Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0RVZXKTJFCGMFD9PD37XG

Run Details

Duration:
32.7s
Cost:
$0.003362
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the crumbling steps into darkness. The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and damp concrete. Her torch beam cut through the black, revealing flickering emergency lights that cast long shadows across the abandoned Tube station. "Detective Quinn. You made it." Eva Kowalski stepped forward, her curly red hair catching the weak light. She adjusted her round glasses, tucking a strand behind her left ear—her nervous habit. "What have we got, Evie?" Quinn's eyes scanned the cavernous space, taking in the makeshift stalls that lined the walls. The Veil Market. "Male victim. Mid-thirties. No visible identification." Eva pointed toward the center of the station where forensic tents had been erected. "But something's not right." Quinn approached the crime scene, her movements carrying military precision. The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught the light as she crouched beside the body. A man lay sprawled on the ground, eyes wide with terror. "No defensive wounds." Quinn examined the victim's hands. "Clean." "Exactly. Yet he died mid-scream." Eva knelt opposite her, opening her worn leather satchel. "Look at this." She pulled out a small brass compass with a patina of verdigris. Its face was etched with protective sigils. "Found it clutched in his hand," Eva said. "Veil Compass. Points toward supernatural rifts or portals. Worth a fortune in the Market." Quinn took the compass, turning it over in her palm. The needle spun wildly before settling in a direction that made no sense. "Evidence team found anything?" "Standard robbery-gone-wrong theory. Wallet missing, phone gone. But why would a thief leave this behind?" Quinn stood, her sharp jaw silhouetted against the emergency lights. She walked the perimeter of the crime scene, noting the scattered merchandise, the overturned tables. "Victim's clothes are intact. No signs of struggle. Nothing broken except that table." She gestured toward a shattered wooden stall. "Too precise for a panic." "Maybe he knocked it over himself while running?" Eva suggested. "Then why are his shoes perfectly clean?" Quinn pointed her torch beam at the victim's pristine trainers. "This station is covered in grime and dust, but he looks like he just stepped out of his flat." Eva bit her lip, freckled face scrunching in thought. "Unless someone brought him here already dead?" "Or he never walked here at all." Quinn returned to the body, noticing something she'd missed initially. A faint blue glow around the victim's fingertips, invisible unless you knew to look for it. "Remember DS Morris?" Eva's eyes widened. "Your partner. The case three years ago." "Same residue. Same cause of death according to the preliminary report—heart failure." Quinn's voice dropped. "But we both know Morris didn't just die of natural causes." "Supernatural origins you couldn't explain." Eva finished her sentence, understanding dawning on her face. "You think this is connected?" Quinn pulled on a pair of gloves, carefully examining the victim's neck. There, beneath the jawline, almost invisible against the skin—three small puncture wounds in a triangular pattern. "He was a regular here. Knew enough to carry a Veil Compass. Knew enough to protect himself." Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. "But whatever got him bypassed all his defenses." "Are you suggesting something supernatural killed him?" "I'm suggesting we stop treating this like a standard homicide." Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping across the abandoned station. "The Market moves locations every full moon. Whoever did this knew that too." Eva glanced around nervously. "If something supernatural is hunting in the Market..." "Then we need to find out why." Quinn approached the shattered table, noting symbols carved into its underside. "And what it was looking for." She pulled out her phone, taking pictures of the markings. They resembled nothing in any criminal database she'd ever seen. "Eva, what do these mean?" Eva leaned close, her expert eyes widening. "These are binding sigils. Ancient ones. Used to trap or contain something." "Something that got out?" "Or something that was released." Eva shivered, tucking her hair behind her ear again. "If whoever did this broke a containment, that compass would have been their first priority. It could track whatever escaped." Quinn straightened, the pieces falling into place. "Our victim wasn't the target. He was the guardian. The thief took whatever was trapped here and left the compass because it would lead them to their prize." "Which means they might still be in the vicinity." The emergency lights flickered, plunging the station into momentary darkness. When they returned, both women instinctively moved closer together. "We need to seal this Market." Quinn's voice was low, urgent. "Before whatever was released finds its next victim." "How? The Council will never agree to shut down the Veil Market." "Then we work fast." Quinn's eyes darted around the shadows, every instinct screaming that they were being watched. "Find out what was contained here. And who would kill to release it." As if in response, the Veil Compass in Quinn's pocket began to vibrate, its needle spinning wildly. Something had just opened nearby. And it was hungry.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn's eyes darted around [around]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.756
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.044
82.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount841
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
2"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount841
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"standard"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count2
4
word"pristine"
count1
5
word"database"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"etched"
2"standard"
3"shattered"
4"pristine"
5"database"
6"flickered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences47
matches
0"e with terror"
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords834
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount452
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.76
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Tube1
Kowalski1
Veil2
Market1
Eva11
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount834
matches(empty)
76.58% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"lights that cast"
1"screaming that they"
96.03% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean20.85
std10.14
cv0.486
sampleLengths
041
131
223
324
438
59
617
719
822
923
104
1115
1225
1325
1410
1536
1616
1733
183
1910
2026
2119
2228
2329
247
2532
2612
2724
2820
295
3019
314
3234
3335
349
3519
3619
3712
3831
3926
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"been erected"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs86
matches
0"were being"
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences74
ratio0.027
matches
0"She adjusted her round glasses, tucking a strand behind her left ear—her nervous habit."
1"There, beneath the jawline, almost invisible against the skin—three small puncture wounds in a triangular pattern."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount454
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.028634361233480177
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.015418502202643172
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean11.27
std5.56
cv0.493
sampleLengths
09
112
220
317
414
520
63
720
84
910
1017
1111
128
131
1414
153
1612
177
188
1914
2010
2113
224
2315
2410
2515
2620
275
2810
2917
3019
319
327
3317
3416
353
363
377
3815
3911
4014
415
4212
4316
4421
458
467
4719
4813
494
98.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6486486486486487
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences45
matches
0"Her torch beam cut through"
1"She adjusted her round glasses,"
2"She pulled out a small"
3"Its face was etched with"
4"She walked the perimeter of"
5"She gestured toward a shattered"
6"She pulled out her phone,"
7"They resembled nothing in any"
ratio0.178
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The air grew thick with"
2"Her torch beam cut through"
3"Eva Kowalski stepped forward, her"
4"She adjusted her round glasses,"
5"Quinn's eyes scanned the cavernous"
6"The Veil Market."
7"Eva pointed toward the center"
8"Quinn approached the crime scene,"
9"The worn leather watch on"
10"A man lay sprawled on"
11"Quinn examined the victim's hands"
12"Eva knelt opposite her, opening"
13"She pulled out a small"
14"Its face was etched with"
15"Quinn took the compass, turning"
16"The needle spun wildly before"
17"Quinn stood, her sharp jaw"
18"She walked the perimeter of"
19"She gestured toward a shattered"
ratio0.933
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"As if in response, the"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva finished, understanding dawning on her face"
1"Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping across the abandoned station"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.044
leniency0.089
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.044
82.3598%