Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0R75X4F9VGHMXVCSK4T6B

Run Details

Duration:
37.3s
Cost:
$0.004530
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora paused at the edge of Richmond Park, the morning fog clinging to her coat like a second skin. Nyx materialised from the shadow of an oak tree, their form coalescing from darkness into a humanoid silhouette. "The boundary stones are just ahead," Nyx whispered, their voice like rustling leaves. "Are you certain about this, Rory?" Aurora touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit she'd developed whenever facing uncertainty. "Eva insisted Isolde could help us understand this." She held up the Heartstone Pendant, watching as the deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly in the misty light. Nyx gestured toward a cluster of ancient oaks. "The grove doesn't like to be found by those who don't belong. But you carry a piece of Hel with you." Their violet eyes glowed brighter as they studied the pendant. "Interesting." They moved deeper into the park, the city sounds fading behind them. When Aurora stepped between two massive standing stones, a shiver ran through her body. The air changed—crisper, charged with something ancient and wild. "We're through," Nyx confirmed, their form becoming more defined in the strange amber light filtering through the canopy above. Aurora gasped. Before them stretched a clearing that couldn't possibly exist in the middle of London. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—blues so deep they seemed almost black, reds that shimmered like fire, whites that glowed with inner light. Trees twisted into shapes that defied natural growth patterns, their silver bark reflecting light despite the lack of direct sun. "Time moves differently here," Nyx warned. "An hour could pass outside while we experience only minutes, or days." Aurora knelt, reaching out to touch a flower with petals like stained glass. The moment her skin made contact, the bloom released a scent unlike anything she'd experienced—honey and thunder and something else she couldn't name. "The Veil is thinner here," a voice spoke from behind them. Aurora spun around to find a woman standing where no one had been moments before. Silver hair cascaded down her back, and her pale lavender eyes held wisdom that spanned centuries. Isolde Varga left no footprints in the soft moss as she approached. "I've been expecting you, Aurora Carter." Isolde's voice carried the musicality of a babbling brook. "The pendant brought you to me." "The Heartstone?" Aurora asked, her hand instinctively closing around the gem. "I don't understand how it works." Isolde smiled faintly. "It resonates with places where the boundaries between realms are weak. A compass for those who walk between worlds." Nyx stepped forward, their shadowy form seeming less substantial in the grove. "The Veil is failing. That's why we've come." Isolde gestured for them to follow her deeper into the clearing. As they walked, Aurora noticed how the air seemed to vibrate with contained energy. Small lights, like fireflies but glowing in every colour imaginable, danced between the leaves of the impossible trees. "The Fae Courts have noticed the growing instability," Isolde explained, pausing to touch a tree whose bark shimmered like mother-of-pearl at her contact. "What happens in one realm affects all others." Aurora watched as a bird with feathers like stained glass landed on a branch nearby. It cocked its head, studying her with eyes that seemed to hold galaxies. When it took flight again, it left trails of light in the air that slowly faded. "This place..." Aurora breathed, "it's beautiful but unsettling. Like it shouldn't exist, but it's more real than anything I've ever experienced." "That's the Fae realm touching Earth," Nyx explained, their voice a mere whisper. "Beauty and danger intertwined." Isolde stopped before a small pool of water that reflected not the sky above but stars and galaxies. "The reason I asked you to come is twofold." She reached into the air, her hand disappearing into nothingness before withdrawing a slender, leaf-shaped dagger that glowed with faint luminescence. "This was meant for you." Aurora took the Fae-Forged Blade, gasping at its cold temperature despite the warmth of the grove. "What is it?" "A weapon of the Fae Courts, given to those who walk between realms. It can cut through magical wards and is particularly effective against demons." Isolde's pale lavender eyes seemed to pierce through Aurora. "You will need it soon." The pendant at Aurora's throat grew warmer, pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat. She looked from the blade to Isolde, then to Nyx, whose form flickered like a candle flame in a breeze. "What's the second reason?" Aurora asked, tightening her grip on the blade. Isolde knelt by the pool, her silver hair cascading over her shoulder like liquid moonlight. "The Veil is thinning not just between Earth and Hel, but between all realms." She touched the water's surface, and ripples spread outward, revealing images—creatures of shadow and flame, cities of impossible architecture, a figure with horns cloaked in darkness. "Prince Belphegor of Dymas grows bold. He seeks to expand his domain beyond Hel." Nyx drifted closer to the pool, their form becoming more distinct as they studied the visions. "The realms weren't meant to intersect like this. The consequences could be catastrophic." Aurora knelt beside Isolde, the Fae blade humming in her hand. "What can I do? I'm just a delivery person from Cardiff who got caught up in something bigger than herself." Isolde turned to face her, ageless eyes filled with something like pity. "You carry the Heartstone, child of two worlds. The pendant chose you for a reason." She pointed to a vision forming in the pool—a gateway pulsing with crimson energy, creatures gathering at its edges. "When the winter solstice comes, the Veil will be at its weakest. Prince Belphegor plans to breach it then." Aurora watched as the vision in the pool shifted, showing London streets filled with shadowy figures, the sky the colour of blood. "We have to stop him." Nyx's voice grew stronger, more defined. "The Wardens monitor such rifts, but they're overwhelmed. They need help." Isolde stood, her silver hair catching the impossible light of the grove. "That's where you come in, Aurora Carter. You can walk between realms without being torn apart. You can see what others cannot." She gestured around them. "This grove exists in the space between worlds, just as Nyx does. And now, so do you." Aurora rose to her feet, the weight of the Fae blade heavy in her hand, the Heartstone warm against her skin. Looking around the grove, she saw it with new eyes—not just as a beautiful, impossible place, but as a glimpse of what could happen if the boundaries between realms collapsed completely. "What do I need to do?" she asked, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:57:56.807Z" 2/19/2026, 3:57:56 AM
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.054
91.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"cascading"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"charged"
2"shimmered"
3"whisper"
4"warmth"
5"flickered"
6"cascading"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
64.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1113
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
36.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount749
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora17
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Nyx10
London2
Varga1
Isolde12
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Varga"
4"Isolde"
5"Blade"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.365
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed almost black reds that shimmered like fire, whites that glowed with inner light"
1"eyes that seemed to hold galaxies"
2"something like pity"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.695
wordCount1113
matches
0"not the sky above but stars"
1"not just between Earth and Hel, but between all realms"
2"not just as a beautiful, impossible place, but as a glimpse of what could happen if the boundaries between"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
92.05% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.74
std15.46
cv0.472
sampleLengths
037
119
243
340
435
519
658
718
836
911
1043
1121
1217
1322
1420
1543
1631
1744
1821
1917
2053
2119
2239
2333
2412
2569
2629
2731
2865
2927
3017
3155
3252
3317
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences74
ratio0.081
matches
0"The air changed—crisper, charged with something ancient and wild."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—blues so deep they seemed almost black, reds that shimmered like fire, whites that glowed with inner light."
2"The moment her skin made contact, the bloom released a scent unlike anything she'd experienced—honey and thunder and something else she couldn't name."
3"\"The Veil is thinning not just between Earth and Hel, but between all realms.\" She touched the water's surface, and ripples spread outward, revealing images—creatures of shadow and flame, cities of impossible architecture, a figure with horns cloaked in darkness."
4"\"You carry the Heartstone, child of two worlds. The pendant chose you for a reason.\" She pointed to a vision forming in the pool—a gateway pulsing with crimson energy, creatures gathering at its edges."
5"Looking around the grove, she saw it with new eyes—not just as a beautiful, impossible place, but as a glimpse of what could happen if the boundaries between realms collapsed completely."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount760
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02763157894736842
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007894736842105263
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean15.04
std7.92
cv0.526
sampleLengths
019
118
213
36
417
526
68
731
81
912
1014
119
1219
132
1414
1522
1620
176
1812
1913
2023
2111
2215
2316
2412
2515
266
2711
286
293
3019
3112
328
3311
3414
3518
3623
378
3815
3913
4016
4121
4213
434
4418
4530
465
4716
483
4934
62.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3918918918918919
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences52
matches
0"She held up the Heartstone"
1"Their violet eyes glowed brighter"
2"They moved deeper into the"
3"It cocked its head, studying"
4"She reached into the air,"
5"She looked from the blade"
6"She touched the water's surface,"
7"She pointed to a vision"
8"She gestured around them"
9"she asked, her voice steady"
ratio0.192
27.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences52
matches
0"Aurora paused at the edge"
1"Nyx materialised from the shadow"
2"Nyx whispered, their voice like"
3"Aurora touched the small crescent-shaped"
4"She held up the Heartstone"
5"Nyx gestured toward a cluster"
6"Their violet eyes glowed brighter"
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"The air changed—crisper, charged with"
9"Nyx confirmed, their form becoming"
10"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—blues"
11"Trees twisted into shapes that"
12"Aurora knelt, reaching out to"
13"The moment her skin made"
14"a voice spoke from behind"
15"Aurora spun around to find"
16"Isolde Varga left no footprints"
17"Isolde's voice carried the musicality"
18"Aurora asked, her hand instinctively"
19"Isolde smiled faintly."
ratio0.865
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Before them stretched a clearing"
ratio0.019
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—blues so deep they seemed almost black, reds that shimmered like fire, whites that glowed with inner light."
1"Trees twisted into shapes that defied natural growth patterns, their silver bark reflecting light despite the lack of direct sun."
2"Silver hair cascaded down her back, and her pale lavender eyes held wisdom that spanned centuries."
3"It cocked its head, studying her with eyes that seemed to hold galaxies."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora asked, her hand instinctively closing around the gem"
1"Nyx explained, their voice a mere whisper"
2"she asked, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
2"Nyx warned (warn)"
3"a voice spoke (speak)"
4"Isolde explained (explain)"
5"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
6"Nyx explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.27
leniency0.541
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.378
70.5528%