivory handle. A car horn blared from the street below—long, sharp, and incessant. Lucien frowned. "That sounds like a signal." "The postman?" I asked. "A postman doesn't usually use a frequency that I can hear from up here." The rattling at the door stopped. And then, a voice. Muffled through the wood, but distinct. A man's voice, thick with a Cockney accent I knew all too well from the times I'd been out drinking with Silas. "Eva! You in there? Eva, open up, it's me!" My blood ran cold. My hand went to the ring of keys in my pocket. Eva. My best friend. The only reason I was alive right now. "She shouldn't be here." I looked at Lucien. "You told him where I was?" "I let the spy in my ear," he said with mock apology. "Consider it a convenience. Saves me the time of climbing three flights of stairs." "Eva, open the door! It's Elias! I just had a delivery!" The voice shouted again, loud and panicking. I ran to the door, throwing the deadbolts. I didn't open it. I just threw myself against it, listening to Elias on the other side, his breath coming in short gasps. "She's alive. She didn't answer my calls." "I'm here. I'm here." The conversation on the other side stopped abruptly. A heavy thud against the wood. "Aurora?" I froze. I didn't have a name on the lock. "Is that you, mate?" Lucien stepped up behind me. He wrapped a hand around my upper arm, his grip tight, possessive. "Let him in. It’s the only way to find out who your friends really are." "Eva!" Elias screamed on the other side. "Open up!" "If you let him in, he could be the one stalking me." "And if you don't, he's going to kick the door down." He was right. I looked at the lock again. It was old. Timber warped. If he pushed hard enough... "I'm opening it." Lucien released my arm, but his hand lingered for a split second, a touch that sent a jolt of static through my skin. He straightened his jacket. I put my hand on the knob. I didn't turn it. The door exploded inward. Not kicked. Pulled. Wood splintered into the hallway, flying toward the cat. Ptolemy screeched and scrambled up the curtains. A tall man stood in the wreckage of my doorframe. He held a knife in one hand and a piece of torn paper in the other. Blood smeared down his arm. He looked at me. His eyes were wide, bloodshot, manic. "Rory?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The voice shouted again [again]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.23
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.033
81.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"precisely"
2"very"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"unsettled"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"chaotic"
2"sanctuary"
3"unsettled"
4"predator"
5"stomach"
6"could feel"
7"glint"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1323
ratio0.001
matches
0"thock"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount852
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Silas3
Moreau1
Ivory-handled1
Evan1
Lucien10
Cockney1
Elias2
persons
0"Silas"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Elias"
places(empty)
globalScore0.913
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1323
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean15.38
std14.55
cv0.946
sampleLengths
029
115
24
367
413
55
614
736
88
918
1040
114
126
133
1473
154
164
1723
185
1910
202
211
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235
2438
2510
2618
279
282
2916
3039
3131
3215
334
344
351
368
371
3839
3923
4016
413
423
4333
4421
4511
4626
472
4813
493
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been locked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was rattling"
1"was turning"
66.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences150
ratio0.027
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked back, exposing the sharp lines of his face and the terrifying contrast of his eyes—one amber, one black."
1"His gaze swept over the chaotic sanctuary I called home—stacks of law texts, takeout menus, and the faint scent of ginger."
2"The smell of his cologne—the sharp, minty scent he always wore—drowned out the curry smell lingering from the curry house below."
3"A car horn blared from the street below—long, sharp, and incessant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.031395348837209305
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011627906976744186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean8.82
std6.6
cv0.748
sampleLengths
07
13
219
34
411
54
65
715
824
923
1013
115
1214
1318
1418
158
1618
174
1821
1911
204
214
226
233
2415
2526
266
277
2819
294
304
3123
325
3310
342
351
3615
3719
387
3912
403
415
422
4323
4413
4510
4618
473
486
492
45.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32666666666666666
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners49
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Obviously, I was wrong."
1"Instead, his hand hovered near"
ratio0.024
36.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences85
matches
0"He wasn't exactly tall, but"
1"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
2"His platinum hair was slicked"
3"I backed up against the"
4"He stepped inside, the scent"
5"His gaze swept over the"
6"He looked bored, but his"
7"I stepped away from the"
8"It had been three months"
9"I thought that was the"
10"He walked further into the"
11"He leaped down, landing silently"
12"He looked down at the"
13"My stomach dropped."
14"I stopped, realizing too late"
15"I grabbed a random book"
16"He gestured to the front"
17"I looked at the rattle"
18"He took the last step,"
19"I flinched, but he didn't"
ratio0.459
12.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences85
matches
0"The deadbolt gave a heavy"
1"The door pushed inward."
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
3"He wasn't exactly tall, but"
4"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"I backed up against the"
7"He stepped inside, the scent"
8"The Ivory-handled cane struck the"
9"Lucien ignored the joke."
10"His gaze swept over the"
11"He looked bored, but his"
12"The sash was rattling."
13"I stepped away from the"
14"It had been three months"
15"I thought that was the"
16"The gentle fade-out of a"
17"A shared night of passion"
18"He walked further into the"
19"Ptolemy the tabby hissed from"
ratio0.894
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"If he pushed hard enough..."
ratio0.012
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A shared night of passion that got too messy, complicated by my trauma with Evan and his terrifying nature."
1"I just threw myself against it, listening to Elias on the other side, his breath coming in short gasps."
2"Lucien released my arm, but his hand lingered for a split second, a touch that sent a jolt of static through my skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"The voice shouted again (shout)"
1"Elias screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.164
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.066
84.8906%