| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "symphony" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "shattered" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1505 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1137 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Hel" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.796 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the held breath before a symp" | | 1 | "silver that seemed to drink the grove’s strange light rather than reflect it" | | 2 | "felt like a dream, but the weight of th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1505 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "was that the" | | 1 | "saw that Isolde" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 38.59 | | std | 22.63 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 66 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 66 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 87 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | |
| 49.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—indigo, silver, and a blue so deep it was almost black." | | 1 | "It wasn’t that it hadn’t been there before; it was that the grove had decided to show it to them now." | | 2 | "It wasn’t broken; it was simply indifferent to the rules of this place." | | 3 | "A still, black pool occupied its center, its surface a perfect mirror reflecting nothing—not the sky, not the trees, not their own faces as they approached." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ordinary, rain-slicked path" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.033304119193689745 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009640666082383873 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 12.34 | | std | 8.36 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 49.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3442622950819672 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught." | | 1 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 2 | "It felt like the held" | | 3 | "It wasn’t the sharp warning" | | 4 | "It wasn’t that it hadn’t" | | 5 | "She shook her wrist, tapped" | | 6 | "It wasn’t broken; it was" | | 7 | "She wore simple robes the" | | 8 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 9 | "She did not look up." | | 10 | "They circled the pool, their" | | 11 | "Her footprints, if she made" | | 12 | "Her voice was melody and" | | 13 | "They saw too much." | | 14 | "It was slender, no longer" | | 15 | "It was shockingly cold, a" | | 16 | "It lay against her ribs," | | 17 | "She was staring into the" | | 18 | "It was quiet now, cool." | | 19 | "They pushed through." |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 27.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the clearing" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "Aurora took a step past" | | 3 | "Her breath caught." | | 4 | "The grove was small, a" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—indigo," | | 6 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 7 | "The ground under her trainers" | | 8 | "The silence was absolute, yet" | | 9 | "It felt like the held" | | 10 | "Nyx stepped from the long," | | 11 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 12 | "Aurora’s left wrist tingled, the" | | 13 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 14 | "It wasn’t the sharp warning" | | 15 | "This was different." | | 16 | "A hum of recognition." | | 17 | "Aurora said, her voice swallowed" | | 18 | "A path appeared." | | 19 | "It wasn’t that it hadn’t" |
| | ratio | 0.866 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 46.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones formed a perfect ring, their gnarled bark shimmering with a light that came from nowhere and everywhere." | | 1 | "A gentle curve of crushed silver petals led between two taller standing stones that leaned toward each other like old friends sharing a secret." | | 2 | "Around its edges grew tall, slender reeds that chimed softly against each other, a glassy, melanchodic music." | | 3 | "The woman was ageless, her skin pale as moonlight, her silver hair a waterfall that pooled on the moss around her." | | 4 | "Those lavender eyes held depths that made Aurora’s mind shy away." | | 5 | "The metal was a cool, untarnished silver that seemed to drink the grove’s strange light rather than reflect it." | | 6 | "Above them, the canopy had closed, forming a tunnel of interlocking branches from which hung delicate, crystalline fruits that chimed like bells in a breeze Aur…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |